调查类英语写作广州一模省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖课件

广州一模1/29基础写作必用句型

doasurveyonsthamongsbcarryoutasurveyaboutsthamongsbsurveysbonsth(whether、how+句子)1他们将就人们过去20年生活怎样改变做一个调查..2上周我们在2600个学生中对“whoisyouridol“做了一个调查3最近我在我同学中做了一个相关他们对新英语教科书看法调查4最近我在高三学生中做了一个相关体育锻炼调查10%ofthe…..Irecentlysurveyed

myclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbookRecentlyImadeasurveyofsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining.Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsabout“Whoisyouridol?”They’llcarryoutasurveyonhowpeople’slifehaschangedinthepast20years.2/29Theycarriedoutasurveyabouthowpeople’slifehaschangedinthepast20years.Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsabout“Whoisyouridol?”

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myclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook.RecentlyImadeasurveyofsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining.3/29Irecentlysurveyed

myclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook.Accordingtothesurvey,80%ofthestudentswerequitesatisfiedwithit,________15%dislikeditand5%hadnoopinion.Studentswholikeditsaidthepictureswiththetextswereveryattractive,whichgreatlyarousedtheirinterestsinlearning.Moreover,thebookwasveryinteresting,coveringmanyhottopicsandprovidinglotsorculturalknowledgeoftheworld.__________,studentswhodislikeditcomplainedthereweretoomanynewwordsanddifficultsentences,makingthetextsdifficulttounderstand.Inconclusion,thenewEnglishtextbookhashelpedmoststudentsimprovetheirEnglishenormously.while

However4/291.调查问题及调查对象；2.主要活动；3.感受及原因；4.期望。5/29Recentlywesurveyed368middleschoolstudentsonhowtheyspenttheSpringFestival.30%saidtheyspentmostoftheirtimewiththeirparentsvisitingrelativesandfriendswhile25%wenttravelingwithclassmatesorparents.45%ofallthosesurveyedindicatedthattheyjuststayedathometodohomework.(WhenaskedhowtheyfeltabouttheSpringFestival),mostsaidtheyenjoyeditbecausetheyreceivedlotsofluckymoney,butsomefeltunhappybecausetheamountofhomeworktheyweregivenleftthemhavingnotimeforfunactivities.Manystudentsexpressedthehopethatnextyeartheywillhavelesshomeworkandmorefreetime.6/29你参加学校研究学习小组并对高三学生体育运动情况进行研究。最近你对高三学生体育活动现实状况进行了调查。

【写作内容】请依据以下图例，用英语写一篇汇报，并陈说你观点。7/29【写作辅导】1.写作有可能用到主要短语和单词：设施facility，提供资金援助offersomefinancialaid，体育活动physicalactivities，体育训练physicaltraining，健康情况差beinpoorhealth。2.本文因为是对高三学生体育活动现实状况进行了调查，属于普遍性问题，故应该使用普通现在时作为主流时态。8/29RecentlyImadeasurveyamongsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining.Only35%ofthesurveyedstudentsdosports.Thereasonsareasfollows,halfofthestudentshavingtoomuchhomeworkandnotenoughtimetodoexercise,30%ofthemcomplainingaboutnoplaceswheretheycanrelaxthemselvesandnotenoughtrainingfacilities,10%livingtoofarawayfromtheplacesandsomeevennotknowinghowtotakeexercise.Becauseofthelackofphysicalactivities,manystudentsareinpoorhealth,soweshouldrealizetheimportanceoftakingexercise,andmeasuresshouldbetakentoimprovethepresentsituation.Itwouldbegreatlyappreciatedthatourgovernmentandsocialorganizationsaswellcouldoffersomefinancialaid.9/29基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

上周，我们以“谁是你偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。

以下是调查数据：偶

像(idol)女

生男

生伟

人18%18%父

母25%11%影视明星50%14%体育明星6%48%（没有偶像）1%9%

[写作内容]

依据以上数据，写一篇短文，包含以下内容：

1．调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；

2．男女生在以明星为偶像方面差异；

3．“父母”在男女生偶像中排序差异；4．男女生在以伟人为偶像方面异同；

5．你偶像及理由。10/29Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsabout“Whoisyouridol?”ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,while48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.Asthedatashows,“parents”ranksthesecondforthegirls,butthefourthfortheboys.However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.Asforme,ThomasEdisonismyidol,becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.11/29你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样礼品给同学或朋友”话题展开了讨论，下面是讨论统计：

60%同学到商店买礼品好商店礼品精巧、美观，适合赠予40%同学自己制作礼品好自己制作礼品能够展现个人才能，培养动手能力，增强节约意识你看法?12/29你看法AsfarasIamconcerned,itisbetterforustomakepresentsbyourselvesbecauseThereceivercansenseourloveandbestwishestothemingiftsmadebyus95713/29LastFriday,ourclassmadeadiscussionaboutwhatshouldbepresentsforfriendsorclassmates.Theresultsareasfollows:60%peoplethoughtitgoodtobuypresentsinshopswherethegiftsareelegantandbeautiful,theyarefitforbeingprizes.Therestsupportedthattheycouldmakeitthemselves,andtheyheldtheideathatnotonlycanitshowoneself’stalent,buthelptostrengthentheawareofsavingaswell.AsfarasI’mconcerned,makingpresentsbyyourselfisaspecialwaytoshowyourwishestoyourfriends,whichtheycouldfeelthesincerelylovefromyou14/29Finderrorsinthefollowingsentences1Mostofthestudentsconsideredthatweshouldpresentagoodsasagift2OurclasshadadiscussionaboutpresentsforclassmatesandfriendsonlastFriday.3Itisagoodchoicetogivepresentsbuyingfromshop.4Ifwithouttime,wehavenochoicebuttobuythegiftfromstores.Theyhadadebateonwhethertheyshouldstopvehiclesonthehighwaytorescuethedogs15/29OurclasshadaheateddiscussionlastFridayonwhatgiftsweshouldgivetoourclassmatesandfriends.Sixtypercentofourclassmatessaidthattheywouldbuygiftsfromashopbecausetheythinksuchgiftsaredelicateandpretty,thusproperforgiving.However,theothersprefertomakethegiftsbythemselves.Ontheonehand,thiscanshowtheirpersonaloutstandingskillsandhelpthemdeveloptheirabilitiestodothingsthemselvesandontheotherhand,theycanusematerialsfromhometomakegifts,whichcanstrengthentheirawarenessofimportanceofsaving.

Inmyopinion,givinggiftsmadebyourselvesisabetterwaytoexpressourfeelings.

consider/believe16/29Dearmum, I’vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernthatIambeingdistractedfrommystudiesbecauseofmymanyafter-schoolactivitiesandtheconsequencesofthisformyfuture. (或I’vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernaboutmyparticipationinsomanyafter-schoolactivities,theeffectofthisonmystudyperformanceanditsconsequencesformyfuture) Iappreciatewhatyousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry.I’malsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities. It’struethatIhavebeenspendingalotoftimewiththesegroupsbutpleasedon’tworry.Ifindthatthesegroupshelpmetorelax,developmythinkingandactuallyimprovemyschoolperformance,althoughmyteacherisrightthatIdosometimesfeeltiredinclass.[起源:Z.xx.k.Com] Forthisreason,andtoalsorelieveyouofyourworry,Ihavedecidedtolimitmyparticipationtoonlytwogroupsthisterm.ThiswayIcanstillenjoytheoutsideactivitieswithoutaffectingeitheryouormystudyperformance.17/29第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面书信，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右英语短文。DearDavid, Iamwritingyouthisemailbecauseyou'resobusyeverydaywithyourstudiesandafter-schoolactivitiesthatweseldomhavechancestotalkface-to-face.ThereissomethingthatIamveryworriedabout. Youhavealwaysbeenanactiveboy,willingtohelpothersandalwayslookingforanopportunitytotrysomethingneworlearnsomethingdifferent.IthinkthesearewonderfulqualitiesbutIamconcernedthattheymaybeaffectingyourstudies.Inthepastthreemonthsaloneyouhavejoinedatleastfourdifferentstudentclubs.Iseetheseactivitiestakingupmoreandmoreofyourtime.You'realwaysdiscussingsomethingwithyourclassmatesorsurfingonline.You'realsodevotinglesstimetohomeworkandevenyourteacherssayyouarelookingverysleepyinclass. Iknowthatthesekindsofactivitiesarefunandcanhelpyourdevelopment,butIthinktheyhavestartedtodamageyourperformanceatschool.Pleaserememberthemostimportantthingatthisstageofyourlifeisyourstudies.Rightnowyoushoulddoyourbestinyourexaminationsasitwillgiveyoumorechoicesisyourfuture.IbegyoutofocusonyourmaingoalandnottothrowawayallyouryearsofhardworkYourlovingmother【写作内容】1.以约30词概括书信主要内容。2.以约120词谈谈你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动看法，内容包含：（1）你读信后感受；（2）你是否赞成你妈妈观点，并陈说理由；（3）你对你妈妈承诺。18/29认真审题，审体裁，抓关键点Dearmum,

I’vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernthatIambeingdistractedfrommystudiesbecauseofmymanyafter-schoolactivitiesandremindsmeoftheconsequencesformyfuture.letter19/29Summary2Dearmum,

I’vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernaboutmyover-participationinafter-schoolactivitieswhichhasabadeffectonmystudyperformanceandremindingmeofitsconsequencesformyfuture

20/29Dearmum,Iamsorrytokeepyouconcernedaboutmystudyperformanceandfutureduetomyover-participationafter-schoolactivities.21/29你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动看法你

1读信后感受；Thankyouforremindingmeoftheimportanceofmystudy.Readingyourletter,regretsandappreciationarefilledwithmyheartandsoul.Iappreciatewhatyousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry.I’malsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities.22/29 It’struethatIhavebeenspendingalotoftimewiththesegroupsbutpleasedon’tworry.Ifindthatthesegroupshelpmetorelax,developmythinkingandactuallyimprovemyschoolperformance,althoughmyteacherisrightthatIdosometimesfeeltiredinclass.Ontheotherhand,asaSenior3student,Ishouldbeambitiousenoughtoattachgreatimportancetomylessons.Afterall,timeandtidewaitfornoman.SoIwilltrymybesttobalanceactivitiesandstudy,tryingtomakeactivitieshelprefreshmyselftostudymoreefficiently.

（2）对于学校社团或俱乐部活动，你是否赞成你妈妈观点，并陈说理由；

23/29你对你妈妈承诺NowIhavemadeupmymindtolimitmyparticipationtoonlytwogroupsthistermandhopetorelieveyouofyourworry.ThereforeIwillsparenoeffortstobreakawayfromthebusysocialactivities,instead,Iwillattachenoughimportancetomystudyanddevotemyselftomylessonstostruggleforabrightfuture.24/29DearPatti, I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonmystudies.Asyouknow,footballisaverypopularsportintheworldandIamattractedtoitandIhavefallenindeeplovewithit,whichmakesmefeelsocrazy.Ihavebeenspendinglotsoftimedoingmanythingsrelatedtoit,likewatchingfootballmatches,readingnewspapersandmagazines,andsearchingtheWebformoreinformationaboutfootball.Asaresult,ithascertainlydisturbedmynormalstudy.ThoughIknowtobeafootballfanismyhobbyandmymajorobjectiveistolearn.Iamstillaseniortwomiddleschoolstudent,andI’llhavemyownbusinessevenwhenIgrowup,soIamnotlikelytodoajobinthefieldoffootball.ButnowIcan’tstopmyselffromgettinginvolvedfurtherwithfootball.SoIfeelverydepressedandwanttoknowhowtodealwiththecontradiction(矛盾)betweenmystudiesandhobbies.Yourssincerely,LiMing25/29DearLiMing,

Thankyouforyourletter.Fromyourletter.

I’veknownsomethingaboutyoursituation.Youareverydepressedbecauseofthecontradictionthatyoucan’ttearyourselfawayfromfootball,whichhasbeendisturbingyousomuchthatyoucan’tconcentrateonyoulessons. Hobbiesareveryimportanttoaperson,withoutwhichlifewon’tbeascolorfulasitshouldbe.Theycancheeryouupandimproveyourcomprehensiveabilities,buttheyalsorequiretimeanddevotion.Youarestillastudent,whosemaintaskshouldbegainingknowledge,soyoumustknowwhichismoreimportantthingtodoindifferentlifeperiods.Otherwise,youwouldregrethavingbeent