适用于新高考新教材天津专版2024届高考英语一轮总复习写作专项提升Step2创亮点-力求语言优美生动第2讲句子优美7结构课件外研版

写作专项提升第二讲句子优美7结构英语句式1省略结构英语中为了避免重复,句子中的某些部分可以省略,从而让文章显得紧凑自然。省略句在写作中的巧妙运用是书面表达得高分的助力,应当得到重视。写作中常见的省略情况:在以while、when、once引导的时间状语从句,以if、unless引导的条件状语从句以及以although、though引导的让步状语从句中,如果从句中的主语与主句中的主语一致或从句的主语为it,且从句中含有be动词时,可以省略状语从句中的“主语+be动词”部分。①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)If

possible(it

is),youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.如果可能的话,你可以尽快回复我。②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)When(he

is)faced

with

the

difficulties,healwaysstickstohispostandworkshardtoovercomethem.当面对困难时,他总是坚守岗位,并且努力工作来克服困难。③When(they

are)learning

English,somestudentsdonotattachimportancetospelling.一些学生在英语学习时,并不重视拼写。[对点过关训练]用省略结构补全句子1.(2020·浙江1月卷,写作)如果有时间,请通过电子邮件报名。______________________,pleasesignupforitbyemail.

2.虽然工作了一天很累,妈妈回到家还是精心地为我们准备晚餐。____________________________________________,Motherstillpreparesforourdinnercarefully.

3.那天放学走回家时,我注意到三个男孩在和丹尼说话。___________________________________________,InoticedthreeboystalkingwithDanny.

IfavailableAlthoughtiredfromworkingawholedayWhilewalkinghomefromschoolthatday4.一旦见过,就决不会忘记。______________________,itcanneverbeforgotten.

5.如果是这样的话,你可以来和我的家人一起庆祝。______________________,youcancometocelebrateitwithmyfamily.

OnceseenIfso句式2强调结构书面表达中,强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达的效果,突出要强调的重点,更能彰显出考生对英语表达的把握能力。1.强调句的基本结构为“Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分.”。这个句型可以强调除了谓语之外的其他任何部分。①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)It

isbecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsitethatIwantyoutogivemesomeadvice.正是因为这次活动要在英文网站上进行,所以我想让你给我提些建议。②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)It

wasMr.ZhangwhomademeperceivetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.正是张先生让我意识到学好英语的重要性。2.强调句的一般疑问句形式:Is/Wasit+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分?Was

itinthesupermarketthatTomlosthiswallet?汤姆是在超市里丢的钱包吗?3.强调句的特殊疑问句形式:疑问词+is/wasit+that+句子其他部分?When

was

it

thatyoufirstwenttotheGreatWall?你第一次去长城究竟是什么时候?4.Itis/wasnotuntil...that...“直到……才……”。①It

was

not

until8o'clockthatherealizedhehadspentthewholedayontheInternet.直到八点钟,他才意识到自己一整天都在上网。②Peoplesay,“Guilin'ssceneryispeerlessintheworld.”It

was

not

untilIvisitedtheplacethatIfounditreallyworthyofthereputation.人们都说:“桂林山水甲天下。”直到去了桂林,我才发现它果然名不虚传。5.强调谓语动词时,用助动词do/does/did,且只能对肯定句的一般现在时和一般过去时进行强调。①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.我真的相信你能帮我解决这些难题。②(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)Wedidhopetherewouldbemoremeaningfulactivitiesinthecomingfuture.我们确实希望今后会有更多有意义的活动。[对点过关训练]用强调结构补全句子1.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)正是凭着真诚和诚信,我们才创造了一种和谐的气氛。__________________________________________wecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.

2.是茶馆见证了我们所有人真正愉快的时光。_______________________________witnessedareallyenjoyabletimeforallofus.

ItwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatItwastheteahousethat3.(2019·浙江卷,写作)我真的希望你有一个光明的未来,我们的友谊将永远持续下去!________________________________________andthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!

4.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)音乐形式的多样性和音乐的制作过程最吸引我。_________________________________________________willappealtomemost.

5.据我所知,赢得这次竞赛的人可能是你。AsfarasIamconcerned,________________________________________.

IdohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureItisthevarietiesofmusicformsandmusicproductionthatitisyouwho/thatarelikelytowinthecontest6.他的确是三思后才开始实施这个计划的。__________________________________beforehecarriedoutthisplan.

7.正是由于这样,环境保护才变得越来越重要。__________________________________theenvironmentalprotectionisbecomingmoreandmoresignificant.

HedidgiveitasecondthoughtItwasbecauseofthisthat句式3倒装结构倒装结构分为部分倒装结构和全部倒装结构。在英语写作中,我们可以通过倒装结构强调我们要传达的信息,给文章增色。1.当not、none、never、little、seldom、neither、nor、hardly等否定词,以及表示否定意义的介词短语(如atnotime,bynomeans等)置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。当nosooner...than...、hardly...when...等句式中的nosooner、hardly位于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。①Inmyopinion,at

no

timeshouldweignoretheimportanceofunity.在我看来,我们任何时候都不能忽视团结的重要性。②Muchtoourdisappointment,hardlyhadwegottothefarmwhenitbegantorain.让我们非常失望的是,我们一到农场,天就开始下起雨来。③No

soonerhadIgotoffthebusthanIrealizedmywalletwasstolen.我刚下公共汽车就意识到我的钱包被偷了。2.当“only+状语”置于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。①Onlywhenwethinkmoreforotherscanwecreateaharmoniousenvironment.只有当我们更多地为别人考虑时,我们才能创造一个和谐的环境。②(2020·天津卷,书面表达)Onlywhenthetwoaspectsareconnectedcanamanshowhistalenttogreatadvantage.只有把这两个方面联系起来,一个人才能最好地展示他的才能。3.当notonly...butalso...结构中的notonly位于句首时,notonly后面的句子要用部分倒装。Not

onlywilltheonlinecoursesbreakthelimitationoftimeandspacebuttheywillalsoprovideuswithgreatconveniencetostudy.网络课程不仅打破了时间和空间的限制,还为我们的学习提供了极大的便利。4.as/though引导的让步状语从句可以用部分倒装结构,即将从句中的表语或状语置于句首。①Tiredoutas/thoughIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.尽管我很累,但我从来没有这样开心过。②(2019·北京卷,书面表达)Busyas/thoughweare,webenefitalotmentallyandphysically.尽管我们很忙,但我们在精神上和身体上都受益匪浅。5.在so/such...that...结构中,当so/such连同它所修饰的成分共同位于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。①SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingmynewbicycle.我是那样的兴奋,我迫不及待地要试骑我的新自行车。②Soharddoesheworkthathehasnotimetosparefortravelling.他那么努力工作,抽不出时间去旅行。6.在含有had、should、were等的虚拟条件状语从句中,若省略连词if,则可将它们移到主语前构成部分倒装。①WereIyou,Iwouldn'tdothat.如果我是你,我就不会那样做。②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Haditnotbeenforhisguidanceandencouragement,Icouldn'thavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishContest.如果没有他的指导和鼓励,我不可能在英语竞赛中获得第一名。③(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Shouldyouconsidermyapplication,Iwouldbemorethangrateful.如果你能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。7.当here、there、now、then、out、in、up、down、around、onthewall、intheroom、infrontof、atthefootof等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首,且主语是名词而不是代词时,句子用全部倒装。①NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.下一步到了我要求他们亲自尝试的时候了。②Herearemytipsforyou.这是我给你的建议。③Thencamethemoment—thetimetosharetheday'snewlearning.然后到了分享一天新知识的时刻。④At

the

foot

ofthemountainstandsanoldtemple.一座古老的寺庙屹立在山脚下。

[对点过关训练]用倒装结构补全句子1.(2020·江苏卷,书面表达)一方面,过去几十年的总体发展如此惊人,让他们渴望熟悉中国正在发生的情况。Foronething,_______________________________________________overthepastdecadesthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.

2.丽江的风景如此的美丽,我想再旅游一次。_____________________________________________Iwanttovisititasecondtime.

3.只有通过努力工作,我们才能在做任何事情时都获得成功。_____________________________________succeedindoinganything.

sostrikinghasbeentheoveralldevelopmentSobeautifulisthesceneryoftheLiRiverthatOnlybyworkinghardcanwe4.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)如果我被选中,我会致力于成为一名合格的志愿者。______________________,Iwoulddevotemyselftobeingaqualifiedvolunteer.

5.无论如何,这种方法都不会令人满意的。___________________________________besatisfactory.6.虽然他是个孩子,但他能做到很多大部分成年人都做不到的事。____________________________,hecandomanythingsmostadultscan't.

7.直到失去了健康,我们才明白它的价值。_____________________________________________itsvalue.

WereIchosenBynomeanswillthismethodChildas/thoughheisNotuntilweloseourhealthdowerealize句式4

with/without复合结构写作中,使用with/without复合结构会让句子结构紧凑,言简意赅。此结构由“with/without+宾语+宾语补足语”构成,可在句中作定语和状语,表示原因、时间、条件、伴随、方式等。其结构如下:(1)with/without+名词/代词+形容词(2)with/without+名词/代词+副词(3)with/without+名词/代词+介词短语(4)with/without+名词/代词+动词不定式(5)with/without+名词/代词+分词①Shewalkedoutintherain,withherclothesallwet.(with+名词+形容词)她冒雨出去,衣服都湿透了。②Withthemealover,weallwenthome.(with+名词+副词)吃完饭后,我们都回家了。③Thegirlraisedherheadwithtearsinhereyes.(with+名词+介词短语)那个女孩眼泪汪汪地抬起头。④Hecouldnotfinishtheworkwithoutmetohelphim.(without+代词+动词不定式)没有我帮助他,他不可能完成这项工作。⑤(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)Withthe10thanniversaryceremonydrawingnear,Iamwritingtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulations.(with+名词+现在分词)随着十周年庆典的临近,我写信(向你)表示衷心的祝贺。⑥Thehousecaughtafirelastnight,withnothingleftinit.(with+名词+过去分词)那栋房子昨晚发生了火灾,里面什么东西都没有了。[对点过关训练]用with/without复合结构补全句子1.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)所有的跑步者都尽力完成任务,一路上他们的同学给了他们必要的帮助和鼓励。Allrunnerstriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,________________________________________________________________________________.

2.国庆节即将来临,我们正在忙着为各种庆典做准备。______________________________________________________________,wearebusymakingpreparationsforvarietiesofcelebrations.

3.(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)因为我们的队伍每天放学后都在训练,所以我们一定能赢得比赛。______________________________________,wearesuretowinthegame.

withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragementWithourNationalDayjustaroundthecorner/approaching/drawingnearWithourteamtrainingeverydayafterschool4.汤姆急急忙忙地离开了他的办公室,一句话也没说。Tomlefthisofficeinahurry,____________________________________.

5.随着夏天的临近,天气越来越热。______________________________,itisbecominghotterandhotter.

withoutsayingasinglewordWithsummerdrawingnear句式5非谓语动词写作中,如果适当地使用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不但可以丰富句式,还能提升文章的档次。下面是非谓语动词的常见句型:1.(使役动词)let/make/have/get/keep/leave...sb/sthdo/doing/done...使/让……某人/某事做/正在做/被做……①Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.如果你还有问题,请尽管让我了解。②Youshouldn'thavegonehome,leavingyourdeskmatecleaningtheclassroomalone.你不该回家,而留下你的同桌独自打扫教室。③Wecan'tleavesuchanimportantmatterunfinished.我们不能让这样一件重要的事半途而废。2.(感官动词)see/notice/watch/hear...sb/sthdo/doing/done...看到/注意到/观察到/听到……某人/某物做/正在做/被做……①Hearingthemsingingthesong,Icouldn'thelpthinkingofmypleasantchildhood.听到他们唱这首歌,我情不自禁地想起了我愉快的童年。②Seeingmymotherpreparingsupper,Ihurriedtohelpher.看到妈妈正在准备晚饭,我赶紧去帮她。3.when/while/once/unless/although...doing/done...当/有一次/除非/虽然……正在做/被做……①(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)Wecouldn'thelpeatinggrapeswhilepickingthem.我们在摘葡萄的时候忍不住吃了。②Whenofferedhelp,peopleoftensay“Thankyou”or“It'skindofyou”.当被提供帮助的时候,人们常说“谢谢你”或“你真好”。4.havingdone...已经做了……①Havingservedasavolunteerinasummercamping,IfeelI'mfitfortheposition.我曾在一次夏令营中做过志愿者,所以我觉得自己适合这个职位。②HavingfinishedhisEnglishcomposition,hestartedtoreadChina

Dailyofthatday.在完成了他的英语作文以后,他开始阅读当天的《中国日报》。5.疑问词+todo...①(2021·浙江卷,写作)I'mwritingtotellyouwhen

and

wheretohaveourexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintings.我写信是为了告诉你什么时间以及在哪里参观我们的学生国画展。②Inaddition,weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.另外,我们应该学会如何与他人和睦相处。6.onlytodo/tobedone结果却……LastFridayafternoon,Ihurriedtotheairporttoseeyouoff,only

tofindyourplanewastakingoff.上周五下午,我赶往机场给你送行,结果却发现你乘坐的飞机正在起飞。7.beeasy/difficulttodo...做……容易/困难Withsomanyvariables,itis

difficult

tocalculatethecost.有这么多的可变因素,难以计算出成本。8.besaid/reported/consideredtodo...据说/报道/认为做……(2020·天津卷,书面表达)Theirclassis

said

tohavebeenchosentotakepartinthecomingceremony.据说,他们班已经被选中参加即将到来的典礼。9.judgingby/from...根据……判断(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Judging

fromwhathesaid,wecouldtellthathewasaknowledgeable,humorousandresponsibleman.根据他说的话我们可以判断,他是一个博学、幽默且负责任的人。10.comparedwith/to...与……比较Compared

withmoderncommunication,writinglettershasmoreadvantages.与现代通信相比,写信有更多的优点。11.prefertodo...ratherthando.../wouldratherdo...thando.../woulddo...ratherthando...宁愿做……,而不愿做……Manypeopleprefer

totelephonerather

thanwriteletters.许多人宁愿打电话,而不愿写信。12.remaintobedone有待于被做……(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)Itremains

to

beseenwhetherthisplanwillbenefitthestudentsornot.这个计划是否会对学生有好处,还需要拭目以待。[对点过关训练]用非谓语动词补全句子1.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)真诚地希望你能代表我们队参加比赛。Youaresincerelyexpectedtotakepartinthegame____________________.2.吃饭时,你需要避免在咀嚼食物时发出声响。___________________________,youneedtoavoidmakingnoiseswhilechewingfood.

3.(2019·浙江卷,写作)得知你即将动身前往美国,我急切地写信对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢。________________________________________________,I'meagerlywritingthelettertoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourhelp.

representingourteamWhenenjoyingthemealLearningthatyou'releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon4.经历了一次又一次的失败后,她终于成功了。_________________________________________,shefinallymadeit.

5.如今,一些青少年宁愿在网上与陌生人闲谈,也不愿与父母面对面谈话。Nowadayssometeenagers________________________________________talkwiththeirparentsfacetoface.

Havingexperiencedfailuresoneafteranotherprefertochatwithstrangersonlineratherthan句式6被动语态当强调动作的承受者、不必说出动作的执行者或执行者不明确时,就需要用被动语态。被动语态的合理运用能给文章增色添彩,提升写作档次。下面是常用的被动语态:1.be+过去分词①(2021·浙江卷,写作)Anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsis

beingheldbyourschool.我们学校正在举办学生国画展。②(2019·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Asscheduled,itwill

beheldontheplaygroundfrom5pmto8pmnextSunday.按计划,它将于下周日下午5点至晚上8点在操场上举行。2.get+过去分词①Thetrafficwassothickthatawholerowofcarsgotblockedin.交通十分拥挤,一大排汽车都被堵住了。②I'mfeelingverysorrytotellyouthatIhavetochangeourplantovisitYunnaninJuly,becausemyleftfootgotinjured.我很抱歉地告诉你,我不得不改变我们7月份去云南旅游的计划,因为我的左脚受伤了。3.情态动词+be+过去分词(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)Apartfromthat,theoutcomeofstudycan't

beguaranteed.除此之外,学习的结果不能得到保证。[对点过关训练]Ⅰ.用被动语态补全句子1.据说,原定于这个月召开的会议将推迟到下个月召开。Itissaidthatthemeeting,which______________________thismonth,willbeputofftillnextmonth.

2.(2021·天津3月卷,书面表达)四川省位于中国的西南部。SichuanProvince____________________________________________.

3.王教授将于本周三晚上在我校学术报告厅举行关于中国文化的讲座。______________________________________________________________attheacademichallofourschoolontheeveningthisWednesday.

isscheduledtobeheldislocatedinthesouthwestofChinaThelectureaboutChineseculturewillbegivenbyProfessorWang4.这本书直到作者逝世后才出版。Thebook________________________________theauthordied.

5.每年,那所学校都有几百名学生被重点大学录取。Hundredsofstudentsinthatschool______________________thekeyuniversitieseveryyear.

wasnotpublisheduntilareadmittedintoⅡ.利用被动语态,结合汉语提示补全短文Averyterriblerainstormhitourcitylastnightandcausedhugemudslidearoundthatvillage.Inthisdisaster,1.____________________________(许多房屋被毁)and2.__________________________________(一幢办公楼被毁坏了).Tomakemattersworse,ithasalreadycausedonedeath,leavingthreepersonsmissing.

Whenthetroubleoccurred,helpcamefromallquarters.Soldiers3.___________________(被派去帮忙).Andalotofvillagerstriedtheirbesttohelpsearchforthemissingpersons.4.____________________(据说)thedirecteconomiclosscausedbythisheavyrainstormaddsuptomorethantenmillionyuan.Througheveryone'sefforts,everythingwentonsmoothly.

manyhousesweredestroyedanofficebuildingwasruinedweresenttohelpoutItissaidthat句式7虚拟语气写作中,虚拟语气的使用会让读者感觉表达自然,能起到强调的作用,为文章增加感情和色彩,提升写作档次。下面是常用的虚拟语气形式:1.if虚拟条件句(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Iwouldbemuchobligedifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能在方便时尽早答复我,我将不胜感激。2.隐含条件虚拟句(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Withouthisaid,Iwouldn'thavebooste