问刘十九 英译赏析课件

问刘十九

唐白居易绿蚁新醅酒，红泥小火炉。晚来天欲雪，能饮一杯无。作者写作背景译本对比赏析总结问刘十九英译赏析白居易（772-846）乐天香山居士唐代伟大的现实主义诗人题材广泛，形式多样，语言平易通俗，有“诗魔”和“诗王”之称《长恨歌》《琵琶行》《卖炭翁》《暮江吟》《忆江南》新乐府运动反映人民疾苦《白氏长庆集》作者问刘十九英译赏析《问刘十九》乃白居易晚年隐居洛阳，“天晚欲雪，思念旧人”时所作。刘十九是作者在江州时的朋友。刘十九：白居易留下的诗作中，提到刘十九的不多，仅两首。但提到刘二十八、二十八使君的，就很多了。刘二十八就是刘禹锡。刘十九乃其堂兄刘禹铜，系洛阳一富商，与白居易常有应酬。背景问刘十九英译赏析绿蚁新醅酒，红泥小火炉。晚来天欲雪，能饮一杯无。绿蚁：指浮在新酿的没有过滤的米酒上的绿色泡沫。醅（pēi）：酿造。白话译文新酿的米酒，色绿香浓；红泥炉的小火苗，烧得殷红。天色阴沉，貌似晚上要下雪，能否留下与我共饮一杯？情景语言文本赏析问刘十九英译赏析V1许渊冲（《汉英对照唐诗一百五十首》；1984年10月）：Inbottles

green

the

newbrew

gleams;In

red-claystove

thefirelooksfine.Thesnowwouldfall

atdusk,itseems.Howdoyoulike

acup

ofwine?ABAB译本赏析问刘十九英译赏析V2许渊冲改译（《汉英对照唐诗三百首》；2000年8月）：

RequestingMr.Liu，theNineteenth

My

newbrew

gives

green

glow;

My

redclaystove

flamesup.

Atdusk

itthreatens

snow.

Won’tyoucomefor

acup?ABAB译本赏析问刘十九英译赏析

V3OfferingADrinktoLiuFineyeasts,newwine,Burningcoal,smallstove.Outside,duskandsnow,Haveadrinkwithme,willyou?ABBC译本赏析问刘十九英译赏析V4ASUGGESTIONTOMYFRIENDLIUThere'sagleamofgreeninanoldbottle，There'sastirofredinthequietstove，There'safeelingofsnowintheduskoutside——Whataboutacupofwineinside？ABCC译本赏析问刘十九英译赏析绿蚁新醅酒,红泥小火炉。

V1Inbottles

green

the

newbrew

gleams;

In

red-claystove

thefirelooksfine.V2My

newbrew

gives

green

glow;

My

redclaystove

flamesup.V3Fineyeasts,newwine;

Burning

coal,small

stove.V4There'sagleamofgreeninanoldbottle;

There‘s

astirofredinthequietstove.

译本赏析形

音

意增删意象：酒小火炉问刘十九英译赏析Gleam

:n.

toshinewithapaleclearlight发微光，隐约闪烁Brew:n.atypeofbeer,especiallyonemadeinaparticularplace尤指某地酿造的啤酒Glow：n.adullsteadylight,especiallyfromafirethathasstoppedproducingflames微弱稳定的光，暗淡的光Yeast：n.afungususedinmakingbeerandwine,ortomakebreadrise酵母

均来自《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》第七版问刘十九英译赏析晚来天欲雪，能饮一杯无。

V1Thesnowwouldfall

atdusk,itseems.Howdoyoulike

acup

ofwine?V2Atdusk

itthreatens

snow.

Won’tyoucomefor

acup?V3Outside,duskandsnow,Haveadrinkwithme,willyou?V4There'safeelingofsnowintheduskoutside——Whataboutacupofwineinside？译本赏析形

音

意增删意象：雪问刘十九英译赏析Dusk:n.thetimeofdaywhenthelighthasalmostgone,butitisnotyetdark黄昏傍晚Threaten:v.toseemlikelytohappenorcausesomethingunpleasant预示凶兆；有…危险Snow:v.whenitsnows,snowfallsfromthesky下雪均来自《牛津高阶英汉