Unit9写作能力提升练课件人教版英语八年级下册

UNIT9

写作能力提升练UNIT

9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum？

你到过什么地方？你对它有什么深刻的印象？请用英语写一篇短文来介绍你游历过的城市或风景名胜。

要求：词数80左右。

［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.哈尔滨位于中国黑龙江省的南部。它是一座历史悠久的美丽城市。Harbinis

inthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince，China

⁠.It’sabeautifulcity

withalonghistory

⁠.inthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince，Chinawithalonghistory2.这里冬天的天气非常寒冷，但是夏天并不热。Theweatherhereis

verycoldinwinter

⁠，butit’s

nothotinsummer⁠.verycoldinwinternothotinsummer3.太阳岛是夏天避暑的好地方。松花江是游泳或划船的好地方。TheSunIslandisagreatplace

togetawayfromtheheat

⁠insummer.TheSonghuaRiverisagreatplace

togoswimmingorboating⁠.togetawayfromthegoswimmingorboatingheatto［巧妙衔接］介绍一个地方时，通常从概况(包括位置、面积、人口、历史和天气等)、景点、美食等几个方面进行介绍，通过语意相关联的方式来实现全文连贯。［连句成篇］HaveyoueverbeentoHarbin？Letmeintroduceittoyou.HarbinisinthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince，China.It’sabeautifulcitywithalonghistory.Theweatherhereisverycoldinwinter，butit’snothotinsummer.Therearemanyplacesofinterest.TheSunIslandisagreatplacetogetawayfromtheheatinsummer.

Harbinisagoodplaceforatrip.I’msureyouwillfallinlovewithit.

假如你是李华，上周和父母第一次去西湖度假。请根据表格中的信息，向你在美国的笔友安迪(Andy)介绍一下西湖这个有趣的地方。TimelastweekPlacetheWestLakeActivitiesgosightseeingtakearideontheboatclimbthemountainComments(评价)beautiful，cleanandquiet

要求：1.恰当运用现在完成时；2.80词左右(格式已给出，不计入总词数)。DearAndy，

Haveyoueverbeentoanyinterestingplaces？Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyholiday.IwenttotheWestLakeinZhejiangProvincewithmyparentslastweek.Itisanexcellentplacetotakeaholiday.Wewentsightseeing，tookarideontheboatandclimbedthemountain

Haveyoueverbeentoanyinterestingplaces？Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyholiday.IwenttotheWestLakeinZhejiangProvincewithmyparentslastweek.Itisanexcellentplacetotakeaholiday.Wewentsightseeing，tookarideontheboatandclimbedthemountain.

Haveyoueverbeentoanyinterestingplaces？Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyholiday.IwenttotheWestLakeinWereallyhadagreattimethere.Itisabeautiful，cleanandquietplace.Haveyoueverbeenthere？Ifyouhaven’t，youshouldgo.

⁠Yours，LiHua一、话题分析本单元以“有趣的地方(Funplaces)”为话题,讲述“你曾经去过的地方”,体裁多为记叙文或说明文。二、素材积累(一)“谈论去过的地方”类作文常用词汇:visit//allkindsof//suchas//haveagreattime//gosomewheredifferent//arelaxingandpeacefulplace//anenjoyabletrip//allyearround(二)“谈论去过的地方”类作文常用句型:开头句1.I’vebeentoanamusementparkinLondon.2.ThebestplaceIhaveeverbeentoisSanya.中间句1.IvisitedtheplacesofinterestinBeijingandlearnedaboutthetraditionalculture.2.ThescenerywassointerestingthatIlostmyselfinit.结尾句1.Ifyougothere,I’msureyouwillhaveawonderfultime.2.Whatanexcitingtripwehad!(三)名言警句1.Onseeingmuchmore.行路多者见识多。2.Thejourneynotthearrivalmatters.重要的不是目的地,而是旅途中的风景。(四)句子升格1.Xi’anhasconvenienttransport.(升格为复合句)→OnegreatthingaboutXi’anisthatithasconvenienttransport.2.Pleasevisitit.Iamsureyoucanhaveawonderfultime.(升格为复合句)→Ifyouvisitit,I’msureyoucanhaveawonderfultime.三、写作任务假如你是李华,上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。请你根据下面的表格提示写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。要求不少于80词。LocationinthecenterofShaanxiProvinceSizemorethan10,000squarekilometersHistorymorethan3,000yearsPlacesofinteresttheTerracottaArmy,theBellTower...Foodnoodles,dumplings...【写作方法及写作模板】“一引二介三概”法介绍去过的好地方引入话题IwenttoXi’anwithmyparentslastweek.It’sreallyabeautifulcity.地方介绍Location:Itliesin...Size:Ithasanareaof...History:Xi’anisacitywithahistoryof...Placesofinterest:Therearemany...Food:Haveachancetotrythedelicious...综述Ifyougothere,I’msureyouwill...【高分作文】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwenttoXi’anwithmyparentslastweek.It’sreallyabeautifulcity.ItliesinthecenterofShaanxiProvinceandhasanareaofmorethan10,000squarekilometers.Xi’anisacitywithahistoryofmorethan3,000years,andtherearemanyplacesofinterestinXi’an,suchasthefamousTerracottaArmyandtheamazingBellTower.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfyougotoXi