2021年甘肃省白银市大学英语6级大学英语六级真题(含答案)

2021年甘肃省白银市大学英语6级大学英

语六级真题（含答案）

学校:班级:姓名:考号:

一、l.Writing（10题）

1.Inthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitled

MenaceofEyesightDeteriorating.Yourcompositionshouldbeatleast150

wordslongandcontainthefollowingideas:

1.现代人的视力正在受到严重的威胁

2.主要原因是哪些

3.保护视力必须从孩子做起

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicABoominContinuingEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.图表所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育（或继续

教育）的人数情况，请描述其变化

2.请说明产生这些变化的原因（可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明）

3.请预测我国成人教育（或继续教育）的前景

ABoominContinuingEducation

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledOnOver-packaging.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelow:

1-目前许多商品都存在过度包装现象

2.这种现象的危害

3.你的看法

OnOver-packaging

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minute,towriteashortessay

entitledWhichIsMoreImportantHealthorWealth?Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.年轻人认为财富重于健康。

2.年纪大的人更看重健康。

3.我30多岁，我认为……

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSayNotoDrunkDriving.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.众所周知，酒后驾车十分危险

2.但近年来越来越多的人酒后驾车.原因是……

3.我认为……

SayNotoDrunkDriving

6.1.目前，在中国的农村和城市都有“啃老族”

2.这种现象产生的原因

3.如何应对这种现象

注："NEET"是"NotCurrentlyEngagedinEducation,Employmentor

Training"或"NotinEducation,EmploymentorTraining”的缩略语，即我们

说的“啃老族”。

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMy

ViewonRemedialExaminations.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbased

ontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1.补考是大学教育的一部分

2.我对补考的看法

3.如何发挥补考的作用

MyViewonRemedialExaminations

8.假如你是李静，你想向校长申请参加西部大开发，你要给校长写一

封信，信的内容包括：

1.表达自已想要参加西部大开发的愿望；

2.简要说明自己的理由。

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteapassagein

thetitleofMyViewsonTeleeducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.许多人赞成远程教育，是因为……

2.也有人认为远程教育效果不明显。

3.你的观点。

10.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicInformationintheModemSociety.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.现代社会中信息的获得越来越重要

2.我获得信息的主要渠道（如：图书馆、报纸、电视、电台、网络等）

3-我是如何利用信息的（和别人交流，用于学习中等）

InformationintheModernSociety

二、2.ReadingComprehension（SkimmingandScanning）（10题）

11.UniversityRecruiting

Theprosperousrecruiting

Asitturnsout,thisseductionofcollegestudentsbyrecruitersatinvestment

banksandconsultingfirmsismorecampuslegendthanreality一the

exceptionandcertainlynottherule.SterlingWitzke,asenioratStanford

UniversitywhosignedonwithMercerManagementConsultinginChicago,

saysshegotaglimpseoflifeinthefastlane,butnotes,"Mostofmyfriends

whowentthroughtheprocessdidnotgetthistypeoftreatment."Indeed,the

courtshipisnotassalaciousasurbanlegendwouldhaveusbelieve

Whileprospectiverecruitsmaynotbedestinedforahotcluborevenalow-

downstripclub,America'sleadinginvestmentbanksandconsultingfinnsare,

infact,recruitingmoreaggressivelyoncollegecampusesthaneverbefore.

Despiteasputteringoveralleconomythathasreducedcollegerecruitingby

old-linegiantslikeIBMorGM,I-banksandlargeconsultantfirmsboosted

theirrecruitingeffortsonkeycampusesbyabout15%lastyear—atrendthat

isexpectedtocontinue,accordingtoTrudySteinfeld,ExecutiveDirectorat

NewYorkUniversity'sOfficeofCareerServices."Bankingandconsulting

areleadingthewayinthisveryrobustrecruitingseason,"saysSteinfeld.

Asotherseniorsembarkonadesperatejobsearchandpileuptherejection

letters,thosewiththeireyesontheinvestmentbanking/consultantworldare

bombardedbyfervententreatiesandhostedataseriesofeventsrangingfrom

informationsessionstoexpensivedinners.Andmostimportantofall,there

arejobswaiting—withthepromiseofthatpotofgold-attheendoftheir

rainbow."Alotoftheemployersarebecomingmoreproactiveand

determined,"saysBarbaraHewitt,associatedirectorofcareerservicesfor

undergraduatesattheWhartonSchooloftheUniversityofPennsylvania.

"Becausetheireconomyandjobmarketaresogoodnow,they'refindingit

veryhardtogetallofthestudentswhattheywant.Thereisjustalotmore

competitionontheemployers'sideatthispoint,andtheyarefeelingmore

pressuretostepuptheircampusrecruiting.

Recruitingworkintheuniversity

Thefieldcanbeaperfectmatchforstudentsnotyetcertainoftheirultimate

careerdestinationorthosewhohaveanurgentneedtopayoffcollegeloans

beforepursuingthenextdegree.Thesefirmsthriveon"humancapital"and

thereforeputapremiumonattractingbright,ambitiousyoungpeople,

explainsoneWhartonalum.Withtheirofficesbuzzingpast2a.m.,thereis

significantturnover.Thustheyvaluefreshlymintedcollegegradswhowant

toout-competetheirpeersandwhocanchurnouthigh-qualityworkon

preciouslittlesleep."TherewerenightswhenIsleptundermydesk,using

myjacketasablanketandmykeyboardasapillow,"saysonerecentBrandeis

graduatewhoaskedthathisnamebewithheldbecausehiscompany

discouragesemployeesfromtalkingtothepress.Yetdespitethehardwork

andmanysleeplessnights,entry-levelpositionsatbigI-banksandconsultants

arethemostsought-afterjobsforgraduatingseniorsinterestedinfinanceand

consulting.

Theentry-leveljobsareunusuallylucrative,withfirst-yearanalystsmaking

upto$120000.Moreover,thesepositionsprovideinvaluabletrainingfor

thosepursuingcareersinthefield."Mostpeopleleaveafterthefirsttwoyears

becausetheygetburnedout,"explainstheBrandeisgrad,whoworksatatop

investmentbank,"buttheskillsyoulearnareessentialtogettingthemost

coveted（令人垂涎的）jobsinfinancegoingforward,I-bankingisastepping

stonetoagreatbusinessschool,andmostimportantly,toagreatjob."

Therecruitingprocessstillbeginsinearnestinthefallofsenioryear,whena

groupofassociatesarrivesoncampustointerviewandselectapplicants.In

anefforttosignalthestudentsthattheyarenot

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12.

VulnerabilitiesofBluetoothlike"bluejacking"areinthe

developmentoftechnology.

13.

AmongalltheGMcrops,Btgeneshaveprovedmosteffectivein

whenthelargestreductioninpesticideusehasbeenreported.

14.

Inthe1960SouthAmericatsunami,whenthethirdwavecame,itreachedthe

heightof.

15.

Saccharomycescanstandfarhigherconcentrationsofethanolthanother

microorganisms.

A.YB.NC.NG

16.

Fromthe1870son,itisimpossibletoimportplantsfromNorthAmerica.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.Whatisthepurposeofthispassage?

A.Toanalyzethecurrentsituationinthejobmarket.

B.Togivesuggestionstothoselaidoffinthecrisis.

C.Togivetipsonjoblandingintheeconomicdecline.

D.Toofferadviceonhowtoavoidbeinglaidoff.

18.

AlthoughthetaxsystemoccurstomostAmericansonlyinApril,thetax

processisactually.

19.PassageOne

Icameacrossanoldcountryguidetheotherday.Itlistedallthetradesmenin

eachvillageinmypartofthecountry,miditwasimpressivetoseethegreat

varietyofserviceswhichwereavailableonone'sowndoorstepinthelate

Victoriancountryside.

NowadaysasuperficialtravelerinruralEnglandmightconcludethattheonly

villagetradesmenweresellingfrozenfoodtotheinhabitantsorselling

antiques（古玩）tovisitors.Nevertheless,thiswouldreallybeafalse

impression.Therehasbeenacontraction（衰退）ofvillagecommerce,butits

vigorisremarkable.

Ourlocalgrocer'sshop,forexample,isactuallyexpandinginspiteofthe

competitionfromsupermarketsinthenearesttown.Womenprefertogothere

andexchangethelocalnewswhiledoingtheirshoppinginsteadofqueuing

up（排队）atasupermarket.Andtheownerknowswellthatpersonalservice

hasasubstantialcashvalue.

Hispricesmaybeabithigherthanthoseinthetown,buthewilldeliver

anythingatanytime.Hisassistantsthinknothingofbicyclingdownthe

villagestreetintheirlunchhourtotakeapieceofcheesetoanoldage

pensionerwhosentherorderbywordofmouthwithafriendwhohappened

tobepassing.Thewealthiercustomerstelephonetheirshoppinglistsandthe

goodsareontheirdoorstepswithinanhour.Theyhaveonlytohintatafancy

forsomecommodity（商品）outsidetheusualstockandthegrocer,ared-

facedfigure,instantlyobtainsitforthem.

Thevillagegainsfromthissortofenterprise.ButIalsofinditsatisfactory

becauseavillageshopoffersoneofthefewwaysinwhichamodest

individualistcanstillgetalongintheworldwithoutattachinginmyselftothe

bigbattalions（队伍）ofindustryorcommerce.

PassageTwo

TodaythegamereservesofEastAfricaarefacinganumberofthreats.

Althoughtheyearnconsiderablerevenuebyattractingtourists,theytakeup

landwhichisincreasinglysoughtbythelocalpeople.Whilethesereserves

feedandprotectanimals,theyareindangerofturningintobarrenareasor

deserts.Trees,shrubsandgrassaregraduallybeingeatenbygrazingherds.

Anotherproblemistobefoundinthechangingattitudesoftheanimals

themselves.Manyofthemarelosingtheirhereditary（天生的）fearofman.

Inthiswaytheymaybecomeadangertovisitorsandthustothemselves.

Attacksonvehiclesarebeginningtoincrease,anditispossiblethatthe

problemswillbecomeseriousinafewyears'time.

Theproblemofshortageoflandisnotasimpleone.Asthepopulation

increases,moreandmorepeoplelookhungrilyatthelandsetasideforgame

reserves.TheyclaimthataGovernment'sfirstdutyistoitsinhabitantsand

nottotouristsortowildanimals.Despitetheincomeobtainedfromtourism,

thisisanargumentwhichitisdifficulttoanswersatisfactorily.

PassageThree

Beforethe1930's,workerswereonlypaidaslongastheywere"smart."If

theyweresmartenoughnottobeill,theywerepaid.Iftheyweresmart

enoughnottobeinjured,theywerepaid.Andiftheywereverysmart,they

wouldfindstrengthtoworkeverydayuntiltheydied.Whenpeoplewerenot

this"smart,"theylookedforhelp.Theirfamilies,privatecharities,and

churchesdidwhattheycould.Allofthesegroupshelpedwhentheeconomy

washealthy.

WhentheDepressionhit,families,charities,andchurcheswereweakened.

Andtherewasmoreneedofthemthaneverbefore.PatCauley,aconstruction

worker,keptadiary.Hereisanentryfrom1932:"Wenttochurch.Isaidthe

familyneededsomethingtokeepgoing.Gotnicesermon（说教）.Camehome,

pocketsempty."Cauley'sstorywastoldbymillionsofothers.Evenwhen

charitiesdidhelp,peoplewerenotcompletelyhappy.Peopleonsouplines

didnetstarve.Buttheirpride

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20.

In2025,halfoftoday'spopulationwillbeinshortageofwater.

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三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)

21.(24)

A.Freshfruit.

B.Agiftcertificate.

C.Homemadecandy.

D.Aweddingpresent.

22.(17)

A.He'llgivethequizatalatertime.

B.Thequizwillbeveryshort.

C.Thequizwon'tbereadyuntilThursday.

D.He'llscorethequizquickly.

23.(35)

A.Warsornaturaldisastersmakethemlosetheirfamilies.

B.Theywanttohelptheirfamiliescamenoughmoneytosurvive.

C.Theyarepoor.

D.A11theabove.

24.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2long

conversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbe

askedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbe

spokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,

youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichis

thebestanswer.

听力原文：W:I'vebeenmeaningtogetmyeyeschecked.Ijusthaven'tgotten

aroundtoityet.

M:Whydon'tyoucallforanappointmentrightaway?Onceonyourcalendar

youwillgetitdone.

Q:Whatdoesthemansuggestthewomando?

(12)-

A.Scheduleaneyeexamwithoutdelay.

B.Makealistofwhatsheneedstodo.

C.Orderanappointmentbook.

D.Getoverherfearofeyedoctors.

25.

[B8]

26.(21)

A.Biology.B.Photography.C.Swimming.D.Painting.

27.

[B3]

28.(19)

A.Hehaslosthishistorybook.

B.Hedoesn'tlikethehistorycourse.

C.Hehastoreadalotofhistorybooks.

D.Hefindshistorydifficulttounderstand.

29.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2long

conversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbe

askedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbe

spokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,

youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichis

thebestanswer.

听力原文.M:ThisTVsetisgettingworseandworse.Nowitdoesn'twork

atall.

W:Here'sanadvertisementonthenewspaperaboutabiog.TVsale.Usually

abigsalelikethiswouldhavesomegoodbargains.Whatwouldyousay?

Q:Whatdoesthewomansuggest?

(12)一

A.Theyhavetobargainonthesale.

B.TheTVsetisusuallyonsale.

C.TheyadvertisetoselltheirTVset.

D.TheygotobuyaTVsetatabargainprice.

30.听力原文：W:HaveyouseenmyGuidetoWiMBirdsanywhere,Bill?

M:Oh,yes.Ilentittoaguest.ButIthoughthehadgivenitbackalready.

Q:Whycan'tthewomanfindherbook?

(13)

A.Avisitorhasborrowedit.

B.Shehadgivenittoherguide.

C.AfriendtookittotheWest.

D.Billgaveitbacktohisfriend.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.

Whichtitleisproperforthispassage?

A.TheChangeofEarth'sShape.

B.WhytheEarth'sShapeChanged.

C.SoundStrange:EarthIsNotRound.

D.NewTechnologyandEarth'sShape.

32.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,thereisapassagewithtenblanks.Youarerequired

toselectonewordforeachblankfromalistofchoicesgiveninawordbank

followingthepassage.Readthepassagethroughcarefullybeforemaking

yourchoices.Eachchoiceinthebankisidentifiedbyaletter.Pleasemarkthe

correspondingletterforeachitemwithasinglelinethroughthecenter.You

maynotuseanyofthewordsinthebankmorethanonce.

TheUnitedStatescourtsystem,aspartofthefederalsystemofgovernment,

is[Cl]bydualhierarchies;therearebothstateandfederalcourts.

Eachstatehasitsownsystemofcourts,[C2]ofcivilandcriminal

trialcourts,sometimesintermediatecourtsofappeal,andastatesupreme

court.Thefederalcourtsystem[C3]ofaseriesoftrialcourtsserving

[C4]smallgeographicregions,atierofcircuitcourtsofappealthat

hearappealsfrommanydistrictcourtsinaparticular[C5]region,

andtheSupremeCourtoftheUnitedStates.Thetwocourtsystemsareto

some[C6]overlapping,inthatcertainkindsofdisputesmaybe

initiatedineithersystem.Theyarealsotosomeextenthierarchical,forthe

deferralsystemstands[C7]thestatesysteminthoselitigants(诉讼

当事人)wholosetheircasesinthestatesupremecourtmayappealtheircases

totheSupremeCourtoftileUnitedStates.Thus,thetypicalcourtcasebegins

ina[C8]courtacourtofgeneraljurisdictioninthestateorfederal

system.Mostcasestonofurtherthanthetrialcourt:forexample,thecriminal

defendantisconvictedand[C9]bythecourt.Andthepartiesleave

thecourtsystem.Butsometimesthelosingpartyatthetrialcourtcares

enoughaboutthecausethatthematterdoesnotendthere.Inthesecases,the

"loser"atthetrialcourtmay[CIO]tothenexthighercourt.

A)consistsE)aboveI)extentM)badly

B)geographicF)trialJ)relativelyN)splendor

C)composedG)characterizedK)safelyO)sentenced

D)withinH)successfullyL)appeal

[Cl]

33.

Whenweighingthings,ascientist.

A.adoptsamoreaccuratemeasurementthanabakerdoes

B.usesascaleworkingoncompletelydifferentprinciples

C.hastoconstructalabwithavarietyofapparatus

D.turnstoscientificinvestigationbyinstinct

五、5.ErrorCorrection©题)

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38.Thehumanbraincontains10thousandmillioncellsand

eachofthesemayhaveathousandconnections.SoenormousSI.

numbersusedtodiscourageusandcausingustodismisstheS2.

possibilityofmakingamachinewithhuman-likeability,butnow

thatwehavegrownusedtomoveforwardatsuchapacewecanS3.

belesssure.Quitesoon,inonly10or20yearsperhaps,wewill

beabletoassembleamachineascomplexasthehumanbrain,

andifWecanwewill.Itmaythentakeusalongtimetorender

itintelligentlybyloadingintherightsoftwareorbyalteringtheS4.

architecturebutthattoowillhappen.Ithinkitcertainthatin

decades,nocenturies,machinesofsiliconwillarisefirsttorivalS5.

andthenexceedtheirhumanancestors.Oncetheyexceedustheywill

becapableoftheirowndesign.InrealsensetheywillS6.

beabletoreproducethemselves.Siliconwillhaveended

carbon'slongcontrol.Andwewillnolongerbeabletoclaim

ourselvestobethefineintelligenceintheknownuniverse.AsS7.

theintelligenceofrobotsincreasetomatchthatofhumansandS8.

astheircostdeclinesthrougheconomiesofscalethatwemayuseS9.

themtoexpandourfrontiers,firstonearththroughtheirability

towithstandenvironments,beneficialtoourselves.Thus,desertsS10.

maybloomandtheoceanbedsbemined.Furtherahead,by

acombinationofthegreatwealththisnewagewillbringandthe

technologyitwillprovide,theconstructionofavast,man-created

worldinspace,hometothousandsormillionsofpeople,

willbewithinourpower.

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参考答案

1.MenaceofEyesightDeterioratingItisgenerallyacceptedthatnothingis

morevaluablethaneyesight.Justasthesayinggoes"Nooneknowsthevalue

ofeyesightuntilhelosesit."HowevermoreandmorepeopleaMenaceof

EyesightDeterioratingItisgenerallyacceptedthatnothingismorevaluable

thaneyesight.Justasthesayinggoes,"Nooneknowsthevalueofeyesight

untilhelosesit."However,moreandmorepeoplea

2.ABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraphweknowthestatisticsof

theContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersofthe

participantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeopletABoom

inContinuingEducationFromthegraph,weknowthestatisticsofthe

ContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersofthe

participantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeoplet

3.OnOver-packagingNowadaysmanufacturerspaymoreattentiontothe

packageorwrappingofproductstoattractconsumers'eyes.These

commoditieswith(l)splendidappearancedo(2)appealtoalotofOnOver­

packagingNowadaysmanufacturerspaymoreattentiontothepackageor

wrappingofproductstoattractconsumers'eyes.Thesecommoditieswith

(l)splendidappearancedo(2)appealtoalotof解析：本文是一篇六级考试

中常见的议论文，要求考生就“过度包装”这个话题展开论述。根据题目

要求，考生应首先描述当今社会存在过度包装这一现象，然后提出过度

包装的害处，最后阐明自己的观点并提出建议。

［写作提纲］

一、过度包装现象的存在(package,splendidappearance,appealto,sell

well)

二、过度包装的危害

1.浪费日常化工用的材料(industrialmaterials,lavishlyuseinpackage)

2.产生大量不可降解的垃圾(notdegradable,garbage)

3.助长不良消费习惯与不正的社会风气(cultivate,unhealthy,harmful

tendencies)

三、作者观点

1.反对过度包装(practicability)

2.政府应采取措施应对过度包装(tightensupervision,light-packaging)

(1)splendidappearance"华丽的夕卜表”。

⑵appealto"吸引"，替换attracto

(3)undeniable”不可否认的”。

(4)lavishly“奢侈地”。

(5)generate"产生"，代替produceo

(6)degradable"可降解的”。

⑺promoteharmfultendencies”主张不正之风

4.WhichIsMoreImportantHealthorWealth?LikeelsewhereinChinathere

iscontroversyovertheissue:whichismoreimportanthealthorwealth?

Differentpeoplewithdifferentexperiencesholddifferentopinions.And

individualsindifferentsocialstatuesgivedifferentanswers.Youngpeople

arguethathealthismoreimportantthanwealth;foritseemsthattheyareina

badneedofmoney."Nomoneynohappiness"islikelytobeawidelyaccepted

thoughtamongjuveniles.Intheireyesnothingbutwealthisimportant.In

theirlivestheybelievemoneymakestheworldgo.Everythingcanbe

obtainedincludinghealthonlyiftheyarewealthy.Theirgoaloflifeistoget

morewealthattheexpenseoftheirhealth.Seniorpeoplealwayscaremore

forheaththanwealthbecausetheyareapttothinkthatbybeingingoodhealth

theyareabletoenjoytheirwealththeyhaveaccumulatedoverthedecadesor

livetheircomfortableliveseveniftheyarenotwelloffenough.Theylearn

fromtheirexperiencesthathealthprovidesthebasisforbothhappinessand

wealth.Theyclaimthathealthisthebasisofeverythingtopeople.Iftheylose

healththeywillloseallincludingwealth.Inotherwordssolongastheyare

healthytheyaremostlikelytoaccumulatewealth.One'sultimateaimoflife

isnottogainwealth.Onlyhealthypeoplearehappyindeed.I'minmylate

thirties.Ithinkthateitheroftheopinionsgoestotheextreme.Healthand

wealthdonotcontradicteachotherandyettheymayagreewithoneanother.

Whetheryourpriorityisgiventowealthorhealthyouropiniondepends

largelyoneitheryourageoryourfinancialbackground.Ahealthypersoncan

bewealthyandawealthyonebehealthy.Bothhealthandwealthareequally

important.WhichIsMoreImportant,HealthorWealth?Likeelsewhere,in

Chinathereiscontroversyovertheissue:whichismoreimportant,healthor

wealth?Differentpeoplewithdifferentexperiencesholddifferentopinions.

Andindividualsindifferentsocialstatuesgivedifferentanswers.Young

peoplearguethathealthismoreimportantthanwealth;foritseemsthatthey

areinabadneedofmoney."Nomoney,nohappiness"islikelytobeawidely

acceptedthoughtamongjuveniles.Intheireyes,nothingbutwealthis

important.Intheirlives,theybelievemoneymakestheworldgo.Everything

canbeobtained,includinghealthonlyiftheyarewealthy.Theirgoaloflife

istogetmorewealthattheexpenseoftheirhealth.Seniorpeoplealwayscare

moreforheaththanwealthbecausetheyareapttothinkthatbybeingingood

health,theyareabletoenjoytheirwealththeyhaveaccumulatedoverthe

decades,orlivetheircomfortableliveseveniftheyarenotwelloffenough.

Theylearnfromtheirexperiencesthathealthprovidesthebasisforboth

happinessandwealth.Theyclaimthathealthisthebasisofeverythingto

people.Iftheylosehealth,theywillloseall,includingwealth.Inotherwords,

solongastheyarehealthy,theyaremostlikelytoaccumulatewealth.One's

ultimateaimoflifeisnottogainwealth.Onlyhealthypeoplearehappy

indeed.I'minmylatethirties.Ithinkthateitheroftheopinionsgoestothe

extreme.Healthandwealthdonotcontradicteachother,andyettheymay

agreewithoneanother.Whetheryourpriorityisgiventowealthorhealth,

youropiniondependslargelyoneitheryourageoryourfinancialbackground.

Ahealthypersoncanbewealthyandawealthyonebehealthy.Bothhealth

andwealthareequallyimportant.

5.SayNotoDrunkDriving[1]Asisknowntoalldrunkdrivingisvery

dangerous.[2]Itputstorisksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofother

innocentpeople.[3]DangerousasitistherehavebeeSayNotoDrunk

Driving[1]Asisknowntoall,drunkdrivingisverydangerous.[2]Itputsto

risksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofotherinnocentpeople.[3]

Dangerousasitis,therehavebee解析：本文要求对酒醉驾驶的原因进行

分析，并提出门己的看法。如果要求分析酒醉驾驶的不良后果，那就容

易点，可outline要求分析酒醉驾驶的原因，许多考生可能绞尽脑汁也

不知道该说什么好了。

范文从两个角度分析原因：首先，经济上富裕了，开车的人更多了；其

次，司机主观上对自己的驾驶技术太过门信。这两条都很好，与醉驾密

切相关，很有说服力。

是否还有别的原因呢?——无酒不成宴的传统习惯勺现代生活不合拍；

法律上对醉驾处罚力度不够；酒席上人们的自控能力太差；等等。读者

可以自己尽情展开自己的思路，写出好文章来。

最后还要说明“我认为"，当然要与标题SayN。的看法一致了。但要注

意如何表达。

Analysis

[1]由outline改写而来，得来毫不费功夫。

[2]是[1]的支持句，putsthtodanger/risks是较好的搭配。

[3]还是描写现象。其中暗含这种现象的存在原因，于是下文就可以就

这些原因进行分析。注意这句话与前一段话之间有转折关系，用了让步

结构。

[4][5]onereasonisthat；anotherreasonisthat...,衔接自然。

[6]注意tallvictimto的用法

[7]是作文标题的再现!主题句。

[8]怎样sayno呢?再提一下具体措施，文章就更加有力度了。也是⑺

的支持/扩展句。

6.MyViewonNEET①NowinChinatheproblemofNEEThasbeen

broughtintopublicattention.NEETreferstothegroupoftheyoungwhoare

notcurrentlyengagedineducationemploymentortraininginsteadtheyjust

stayathomerelyingontheirparents.②Therearemainlytworeasonsforthis

phenomenon.Foronethingsincetheexpansionofuniversityenrollmentin

1999anincreasingnumberofcollegegraduateshavepouredintojob-hunting

market.Howeversomeofthemarenotfullypreparedandbecome

unemployed.Foranothersomeyoungpeoplearetheonlychildrenoftheir

familyandbadlyspoilt.Asaresulttheyarepsychologicallydependenteven

whentheyaregrown-ups.Tosolvethisproblem③firstcollegesorthe

communityshouldprovidepre-jobtrainingcoursesfortheyoung.Second

parentsshouldcultivatetheirchildrensenseofindependencefromtheir

childhood.Lastbutnotleastcollegestudentsalsohavetoequipthemselves

withskillsandknowledgeandgetreadytocompetetomorrow.MyViewon

NEET①NowinChinatheproblemofNEEThasbeenbroughtintopublic

attention.NEETreferstothegroupoftheyoungwhoarenotcurrently

engagedineducation,employmentortraining,insteadtheyjuststayathome,

relyingontheirparents.②Therearemainlytworeasonsforthis

phenomenon.Foronething,sincetheexpansionofuniversityenrollmentin

1999,anincreasingnumberofcollegegraduateshavepouredintojob-hunting

market.However,someofthemarenotfullypreparedandbecome

unemployed.Foranother,someyoungpeoplearetheonlychildrenoftheir

familyandbadlyspoilt.Asaresult,theyarepsychologicallydependenteven

whentheyaregrown-ups.Tosolvethisproblem,③first,collegesorthe

communityshouldprovidepre-jobtrainingcoursesfortheyoung.Second,

parentsshouldcultivatetheirchildrensenseofindependencefromtheir

childhood.Lastbutnotleast,collegestudentsalsohavetoequipthemselves

withskillsandknowledgeandgetreadytocompetetomorrow