新高考英语读后续写技巧与训练：趣事型（两大核心技巧）

读后续写：趣事类

Parti：经典例文（姐弟重逢）.................................................

Part2：趣事类描写“两大核心技巧”...........................................

核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）......................................

核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）..................................4

Part3：灵活应用..............................................................5

例1:成功的“复仇”....................................................5

例2：做家务.............................................................7

Part4:高考真题再现..........................................................9

【真题1】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头............................9

【真题2】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈..............................12

Parti：经典例文（姐弟重逢）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Oneday,Ifoundawalletonthestreet.Thewalletcontainedonlythreedollarsandaveryold

letter.Theenvelopewaswornandtheonlythingonitwasthereturnaddress.Istartedtoopenthe

letter,hopingtofindsomeinformation.ThenIsawthedate-1990,andthesignature-Beatrice.The

letterwaswrittenseveraldecadesago.

ThenImadeeveryeffortandfoundoutthatBeatricewasnowworkinginahospital.I

showedhertheletter.Thesecondshesawtheletter,shetookadeepbreathandsaid,"Youngman,

thisletterwasthelastcontactIeverhadwithHenry.Heismyonlybrother.Ilovedhimvery

much.Iwasonly16atthetimeandmybrotheristwoyearsyoungerthanme.Ifyoucanfindhim,

tellhimI'mstilllookingfbrshesaidandtearsbegantowellupinhereyes."Motheris

waitingfbrhimtocomebackhome.^^

WhenIwalkedoutofthebuildingwiththewalletinmyhand,theguardofthebuilding

recognizedthewallet,andwithhishelp,Ifinallyfounditsowner,Henry.Ihandedthewalletto

Henryandhesaid,"Yes,that'smine!Itmusthavedroppedoutofmypocketthisaftemoon.^^

“Ireadtheletterinthehopeoffindingoutwhoownedthewallet.,,Isaid.Thesmileonhis

facesuddenlydisappeared.Heasked,utYoureadthatletter?”"NotonlydidIreadit,butalso

Beatriceread.^^Ireplied.Hesuddenlybecameexcited.''Beatrice?Youknowwheresheis?Howis

she?Pleasetellme,“hebegged."She'sfine.Shehasbeenlookingforyou.^^Isaidsoftly.

Hegrabbedmyhandandsaid,“Sir,youknowsheismyonlysisterinthisworld.I'vealways

missedher.^^

HenryandItooktheelevator（电梯）downtoBeatrice'sroom.Iwalkedovertoher.

“Beatrice,“Isaidsoftly,pointingtoHenry,whowaswaitingwithmeinthedoorway.t4Doyou

knowtheman?^^

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Beatriceadjustedherglasses,lookedforamoment,butdidn'tsayaword.

AboutthreeweekslaterIgotacallatmyofficefromBeatrice.

【答案】Paragraph1：

Beatriceadjustedherglasses,lookedforamoment,butdidn'tsayaword.Henrysaidsoftly,

almostinawhisper,^Beatrice,it'sHenry.Doyourememberme?”Shesaidexcitedly,44Henry!I

don'tbelieveit!Henry!It'syou!MyHenry!"Hewalkedslowlytowardsherandtheyhugged.

Thenurseand1leftwithtearsfallingdownourfaces.

比阿特丽斯调整了一下眼镜，看了一会儿，但一句话也没说。亨利轻声说，几乎是轻声

说，“比阿特丽斯，是亨利。你还记得我了吗？她兴奋地说，“亨利！”我不相信！亨利！是

你的名字！我的亨利先生！他慢慢地向她走去，他们拥抱在一起。护士和我离开L眼泪流

了下来。

Paragraph2：

AboutthreeweekslaterIgotacallatmyofficefromBeatrice."Canyoubreakawayon

Sundaytoattendaparty?HenryandBeatricearegoingtohaveapartyinthehome!”Itwasa

beautifulpartywithallthepeopledresseduptojoininthecelebration.Ifyoueverwantedtoseea

womanandamanactingliketwoteenagers,youhadtoseethiseldersisterandyoungerbrother.It

wasaperfectendingforafamilyaffectionthathadlastednearlyseveraldecades.

大约三周后，我接到比阿特丽斯的电话。“你星期天可以参加聚会吗？’‘亨利和比阿特丽

斯将在家里举办一个聚会！”这是一个美丽的派对，所有人都盛装参加庆祝活动。如果你想

看到一个女人和一个男人像两个青少年，你必须看到这个姐姐和弟弟。这是一个持续了近几

十年的家庭感情的完美结局。

【解析】

本文以信封为线索展开，讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包，在里面发现一封破旧的信，通

过努力找到信主人的姐姐，通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜，看了一会儿，但没有说一句话。“可知，第一

段可描写姐弟两人重逢的温馨场景。

②由第二段首句内容“大约三周后，我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。”可知，第二段可描

写作者对重逢事件的感慨。

2.续写线索：发现信封——找到信封主人姐姐一找到主人——姐弟重逢——感谢——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

接电话：getacallat/putsbonto/pickupthetelephone/answerthephone

抽出时间：breakawayon/taketimeoflf/spareone'stime

情绪类

兴奋：didexcitedly/thrilled

泪流满面：tearsbathe/streamdown/one'scheeks

【点睛】

［高分句型11：ThenurseandIleftwithtearsfallingdownourfaces.这句话运用了with的复合

结构。

［高分句型2］：Itwasaperfectendingforafamilyaffectionthathadlastednearlyseveraldecades

这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。

Part2：趣事类描写“两大核心技巧”

核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）

1.Sonervouswashethat（他太紧张了）hedroppedtheelectriccarvingknife.（2021.04台

州高三调考）

2.Igotintoapanic（陷入惊慌之中）asIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyhead

aroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.（2021年1月浙江高考）

3.Sweatingandnearlylearing（汗流狭背,眼泪差点流下来）,Icouldimaginehowsillyand

strangeIwasatthatmomentbasedonthecontinuinglaughterfrommyparentsandJason.（2021

年1月浙江高考）

3.她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。

Blushingscarletinstantly,shefeltembarrassmentalmostwreathedherentirely.

核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）

1.他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。

Theyshruggedandgrinned,whichdissipatedallherdistressandconsoledher.

1.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。

'Thanks.'Clingingherhandstothebagopening,shewasoverwhelmedbyasurgeofgratitude

andwarmth.

2.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。

Thetwostrongstrangersundoubtedlylitherdayup.

3.Wealljumpedtoourfeet,dancingandscreamingwithjoy（开心得欢呼雀跃）.（2021.04台

州高三调考）

4.ThoughIwasdissatisfiedwithmyuglygestureandstupidimage,Iwassatisfiedwiththe

happinessandfunthatIbroughttoothers（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）.（2021年

1月浙江高考）

5.她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽

管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模）

BrimmingoverwithbrightFeelingandjoy,shestopped,fishedoutahandfulcoinsandtuned

aroundtosqueezethemintheirfistsdespitetwomen'sastonishedexpression.

Part3：灵活应用

例1：成功的“复仇”

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词

数应为15。左右。

“Iwillhaverevenge（复仇）onhim,andmakehimregretwhathedidtome,“saidPhilipto

himself,hisfaceredwithanger.Stephen,whohappenedatthatmomenttowalkpastandhearhim

talkingtohimself.

“Whoisthatyouwanttotakerevengeon?"askedStephen.Philiplookedathisfriendand

said,“Youremembermynewballgivenbymyfather?Look!Itispunctured!Itwasfarmer

Robinson5ssonwhodidthis!”

StephenaskedhimwhyyoungRobinsonhadruinedit."Iwaswalkingandkickingmyball.^^

Philipreplied,“Byaccident,whenIwasoppositethegate,myballbumpedoverabucketofwater

leftinthepathwaybyhim.^^

“Hecameupandbegantoyellatme.IassuredhimthatwhatIhaddonewasanaccident,

andthatIwasterriblysorryforit.Ialsoofferedtofetchanotherbucketofwaterforhim.But

despiteallIhadsaid,hetookanailoutofhispocketandtwisteditintotheball,asyousee.Iwill

makehimpayforthis.^^

“Honestlyspeaking,9,saidStephen,tcheisalreadypunishedforwhathehasdone,because

nobodylikeshimandheoftenwalksaroundalone.Heisjustalonelyandmiserableboy.Thiswill

beenoughrevengefbryou.”

“ButtheballismyfavoritegiftandIenjoyplayingwithitsomuch...”murmuredPhilip.

“NowPhilip,saidStephen,thinkyoucanactbetterthanhimintermsofgettingrevenge.

Iwilltellyouwhathappenedtohimnotlongago.”

“Awhileagohesawabeehoveringaboutaflower.Hecaughtthebeeandwasgoingtopull

offitswingsfbrfun.Thebee,ofcourse,stunghim.Thepainmadehimsoangrythat,likeyou,he

decidedtogetrevenge.Hegotastick,andpresseditintothebeehive（蜂巢）

“Immediatelythewholeswarmofbeesflewoutandstunghimsobadlythathehadtospend

afewdaysinbed.^^

“Soyousee,hewasnotverysuccessfulingettingrevenge.Whatifhecouldactbetterand

forgivethebeefbrstinginghim?^^askedStephen.

Paragraph1:

“Imustsay,“repliedPhilip,"thatyouradviceseemsverygood^^.

Paragraph2:

Afewdaysafterward,PhilipsawthisyoungRobinsonfallashewascarryinghomeaheavylog

ofwood.

2.答案：

“Imustsay,“repliedPhilip,44thatyouradviceseemsverygood.Socomewithmeplease,

andIwilltellmyfatherwhathappenedtotheball,andIthinkhewillnotbeangrywithme.”

Theywent,andPhiliptoldhisfatherwhathadhappened.HethankedStephenforthegoodadvice

hehadgivenhisson,andpromisedPhiliptogivehimanotherballexactlythesameasthefirst.

“我得说，”菲利普回答说，“你的建议似乎很好。所以请跟我来，我要告诉我父亲舞会

发生了什么事，我想他不会对我生气的。他们走了，菲利普把发生的事告诉了他父亲。他感

谢斯蒂芬给他儿子的好建议，并答应菲利普再给他一个和第一个完全一样的舞会。

Afewdaysafterwards,PhilipsawthisyoungRobinsonfallashewascarryinghomea

heavylogofwood.Itwastooheavyfbrhimtoliftupagain.Philiprantohim,andhelpedhimto

putitonhisshoulderagain.Theboywasembarrassedtobetreatedsokindlywhenhehadruined

Philip'sballtheweekbefore!Hesaidthathewasverysorryfbrhisbehavior.Philipwenthome

quitehappy."This,“hesaid,“isthebestrevengeIcouldtake,inreturninggoodfbrbad.”

几天后，菲利普看见这个年轻的罗宾逊带着一根沉重的木头回家时倒下了。它太重了，

他不能再抬不起来了。菲利普跑到他跟前，帮他又把它放在肩上。这个男孩在一周前毁了菲

利普的球，对这样友好感到很尴尬！他说他对自己的行为感到非常抱歉。菲利普很高兴地回

家了。“这是，”他说，“这是我所能得到的最好的报复。”

解析：

通过阅读所给文章可知,Philip因为农夫Robinson的儿子用钉子刺穿了自己新买的球而非常

生气，扬言要报复他。Stephen劝他说没有人喜欢Robinson的儿子，他经常一个人走来走去。

他只是一个孤独可怜的男孩。Stephen还告诉Philip,几天前Robinson的儿子被蜜蜂蛰了，就去

打蜜蜂巢，结果被一大群蜜蜂蛰了，不得不在床上躺了几天的事情。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是:“我得说,"Philip回答说，“你的建议似乎很好。”所以后文应

该是讲述Philip放弃了报复的计划，告诉了父亲实情,Philip的父亲感谢Stephen给他儿子的忠

告，答应Philip再给他买一个球，和第一个一模一样的。第二段开头是:几天后,Philip看到

Robinson的儿子在把一根沉重的木头搬回家时摔倒了。本段应该写Philip帮助了Robinson

的儿子,Robinson的儿子为自己几天前的行为道了歉,Philip高高兴兴地回了家,认为以德报怨

就是最好的报复。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:beangrywith;goodadvice汕e

sameas;too...to...;embarrassed等高级词iC;Hesaidthathewasverysorryforhisbehavior.宾语

从句等高级句式。

例2：做家务

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）

Duringlunchtime,Emmasuggestedgoingtothezootofeedtheanimalsandhermom

agreed.

“We'llstopbythebakeryandpicksomebreadup.Nowhurryandeatandthenwe'llgo.It's

goingtobealovelyday.Grandmaiscomingwithus.She'llbehereanyminute,“momsaid.

Emmaateherlunchandthenranintoherroomtogethershoes.Theproblemwasthatshe

couldonlyfindoneofthem.Shelookedunderherbed,butallshecouldseeweredirtytowelsand

pants.Shemovedsomeofhertoysouloftheway,butstillcouldn'tfindhershoe.Aftershe'd

checkedeverywhereinherroom,sheranintothekitchen."Mom,Ican'tfindmyshoe.Willyou

waitwhileIlookforit?”sheasked.

Hermomthoughtabouthowmanytimesshe'dtoldEmmatocleanherroomup.She

whisperedsomethingtoEmma'sgrandmaandthensaidtoEmma,“Youwillhavetostay

home.YourdadandIwilltakeRyantothezoo.Grandmawillstayherewithyou.^^

“No!Pleasewaitforme.Iwanttogotothezoo,“Emmacried.'Tmsorry,Emma.I'vetold

youadozentimestocleanyourroomandyouignoredme.Youcan'tfindyourshoenow.It'syour

ownfaullfornotdoingasIasked.Youwillstayhome.^^

Emmaranintoherbedroom,crying.Hermomcametothedoorandsaid,“Emma,cleanthat

roomofyoursbeforeIgethome.Tvetoldgrandmanottogiveyouanysweetsuntilyoufinishthe

work.^^ShewentouttothecarwithRyanandEmma'sdadandthentheydroveaway.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4,续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1：

Emmasatonherbedandcriedforalongtime.

Paragraph2：

Emmaandhergrandmaweresittingatthetable,eatingwhenhermom,dad,andRyancame

home.

【答案】Emmasatonherbedandcriedforalongtime.Andthenshewipedhereyesandstarted

tocleanherroom.Ittookhertwohourstocleanuptheroom.4tIdidit!”shesaidproudly.She

evenfoundhermissingshoe.Sheranintothelivingroom.“Grandma!Comeandsee.Icleaned

myroomandfoundmyshoe.^^GrandmalookedinEmma'sroom."Ifyouhadkeptitthisway,

youwouldn'thavelostyourshoe.Comeandhavesomeswuelsnow,“shesaid.

艾玛坐在床上哭了很长时间。然后她擦了擦眼睛，开始打扫房间。她花了两个小时才打扫房

间。“我做了！”她骄傲地说。她甚至找到了她丢失的鞋子。她跑进客厅。“奶奶！”来看看吧。

我打扫了我的房间，找到了我的鞋子。奶奶看着艾玛的房间。“如果你一直这样做，你就不

会丢鞋了。现在就来吃点糖果吧，“她说。

EmmaandhergrandmaweresittingalIhetable,eatingwhenhermom,dad,andRyancame

home.*lWell,lookatEmma'sroom!It'sclean,“herdadsaid/'Howwasthezoo?Didyou

havefun?IwishIcouldhavegonetherewithyou,''Emmasaid/ifyoukeepyourroomclean,

wemaygoandseeanimalsagain,“hermomsaid.Fromthenon,Emmatriedherbesttokeep

herroomclean.

艾玛和奶奶坐在桌边吃饭，妈妈、爸爸和瑞恩回家。"嗯，看看艾玛的房间！它很干净，”

她爸爸说，“动物园怎么样？你玩得开心吗？我希望我能和你一起去，”艾玛说。“如果你保

持房间干净，我们可以再去看动物，‘‘她妈妈说。从那时起，艾玛就尽力保持她的房间干净。

Part4:高考真题再现

【真题1】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头

:阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Pumpkin（南瓜）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.Wevisitalocalfarmevery

October.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggest

pumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldest

childIhaveanadvantage——Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.

Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,

Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,but

Iwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmy

momfilmingtheannualevent.TmunsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkin

wouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.

Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyhead

againsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,

unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,

likeacork（软木塞）forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinresting

onmyshoulders.

Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy."I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,“I

said,andwithJasonhelpingtosuDDortitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewhere

torest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobeless

straightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasI

pressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butit

wasnouse."Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosed

space.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1

Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

Paragraph2

ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.

优秀范文1

Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfull

ofmyanxiousbreath.Icouldhearmysister'slaughterandJason'smuffledvoicetalkingabout

cuttingthegiantthingopen."No!Notmypreciouspumpkin!?,Iprotested.Eventually,Dadhelped

meadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,andpulledthepumpkingentlyoffmyhead.Hairin

knots,noseandchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.That'swhenIrealized

thecamerahadbeenrollingthewholetime!

ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Ilookedjustlikeapumpkinheadinit.

Embamssedandalittleannoyed,Ifledtomyroom,butMomstoppedme."Youhaven'treadthe

commentsyet."Iscrolleddownthescreenandmarveledatthestoriestheviewerssharedabout

Halloween.Onegirlrecalledcelebratingitwithherbrothersandsisters,andthankedusfor

"bringingherhome”.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckyto

beapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.（171words）

出彩表达积累（出自原文及范文）

Lhollowadj.中空的；空心的

2.muffledadj.沉闷的；模糊不清的

3.sighn.叹气；叹息

4.marvelv.感到惊奇；大为赞叹

5.mischievousadj.顽皮的；捣蛋的

6.scrolldown向下滚动

7.Eventually,Dadhelpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,andpulledthepumpkin

gentlyoffmyhead.

最后，爸爸帮我把身体调整到一个比较放松的姿势，轻轻地把南瓜从我头上扯下来。（对动

作的生动描写）

8.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.

这些话温暖了我的心，使我热泪盈眶。（对神态的生动描写）

优秀范文2

Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Jasonsuggestedusingaknifetocut

thepumpkinopen.Iwavedmyhandswildlyinprotestattheplan.4tThenyouneedtofindaway

ofpullingyourselfout."Mydadsaidinacalm,coolvoice.Hisvoicesettledmynerves.Iwas

consciousthatmynosewasactingasanimpedimenttomyescape.Withstretchingoutmyface

andbitingintothepumpkin,Isurmountedthelargeobstacleandmanagedtopullmyheadout.A

rippleofexcitementranthroughusbutthefirstthingIsawwasthecamera.

ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Inthespaceofaweek,ithadbeen

viewedoveramilliontimes.ItfilledMomwithgreaterastonishment.Rarelyhadapumpkin's

videohadsomanyhitsasthisone.Dangerousasitis,someviewers'curiositywastoostrongto

resist.Theyleftmessagesdescribingthefeelingstheyhadwhilewatchingit.Somelaughedatme,

whileotherspraisedmyparents,whoremainedcalmthroughout.Lookingthroughthesereviews,

thesunlightpeekingthroughour,Dad'scalmsmilereflectedhismotto"All'swellwithus,never

kaf\（186words）

出彩表达积累（出自原文及范文）

1.nerven.神经质；神经紧张

2.consciousadj.意识到；注意到

3.impedimentn.妨碍；阻碍；障碍

4.surmountv.克服；解决

5.obstacles障碍;阻碍；绊脚石

6.ripplen.波纹；细浪；涟漪

7.Hisvoicesettledmynerves.他的声音使我安定下来。（无灵主语）

8.ItfilledMomwithgreaterastonishment.这使母亲尤为惊讶。（对情绪的生动描写）

【真题2】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Avacationwithmymother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmy

mother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.Onestrangefamilytrigwetookwhen

Iwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedto

spendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstday

ofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallof

ourfi-iends.Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,

andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravely

droveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurse

andtraveler'schecksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdriving

whileDadsleptf,YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andrilstandoutsidethe

doorandplaylookoutwhileyougo."Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:"Honey,wherearethe

kids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet."Wewereneveractuallyleft

behindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivingin

vainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn,twefindahousewitha

likely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toour

greatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrange

familyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryonein

theworldasasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

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Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

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