读后续写+为埃及之旅点滴地攒钱+讲义 高三英语二轮复习

3月15日云南省高三统测读后续写ItwasJuly2019andmy

mum

Rebeccawastakingmeona120km

walkingholiday

fromPortugaltoSpainasaspecialtreatformy10thbirthday.Oneday,whilewalkingalongthecoastalpathstaringoutattheAtlanticocean,IchattedawaytoMum.“WhenLexiturns10,areyougoingtotakeheronatriplikethis?”Iasked,referringtomy

seven-year-oldsister.MumsaidLexihadalreadyaskedtogotoSvalbardinthenorthofNorwaybecauseshewascrazyaboutpolarbears.AlthoughIwasstillonmyfirstspecialtrip,I’dbeenlearningabout

ancientcivilizations

atschoolandknewI’dlovetoseesome

relicsintheflesh.SoIcontinuedsaying,“Whydon’tIgotoEgyptwhileyou’reinSvalbardwithLexi?”,addingthatmy

dad,Olaf,couldtakemethere.“Great,butI’mnotpayingforit.”Mumreplied,chuckling.“That’sfine.I’llpay,”Isaid,“I’llsaveupmy

pocketmoney

andgeta

job.”Sothat’sexactlywhatIdid.ThoughIwastooyoungtodoanyotherpaidwork,Ihadmyownsolution.Istartedsavingmy$10-a-weekpocketmoney.Also,Iwashedmyparents’carormowedthelawnforextracash.In2020,wemovedtoPerth.Oneday,Isawapamphletintheletterboxadvertisingajob

deliveringcatalogues.WhenItoldMumIwantedtodoit,shetriedtoputmeofftheidea,remindingmethattheworkwastiringandtime-consuming.Butwhenseeingthedeterminationinmyeyes,sheagreedtocallthem.Thankfully,myyoungagedidn’tbotherthem–Igotthejob.OnaMonday,amountainofcataloguesweredroppedoffatourhouse,whichshockedmealot.Itoldmyselftocalmdownanddedicatedtowork.Ittookmeninehourstosortthroughthem.Atfirst,Iusedmy

bike

andcarriedthecataloguesinmybackpacktodeliverthemto430housesinmyarea.

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Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn’tveryefficient.

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Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive$6,500,andDadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________故事中文梗概2019年7月，为庆祝我的十岁生日，我的妈妈Rebecca策划了一场特别的旅行：我们从葡萄牙出发，步行至西班牙，全程长达120公里。沿着美丽的海岸线漫步时，我好奇地询问妈妈是否也会为我的妹妹Lexi安排一次类似的旅行。妈妈告诉我，她计划带着Lexi前往挪威的斯瓦尔巴德岛，去探寻北极熊。我的心中充满了对古代文明的热情，渴望亲眼见识那些悠久历史的见证者。因此，我提出了一个想法：当妈妈陪着Lexi去追寻北极熊的足迹时，我可以和爸爸Olaf一同踏上前往埃及的旅程。妈妈笑着同意了我的计划，但明确表示不会负担这趟旅程的费用。我毫不犹豫地接受了这个挑战，决定通过攒零花钱和做零工来筹集旅费。2020年，一个偶然的机会让我看到了一份投递广告目录的工作机会。尽管我年纪尚小，但我的决心和勇气让我获得了这份工作。每周一，我家门前都会堆满了新的目录，我需要花费9个小时去仔细整理它们。然后，我会骑着自行车，背上装满目录的背包，开始我的递送之旅，为我所在区域的430户家庭送去最新的信息。通过这份工作，我不仅学到了责任感和坚持，也为我的埃及之旅一点一滴地积攒着资金……

主要人物：作者“我”次要人物：“我”的妈妈、爸爸和妹妹续写思路建议第一段，着重写发现工作方式低效（itwasn'tveryefficient）后的改进方法。改进方法可以是“我”自己想出来的，也可以是别人（比如家人）建议的。

第二段，重点写攒够旅费之后到埃及旅行的感受。感受应该结合作者喜欢古代文明（ancientcivilizations）这一点来谈。结局部分，可以适当深化主题以及表示感谢（比如：感谢自己的付出、家人的支持。）

写作示范Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.

Itwasatthispointthatmy

dad

offeredsomeadviceonimprovingmymethodofwork.Hesuggestedorganizingmy

deliveries

intosections,whichcouldhelpstreamlinetheprocess.Takinghisadvicetoheart,Ibegangroupingmydeliveries,planningmy

bike

routeseveryweekendwithstrategicprecisiontocoverthemosthousesintheleastamountoftime.Itwasn'tlongbeforemyefficiencyimproved.EverycoinIearnedbroughtmeastepclosertothePyramidsandmummiesthatfascinatedmesomuch.(85words)

Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive$6,500,andDadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.

WeexploredthePyramids,andIwasfinallyabletoseetheancient

relicsintheflesh

thatIhadonlypreviouslyknownfrombooksandschoolprojects.Standingbeforethegrandmonuments,Ifeltaprofoundconnectiontohistoryand

ancientcivilization.Myjourneyhadtaughtmethevalueofperseverance.Moreover,Ifeltastrongsenseofgratitudetowardsmydadforhisadvicethathelpedoptimizemyeffortstowardsreachingthisgoal,andtowardsmy

mom

forprovidingmewiththeopportunitytogrowandchallengemyself.

(90words)

写作细节分析Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.

Itwasatthispointthatmy

dad

offeredsomeadviceonimprovingmymethodofwork.（爸爸虽然是次要人物，但也可以合理利用）Hesuggestedorganizingmy

deliveries

intosections,whichcouldhelpstreamlinetheprocess.（合理叙事：改进的方式是分区域规划送货路线）Takinghisadvicetoheart,Ibegangroupingmydeliveries,planningmy

bike

routeseveryweekendwithstrategicprecisiontocoverthemosthousesintheleastamountoftime.Itwasn'tlongbeforemyefficiencyimproved.EverycoinIearnedbroughtmeastepclosertothepyramidsandmummiesthatfascinatedmesomuch.（合理叙事：逐渐攒够了旅费和下文第一句无缝连接）(85words)

Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive$6,500,andDadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.

Weexploredthepyramids,andIwasfinallyabletoseetheancient

relicsintheflesh

thatIhadonlypreviouslyknownfrombooksandschoolprojects.（与原文的relicsintheflesh呼应，这是作者一直梦想看到的东西）Standingbeforethegrandmonuments,Ifeltaprofoundconnectiontohistoryand

ancientcivilization.（和原文重要概念互动）Myjourneyhadtaughtmethevalueofperseverance.（适当提炼主题和意义）Moreover,Ifeltastrongsenseofgratitudetowardsmydadforhisadvicethathelpedoptimizemyeffortstowardsreachingthisgoal,andtowardsmy

mom

forprovidingmewi