读后续写（母亲节礼物）-2024届高三英语二轮复习

2021全国新高考卷AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE:Para.1ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Para.2Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.Para.3ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.双胞胎打算在母亲节给妈妈惊喜，法式吐司和鸡肉粥面包烤焦了粥溢出来了，Jenna很恐慌，Jeff保持冷静去清理，手被炉子烫伤了第二次烤面包也烤焦了P1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.父亲要发火

父亲了解情况后，没有发火

父亲和他们一起做早餐

在父亲的帮助下，早餐顺利做好

他们非常开心

双胞胎祝母亲节日快乐母亲非常惊喜! 母亲注意到了Jeff的手母亲万分感动! “收尾点晴”

1.从他的表情中判断，显眼看到脏乱之后，他将要发火Judgingfromsb.’svoice/eyes/expression/behavior,itwasevidentthatsb.wastrappedin+情绪.P1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Judgingfromhisexpression,Itwasevidentthathewasabouttoexplodeafterseeingthemess.2.但是，让他们宽慰的是，爸爸了解了他们的计划后，弯腰，轻拍他们的肩膀并且说：时间在我们这边，让我们一起做吧动作链描写句式：Havingdone...,sb.did...,did...anddid...P1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Buttotheirrelief,havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshouldersandsaid,“Timeisonourside.Let'sdoittogether.”3.没有丝毫犹豫，他们再次开始了他们的战役句式：没有丝毫的犹豫，某人……Withouttheslightesthesitation,sb.did...P1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Withouttheslightesthesitation,theystartedtheirbattleonceagain.4.不久后，拥有失败的经历和额外的援手，早餐准备好了，发出令人愉快的香味动作面描写：非谓语，谓语，非谓语P1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Beforelong,armedwiththeexperienceoffailureandanextrahelpinghand,thebreakfastwasready,givingoffpleasantsmell.5.尽管筋疲力尽，他们的心里也充满了快乐和自豪句式：“尽管某人又……又……，但是某人的内心充满了……”Adj.andadj.thoughsb.was,sb.'sheartwasfilledwithnothingelsebut....P1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Exhaustedthoughtheywere,theirheartswerefilledwithnothingelsebutjoyandpride.

6.母亲节快乐，他们异口同声地说P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“HappyMother’sDay!”Theyutteredthewordsinthesamebreath7.他们的妈妈绝对没有想过他的一天会从一件温暖的礼物开始句式：“某人绝不会料到……会如此……。”Undernocircumstanceshadsb.expectedsth.tobesoadj..P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Undernocircumstanceshadtheirmotherexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.8.食物的香味充满了卧室，卧室好像魔术般的变成了世界上最可爱的地方“环境描写”之“环境比喻”句式：“A充斥/点亮了B，好似魔法般，B变成了C。P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Thesmellofthefoodfilledthebedroom,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintothemostlovelyplaceintheworld.9.但当妈妈注意到Jeff的手时，他的喉咙哽咽了“当……，某人喉头一紧。”Sb.'sthroattightenedwhen....P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Butthen,themother'sthroattightenedwhenshenoticedJeff'shand.10.她一下就理解了整件事情并且感觉到一股暖流涌上心头并涌遍全身“某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾、奔涌。”Sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪+wellingupinsb.'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Sheunderstoodthewholethingatonceandfeltawarmcurrentwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.11.她温柔地抱住了双胞胎.“谢谢你，亲爱的，谢谢”，这个世界上最幸福的妈妈不断重复这些话P2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Shefondlygatheredthetwinsintoherarms.“Thankyou,myhoney.Thankyou,”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthesewords. Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Judgingfromhisexpression,Itwasevidentthathewasabouttoexplodeafterseeingthemess.Buttotheirrelief,havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshouldersandsaid,“Timeisonourside.Let'sdoittogether.”Withouttheslightesthesitation,theystartedtheirbattleonceagain.Beforelong,armedwiththeexperienceoffailureandanextrahelpinghand,thebreakfastwasready,givingoffpleasantsmell.Exhaustedthoughtheywere,theirheartswerefilledwithnothingelsebutjoyandpride.Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairs