2023版高考英语一轮总复习10年高考真题分类题组八短文改错组

专题八短文改错

Proofreading1(2016课标全国I)

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,

buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersat

mealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekey

tohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhigh

qualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrich

intheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

答案

Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetoφ√atIlive.Thoughnotvery

where

big,②

but

therestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersat

mealtimes.Somepeopleeven(3)-^-towaitoutside.MyuncletelIsmethatthekey

have

tohissuccessis(4)honest,Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetables⑤Rhigh

honestyand

qualityoilare⑥IlS噂forcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreams©Aof

used

becomingrichinshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthat⑨黑business

willgrow(10)-tea^y.

steadily

田解析

①考查宾语从句。Where引导宾语从句且在从句中作状语。

②考查连词。though和but不能连用。though引导的让步状语从句是一个省略句,不能再省

略，故只能去掉but。

③考查动词的时态。文章通篇叙述的是客观事实,采用的是一般现在时,且句子的主语SOme

people为复数，故需将had改为have。

④考查名词作表语。宾语从句中的主语为名词短语thekeytohisSUCCeSS,故从逻辑上看

应该用名词作表语,来解释名词短语的含义，即“什么是什么”结构。

⑤考查并列连词。此处表示并列关系,故用并列连词and。

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⑥考查动词的被动语态。主语freshvegetablesandhighqualityoil和use之间为被动

关系，故需用被动语态。

⑦考查介词。从dreams后的动名词becoming可知此处应加一个介词of。dreamof梦想。

⑧考查冠词。inashortperiodoftime”在短时间内”。

⑨考查形容词性物主代词。由句子的主语he可知I,他希望他的(his)生意稳步增长。

⑩考查副词。此处用副词作状语修饰动词grow。SteadiIy意为“(发展、增长等)稳步地，

持续地”。

Proofreading2(2016课标全国II)

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtodo

duringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestay

athome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,

wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyour

viewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecan

gotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcost

many,yetwecanstilllearnalot.

答案

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabout嗯ɪtodo

what

a

duringtheholiday.Wecanbetweenstayingathomeand③(黑gtrip.If

westayathome,itiscomfortablethereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butin

thatcase,wewilllearnlittleabout(5)Λtheworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,we

canbroadenviewandgainQ^nowlθdfeswecannotgetfrombooks.Some

ourknowledge

classmatessuggestwe®,can„

should

gotoplacesofinterestnearby.I(g)thθu^htthatitisagoodidea.Itdoes

think

notcost⑩丁a?yθtWecanstilllearnalot.

much*

序解析

①考查“特殊疑问词+不定式”。do后边缺少宾语,故用What。

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②情态动词后应该用动词原形。

③和staying并列，故用takingo

④根据句意“如果我们待在家里,舒服而且没有必要花钱”可知前后不是转折关系。

⑤WorId前需要加定冠词theo

⑥此处为“我们能开阔我们的视野”，故把your改为OUr。

⑦knowledge是不可数名词。

⑧本题考查虚拟语气。SUggeSt“建议”后的从句的谓语动词应用“should+动词原形"，should

可以省略。

⑨本句表示的是作者现在的看法而不是过去的看法。

⑩此处表示“不需要花费很多钱”，故用mucho

Proofreading3(2016课标全国In)

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywere

alsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverything

andcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn,tseemtothinksuch.

Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparents

couldn,tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwas

independentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,I

willbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.

答案

Theteenageφyear∙from13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealso

years

thebestand(2)w°rseyearsinmylife.Λt③

worst

the

first,Ithought1kneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsby(4)yourself.

myself

However,myparentsdid∏,tseemtothink⑤吧他.Theyalways⑥里；mewhattodoand

sotold

howtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn,tunderstandmesoIhoped

Icouldbe⑦fromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentby⑧Wearstrange

freewearing

clothes.NowIamleavinghome⑨#college.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butI

stillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowhenever©Alneedhelp.

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介解析

①考查名词。由from13to19可知year应改为years。

②考查形容词最高级。由并列连词and前的thebest可知此处应用形容词的最高级形式。

③考查固定结构。atfirst“起初”为固定结构。

④考查反身代词。表示“我自己”用反身代词myself。

⑤考查副词。SO在此处替代前边出现的"Ikneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsby

myself,,。

⑥考查动词的时态。前后文语境告诉我们应使用一般过去时，故需用该动词的过去式told0

⑦考查形容词。befreefrom"从……释放/解脱”为固定短语。

⑧考查动名词。by为介词,其后要接动名词。

⑨考查固定结构。IeaVe...for.离开...去....”为固定结构。

⑩考查代词。whenever引导的时间状语从句缺主语，由句意可知答案。

Proofreading4(2016浙江)

WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIremember

wellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we,dgreetherat

thedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymother

wouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisday

andhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthe

topofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!Mysisterand

Ithoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.

答案

WhenIwasaveryyoung①ChlIdr扎fathercreatedaregularpracticeIremember

childmy

wellyears②Everytimehearrivedhomeat(S)Atheendoftheday,we,dgreet

kl1wιn

@7^-atthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowe⑤坐^andpretendnotto(g)^°⅜us>Then

himwereknow

heandmymotherwouldhave⑦

had

adrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.

Whilethey®,chat,∙,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptosit(9)-thetop

chattedon

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ofthefridge.Itwasboth⑩-e-x-ci-te-d-andfrighteningtobeupthere!Mysisterand

exciting

Ithoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.

介解析

①考查名词单复数。句中主语是L为单数,故应用ChiId。

②考查副词。latea力•.迟到的，晚的；IaterHd匕后来，以后。

③考查冠词。attheendof...是固定短语,意为“在……结束的时候”，故at后应加上冠

词theo

④考查代词。此处指的是“我的父亲”，故应用him。

⑤考查主谓一致。主语是we,为复数，故应该是Were。

⑥考查非谓语动词。pretendnottodosth.假装不做某事,所以应该用动词原形。

⑦考查时态。根据上文EVerytime和句中WOUld可知父母经常这么做,would后加上动词

原形,表示过去经常做某事。

⑧考查时态。此句是时间状语从句,讲述的是父母过去的事情,故应用一般过去时,chat应改

为它的过去式Chattedo

⑨考查介词。Onthetopof.・.为固定短语,意为“在……顶部,在……上面”，此处指在冰

箱的顶部。

⑩考查形容词。此句主语是it,指孩子们被父亲放在冰箱顶部这件事是令人兴奋

的，exciting常修饰事物，故用exciting。excited常用来修饰人。

Proofreading5（2016四川）

ItisMother*SDaytoday.Thoughit,Sawesternfestival,it,spopularinChina

now.

Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreat

mother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother,sDay.Wegetupearlyin

themorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,

Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomand

Icookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom,sfavoritest.Atdinner,we

saidtoher,“HappyMother,sDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.

答案

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ItisMother,sDaytoday.Thoughit,sawesternfestival,it,spopularinChina

now.

Momhasafull-timejob,(ɪ)ɪshehastodomostofthe(2)1^0usew°r^s.Sheisagreat

buthousework

mother.BothDad(ɜ)ɪIplannedtodosomethingonMother,sDay.We(4)∣^upearly

inthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwent⑤

on

shopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersin（6>-^hand.IaskedMom

hɪs

tostayinthesittingroomandIcookedin©Athekitchen.Thedishes⑧,Wh∕t/

that/whɪeh

what

IcookedwereMom,s⑨*OnteSt.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother,sDay!''

favorite

Momwasgratefuland@niovinJ

movedj

介解析

①考查并列连词。两个分句之间为转折关系，并非因果关系,故用but。句意:妈妈有一份全

职工作,但是她还得承担大部分家务活儿。

②考查名词。h。USeWork家务，为不可数名词。

③考查并列连词。both...and...为固定搭配,意为“……和……都……”。

④考查动词时态。根据上下文以及inthemorning可知本句是在叙述过去的事情,故用一般

过去时。

⑤考查固定搭配。句意:爸爸打扫完房子,然后就去购物了。g。ShoPPing去购物。

⑥考查物主代词。根据句中的he可知此处为his。

⑦考查冠词。此处特指家里的厨房，故在kitchen前加定冠词the。

⑧考查定语从句。先行词为thedishes,且定语从句中COOked后缺少宾语,故用关系代词

that/which引导定语从句，因其在从句中作宾语,故也可以省略关系代词。

⑨考查名词。favorite最喜欢的事物。

⑩考查形容词。此处作表语,主语为MOm,故用moved（感动的）。moving感人的;动人的。

Proofreading6（2015课标全国I）

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.Now

Iamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanor

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themountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,the

environmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarming

hasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtier

anddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyour

environment.Ifwefailtodoso,we,11livetoregretit.

答案

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I①Itɪwouldbehappy

there.NowIamlivinginacity,but1missmyhomein(g)Λthecountryside.Therethe

airisclean(ɜ)ɪthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,(4)thedevelopmentof

industrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshave(S)

been

shownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery⑥渺空型problem.The⑦%we

seriousair

breatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.⑧凹Uehrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemust

Many

(9)foundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we,11livetoregret

findour/the

it.

介解析

①考查动词的时态。由was、hoped和WoUldbe可知，此处叙述的是过去的事情，故用一般过

去时。

②考查冠词。inthecountryside"在农村/乡下”为固定表达。

③考查并列连词。由本句句意可知,此处表示并列关系，故须用并列连词ando

④考查介词。表示“随着……”用介词With。

⑤考查动词的语态。主语studies和动词show之间为主动关系,故须用主动语态。

⑥考查形容词。修饰名词须用形容词。

⑦考查名词的数。air为物质名词,是不可数名词。

⑧考查代词。many修饰可数名词复数,much修饰不可数名词。此处修饰复数名词animals,

故用manyo

⑨考查情态动词。情态动词后的动词须用原形。

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⑩考查代词或冠词。此处为形容词性物主代词作定语,句子的主语为we,故须用OUr与之相

呼应。也可用定冠词the来限定。

Proofreading7(2015课标全国∏)

Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasvery

crowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequickly

walkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfound

wherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcrying

andtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,

“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried."Tonypromisedher

thatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

答案

Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhis①ParenIItwasvery

parents

crowded.Tonysawatoy②*ashopwindow.Helikeditso③

very

muchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.After④:"誉_atthetoyforsometime,he

looking

turnedaroundandfound⑤Where/

that

wher

e

hisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredand⑥tocry.Awomansawhim

cryingandQtθθ^ghimtowaitoutside(g)ɪshop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysaw©A

hisparents.Momsaid,uHownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwere(j⅞)terπbjeworried.”

terribly

Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

导解析

①由第五句和第八句可知TOny是和“parents”一起去了购物中心，故Parent改为Parents。

②Tony是“在商店橱窗(ShoPWindoW)里”看到了玩具，故用in。

③此句为so...that...句型，so用来修饰much,very为多余词，故去掉。

④此句中After为介词,其后应用动名词作宾语,故looks改为Iooking0

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⑤考查宾语从句。此处宾语从句中不缺成分且意思完整，故用that引导(that也可以省略)o

⑥考查时态。and连接两个并列谓语,时态应一致。begin的过去式应为begano

⑦此处and连接的是两个并列的谓语动词，前文用的是saw,故telling改为toldo

⑧考查冠词。此处提到的shop与上文提到的是同一个,故用定冠词theo

⑨此处提到的父母是主人公Tony的父母，故加上代词hiso

⑩形容词Worried应用副词修饰，故terrible改为terriblyo

Proofreading8(2015四川)

Hi,Janice,

It,sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewith

yousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.

AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduring

lunchandafterschool.We,vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It,S

beenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisas

atime-wastingactivity!Infact,Ido∏,tliketogoanymore,soΓmafraidΓ11lose

theirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?

Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.

Grace

答案

Hi,Janice,

It,sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantφΛtoshare

withyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.

AsIyoulasttime,Imadethreenew(3)here.Wehangouttogether

,

duringlunchandafterschool.Wevebeenspendingalotoftime④Slnɪɪɔkaraoke

singing

bars.It,sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsme(S)^ιan^.AndIstartedto

much

seethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon,tliketogoanymore,喘I’m

afraidΓ11losetheirfriendship.doyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyou(ɛ)ɪ

were

me,wouldyoutalkto⑨黑？

Pleasehelp⑩

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with

meandgivemesomeadvice.

Grace

介解析

①Wanttodo为固定搭配，故在want后加to。

②根据时间状语lasttime可知,本句时态应为一般过去时，故将tell改为toldɑ

③句中three表示复数概念,后面的名词应为复数形式,故将friend改为friendso

④SPendsometime(in)doingsth.为固定搭配，故将sing改为singingo

⑤much在此处为代词，表示花的钱，故将many改为much。

⑥根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知,此处应为转折关系，故将so改

为buto

⑦在此句中，特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语,故将How改为Whato

⑧条件从句与现在事实相反,谓语动词使用虚拟语气,故将are改为were。

⑨根据上文可知I,这里指作者的三个新朋友,此处代词指代错误,故将him改为them。

⑩help为及物动词，与me构成动宾结构，因此,with在此处多余,故去掉witho

Proofreading9(2015浙江)

Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremade

fromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-hand

sideoftheclass,1couldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfull

ofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Close

totheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthe

distance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclass

wastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.The

positionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwas

onlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.

答案

Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethree①Oftheclassroomweremade

glass.Ienjoyed③CIOSetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Onthe

left-handsideoftheclass,Icould(4)easf-seethefootballfield.Inthemornings,it

easily

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wasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroom⑤ɪ-also

was

splendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaround⑥

Fartherinthedistance,Icould⑦

not

enjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.I

wasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversin@Aahurryinthemorning.Theposition

oftheclassroomwithitsviewmademeIike1wasdreaming.（19）——---ɪɪ-；------1

feelðAIthough∕Though

wasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.

介解析

①Side是可数名词，前面有three修饰，side要改为sides。

②bemadefrom由...制成,看不出原材料;bemadeOf由....制成/组成,看得出原材料，

所以from要改为ofo

③enjoy后加动名词形式,所以sit要改为Sittingo

④修饰动词see应用副词,所以easy改为easilyo

⑤时态误用。全文用的都是过去时,所以要把is改为was。

⑥代词误用。这里指代的是park,所以要把them改为itŋ

⑦根据上下文可知这里表肯定,所以把not删掉。

⑧固定短语inahuιτy仓促;匆忙。

⑨makesb.doSth.使某人做某事,所以felt要改为feel。

⑩句意：虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子,但是我永远都忘不了它。根据句意可知要把

If改为Although或Thougho

Proofreading10（2014课标全国I）

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplanted

somecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear-

wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplants

aregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmal1insize,butjuicyandtaste.Thereare

somuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplants

togrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsect

attackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!

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答案

Nearlyfiveyears(ɪ)ɪɔɪ^θ,andwiththehelpourfather,mysisterandIplanted

somecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen-forallthese(3g^-

years

Webeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.As(5)Λaresult,the

have

plantsaregrowing(6)s°mew^ere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyand⑦

everywhere

舞.Thereareso⑧暇thatWeoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughwe

allowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,®

but

/—wehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowing⑩

yet

wonderfully

tomatoesatnocost!

wonderful

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①此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。

②Withthehelpof..・在...的帮助下,为固定短语。

③句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。

④时间状语Sineethen通常和现在完成时连用，而不是过去完成时。

⑤asaresult结果，为固定短语。

⑥根据句意可知此处表示“圣女果到处生长”，所以用everywhereo

⑦本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。

⑧根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的manyo

⑨引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以

删掉but,也可以把but改为yeto

⑩修饰名词时应用形容词。

Proofreading11（2014课标全国∏）

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessons

inthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn,tneedtodosomanyhomework.

Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecando

readingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.

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Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersand

treesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsat

bythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenot

onlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

答案

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.arethreelessons

inthemorningandtwointheafternoon.We鳄善needtodoso(3)≡

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arest,orbythelakelistening⑨Atomusic.Theteachersherearekindand

⑩he,f,iy.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

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伶解析

①表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用therebe句型。

②全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didn,t改为don,to

③homework是不可数名词，故应用much修饰。

④表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以（用于……）时,应使用介词for。

⑤“一个半小时”要说Oneandahalfhourso

⑥主语MydreamSChOoI（我梦想中的学校）是单数,谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。

⑦allkindsof（各种各样的）后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。

（S）Wecanlie...,or（can）sit...

©listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to«

⑩and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpfulŋ

Proofreading12（2014浙江）

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IwastakingatraintoLondon,sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriage

wasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.

Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealized

hecouldn,tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriage

begansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfrom

hisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.

Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-owner

before.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshow

concerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.

答案

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