读后续写 谁是谁的超级英雄 讲义 高三英语二轮复习

读后续写练习写作讲义试题原题第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分)第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwas

acold,snowyevening.Tommywasrunning

asfastashe

could,focusedonnothingbuthisdestination-theshoponthestreetcorner.TwoweeksagohesawfigurinesofMarvelsuperheroesontheshelvesandfelthehadtohaveone.He'sbeenwalkingtheneighbor'sdogeversincethentoearnmoneytorealizehislittledream.Hewassoexcitedandhardlynoticingtheworldaroundhim.Maybethat'swhyhetrippedoverthelegsofahomelesswoman,whowassittingonthesidewalk,herbackagainstthewall.Hemurmured(低语)"sorry"andmovedontohisdestination.Onceheenteredtheshop,hewentstraighttotheshelveswithfigurines.Hulk,Thor,CaptainAmerica,IronMan,andmanymore-allofhisadmiredheroes.WithhisheartpoundinglikecrazyhereachedforSpiderman."Youlikethese,truebeliever?"Tommyturnedaround.Anoldmanwasstandingbehindhimwithawidesmileonhisface."Y-yes.…Yes,

they'reawesome!"answeredTommy."They'restrongandfastandhelpotherpeoplealot…"theboylookedatfigurinesinadmiration."IwishIcouldbeasuperherotoo.""Thenbecomeone!"saidtheoldman."How?"Tommyaskedinsurprise."Idon'thaveanysuperpowers.""Andwhywouldyouneedthem?"theoldmansmiled.Seeingtheconfusionontheboy'sface,hesquatted(蹲下)andputhishandsonTommy'sarms."Didyouknow,thatshopkeeperladyovertherehasadisabledhusband?She'sbeenworkinghardandtakingcareofhimforyears.I'veneverheardawordofcomplaintfromher.Andthisperson-"hepointedataredheadman,whojustenteredtheshop."He'safirefighter;he'ssavedcountlesslives.Henevergivesup,nomatterhowdangerousthesituationseemstobe."TheoldmanlookedTommyintheeyesandsmiled."Youdon'tneedasuperpowertobeaheroforsomeoneelse.Thepathofasuperherostartsnotinthemind,notinthemuscles,butintheheart."注意：1.

续写词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Tommy

loweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.____________________________________________________________________

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homelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.________________________________________________________________试题分析1.主要人物:①Tommy:sawfigurinesofMarvelsuperheroesontheshelvesandfelthehadtohaveone②theoldman:③thehomelesswoman:2.视角：第三人称3.主题：人与社会/人与自我（如何成为自己希望的superhero），4.前文故事梗概:Tommy喜欢超级英雄的小人形象。通过给邻居遛狗，他终于攒够了钱，在一个寒冷的下雪的夜晚，飞奔前往之前看到的那家有小人形象销售的店，撞了坐在路边流浪女，只是简单地说了声对不起后就离开了。小人形象很吸引人，最终他选了“蜘蛛侠”。听到有人问他话，转身看到一位老人。当老人问他为什么喜欢和说他也可以成为一位超级英雄的时候，他感到一脸迷茫。于是，老人就开始以身边的例子来说明如何成为超级英雄。Tommy开始有所悟。……5.续写安排:第一段:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.①（与前一句和前文衔接）Tommy到底在想什么呢②（过渡）接下去，他准备做什么③（承上启下）肯定前往homelesswoman那里，想为她做点什么第二段:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.①（与前一句衔接）怎么跟她交流②（过渡）homelesswoman的回应③（收尾）通过此事Tommy对superhero的感悟下水作文Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Thinkingoftheoldman’swords,hebegantowonderwhathecoulddotobeasuperhero,hundredsofthoughtsrunningaroundinhismind.Helpingtheelderlyinthenursinghome?Doingsomethingforthecommunity?Orsomethingelse?…Itseemedtobenowayout.Allofasudden,theslightpaininhisrightfootbroughthimthethoughtthatheshoulddosomethingforthehomelesswoman.Afteraharddecision,heputhisfavoritefigurineSpidermanbacktotheshelf.Abigdreamcameintohisheart.Ahotcoffee,twosandwichesandthegloveinhand,hedashedtoher.(108words)Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Theheaviersnowhadforcedhertocurltightlyasaball.Approachingher,hebenttoasquatandofferedherwhathehadboughtafterawarmandpolitegreeting.Thehomelesswomanraisedherselfslowlyandthankedhiminalowvoice,shiningtearsofgratituderollingdown.“Youreallydeservethem,Lady!”Itwasthefirsttimeforhimtogetclosetosuchsituations.However,itindeedofferedhimanopportunitytounderstandthemeaningofasuperheroandafurtherthinkingofhowtobeone.Asuperherostartedfromdoingsomethingforthoseinneedwithawillingheart.(106words)参考范文读后续写(满分25分)Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Finally,heraisedhishead."SoIamsupposedto..."hestoppedmid-sentencewhenherealizedthathewasalone.Heturnedhisheadleftandright,buttheoldmanwasnowheretobeseen.Tommysighedheavily-healreadyhadanideaofwhatheshoulddo.Helookedatfigurinesforthelasttimeandmovedtowardsthecounter."Twosandwichesandacupofteaplease,"hesaid.(73words)Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Tommycamecloserandcarefullygavethewomanhisbuys.Hereyesopenedwideinsurprise,thenfilledwithtears."Thankyou,"shewhispered.Tommybowedhishead,turnedaroundandwentbackhome.Hewasmovingfasterandfasterandfinallyhestartedtorun.

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