alittlefireman读后续写完整版

Alittlefiremancontinuationwriting-情节的逻辑性和语言的丰富性第一页，共十五页。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled._____________________________________________________________________________________...Paragraph2:Hisdayasarealfiremanstarted._____________________________________________________________________________________________________...wardwasfilledwithsadnessdreamoutofbreaththelong-lostexcitementfirestationfireenginedeeplymovedWednesdaymorningfireuniform第二页，共十五页。Whatisthetypeofwriting?A.narrative(记叙文）B.exposition（说明文)C.argumentation(议论文）

when,where,who,what,why,how第三页，共十五页。ThebasicplotsofthestorywhowhenwhatwhyYoungmotherBobPhilipAcoldSundaymorning,WednesdaymorningmakeBob’sdreamcometrueBobwasdying第四页，共十五页。FurtherReadingQ:HowwasBob?Wecouldinferfrom……*Helookedsosmallandweakthatevenagentletouchcouldbreakhim.*Thoughthewordscosthimmuchstrength,andhewasnowcoughingandoutofbreathusedetaileddescription(细节描写)toshowcharactersmallandweakAppearanceandbehavior：外貌和动作描写第五页，共十五页。Q:Howdidtheyoungmotherfeelwhenhersonwasdying?ShewasfilledwithsadnessQ:HowdidtheyoungmotherfeelwhenPhilipdecidedtohelpher?gratefulHecouldseethatthemother’seyeswereglitteringwithgratitudeQ:Didshedoanythingforherson?Shewantedtomakeherson’sdreamcometrue,sobeggedPhilipforhelpusedetaileddescription(细节描写)toshowcharacterFacialexpression：面部表情Feeling：感受第六页，共十五页。…beanhonoraryfiremanforthewholeday

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arealuniform…comedowntothefirestationandgooutonallfirecalls

…takearideonthefireengine

Q:InordertomakeBob’sdreamcometrue,whatwouldPhilipdo?第七页，共十五页。Whatwouldhappeninthehospital?Paragraph1:

ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled…wardwasfilledwithsadnessdreamoutofbreaththelong-lostexcitementfirestationfireenginedeeplymovedWednesdaymorningfireuniformTrytousethefollowingwords第八页，共十五页。

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ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled.TheyrushedintoBob’sward.Bobjumpedwithjoyandwonderedwhytheycamehere.“Bob,youhavetotakeonalotofresponsibilitiestoday,soyoucan’trelaxanymore!”FiremanPhilipspokequicklybeforeBobcouldsayanything.Meanwhile,anotherfiremanaskedBobtodresshimselfintothefireuniform.Bobdidn’tknowwhathappened.Hejustrealizedthathewasafiremannow.Fewminuteslater,theyheadedforthefirestationimmediately.

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ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled.ThemotherwassoexcitedthatsheledthemtoBob’swardwithoutdelay.Onseeingthefiremen,Bobstruggledtositupandtriedtogreetthem.Philipquicklysteppedforwardandgavehimabighug.“Welcometobeamemberofus.Mylittlefireman!”theyhelpedBobsitup,dressedhiminhisfireuniformandwheeledhimtothewaitingtruckatthegate.“Arealfireengine!”Bobscreamedexcitedly.WithPhilipleadingtheway,Bobdirectedthetruckbacktothefirestation.Tip:Acoherentparagraphisbasedonlogicalfactsreferredfromrelatedcluesinthecontext.（条理清楚的段落是建立在合逻辑的事实基础上的，而这些事实应根据上下文的相关线索来推断。）第九页，共十五页。DetaileddescriptionFromwhichaspect?

①herheartwasfilledwithsadness/themothercouldfeelthelong-lostexcitementfeelingsbehavior③cough，outofbreath,beg,struggletositup,triedtogreet...facialexpressionlanguage②eyeswereglitteringwithgratitude/hiseyesglitteringwithexcitement

④“mydreamofbeingarealfiremanisfinallytoberealized!”第十页，共十五页。Paragraph2:

Hisdayasarealfiremanstarted._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________...Whatwouldhedothewholeday?Findoutsomerelatedclues(相关的线索）inthecontext.第十一页，共十五页。…beanhonoraryfiremanforthewholeday

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arealuniform…comedowntothefirestationandgooutonallfirecalls

…takearideonthefireengine

Morethan…第十二页，共十五页。…rescuepeo