2024届新高考英语热点冲刺复习读后续写2023新高考1卷

2024届新高考英语热点冲刺复习读后续写2023新高考1卷CONTENTS目录01阅读分析02写作技巧03写作流程PARTONE阅读分析故事框架整理故事大纲BackgroundRisingAction+ClimaxFallingActionResolution人物人设问题：矛盾/冲突如何解决故事结局文章结尾圈画过程：1、关键信息2、态度情感3、关键情节原文回顾WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.英语非母语，写作于我困难且痛苦，我不愿参加写作比赛原文回顾So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.老师喜欢我的写作，鼓励我，我同意试试原文回顾IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwanttoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.创作时的写作过程原文回顾WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.被要求重写，看淡输赢，享受过程PARTTWO写作流程讲解情节设计【文末：】WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.【Para1:】Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.【Para2:】Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.thenewsteacher’sofficetheawardpresentationnewsIwon&haveanawardpresentationduringtheawardpresentationmyfeeling,myexpressionandtheaudienceteachercongratulationIgratitudekeepwritingfamouswriter情节设计P1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

消息：我赢了P2:Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

我出席颁奖典礼老师的反应，表达对我的祝贺我的反应：意料之外，复杂情绪我领奖时的内心活动且有颁奖典礼观众的反应表示感谢文章的结尾：主旨升华故事的结局：我坚持写作—成名补充原因！！！我的反应完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充结合原文升级句式1.消息：我赢了，且有颁奖典礼基础版：Iwonthefirstprizeandthereisanawardpresentation.句子升级：itsaidIwonthefirstprize，Muchtomyamazement,(万能开头）withanawardpresentationtoattendinthreedays.(介词短语表伴随）完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充2.我的反应：震惊、惊喜、激动、想哭。基础版：Ihaveagreatsenseofexcitement.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Ihaveagreatsenseofexcitement，becauseIfoundmyeffortspaidoff.(补充原因）Enormousexcitementseizeme,(无灵主语表情绪）关键点：情绪的出现：不单一、不凭空完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充3.我出席颁奖典礼。基础版：Afterafewdays,Iattendedtheawardceremony.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Then,itwasnotlongbeforeIattendedtheawardceremonywithotherparticipants.前后两个要点的场景切换Whenthedayarrived,Ifoundmyselfstandingamongagroupoftalentedwriters.完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充4.观众的反应。基础版：Theaudienceallapplaudedwildly.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Aseachwinnersteppedontothestage,applausesandcheersfilledintheair.OutbrokethunderousapplausefromthecrowdasIreceivedtheprizefromthehost.完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充5.我的内心活动。基础版：Iamproudandsatisfied.WhatIwantedtodoisjusttoexpressmysinceregratitudetohim,mysocialstudiesteacher.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Standingonthestage,IfeltagreatsenseofprideandaccomplishmentandIknewIowemysuccesstohim,mysocialstudiesteacher.完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充5.我的内心活动。基础版：Iamproudandsatisfied.WhatIwantedtodoisjusttoexpressmysinceregratitudetohim,mysocialstudiesteacher.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Standingonthestage,IfeltagreatsenseofprideandaccomplishmentandIknewIowemysuccesstohim,mysocialstudiesteacher.完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充6.见到老师后我和老师的互动。基础版：Whenhesawme,hesaid,“Iknowyoucandoit.Iamproudofyou!”句子升级：结合原文升级句式Hewastherewaitingforme,grinning.Seeingtheprizeinmyhand,hesaid,“Congratulations!Youmakeitanddeserveit.”第二个人物的出场，注意描述视角的转化完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充7&8.表示感谢并补充原因。基础版：Iexpressmygratitudetohimbecausehereallygavemegreatencouragement.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Iexpressedmyheartfeltgratitudeforpushingmebeyondmycomfortzone,forhavingastrongfaithinmyability,andforexploringmyloveforwriting.Iwouldhaven’tcreatedthisstorywithouthim.完成主干句子书写先主干，后补充9.故事的结局：我坚持写作，成为了一名作家。基础版：Afterthisevent,Ikeptwriting.NowIhavebeenafamouswriterwithmanyinterestingworks.句子升级：结合原文升级句式Thatday,Ilefttheofficewithasenseofconfidence,inspiredtocontinuepursuingmypassionforwriting.完成主干句子书写先主干