2023-2024学年高二下学期期中考试作文复习讲义素材

应用文：主题：JourneyacrossavastlandWritinganemailImaginethatyouareLiDaiyu.Usingthemapandyournotewriteanemailtoyourparentstellingthemaboutyourtrip.(texttype;tense;person;structure;content;connector;language)*Howdoyouwriteanemailtoyourparents?Whatimpressedyoumostduringthejourney?Whatdidyousee,hear,doandhowdidyoufeel?Whatorderwouldyoufollowwhendescribingthejourney?【范文】DearMomandDad,Thankyousomuchforallowingmetogoonthisjourney!Ithasbeenawonderfultripsofar.WefirstspenttwodaysinVancouverwherewetookaboattothebay,sawsplendidmountainsbyhikingandvisitedanislandwithelegantshops.Intheshops,thecraftsandantiquesweresoattractivethatIboughtsomeforyou.PassingthroughtheCanadianRockies,wetookthetraintoLakeLouisewhichwassomassiveandexceptionallysplendid.TakingacoachtoJasperallowedmetoseethespectacularmountainpeaksandalargenumberofcreatures.ThenwetookthetraintoEdmonton,WinnipegandOntarioandwewehadagoodviewofrollinghills,fantasticlandscapeandiconicmapletreesindifferentcolors.Atlast,wereachedTorontowithexcitement.Ithasbeenagreattrip,fillinguswithsomanyhappymemories.主题：adversityandcourage假设你是一名高中生，你的朋友tom最近经历了学习上的挑战，请你写一封建议信，和他分享逆境和勇气的重要性。【范文】DearTom,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarefacingchallengesinyourstudies.Iwantyoutoknowthatyouarenotalone.

Everyonefaceschallengesinlife,anditishowwerespondtothemthatdefinesus.Itisimportanttorememberthatadversitycanbeanopportunityforgrowthandlearning.Whenwefacechallenges,wedevelopresilienceandperseverance,whichareimportantqualitiesforsuccessinlife.Iencourageyoutostaypositiveandkeepworkinghard.Rememberthateverychallengeisanopportunitytolearnandgrow.Youcandothis!Bestregards,Yours主题：Healthylifestyle假定你校将举办一场题为“如何健康生活”的英语演讲比赛，你参加报名了比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。Honorablejudgesanddearfellowstudents,goodafternoon!It'sagreatpleasureformetostandhereandgiveyouashortspeechonthetopicofHowtolivehealthily.Asthesayinggoes”Healthiswealth”Tolivehealthilyisveryimportantforallofus.Hereissomeadviceonhowtolivehealthily.Firstly,youshouldhaveahealthydiet.It'snecessarytoeatenoughfreshfruitandvegetables.Butdon'teatanythingtoofattyorsweet.Breakfastcanprovideyouwithenergy,soyoumustn'tgotoworkorschoolwithoutbreakfast.Secondly,youshouldhavegoodlivinghabits.Doingexerciseregularlyisagoodwaytokeepyoufit.Enoughsleepisalsonecessaryafteraday'sworkorstudy.Followthisadvice,andyouwilllivehealthilyandhappily.Thankyouverymuchforyourattention!主题：environmentalprotection近年来，我国大部分地区遭受雾霾侵袭，造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等，低碳、环保已成为当今时代的主题，从我们身边的小事做起，保护环境。现请以“Let'sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironment”为题，写一篇短文。Let'sDoSomethingtosaveOurEnvironmentWeallliveontheearth.Theearthisourhome.Wehaveonlyoneearth.Wemusttakecareofit.Ifweharmit,wewillhaveaterribleend.Therearethreeproblemsinourearth,whicharepollution,disasterandillness.It'sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Soeveryoneshoulddosomethingtosaveourenvironment.First,weshouldsaveeverydropofwater,suchasturningoffthetapsafterusingitandrecyclingthewater.Forexample,wecanwatertheplantsandcleantherestroomwithourusedwater.Second,weshouldsaveenergy,suchasturningoffthelightswhenweleave,doingmorewalking,morebicyclingandlessdrivingandsoon.Third,weshouldaskourgovernmenttocontrolthepollutionfromthefactories.Let'sactnowtosaveourenvironment.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.读后续写主题：firstaid“Ada!Milk!”Mamacalled.Milk.ItwasAda’sturntogetit.Adasighedandshutherfirst-aidbook.Herheadhurtfromreadinginthedimmorninglight,buthowelsewasshegoingtolearn?Adatiedthecowclosetoatree.Somewheredownthemountain,somevolunteerdoctorswereteachingmedicalskillstovillagenurses.AdaheardBettydriveoffhoursago.“Sheshouldhavetakenmewithher.ShethinksI’mtooyoung,butshe’swrong.Iamalready16!”Adathought.AdacarriedthemilkbacktoMama,thenwandereduptheroad.Roy,avillageboy,hadgottenadonkey,andsomekidshadgatheredaroundtoseeit.Roywasalwaysdoingsomethingtogetattention.Likenow:hewastryingtostandontheanimal’sbareback.“Nowondertheydon’ttrustkidswithanythingimportant”,Adathought,sighing.Shehadjustturnedawaywhensheheardathudandafewscreams.Roylayonthegroundnearbymoaninginpain.Thedonkeystoodseveralmetersaway.“Roy!”Thekidsnearbyrantowardshim.“GetBetty,”onesaid.Adashookherhead.“Betty’sgonetothecity.”Theotherkidsseemedfrozeninplace.AdarantowhereRoywaslying.Shedroppedtoherkneesonthedustyroad.“Roy!Canyouhearme?”Roymoanedinagony.Adasawthatoneofhislegswascrooked,bentalittlesidewaysbetweenthekneeandtheankle.Abrokenleg!Sherememberedwhatthefirst-aidbookhadsaidaboutbrokenlegs:ifthereisnoambulance,straightenthebonebeforemovingthevictim.Therecertainlywouldn’tbeanyambulancehere.Adalookedbackuptheroad.Theotherkidswerestillstandingthere,watching.“Victor!”Adacalledtooneoftheboys.“GogetRoy’smama,andfindsomeonewithatruck.”Sheturnedtotheothers.“Givemeyourshirts.Weneedsomethingtotiehislegwith.”Paragraph1:

Adathenfoundastrongstick,whichshewouldusetokeephislegstraight._Paragraph2:Thenextday,BettycametoAda’shome.

[范文]Paragraph1:

Adathenfoundastrongstick,whichshewouldusetokeephislegstraight.ShegentlyexplainedwhatshewasgoingtodothencarefullywrappedtheshirtsaroundRoy’slegandthestick.Roycriedoutinpain.“Iknowithurts,”Adasaidsoftly.“Butthiswillholditstilluntilyougettothehospital.”WhenAdawasdone,shelookedupandsawRoy’smamawatchingfromafewmetersaway.Behindherwasaneighborinapickuptruck.WhenAdasteppedaway,Roy’smamaranoverandheldRoy’sfaceinherhands.“Thankyou,Ada,”shesaid.AdahelpedthemliftRoyintothetruck,thentheydrovedownthehillsidetowardsthehospital.Paragraph2:Thenextday,BettycametoAda’shome.“Iheardwhatyoudid,”Bettysaid.“Youkeptyourheadinanemergency.That’sanimportantskill.”Ada’sfaceturnedred.“Iwasafraid...”Bettyshookherhead.“It’sOKforanursetobeafraid,aslongasshehasaclearhead.Thevolunteerdoctorsarecomingtomorrowwithvaccines.Weneedsomemorehands.Canyouhelp?”“I’dloveto.”Adarepliedatonce.“Comeearly,then.Thereisalottolearn.”Adasmiled.“I’llbringmyfirst-aidbook.”主题2：环境保护类Onemorningonmywaytoschool,noticedanelderlywomandressedinayellowvest(马甲)carryingagarbagebagandoneofthoserubbishclaws(爪形器具)."What'sthatladydoing?"Iaskedmum."VestLady.Shejustpicksuprubbisharoundhereforfun,"mumsaid."Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishlookinglikeaconstructionworkerisfun?"Ipuzzled.ForseveralyearsI'dwitnessthismysteriousVestLady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Ihadthoughtshewascrazyforpickinguprubbish.EventuallyIsmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,Imovedtohighschool.ThetimeIsawrubbishhereandthereIfeltreallyannoyed.ThenI'dthink,"Whyisn'tanyonepickingupthisrubbish?PeoplearesoinconsiderateI"However,shortlyafter,Irealizedpickinguptherubbishwasnotsomeoneease'sproblem.NowIcouldn'twalkpastlitterwithoutfeelingguilty.Ivolunteeredtocleanuprubbisharoundourschool.Strangeasitmightsound,pickinguplitterwaskindofathrillforme!Infact,Iwassodeterminedthatformy17thbirthdayIboughtmyselfarubbishclaw,reusableglovesandareflectivesafetyyellowvestwithmyownnameonit.Duringmyfirstattemptinmystylishequipment,metwithunfriendlylooksfromothersasifIwereacriminaldoingcommunityservice.Oneday,Ihadanepiphany(顿悟):"I'mactingjustlikeVestLady!"Buttherewastoomuchrubbisharound,cigaretteendslitteredabout,cansrollingonthestreet,piecesofpaperhiddeninthegrassandplastic.alonewastooweakJHowwouldIgetmorevolunteersinvolvedinrubbishremoval?Asmartideaflashedintomymind.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.___________________________________________________________________________________________________Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames.【答案】SoonIcreatedmywebsitego.pickingup.com.OnthewebsiteIlaunchedarubbishremovalcampaign.Idescribedmypurpose－callingonvolunteerstopickuprubbish.Ipostedpicturesofrubbishlitteredaboutonthewebsite,whichcouldnotonlyillustratetheseveresituationbutalsoshowthatalargenumberofvolunteerswereingreatneed.Besides,IsharedthestoryofVestLadywhoinfluencedmesomuch.Surprisingly,mywebsitegraduallybecameabighitontheinternet.Moreandmorepeopleputonvestswiththeirownnames.Volunteerscouldbeseenpickinguprubbishintheirsparetime.Theyellowvestsmadebeautifulsceneryintheparkoronthestreet.Withourjointefforts,theenvironmentbecamebetterandbetter.Whatdelightedmemostwasthatpeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionwasimproved.Therubbishremovalcampaignwasabigsuccess.ThankstoVestLadywhorootedthesenseofenvironmentalprotectioninmymind,morepeoplebecameVestLady.【分析】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者受到“马甲女士”的影响自己也开始穿着反光黄色安全背心捡垃圾，但是作者很快意识到一个人的力量是不够的，于是作者想到创建网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来，获得了巨大的成功。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“很快我就创建了自己的网站go.pickingup.com。”可知，第一段可描写作者如何通过网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来。②由第二段首句内容“越来越多的人穿上印有自己名字的背心。”可知，第二段可描写很多志愿者加入清除垃圾的行动，环境得到了很大改善，人们的环保意识也得到了提高。2.续写线索：发起运动——号召——成为热门——改善——成功——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①描述：describe/depict②阐释：illustrate/clarify③影响：influence/affect情绪类①惊讶：surprisingly/amazingly②高兴：delight/please【点睛】[高分句型1]Ipostedpicturesofrubbishlitteredaboutonthewebsite,whichcouldnotonlyillustratetheseveresituationbutalsoshowthatalargenumberofvolunteerswereingreatneed.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和“notonly...butalso...”固定句式)[高分句型2]Whatdelightedmemostwasthatpeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionwasimproved.(运用了that引导的表语从句和what引导的主语从句)主题3：志愿服务阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Iwasavolunteerforanorganizationatthebeginningofthisyear.Theorganizationisaimedathelpingchildrenwhosufferfromcancer.Oneday,wewereaskedto

raisemoney

forcancerresearchandprogrammefundingatanevent.SincemyfriendLisawasalso

avolunteer

fortheorganization,Iwenttotheeventwithher.Thereweremanypeopleattheevent.Afterseeingourposter,somepeoplecametousandtalkedwithus.Butfewpeopledonatedmoney.Itwasabithotthatday.Both

LisaandI

gotreallyupset.Halfanhourlater,Lisastartedcomplaining,“Idon’tthinkwecanraisemuchmoneytoday.”“Don’tworry.Theeventlastsforthreehours.Thereisstillalotoftimeleft,”Isaid,thoughIalsothoughtpoorlyofourplantoraisemuchmoneythatday.WhileLisaandIweretalking,

alittleboy

ofabouteightyearsoldcametous.Hestoodinfrontofourposterandstartedreading.Afterawhile,heasked,“Whatiscancer?”Iexplainedwhatcanceris.ThenIsaid,“Manypeople

aroundtheworldare

sufferingfromcancer.

Itcanbereallydangerous.Moreresearchisneededtolearnaboutitsothatpeoplewithitcansufferless.That’swhywe’recollectingmoneyforit.”“Dochildrensufferfromcancer,too?”askedtheboy.“Yes.Manychildrensufferfromcancer.Someofthemmaydie.Theyneed

help,”LisasaidandInodded.Hearingthat,theboybecamesad.Thentheboyasked,“Howmuchmoneyhaveyoucollected?”BothLisaandIwere

embarrassed

totellhimthatwedidn’traisemuchmoney.Atlast,wesaid,“Notmuch.”Theboylookedintoour

donation

containerandonlysawafewone-dollarand

five-dollarbills.Theboysaidnothingafterseeingthatandleft.Thensomegirlscametousandwestartedtalkingwiththem.NeitherLisanorIthoughttheboywouldreturn.However,abouttwentyminuteslater,theboydidreturn.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Theboyhappilyrantousandasked,“Wouldyoutakeadonationfromchildren?”_________________________