牛津译林版（2019）选择性必修 第三册Unit 2 Out of this world单元写作深度指导素材

选择性必修第三册Unit2单元写作指导与演练Writeastoryofaliens单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一个外星人的故事，讲述偶遇外星人的经历属于想象类作文,主要记述遇到外星人的背景,整个事件的过程并简单发表一下对该事件的感想。体裁以记叙文为主。常用表达(1)事件及过程①alienn.外星人②creaturen.生物③planetn.行星,地球④mysteriousadj.神秘的⑤intelligentadj.聪明的,智商高的⑥existvi.存在⑦witnessv.&n.目击,见证;目击者⑧landvi.&vt.(使)着陆⑨catchsightof看见(2)感受①unforgettableadj.令人难忘的②fantasticadj.奇妙的,极好的该篇书面表达要求考生以“偶遇外星人”为主题写一遍记叙文，重点写偶遇外星人的精彩，难忘的时刻。文章属于记叙文，主要使用第一人称，一般过去时。考生应当仔细阅读题干所列要点，确保写作时不遗漏；然后在此基础上合理安排好文章结构。本文可分为三段写作。首段简述事件，引入文章主题；第二段详细记述过程（乘坐飞碟；遨游太空；欣赏夜景）；第三段表达感受。在遣词造句上，应当注意使用较复杂的句型和高级词汇，并注意合理使用连接成分，增强文章的逻辑性。段落内容句子设计第一段简述事件Iwasdoingsth.whenIcaughtsightof…OutoftheUFOcame…第二段详细记述过程（乘坐飞碟；遨游太空；欣赏夜景Frightenedby…,I…Hardlyhad…seen…when…UFOItflewsofastthat…Sofascinatedwas…by…第三段表达感受。Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!…neverforgetthisfantasticexperience.开始部分①IwashavingsupperwhenIcaughtsightofashiningUFOflyinginthesky.我正在吃晚饭,突然看见一个发光的不明飞行物在天空中飞行。②OutoftheUFOcameastrangecreaturewithabigheadandeyes.从不明飞行物里出来一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛的奇怪生物。主体部分①Frightenedbythestrangecreature,IranawayasfastasIcould.我被那个奇怪的生物吓坏了,尽可能快地跑开了。②Hardlyhadheseenmewhenhesmiledandwalkedtowardme.他一看见我就微笑着向我走来。③ItflewsofastthatIwasalmostscaredtodeath.它飞得那么快,差点把我吓死了。④SofascinatedwasIbythebeautifulsceneofspacethatIforgottoreturntotheearth.我被太空美丽的景色迷住了,以至于我忘记了回到地球。结尾部分①Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊!②I’llneverforgetthisfantasticexperience.我永远不会忘记这次奇妙的经历。假定你是李华,请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记,记述你遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下:1.周四晚上遇到一个外星人(个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤);2.乘坐UFO,遨游太空,欣赏夜景;3.你的感受。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。审题1.文体：记叙文。2.时态：一般现在时3.人称：第一人称为主谋篇第一段：简述事件，引入文章主题；第二段：详细记述过程（乘坐飞碟；遨游太空；欣赏夜景）；第三段：表达感受。遣词造句【核心词汇】1．catchsightof看见2．UFO不明飞行物3．landontheground登上陆地4．alien不明飞行物5．wave挥手【连词成句】1.我正在做作业的时候,突然我看到一个闪闪发光的UFO在天空中越来越近,最终降落在地面上。(bedoing...when...)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.然后一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛,棕色皮肤的很矮的外星人从里面出来了。(with)____________________________________________________________________________________________3.(一句多译)他一看见我,就向我挥手,邀请我乘UFO去旅行。(1)______________________________________________________________________________________.(assoonas/themoment)

(2)________________________________________________________________________________(on/upondoingsth.)

4.它飞得如此快,以至于我们很快就进入了太空。(so...that...倒装句)____________________________________________________________________________________________5.从UFO向外看,我看到了我们生活的美丽的蓝色地球和其他闪亮的星星在黑暗的空间里转动。(分词作状语;定语从句)____________________________________________________________________________________________6.大概过了一个小时,我请求外星人把我送到地球上去。(what)____________________________________________________________________________________________7.这是一次多么精彩和难忘的经历啊!(感叹句)____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskycomingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.

2.Thenaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskincameoutofit.

3.(1)Assoonas/Themomenthesawme,hewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.(assoonas/themoment)

(2)On/Uponseeingme,hewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.(on/upondoingsth.)

4.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.

5.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.

6.Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.

7.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!

【句式升级】1.用倒装句改写句2____________________________________________________________________________________________2.用hardly...when...改写句3__________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.

2.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.

组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。OnThursdayevening,IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskycomingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.Whatafantasticscene!Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!A假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记，记述你在太空探索时候遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下：1.周四晚上遇到一个外星人（个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤）；2.乘坐UFO，遨游太空，欣赏夜景；3.你的感受。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】

OnThursdayevening,IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskycomingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.Whatafantasticscene!Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生用英语一篇周记，记录在太空探索时候遇到外星人的一次经历。【详解】1.词汇积累最后：eventually→finally美丽的：beautiful→pretty快地：fast→swiftly难忘的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.拓展句：Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalien,whohadbigheadandeyesandbrownskin.【点睛】【高分句型1】HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，部分倒装句。）【高分句型2】LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.（运用了“介词on+which”引导限定性定语从句）B（2024山东青岛·高二上学期期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mrs.White,theEnglishteacher,gavetheclassawritingtask.“Writeaboutyoursummervacation,”shesaid.“Be.ascreativeasyoucan.Butmakesureyouuseproperspellingandgrammar.”ThatnightSamstaredatablanksheetofpaperathisdesk.Whatcouldhewriteabouthisboringsummervacation?He’dactuallybeenhappytogetbacktoschool.Sohewrotewhathewanted.Notanessay(短文)butashortstory,sciencefiction.Itwasaboutadistantplanetthatdidn’thavesummer-itwasspringallthetime.Anditdidn’thavevacationseither.Thealiens(外星人)justworked24hoursaday!Samhandedinthestorysoon.However,laterthatnighthelayawakeuntil3A．m.,thinking.“HowwillMrs.Whitelikemywriting?”Englishwashisfavorite.MaybehewouldaskMrs.Whiteforachancetowriteanotheroneshewanted.Thenextmorning,Samgottoschool,onlytoknowMrs.Whitehadalreadyreadandgradedtheessays.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为80左右；2.续写部分的开头已为你写好。Worriedandnervous,hesawMrs.WhitecameinandtheEnglishclassbegan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】

Worriedandnervous,hesawMrs.WhitecameinandtheEnglishclassbegan.SamthoughthemightgetanF.However,tohissurprise,Mrs.Whitereadoutloudhisstorytotheclass,andpraisedhimforhiscreativityandoriginality.Shesaidthatshewasimpressedbyhowhehadcombinedsciencefictionwiththetopicofsummervacation.Samfeltlikehewasdreaming.Heneverexpectedhisstorytobesowell-received.Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Sam的暑假返校后，老师让他们写一篇和暑假相关的文章。Sam没有选择写真实的暑假经历，反而创作了一篇科幻小说。在上交了作业后，Sam有点后悔，认为自己不该写那样的话题。【详解】1.段落续写：①由段首句内容“他又担心又紧张，看到Mrs.White进来了，英语课开始了。”可知，本段可描写Sam认为自己的等级会很低，但结果却出乎他的意料，老师表扬了他的创新。2.续写线索：老师已经评分——Sam认为作文可能等级很低——老师当众读Sam的文章——表扬Sam的创新——Sam的感受3.词汇激活行为类①认为：think/believe②.期待：expect/anticipate③.结合：combine/connect情绪类①.让某人吃惊的是：toone’ssurprise/toone’sastonishment②.表扬：praise/commend【点睛】[高分句型1].Shesaidthatshewasimpressedbyhowhehadcombinedsciencefictionwiththetopicofsummervacation.（运用了that和how引导宾语从句）[高分句型2].Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.（运用了who引导非限制性定语从句）C（2024四川泸州高二上学期期末）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。AWritingTaskThesummervacationwasover,soTimandhisclassmatescamebacktoschoolhappily.Onthefirstdayofschool,MrsGreen,Tim’sEnglishteacher,gavetheclassawritingtask.“Boysandgirls,today’shomeworkistowritesomethinginsomewaythatisrelatedtoyoursummervacation,”shesaid.“Beascreativeasyoucan.But”theteacheradded,“makesureyouuseproperspellingandgrammar.”Thatnight,Timsatathisdeskanddecidedtogoaboutthiswritinghomework.Hestaredattheblanksheetpaperforquiteafewminutes,thinkingwhattowriteabout.Totellthetruth,thistime,hedidn’twanttowriteabouthissummervacationasusual.Whatcouldhewriteabout,exceptadog,awaterpark,avisittohisgrandmawithhisfather,twoweeksofcamp,and…?Boring…He’dactuallybeenhappytogetbacktoschool.Buthemadeuphismindtowritewhathereallywanted.Itwasnotanessay(短文)atallbutashortstory,asciencefiction(科幻小说).Itwasaboutadistantplanetthatdidn’thavesummer—itwasspringallthetime.Anditdidn’thavevacationeither.Thealiens(外星人)ontheplanetworked24hoursaday.Theywishedtheyhadvacationsoneday.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1Thenextmorninghehandedinthestory,butlaterthatnighthelayawakeuntilIam,thinking,“WhydidIwritesuchastory?”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2Butwhenhegottoclassthefollowingday,whattheteachersaidwasagreatsurprisetohim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】

Thenextmorninghehandedinthestory,butlaterthatnighthelayawakeuntilIam,thinking,“WhydidIwritesuchastory?”Heworriedthattheteachermightnotlikeitandgivehimalowscore.Hecouldn’thelpbutregretnotwritingaboutsomethingreal.Butheremindedhimselfthathehadfollowedhisheartandhadfunwritingthestory.Thealienshehadimaginedmightbeunrealistic,butthelessontheytaughthimwasnot.Herealizedthattherearealwayspeoplewhoworkhardandhopetohaveabetterlife,justlikethealienshecreated.Hefeltasenseofreliefthathehadwrittendownhisthoughts,anddecidedtokeepwritingstoriesinhisownway.Butwhenhegottoclassthefollowingday,whattheteachersaidwasagreatsurprisetohim.MrsGreenreadoutloudhisstorytotheclass,andpraisedhimforhiscreativityandoriginality.Shesaidthatshewasimpressedbyhowhehadcombinedsciencefictionwiththetopicofsummervacation.Timfeltlikehewasdreaming.Heneverexpectedhisstorytobesowell-received.Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tim的暑假返校后，老师让他们写一篇和暑假相关的文章。Tim没有选择写真实的暑假经历，反而创作了一篇科幻小说。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，他把故事交了上来，但那天晚上他躺在床上一直睡不着，一直想：“我为什么要写这样一个故事?””可知，第一段可描写Tim辗转反侧，担心老师不会喜欢自己的文章。②由第二段首句内容“但是当他第二天去上课时，老师说的话让他大吃一惊。”可知，第二段可描写老师对他的文章大加赞许。2.续写线索：Tim返校后，老师布置了写作任务——Tim不想写暑假里的经历——Tim决定写出自己想要写的东西——Tim有点担心老师不喜欢他的文章——老师非常喜欢Tim的文章3.词汇激活行为类①忍不住：can’thelpbutdo/can’thelpdoing②决定：decide/determine/makeupone’smind③称赞：praise/applaud情绪类①担心的：worried/concerned②幸福：happiness/pleasure/felicity【点睛】【高分句型1】Heworriedthattheteachermightnotlikeitandgivehimalowscore.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）D根据以下内容，通过合理的想象，以“Meetinganalien”为题写一篇150词左右的英语短文，想象一下外星人带你参观的外星科技生活。写作要点如下：1.遇见外星人并被带到外星球；2.参观了他们的智能化房子；3.房子是如何为人服务的；4.外星人邀请你留下来，但你还是选择回到了地球与家人和朋友团聚。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________