上海高考英语作文解析

./2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷一．书面表达〔共20小题1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平,最近参加了一项研究性学习调研,课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母,结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异〔数据如图所示．根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因2．学校即将举办"读书节",目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容：1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目〔健康、娱乐、文化中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目〔时尚、职业规划、读者反馈中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．4．请描述如图所示的图片,并谈谈你的感受．5．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．6．你叫Jenny,你的网友Peter〔高一学生即将面临期末考试,近日,他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教,请给Peter回复一封电子邮件,邮件必须包括以下内容：结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．．7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市,请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市,并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写．8．你班将召开一次主题班会,探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考,写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．．9．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动,有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对．作为班级的一员,请你根据你的实际情况,在三项方案中选择其一,提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由．你的写作中必须包括：在三项方案中选择其一；对该方案提出建议；谈谈你提出建议的理由．．10．假如你是某中学高三〔1班的学生李明,写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师,因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容：•简要介绍个人特长•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员,对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议注意：文中请勿提及真实学校DearSir/Madam．11．Directions：WritinganEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．请根据下面的图片,结合你个人的经历,谈谈你的想法．12．某英文网站正举办征文活动,题目是TheMostUsefulSkillIHaveEverLearned,请以此写一篇征文．你的文章比须包括：•这项技能是什么？你是通过什么方式学会的？•举例说明为什么你觉得它最有用．〔注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称．13．假设你是李华,学校有四个社团正招募新人〔如图所示,你希望加入其中一个．请你写一篇日记,谈谈你的想法．内容必须包括：•你希望加入的社团•选择该社团的原因•你可以为该社团做些什么注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称．14．如图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症〔procrastination．请写一篇作文,内容包括：1．给procrastination下定义；2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．15．最近,网络上针对学习有两种不同的观点,一种是"兴趣是最好的老师",另一种是"兴趣不是最好的老师"．请你结合自己的体会,选择你支持的观点,表达自己的看法,并阐述理由．注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．16．现有一个中学生志愿者服务的网络平台,这是该平台上显示学生参与活动的流程图：请你据此写一篇短文,你的文章必须包括：•简要介绍参与活动的流程．•谈谈你对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法．．17．学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席,假设你是该校的学生李青,有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料,材料必须包括以下内容：简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件〔能力、性格、爱好等．如果当选,请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字．18．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法,你的文章应包括：●具体描述两幅图；●简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；●提出解决问题的建议．〔注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校19．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructions．你是李华,为解决你所在的学校公益社团〔publicwelfaresociety的资金短缺问题,请给全校学生写一封募捐信,募集5000元善款．信中必须包括：1．向全校的捐款号召．2．你发起这一活动的理由．3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．〔文中不得出现考生姓名,学校等任何真实信息20．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法,你的文章应包括：具体描述两幅图；简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；提出解决问题的建议．〔注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷参考答案与试题解析一．书面表达〔共20小题1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平,最近参加了一项研究性学习调研,课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母,结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异〔数据如图所示．根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因[分析]本文为图表作文,考生需要根据数据进行分析,从数据分析原因,得出结论．时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主．写作要点为：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．重要的词汇及短语：makeasurvey做调查holdthesameopinion持相同的观点accordingto…根据…approve同意,认可cause起因,原因figureout找出leadto导致subtle细微的conservative保守的accustomto习惯于convey传递〔信息tendency趋势conceal隐藏thecurrenteducationsystem常规的教育体系bias偏爱,偏见excessively过分地高分句型：句型一：Thereseemstobe①twocausesas②wetriedtofigureoutwhat③ledtothissubtledifference．thereseemstobe句型,表示"看上去似乎有"；as引导时间状语从句,表示伴随,主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；what引导宾语从句．句型二：Thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance,thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值,导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩,才能让父母为自己骄傲．句型三：Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports,whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义,很容易打击到孩子〔的信心,因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．[解答]Recently,wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．Accordingtothesurvey,wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．〔描述调研数据Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．[高分句型一]First,conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself﹣confidence．〔原因一Second,thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance,thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．[高分句型二]Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports,whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．[高分句型三]〔原因二Withoutthegenuineencouragementfromparentsandthereversalofexam﹣orientededucationalmethods,akidwouldneverendupwithapositivegrown﹣up．〔结论[点评]数据分析类的作文,需要考生认真观察数据,透过现象看本质,从数据中分析原因,得出结论．2．学校即将举办"读书节",目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容：1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．[分析]本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式,根据文章所给提示信息给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅图片,描述图片同时阐述推荐理由,既是提纲作文又是图画类作文．时态应该用一般现在时．人称用第二和第三人称．重要短语：aroundthecorner〔即将到来,recommendsthto…．〔推荐什么给,remindsbofsth〔提醒某人…．,asfarasI'mconcerned〔就我所知道的而言,turnouttobe〔结果是,notonly…．,butalso…．〔不仅,而且,enhance…．understandingof…..〔增强…..的理解,takesthintoconsideration…．〔把…..考虑在内．[解答]DearSir/Madam,SincetheReadingFestivalisaroundthecorner,I'mwritingtorecommendapicturewhichcanbeusedinthebrochuretoremindthestudentsofthepleasureofreading．Inthepicture,threestudentsaresittingatthetable,discussingheatedlywhattheyhavejustread．[高分句型]Itseemsthattheyhavehadalotoffunthroughthediscussion．〔描述图片Thoughitisadmittedthatreadingismostlyapersonalactivitywhichneedsquietnessandconcentration,asfarasI'mconcerned,itcanalsobeasharingexperiencewhenthesamebookisbeingappreciated．Justimaginethatyouhavereadaterrificdetectivestorywithfascinatingandintricateplots．Youaresoamazedbythegeniusofthewriterandyoucan'thelpsharingitwithyourclassmatesorbestfriends,whoturnouttohavebeendeeplyimpressedaswell．[高分句型]Themomentyoumentionthebook,thepassionandenthusiasmaboutthestorywillexplodewhichcanneverbegainedonyourown．[高分句型]Myidealatmosphereofreadingisjustlikethat,throughwhichyoucannotonlyappreciatethecontentbyyourself,butalsohavethepleasureofsharingtheplotsoropinionswithyourpeers,whichwillultimatelyenhanceyourunderstandingofthebook．[高分句型]Tosumup,thereasonofmyrecommendationisquitesimpleandapparentthatreading,insteadofbeingdullandisolating,canbefullofparticipationandcommoninterest．〔阐述推荐该图片的理由IsincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsiderationandI'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply．Yourssincerely,PanYang[点评]写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来,并认真看图,围绕主题,提炼要点,发挥想象,语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等．3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目〔健康、娱乐、文化中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目〔时尚、职业规划、读者反馈中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．[分析]本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,就学校英语报改版,拟从现有的三个栏目〔健康、娱乐、文化中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目〔时尚、职业规划、读者反馈中挑选一个纳入该报事宜发表自己的观点．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主．写作要点：1．表示对客人的欢迎；2．介绍此项活动〔如活动目的、内容等3．表达对客人的祝愿；重要短语：reformsth〔代表,bereplacedby〔被代替,sharesthwithsb〔与某人分享某物,needlesstosay〔更不用说,accordingto〔根据,havepositiveeffectson〔对…有影响,beofgreatsignificance〔非常有意义,lossof〔损失,keepfit〔保持健康,contributesto〔促成,broadenone'shorizons〔拓宽某人的视野,inturn〔反过来又,bebeneficialto〔对…有益．[高分句型一]1．①Comparedtotheentertainment,Iholdtheview②thatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandcultureismoreimportant．①此处是过去分词作状语,主句为"Iholdtheviewthatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandcultureismoreimportant",主句的主语为"I"与所给动词存在逻辑上的被动关系．②此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句,"that"引导的同位语从句解释说明"view"的具体内容．[高分句型二]2．Themainfactoristhatitisofgreatsignificancetokeephealthywhilelossofhealthmeanskissinggoodbyetolife．此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句,主语为"Themainfactor",谓语动词为"is"．[高分句型三]3．theprogressinacquiringculturescontributestobroadeningone'shorizons,whichinturnisbeneficialtoone'sstudyandtheestablishmentofphilosophyoflife．此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句,"which"在从句中作主语,指代前面整个主句的内容．[高分句型四]4．HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishPost．此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句,连接词"that"解释说明名词"hope"的具体内容．[解答]DearEditor,I'velearnedthatourEnglishPostisbeingreformedandoneofthethreecolumnsistobereplacedbyanewone．I'mwritingthise﹣mailtosharewithyoumyopinions．Needlesstosay,thecolumnswilldefinitelybedesignedaccordingtostudents'interestandhavepositiveeffectsontheirstudyandlife．〔写信的目的Comparedtotheentertainment,Iholdtheviewthatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandcultureismoreimportant．[高分句型一]Themainfactoristhatitisofgreatsignificancetokeephealthywhilelossofhealthmeanskissinggoodbyetolife．[高分句型二]Consequently,moreknowledgeofhowtokeepfitcanimprovethequalityoflife．Inaddition,theprogressinacquiringculturescontributestobroadeningone'shorizons,whichinturnisbeneficialtoone'sstudyandtheestablishmentofphilosophyoflife．[高分句型三]〔建议去除的栏目及去除的理由Furthermore,thecareerplanningshouldbetakenintoaccountintheschoolEnglishPost．Ontheonehand,itcoversone'scareerdevelopmentagreatdeal．Ontheotherhand,itmakesagreatdifferencetoone'scareersuccessinthefuture．〔建议增加的栏目及去除的理由Whathasbeenmentionedaboveismypersonalideas．HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishPost．[高分句型四]〔希望Yourssincerely,ChengFei[点评]提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．4．请描述如图所示的图片,并谈谈你的感受．[分析]本文为看图作文,主题是"要用积极乐观的心态面对生活"．写作时可按"三段式"来写,首先描述图片点明主题,然后分析概述其含义,发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：dosomeactions〔做一些动作…,looklike…〔看上去像…,befacedwith〔面临,面对,managetodo〔成功地做某事,haveapositiveattitudetoward…〔对…有积极的态度,havegreatinfluenceon〔有很大影响,keeppeace〔保持平静．[解答]Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,anoldgrannywholooksuglyinawheelchairdoessomeactions．Theactionsreflectonthewall,whichmakesherlooklikeayoungbeautifulgirl．〔描述图片[高分句型]Thepictureconveysthatsomepeoplearepositivewhentheyarefacedwithlife．Theyarealwayssoenergeticandenterprisingthattheymanagetofinishmostoftaskswell．Lifereturnscolortothosepeoplewhohavepositiveandoptimisticattitudestowardlife．〔联系实际,反映问题[高分句型]Nowthatapositiveattitudecanleadusabetterlife,howcanwedevelopapositiveattitude？Foronething,weshouldholdadreamaboutfuturetoprovideourlifeacleardirection．Foranother,itisnecessaryforustobeconfidentwhichistheenergyoflife,perhapsthebeautyoflife．[高分句型]Whetherwecanfindithaveagreatinfluenceonourattitudetowardslife,soweshouldkeeppeaceinourhearttofindthebeautyoflife．Inmyopinion,ifwecandolikethatmentionedabove,betterlifewillhugustightly．〔观点[点评]写作看图作文时,首先认真看图,结合图片和文字,确定所要表达的主题是什么,然后围绕主题,提炼要点,合理想象,对译出的要点通过合理的组合,加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．5．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．[分析]高分句型：句型一：①ThereasonwhyIstillkeepitinmymemoryis②thatitremindsmeofanoldsaying：theremustbeauseforone'stalent．Thereasonwhy…是以reason为先行词,关系副词why引导的定语从句．在that引导的表语从句中含有短语remindsb．ofsth．使某人想起某物．句型二：①WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldman②livinginmyneighborhood．when引导时间状语从句,在从句中作状语．living是现在分词作后置定语,与其逻辑主语man是主动关系．[解答]Inmydrawer,thereisadeliberatewoodentoyhorse．〔开门见山,指出珍藏的物品ItwasagiftfromanoldmaninmyneighborhoodwhenIwasstillveryyoung．ThereasonwhyIstillkeepitinmymemoryisthatitremindsmeofanoldsaying：theremustbeauseforone'stalent．[高分句型一]WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldmanlivinginmyneighborhood．[高分句型一]Hedidn'thavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodfurniture．Everytimepeoplewenttoaskhimtosolvesomeproblemsoffurniture,hewaswillingtohelpthem．Tomysurprise,inhissparetime,hewouldmakesometoyswithsmallpiecesofwood．Someofthemweresoldtothetoystoreandothersweregiventous．〔具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品ThemomentIseethelovelytoyhorsemadebythisoldman,Iwouldrememberthehappychildhood．Theoldmanimpressedmedeeplywithhistalentandkindness．Fromthelittlehorsetoy,wecanseewhateverkindoftalentyouhave,youcanfindyourownmethodtodisplayyourtalentandbringlovetoothers．〔这件物品为什么珍藏到现在的原因[点评]本文要求描写一件你珍藏的物品,要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．所以在写作时必须审好题,不能遗漏任何一条．在准确表述内容的基础上,争取多用些从句,非谓语和短语使文章生动,上档次．6．你叫Jenny,你的网友Peter〔高一学生即将面临期末考试,近日,他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教,请给Peter回复一封电子邮件,邮件必须包括以下内容：结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．Hearingthatyou'rewonderingwhetheryoushouldinviteatutortohelpyouprepareforthecomingfinalexamination,I'mshockedandI'llgiveyouanexact'No'．Atutorcostshigh,usually150yuanormoreperhour,whichyoumaynotbeabletoafford．Besides,havingstudiedthatdetailedinformationoftutorclassesfrommyclassmates,Ifindthatmostoftheinformationissimilartothatofschool's,whichisevenwithlittleornoextendedmaterials,soit'sabsolutelynouseifyoulistentotheteacherswithfullattentionintheschoolandreviewwhatisonyournotebookcarefullyafterclass．What'smore,atutormaymakeyoudependfullyonhimandloseyourself﹣motivationonstudy,whichisexactlythetruthofstudy．Withoutit,youmayneverlearnbetter．Andthat'swhyIsaythere'snoneedforyoutoinviteahometutor．Whenitcomestopreparingfortheexam,I'dliketogiveyoutwosuggestions．First,reviewthepointswhichyou'repoorat．Youwillachievetwicetheresultwithhalftheeffortifreviewingthenotesaccompaniedwithseveralparticularexercises．Second,checkallthenotesandmakesurethatyou'vecapturedallthedetails．TryhardandIbelieveyoucanachieveagoodscoreintheexam．．[分析]本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息,写一封电子邮件,就即将面临期末考试的高一学生Peter是否要请家教来帮他来复习迎考表达观点并提供建议．写作要点包括：1．结合自身学习经历表达观点及理由；2．就复习迎考提出主要建议．写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：invitesbtodo〔邀请某人做某事,preparefor〔为…作准备,beabletodo〔能够做某事,besimilarto〔与…相似,dependon〔取决于,依赖,beofnouse〔没有用处,Whenitcomesto…〔当谈到,涉及到,bepoorat〔在…薄弱,beaccompaniedwith〔带有,兼有,captureallthedetails〔掌握所有细节,achieveagoodscore〔取得好成绩．[高分句型]1．Hearingthatyou'rewonderingwhetheryoushouldinviteatutortohelpyouprepareforthecomingfinalexamination,I'mshockedandI'llgiveyouanexact'No'．这里是由现在分词hearing作状语,主句为I'mshockedandI'llgiveyouanexact'No',主句的主语为I与所给动词hear存在逻辑上的主动关系．2．Atutorcostshigh,usually150yuanormoreperhour,whichyoumaynotbeabletoafford．这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在从句中作宾语,指代前面的名词150yuanormoreperhour．3．Ifindthatmostoftheinformationissimilarto②thatofschool's,①whichisevenwithlittleornoextendedmaterials,③soit'sabsolutelynouseifyoulistentotheteacherswithfullattentionintheschoolandreviewwhatisonyournotebookcarefullyafterclass．①这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在从句中作主语,指代前面整个主句的内容．②这里是代词that可指代前面的名词theinformation,that=the+名词．③这里是由连词so引导的句子,与前面的句子Ifindthatmostoftheinformationissimilartothatofschool's,whichisevenwithlittleornoextendedmaterials构成因果关系．[解答]Hearingthatyou'rewonderingwhetheryoushouldinviteatutortohelpyouprepareforthecomingfinalexamination,I'mshockedandI'llgiveyouanexact'No'．[高分句型]〔表达观点Atutorcostshigh,usually150yuanormoreperhour,whichyoumaynotbeabletoafford．[高分句型]Besides,havingstudiedthatdetailedinformationoftutorclassesfrommyclassmates,Ifindthatmostoftheinformationissimilartothatofschool's,whichisevenwithlittleornoextendedmaterials,soit'sabsolutelynouseifyoulistentotheteacherswithfullattentionintheschoolandreviewwhatisonyournotebookcarefullyafterclass．[高分句型]What'smore,atutormaymakeyoudependfullyonhimandloseyourself﹣motivationonstudy,whichisexactlythetruthofstudy．[高分句型]Withoutit,youmayneverlearnbetter．Andthat'swhyIsaythere'snoneedforyoutoinviteahometutor．〔理由Whenitcomestopreparingfortheexam,I'dliketogiveyoutwosuggestions．First,reviewthepointswhichyou'repoorat．Youwillachievetwicetheresultwithhalftheeffortifreviewingthenotesaccompaniedwithseveralparticularexercises．Second,checkallthenotesandmakesurethatyou'vecapturedallthedetails．[高分句型]〔建议TryhardandIbelieveyoucanachieveagoodscoreintheexam．〔结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括[点评]提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市,请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市,并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写．[分析]本文是图表作文,根据文章图表和所给提示信息写一篇短文,阐述你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市,考虑在就业、娱乐、环境等方面选择一座比较满意的城市并说明理由．写作要点：1．概述图表；2．选择城市B的理由；3．结尾点题．写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．重要短语：illustratesth〔解释某事,asfollows〔如下,accordingto〔根据,inone'sopinion〔某人认为,playsavitalrolein〔起重要作用,affectsth〔影响某物,aswell〔也,dosomerecreationalactivities〔进行一些娱乐活动,suchas〔例如,intermsof〔就…而言,meetourneeds〔同时,allinall〔问题的答案,takesthintoaccount〔许诺某人某事,embracethelife〔许诺某人某事．[高分句型一]1．①what'simportanttomyfamilyis②thatwecanliveinacitywithapleasantenvironment③whichnotonlyplaysavitalroleinourphysicalfitness,butgreatlyaffectsourmentalhealthaswell．①此处是由连接代词"what"引导的主语从句,"what"在主语从句中作主语．②此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句,"that"在从句中起连接词的作用,无意义．③此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句,"which"在定语从句中作主语,先行词为"environmen",定语从句中由"notonly…,butalso…"结构连接两个谓语动词．[高分句型二]2．What'smore,wecanseethattheemploymentinCityBisnotsobadfromthechat,whichisbetterthanCityC．此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句,关系代词"which"在从句中作主语,指代前面整个主句的内容．[解答]Thisbarchartillustratesthesatisfactionofemployment、entertainmentandenvironmentinthreecities．Amongallthecitiesinvolved,accordingtothesituationofmyfamily,plantomovetoCityB．Ihavesomereasonsasfollows．〔概述图表Firstly,CityBhasthesecondbestenvironmentofallthethreecities．Inmyopinion,what'simportanttomyfamilyisthatwecanliveinacitywithapleasantenvironmentwhichnotonlyplaysavitalroleinourphysicalfitness,butgreatlyaffectsourmentalhealthaswell．[高分句型一]〔选择城市B的理由一Secondly,therearethreeyoungmembersincludingmeinmyfamily,andwealwaysdosomerecreationalactivitiestogether,suchasgoingshoppinganddoingsomesports．Intermsofentertainment,CityBcanmeetourneedsmorethantheothercities．〔选择城市B的理由二What'smore,wecanseethattheemploymentinCityBisnotsobadfromthechat,whichisbetterthanCityC．[高分句型二]MyparentsarebothseniorengineersandIhavenoworriesaboutthem．Forme,I'mjustahighschoolstudent,employmentisnotmypriority．IknowifIstudyhardformnowon,Icanfindagoodjobwithoutanydoubtinthenearfuture．〔选择城市B的理由三Allinall,aftertakingwhatmyfamilyneedintoaccount．CityBismyfirstchoice．Ilookforwardtoembracingthelifeofthenewcity．〔结尾点题[点评]表格类作文写作要注意：1不同文体的格式,避免"填表式"表达.2灵活变通,避免"硬译式",表达表格中的汉语提示简洁凝练,概括性强,表达时切忌逐字逐句翻译,要做灵活调整或进行补充；较为抽象、复杂的汉语提示应善于变通转换．3衔接,避免"单句式"表达,使全文语篇通顺连贯．8．你班将召开一次主题班会,探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考,写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．Boysandgirs,Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpainsbutwecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely．First,someofusareupsetabouttheirfiguresandlooks．It'sunnecessaryandit'snotimpoatantatall．Weneedn'tcareaboutit．Itisone'sinnerbeautythatmatters．〔高分句型Second,wesometimesseemtobemisunderstoodbyourteachers,parentsandclassmates．Facingthis,wecanfindapropertimetohaveahearttohearttalkwiththem,tryingtoremovethemisunderstanding．〔高分句型Someofushavefewerfriends．Ithinkbeingopenmindedandfriendlywilldousgood．Third,weworkefficiently,fullofdetermination．Last,someofusdon'thavemuchpocketmoney,sotheyfeelunhappy．〔说明原因Isn'titstrange？Solongaswehavesome,that'senough．Andwecanlearntoearnmoney!That'sall．Thankyou．．[分析]高分句型一：Itisone'sinnerbeautythatmatters．一个人的内在美是最重要的．高分句型二：Facingthis,wecanfindapropertimetohaveahearttohearttalkwiththem,tryingtoremovethemisunderstanding．面对这些,我们能找到一个合适的时机和他们进行心灵的沟通,尽量的消除误会．句型一该句是一个强调句,被强调部分为句子的主语．原句为：one'sinnerbeautymatters．句型二①Facingthis,此处使用了现在分词作状语,表主动②tryingtoremovethemisunderstanding．此处使用了现在分词作伴随状语[解答]Boysandgirs,Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpainsbutwecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely．First,someofusareupsetabouttheirfiguresandlooks．It'sunnecessaryandit'snotimpoatantatall．Weneedn'tcareaboutit．Itisone'sinnerbeautythatmatters．〔高分句型Second,wesometimesseemtobemisunderstoodbyourteachers,parentsandclassmates．Facingthis,wecanfindapropertimetohaveahearttohearttalkwiththem,tryingtoremovethemisunderstanding．〔高分句型Someofushavefewerfriends．Ithinkbeingopenmindedandfriendlywilldousgood．Third,weworkefficiently,fullofdetermination．Last,someofusdon'thavemuchpocketmoney,sotheyfeelunhappy．〔说明原因Isn'titstrange？Solongaswehavesome,that'senough．Andwecanlearntoearnmoney!That'sall．Thankyou．[点评]本书面表达是一篇议论文,写作时应注意根据所提观点进行符合逻辑的论述．9．Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120﹣150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动,有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对．作为班级的一员,请你根据你的实际情况,在三项方案中选择其一,提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由．你的写作中必须包括：在三项方案中选择其一；对该方案提出建议；谈谈你提出建议的理由．Recently,whathasbecomeaheatedtopicofourclassisthatanimportantdecisionaboutthecomingwinterfestivaleventmustbemadeamongthreedifferentchoices．Afteracarefulconsideration,theproposaltoholdaNewYearPartyearnsmyfavor．Severalsuggestionsaboutthepartyarelistedasfollows．Firstly,aclearandabsorbingthememustbesettled．Onlywithaspecifictheme,suchasWelcomingtheNewOurselvesorChangesintheNewYear,canweeventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations．Besides,aproperscheduleandanamelistarenecessary．Inotherwords,whentoholdthepartyandwhowillattenditaresuretomakeabigdifferenceinitsevolvingpurposeand,moreimportantly,thesuccess．Lastbutnotleast,abouttheexpense,anyamountofmoneywespendshallbelisted,throughwhichwecanbettercontrolthewholeprocessandmakefulluseoftheresourceswehave．Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,ifallthesesuggestionscanbecarriedoutstrictly,itisnosurprisethatourNewYearPartywillleaveadeepimpressiononeveryone．．[分析]本文是一篇提纲作文,根据所提供的材料,写一短文,就寒假组织的班级活动的三种方案中进行选择,提出建议并阐述理由．写作要点包括：1．选择哪一种班级活动方案；2．提出建议；3．阐述理由．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：aheatedtopic〔一个热门话题,asfollows〔如下,workout〔解决,makeabigdifference〔起作用,产生影响,makefulluseof〔充分利用,carryout〔实施,执行,leaveadeepimpressiononeveryone〔给每个人留下深刻印象．[解答]Recently,whathasbecomeaheatedtopicofourclassisthatanimportantdecisionaboutthecomingwinterfestivaleventmustbemadeamongthreedifferentchoices．Afteracarefulconsideration,theproposaltoholdaNewYearPartyearnsmyfavor．〔选择组织班级新年派对Severalsuggestionsaboutthepartyarelistedasfollows．Firstly,aclearandabsorbingthememustbesettled．Onlywithaspecifictheme,suchasWelcomingtheNewOurselvesorChangesintheNewYear,canweeventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations．[高分句型]Besides,aproperscheduleandanamelistarenecessary．Inotherwords,whentoholdthepartyandwhowillattenditaresuretomakeabigdifferenceinitsevolvingpurposeand,moreimportantly,thesuccess．[高分句型]Lastbutnotleast,abouttheexpense,anyamountofmoneywespendshallbelisted,throughwhichwecanbettercontrolthewholeprocessandmakethefulluseoftheresourceswehave．[高分句型]〔提出建议并陈述理由Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,ifallthesesuggestionscanbecarriedoutstrictly,itisnosurprisethatourNewYearPartywillleaveadeepimpressiononeveryone．〔结尾总结[点评]提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点,并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．10．假如你是某中学高三〔1班的学生李明,写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师,因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容：•简要介绍个人特长•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员,对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议注意：文中请勿提及真实学校DearSir/Madam．[分析]本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息,写一封信．写作要点包括：1．描述你在高中生活中遇到的最大挑战；2．介绍你的应对措施及感悟．写作时时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一和第二人称为主．重要短语：havegreatinterestin〔对…有兴趣,inhopeof〔希望,inone'sopinion〔某人看来,involvesth〔牵连,卷入…,beexposedto〔接触；暴露于；遭受,putsomethinginorder〔使…有秩序,takenotesof〔记笔记,abigdeal〔重要事情,extendtheefficiency〔提高效率,dueto〔由于,actas〔充当,作为…,broadenone'shorizon〔扩大眼界…,admitsbinto〔允许某人进入…,lookforwardto〔期望…．[高分句型]1．thusputtingthemessybooksingoodorderaswellastakingnotesofthedetailsinthelibraryworkisnotabigdealforme．这里是动名词puttingthemessybooksingoodorderaswellastakingnotesofthedetailsinthelibrarywork作主语,句子的谓语动词是is,表语为notabigdealforme．主语中由aswellas连接了两个并列的动名词．2．Ifaccepted,Iwonderifthenumberofschoollibrarycanbeincreased．这里是if从句中的省略,可理解为IfIamaccepted,主句为Iwonderifthenumberofschoollibrarycanbeincreased,主句中是由if引导的宾语从句．[解答]DearSir/Madam,IamLiMinginGrade3Class1．I'mwritingtoexpressthatIhavegreatinterestinthepositionofanafter﹣schoollibrarian．Ihavepreparedfullyinhopeofbeingaccepted．〔表达希望成为课余学生图书管里员的愿望Inmyopinion,thisjobinvolvespatienceandresponsibility．Havingbeenamemberofthestudentsunionfortwoyears,Ihavebeenexposedtovarioustrivialthings,thusputtingthemessybooksingoodorderaswellastakingnotesofthedetailsinthelibraryworkisnotabigdealforme．[高分句型]Moreover,Iknowtothelargestcontentwhattherealconceptofteamworkis．Enoughemphasisoncollectivebenefitshasalwayshelpedmeextendtheefficiencyduetomyexperienceinafter﹣schoolactivities．ThusIbelievethisexperiencewillhelpmedobetterifIgetthisjob．〔介绍个人特长Ifaccepted,Iwonderifthenumberofschoollibrarycanbeincreased．[高分句型]Weknowbooksactasawaytobroadenourhorizon,thusthemorebookswehave,themoreaccessestoknowledgewecanhave．[高分句型]〔对学校图书管里提出一些建议Iwillappreciateyourkindnessifyouadmitmeintotheafter﹣sch