高三英语复习读后续写家庭趣事类-失踪的姜饼人饼干学案

【2022年湛江一模读后续写题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Besuretohangthedecorationshigh,"saidPolly.mystepmom.“Jakemightmistakethecolorfulglassballsforhistoysandtrytobitethem."JakewasnewtoourfamilythatChristmas.Hewasabeautifulbrown-and-whitedog.And,ofcourse,hewasloadedwiththecuriositythatmadeeverythingatoy.TwoweeksbeforeChristmas,webroughtouttheboxesofdecorations,manyofwhichhadbeeninPolly'sfamilyforages.Amongthemwasaspecialboxthatheldanentiregingerbreadfamily(姜饼人).Theywererealcookies,hungwithredribbons(丝带)andmademanyyearsearlier.Everynowandthen,Ioroneofmylittlesisters-RuthandSue-wouldpretendweweregoingtoeatone,knowingthatPollywouldsay,"You'llbreakatooth!They'resooldthatthey'rerock-hard."Wedidn'treallywanttoeatthem,butweenjoyedmakingfunofPolly.Sincewedidn'tknowhowJakewouldreacttothedecorationsortheChristmastree,wewerecarefultoputthedecorationsuphigh.Jakesniffed(嗅)thetreealot.Thosefirstcoupleofdays,Pollycaughthimstartingtoliftalegonthetreetwice.Buthelearnedquicklyandsettledforsniffingfromadistance.TheweekendbeforeChristmas,DadandPollytookustowatchthenewholidaymovie.Excited,wejumpedintothecarwithbagsofhome-madepopcorn,andoffwewentforagreatevening.Afewhourslater,wereturnedhome,onlytofind...aterriblemess.Itwasn'ttheChristmastree.Infact,weweren'tsurewhatitwas.Westoodjustinsidethedoorstaringatthemess.Asitturnedout,itwasJake'sbed,whichhe'ddestroyed.Leftaloneforthefirsttime,hemusthavegottenbored,attackeditandleftitfordead.Wedidn'tknowthatthebedwasnottheonlyvictim.注意：

1．续写词数应为150左右；

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Thenextmorning,wegirlswereplayinginthelivingroomwhereRuthletoutaascream____________________________________________________________________________

“Itwasn’tme,”Isaid,incaseanybodythoughtI’damidnightsnackofrockharddecorations._______________________________________________________________________

【前文分析】在圣诞节前夕，我们掏空心思地为节日装饰，在这些装饰物中，有继母Polly珍藏许久的一套圣诞“姜饼人”。我和我的妹妹Ruth和Sue会时不时假装要去吃这些姜饼，Polly知道后，开玩笑地说：“姜饼很硬，吃了会掉牙的。”而我们家庭新成员Jake——一只漂亮的小棕狗似乎对我们的圣诞节装饰物非常感兴趣，并且把所有的装饰物都当成玩具。在圣诞节前的周末，Dad和Polly带我们外出看电影，我们回家之后发现房间一团糟，那时我们并不知道Jake的床不是唯一的受害者，第二天早上我们发现......

【续写情节问题分析】1.不少学生未能充分理解前文，不明确gingerbreadfamily是挂在圣诞树上的，导致续写情节与前文不融合。2.本篇读后续写命题涵盖“人与自我”和“人与自然”两个主题语境，蕴含重组家庭的成员之间和谐相处及对动物的爱护的正能量主题。有些学生续写情节是继母Polly对“我”怀疑、指责、刁难、虐待，“我们一家人”严厉惩罚狗狗Jake，严重违背了主流价值观。这是在后期备考中教师必须纠正的大问题。参考范文：Thenextmorning,wegirlswereplayinginthelivingroomwhenRuthletoutasuddencry.Thencameherangryvoice,"Whohadeatenthegingerbreadfamily?"HardlyhadshepointedouttheChristmastreewithouttheginger-breadfamilyhungonitwhenPollycameover,withhereyesfixedontheChristmastree.ltseemedthatshewasbrimmingwithdisappointment,whichmadeusfeelsosorry.Sueimmediatelyexplainedthatshedislikedthesecookiesandshedidn'teatthem.Atthatmoment,alltheeyesarrowedintome.“'ltwasn'tme,"Isaid,incaseanybodythoughtl'dhadamidnightsnackofrock-harddecorations.Honestaslwas,wordsfailedtoconveymyinnocence.HoweverIwasabouttoburstintotearswhenJakerantowardsus,barkingatthetree,Suddenly,anideahitPolly.Observingthecookiecrumbsscatteredonthefloor,PollyannouncedItwasJakethatbitthegingerbreadfamily!"Thestoneinmyheartfinallyreachedtheground,lhelpedPollymakethenewcookiesforChristmashappilywithmysisters.Withthenewgingerbreadfamily,wefamilyhadawonderfulChristmaswithourcuriousdog.点评:该篇文章亮点很多,语法结构不仅运用自如且十分高级，更难能可贵的是语言“原汁原味”,衔接很合理。1、高级语法结构:本文多次使用倒装如首句"Thencameherangryvoice”,Para1第二句'Hardhaddone…whendid”;以及Para2无灵主语的使用，'wordsfailedto…”。这些都可看出作者对语法结构的运用口。2、街接地道,情节合理:Para1末句'alltheeyesarrowedintome’自然引出Para2首句；Para2结尾做姜饼人小过圣诞情节可补全，使故事结局圆满。总而言之,该'篇文章是值得反复品味的佳作!默写版：Thenextmorning,wegirlswereplayinginthelivingroomwhenRuthletoutasuddencry.Thencameherangryvoice,"Whohadeatenthegingerbreadfamily?"______________________________________________________________________________________________________她刚一指那棵没有姜面包家族挂在上面的圣诞树，波莉就走了过来，眼睛盯着那棵圣诞树.ltseemedthatshewasbrimmingwithdisappointment,whichmadeusfeelsosorry._____________________________________________苏立即解释说，她不喜欢这些饼干，也不吃Atthatmoment,alltheeyesarrowedintome.“'Itwasn'tme,"Isaid,incaseanybodythoughtI'dhadamidnightsnackofrock-harddecorations.___________________________________________________尽管我很诚实，但言语无法表达我的清白.HoweverIwasabouttoburstintotearswhenJakerantowardsus,barkingatthetree.Suddenly,anideahitPolly._______________________________________________________