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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。EveryoneintheseasidetownknowsthatFlisshasaspecialbondwithherdogMolly.Theywork
together,livetogether,andplaytogether.TheLabrador(拉布拉多猎犬)isactuallyatFliss’sideallthe
time.Ifapersonspentthismuchtimewithafriend,theywouldprobablyhavefallenoutbynow,butthe
bondbetweenMollyandherownerjustgetsstrongerovertime.Flissgrewupinthecity.In2017,shemovedtotheseasidewheresheopenedabathandskincare
shop.Uponarrival,shecouldn’tbelievehowmuchlitterwasleft“senselessly”onthebeach.Infact,she
wasshockedbythe“unavoidable”amountoflittershefoundwhiletakingMollyforwalks.Beinga
personwhocaresalotabouthersurroundings,Flissdecidedthatshehadtodosomethingaboutitbeforethetidecarriedthelitterintothesea,threateningmarinelife.Oneday,whilecollectinglitteronthebeach,FlisssawMollyrunningtowardsherwithanempty
waterbottleinhermouth.AsMollydrewnear,shedroppedthebottleandsetouttofindotherwaste.ThisgaveFlissanidea:whatifshecouldtrainMollytoFindallthoseplasticbottlesandbags,andmakegooduseofthem?ThetrainingstartedandFlisswassurprisedathowfastMollylearned.Beforelong,theclevergirl
wouldventure(冒险)totheseasideonherownandcomehomewithher“prize”.Shehadsoonfilled
Fliss’housewithpiecesofrubbishfromthelocalbeach.Atonepoint,Fliss’garagewas60%filledwith
beachlitterwaitingtobedistributedtolocalartistsforuseintheirartwork.WhenFlissheardpawsonthedoortheotherday,shewenttogreethergoodgirlasusual.Toher
surprise,shesawMollycarryingasmallplasticpurseinhermouth.Flissopenedthepurseandgasped(喘气).Insidewasapassport,severalcreditcards,andalargesumofmoney.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。FlissimmediatelytookthepursetothelocalpolicestationwithMolly.Whenthejournalistcame,theytwowereonthebeach.题目解读:本篇读后续写紧扣人教版(2019)选择性必修三Unit3EnvironmentalProtection这一单元主题。学生存在的主要问题是:①不能准确把握文章主题,容易偏向拾金不昧、人狗有情等主题;②首段容易忽略狗狗捡到钱包这一情节的意义,把重点放在归还钱包-失主感激这一情节;学生不能很好地把握第二段首句出现的journalist的意义,误以为是“旅行者”,导致无法回扣原文情节。与课标关系以及与高考关系:①本文是紧扣人教版教材选择性必修三Unit3课文的主题;②突出核心素养中立德树人,树立环保意识的理念。话题:环保续写情节发展:第一段:Next,Flissshouldexplainthereasonforcomingtothepolicestation,especiallymentioningthedetailofMollyfindingthiswallet.Thenhandoverthewallettothepoliceandhopetofindtheownerofthewalletthroughthem.Thepolicewillalsobedeeplymovedbytheiractions.Afterreturninghome,asarewardforMolly,Flissspeciallymadesteak.Accordingtothefirstsentenceofthesecondparagraph,"Whenthejournalisticcamera",itisnecessarytowriteattheendofthefirstparagraphthatthejournalistwillcometointerviewthisdetailinordertomakethecontextcoherentandthetransitionnatural.第二段:Next,itshouldgolikethatthereportersawMollyanditsownerpickingupgarbage,especiallytheprocessofMollypickingupgarbage.ThenthereporterwillinterviewFlisstolearnmoreaboutthestorybehindthem.Flissmayalsousethecameratocallonmorepeopletocarefortheenvironment.Andthisjournalistwillalsohavesomeinsights:Ifadogcouldcarefortheenvironment,whynotpeople?Finally,thereporterdecidedtomakepublicFlissandMolly'scontributiontothelocalenvironment.Ofcourse,withMolly'sfame,itwilldefinitelyattractalargenumberoftouriststocomeandplay,whilealsojoiningthebigfamilyofcaringfortheenvironment.参考范文:FlissimmediatelytookthepursetothelocalpolicestationwithMolly.IexplainedhowMollyhadfoundthepurseonthebeachandthepoliceofficersw”".amazedbyMolly'sdiscoveryandpraisedherforhercleverness.Shortlyafterwardstheofficersmanagedtotrackdowntheownerofthelostitems,whowasajournalistonvacationintheseasidetownandhadaccidentallydroppedthepurse.Overwhelmedwithgratitudewhenthepolicereturnedthelostitems,theownerkeptthankingFlissandMollyfortheirhonestyandkindness.Moreover,heextendedcordialrequirementtointerviewFliss.Withouthesitation,Flissmadeanappointmentwithhim.Whenthejournalistcame,theytwowereonthebeach.ThejournalistwastakenabackbythesightofMollydiligentlyhelpingFlissincleaninguplitteralongthecoastline,thesunsettingbehindthemcastingagoldenglow.Heapproached,intriguedbythetaleofMolly'sfind.Thecameraclicked,capturingthesceneofhopefulfacesandadogwhohadbecomeasymbolofenvironmentalchange.Flisssmiled,knowingthattheirjourneywasfarfromover,buttheimpacttheyhadmadewouldresonatefarandwide.高分句型积累:1.弗丽丝对曾经原始海滩上随意散布的大量垃圾感到吃惊。Flisswastakenabackbythesheermagnitudeoflitterstrewnsenselesslyacross.theoncepristinebeach.2.莫莉对废弃物的勤奋搜索展示了她敏锐的智慧和对事业的坚定奉献。Molly'sdiligentsearchforwastematerialsshowcasedherkeenintelligenceandunwaveringdedicationtotheircause.3.色彩丰富的塑料瓶和袋子点缀着莫莉的收藏品,这是对人类疏忽对环境影响的深刻提醒。ThecolorfularrayofplasticbottlesandbagsadornedMolly'sprizecollection,apoignantreminderoftheimpactofhumannegligenceontheenvironment.弗丽丝见证莫莉由忠诚伙伴向他们社区希望的主灯变化时,心中充满了自豪。Fliss'sheartswelledwithprideasshewitnessedMolly'stransformationfromaloyalcompaniontoabeaconofhopefortheircommunity.5.阳光普照的海滩见证了弗丽丝和莫莉不懈的努力,这是他们对保护自然之美的坚定承诺的证明。Thesun-kissedshorelineborewitnesstoFlissandMolly'stirelessefforts,atestamenttotheirunwaveringcommitmenttopreservingthebeautyofthenaturalworld.WitheachpieceoflitterretrievedbyMolly'spaws,asymphonyofnature'sgratitudeandrenewalplayed.随着每一片垃圾被莫莉的爪子捡起,一曲大自然的感激与重生之歌奏响。7.Inthedanceofwavesandwind,FlissandMollyfoundharmony,aduetdedicatedtothemelodyofenvironmentalst
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