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姐弟夜离岛屿记原文本Risingtoreachforthebookonthedeskinthelivingroom,Gudrunfelloverherlittlebrother,whohadcrawledoutfromunderneathherchair.“Arnar!Whydoyoualwayshavetoberightunderme?”Thefive-year-oldgiggled.“Iwashiding,”hesaid,“andyoufoundme.”“I'mnotplaying,”Gudrunscolded.“I'mknitting.Andit'stimeforyoutogotobed.”Herparentshadgoneoutfortheevening,leavingGudrunincharge.“Letmehideoncemore,”Arnarbegged.“ThenI'llgotosleep,Ipromise.”Gudruncouldn'thelpsmiling.“Oh,allright.”Sheturnedbacktoherknitting.“I'lllookforyouwhenI'vefinishedthisrow.”“Here'saclue,”Arnarcalledasheskippedaway.“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”ButGudrunwasalreadyabsorbedinherwork.Gudrunwasn'tsurewhathadawakenedherinthemiddleofthenight.WasittheurgencyinMamma'svoiceorthefrighteningandlowrumblethatrolledthroughherroom?Gudrunfoundherselfsuddenlywideawake,drawntothewindowbyastrangeandunfamiliarbrillianceoutside.“Aneruption,”MammasaidasshebegantogatherGudrun'sclothes.“MaybeHelgafell,maybeanewvolcano.Wemustleavetheislandquickly.”“Tonight?How?”Gudrunasked,herheartpounding.“Wherewillwego?”“We'relucky.Thefishingboatswilltakeustothemainland.”MammaturnedtofaceGudrun.“Pabbihasalreadygonetotheharbor.I'mgoingtohelpMargret.”Theirelderlyneighborlivedalone.Mammaproceeded,“canyoudressArnarandtakehimtotheharborbyyourself?”“Ofcourse,”shedeclared.Everyonewouldhelptonight.Icelandershadalwaysworkedtogethertosurviveinalandruledbyvolcanoes,glaciers,andocean.Gudrundressedandrantoherbrother'sroom.“Arnar!”shecried,“Wakeup!”Hearingnoresponse,Gudrunhurriedtothebedandpulledbackherbrother'sthickcover.
Risingtoreachforthebookonthedeskinthelivingroom,Gudrunfelloverherlittlebrother,whohadcrawledoutfromunderneathherchair.“Arnar!Whydoyoualwayshavetoberightunderme?”Thefive-year-oldgiggled.“Iwashiding,”hesaid,“andyoufoundme.”Readforplotmainidea
弟弟Arnar玩捉迷藏游戏躲在椅子下;姐姐Gudrun织毛衣“I'mnotplaying,”Gudrunscolded.“I'mknitting.Andit'stimeforyoutogotobed.”Herparentshadgoneoutfortheevening,leavingGudrunincharge.“Letmehideoncemore,”Arnarbegged.“ThenI'llgotosleep,Ipromise.”Gudruncouldn'thelpsmiling.“Oh,allright.”Sheturnedbacktoherknitting.“I'lllookforyouwhenI'vefinishedthisrow.”“Here'saclue,”Arnarcalledasheskippedaway.“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”ButGudrunwasalreadyabsorbedinherwork.mainidea
弟弟Arnar睡前玩躲猫猫时留下了线索:线索是什么?“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”
Gudrunwasn'tsurewhathadawakenedherinthemiddleofthenight.WasittheurgencyinMamma'svoiceorthefrighteningandlowrumblethatrolledthroughherroom?Gudrunfoundherselfsuddenlywideawake,drawntothewindowbyastrangeandunfamiliarbrillianceoutside.“Aneruption,”MammasaidasshebegantogatherGudrun'sclothes.“MaybeHelgafell,maybeanewvolcano.Wemustleavetheislandquickly.”mainideaGudrun半夜被惊醒,妈妈让她去找弟弟,告诉她险情:新火山正在喷发。他们要速速离开岛屿。
“Tonight?How?”Gudrunasked,herheartpounding.“Wherewillwego?”“We'relucky.Thefishingboatswilltakeustothemainland.”MammaturnedtofaceGudrun.“Pabbihasalreadygonetotheharbor.I'mgoingtohelpMargret.”Theirelderlyneighborlivedalone.Mammaproceeded,“canyoudressArnarandtakehimtotheharborbyyourself?”“Ofcourse,”shedeclared.Everyonewouldhelptonight.Icelandershadalwaysworkedtogethertosurviveinalandruledbyvolcanoes,glaciers,andocean.mainidea
妈妈布置Gudrun一个任务:找到弟弟给弟弟穿上衣服然后一起去港口妈妈则去帮助年迈的邻居Margret.最后一句话:对本文续写立意有启示。
Gudrundressedandrantoherbrother'sroom.“Arnar!”shecried,“Wakeup!”Hearingnoresponse,Gudrunhurriedtothebedandpulledbackherbrother'sthickcover.Q1:
DidGudrunfindArnarinhisroom?Q2:Whatdoestheremeanin“Arnarwasn’tthere!”
Q3:Whatdoes“There”meaninthefirstsentenceofPara2?Para1:Arnarwasn’tthere!Para2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.
Risingtoreachforthebookonthedeskinthelivingroom,Gudrunfelloverherlittlebrother,whohadcrawledoutfromunderneathherchair.“Arnar!Whydoyoualwayshavetoberightunderme?”Thefive-year-oldgiggled.“Iwashiding,”hesaid,“andyoufoundme.”.
Readforcluesandechoescluesechoes1.ArnarhidunderGudrun’schairagainorunderGudrun’sbed.2.Arnarwasfoundbyhissisternomatterwherehehid.
“Here'saclue,”Arnarcalledasheskippedaway.“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”ButGudrunwasalreadyabsorbedinherwork..
Readforcluesandechoescluesechoes3.HowmuchGudrunregrettedbeingabsorbedinknittinginsteadoflookingforheradorablebrother.4.“WhatwastheClue?”Gudrunexclaimed.Allofasudden,“Lookformewherealwaysam”ranginherears.
“Aneruption,”MammasaidasshebegantogatherGudrun'sclothes.“MaybeHelgafell,maybeanewvolcano.Wemustleavetheislandquickly.”
Readforcluesandechoescluesechoes5.NosoonerhadthefamilyhoppedontotheirPabbi’sboatthanHelgafell.6.Anewvolcanoerupted,withredhotlavashootinghighinthenightstarrysky.
“Pabbihasalreadygonetotheharbor.I'mgoingtohelpMargret.”Theirelderlyneighborlivedalone.Mammaproceeded,“canyoudressArnarandtakehimtotheharborbyyourself?”
Readforcluesandechoescluesechoes7.Theiranxiousparentswerewaitingforthebrotherandsister,constantlylookingupinthedistance,withworrywrittenontheirfaces.
Everyonewouldhelptonight.Icelandershadalwaysworkedtogethertosurviveinalandruledbyvolcanoes,glaciers,andocean.
Readforcluesandechoescluesechoes8.Redhotlavaswallowedtheirhousesinasplitsecond.Tearsstreamingdowntheirfaces,theybidfarewelltotheirhomeland,settingformainland.
whowhereWhenThecauseTheprocessTheresultGudrun,Arnar,parents;Margret;Icelandersathome,theharbourmidnightAvolcanoerupted.Gudruncouldn’tfindherbrotherArnar.WherewasArnar?
SixelementsSixdetailedelementsofthetext
Gudrundressedandrantoherbrother'sroom.“Arnar!”shecried,“Wakeup!”Hearingnoresponse,Gudrunhurriedtothebedandpulledbackherbrother'sthickcover.首段首句定位1:A:(主语Arnar叙述:他去哪里拉呀?)Arnardisappearedfromhisroom!Para1:Arnarwasn’tthere!Para2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.
首段首句定位1:B:(结合尾段叙事主语Gudrun,进行交叉叙事,描述弟弟不见了,姐姐的情感体验:Seizedbyanenormouswaveofshock,Gudruncouldn’tbelievewhatshesawunderthethickcover!四点定位:
Gudrundressedandrantoherbrother'sroom.“Arnar!”shecried,“Wakeup!”Hearingnoresponse,Gudrunhurriedtothebedandpulledbackherbrother'sthickcover.首段尾句定位2:A:(根据Para2主语Arnar进行叙述:Arnar又躲在了她的椅子下)Arnarhidhimselfagainunderherchair.AsGudrunwasdedicatedtoherknitting,shetooknonoticeofwhatArnardidatall.Para1:Arnarwasn’tthere!Para2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.
首段尾句定位2:B:(躲藏的地方,只要是家里,还可以是床底下)NeverinGudrun’swildestdreamhadsheimaginedthathercleveradorablebrotherhidhimselfunderherbed.二段首句定位3:A:(根据原文新火山喷发,说明Gudrun要行动迅速,分秒必争)Gudrunpulled/draggedherbrotheroutfromunderthebedandwokeuphimimmediately.“Wehavetoraceagainsttime.Weareindanger.Andwehavetoruntotheharbor,whereourparentsandourneighborMargretarewaitingforus.”Para1:Arnarwasn’tthere!Para2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.
二段首句定位3:B:(找到了弟弟,姐姐可以松一口气了。但是轰鸣声越来越响。)Seeinghisbrothersleepingsoundly,Gudrunbreathedasighofrelief.Butshehadonlyalittletimeforanescape,withthevolcanorumblingoutsidelikethunders.ShecuppedherhandsoverArnarandsoothedhimgently.Para1:Arnarwasn’tthere!
(Done短语,sbdidsth:Gudrun很吃惊,无法相信被子地下看见的情景)Seizedbyanenormouswaveofshock,Gudrun
couldn’tbelievewhatshesawunderthethickcover!(主语Gudrun的细腻心理活动)“WheredidArnargo?WhatdidhedobeforeIwenttobed?”Gudrunthoughttoherself.(主语Gudrun:表达当初织毛衣时没好好照看弟弟。)How(感叹句:
Gudrunregrettedbeingabsorbedinknittinginsteadoflookingafterheradorablebrother!(无灵主语句:弟弟说过的话在耳畔回响)ThensuddenlyArnar’swordsechoedinherear—”Here'saclue.LookformewhereIalwaysam.”习作句间逻辑5.(无灵主语句:忽然灵感闪现)Aninspirationflashedacrosshermind.6.(承接上句:猜测躲藏的地方:主语切换到Arnar)Arnarmusthavehiddenundersomething.7.(并列句:Gudrun开始寻找;主语切换回到Gudrun)GudrunkickedoffhersearchbylookingdownArnar’sbedbutnoluck.8.(时间状语从句+无灵主语句:平行主语Gudrun的眼睛落到了椅子上)
;Asshewentbacktothelivingroom,hereyesfellontothechair.
Para2:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.
(主语切换到寻找弟弟的Gudrun如释重负)Gudrun
breathedasighofrelief.(with结构+主语Gudrun火山喷发的声音,姐姐自己也很惊慌)Withthevolcanorumblingoutsidelikethunders,Gudrun
feltherheartalmostbeatingoutofherchest.3.(Doingsth,sbdidsth:平行主语Gudrun安抚弟弟)NoticingArnaringreatpanic,Gudrun
cuppedherhandsoverArnar’searsandsoothedhimgently.“4.(夸张的写作手法:姐姐不告诉弟弟险情,用躲猫猫的方法来解决去港口)“Wewillhideinaboatintheharbor.Arnar,let’srun!”Afterwhatseemedlikecenturies,thesiblingstrekkedthroughthenightdarknessandmadeittotheharbor.5.(with结构+sbdidsth,doing短语:切换主语到焦急的父母)
Theiranxiousparentswerewaitingforthem,lookingupinthedistance,withworryontheirface.6.(倒装句:切换主语到船上的家人邻居等:刚上船,滚烫的岩浆吞噬了美丽家园)Nosoonerhadthefamilyandneighborshoppedontotheboatthanredhotlavaswallowedtheirbeautifulhomes.7.(独立主格结构+切换主语到船上的冰岛人:告别故土,对未来充满希望)
Tearsstreamingdowntheirfaces,theybidfarewelltotheirhomeland,settingformainland.They,persistentIcelanders,wouldworktogetheragaintobuildabrandnewhometown!
Para1:Arnarwasn’tthere!
Seizedbyanenormouswaveofshock,Gudrun
couldn’tbelievewhatshesawunderthethickcover!“WheredidArnargo?WhatdidhedobeforeIwenttobed?”Gudrunthoughttoherself.HowGudrunregrettedbeingabsorbedinknittinginsteadoflookingafterheradorablebrother.ThensuddenlyArnar’swordsechoedinherear—”Here'saclue.LookformewhereIalwaysam.”Aninspirationflashedacrosshermind.Arnarmusthavehiddenundersomething.Gudrun
kickedoffhersearchb
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