高考英语建议信2

建议信2廖泽凯得分情况课外作业Lora来信说他想利用暑假打工，但父母不同意。假定你是李华，请给Lora写一封回信。要点如下：1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。2.

Lora父母不同意的理由。3.你给Lora的具体建议。注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearLora,Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadvice.

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Anyway,Iwouldbemorethanhappytowishyouapleasantsummer.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua第一人称和第二人称一般现在时1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。2.

Lora父母不同的理由。3.你给Lora的具体建议。第一段：你〔Lora〕打算暑假打工，你的父母不同意。第二段：父母不同意的理由。第三段：我给的建议第四段：我希望你过一个愉快的暑假。模板+单词+短语+句型1.人称和时态所有同学均使用了第一人称指代LiHua；第二人称指代Lora。所有同学均使用了一般现在时表述文章的主体局部。2.要点和结构使用了四段，且第二段讲述了“你的父母不同意做兼职工作的原因”；第四段讲述了“我的建议”的同学：黄圆圆；陈典；邓一飞；张志文；柳昂然。3.表达：建议信模板DearJim，

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter______formyadvice___howto________(引出主题).

Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto______.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato______.Youcanalso_____.(此三句不同的句式提出建议).Asto___,Isuggest_____(有时根据需要,具体到某一反面).Inaddition,_____(其他建议).I'msure_____(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).

I'mlookingforwardto_____(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,XXaskingon说服某人做某事persuadesb.intodoingsth.同意某人agreewithsb.就...达成一致意见agreeon/aboutsth.同意某人做某事agreethatsb.coulddosth.做兼职工作doapart-timejob3.表达：单词，短语，句型说服你的妈妈同意你做兼职工作persuadeyourmotherintoagreeingthatyoucoulddoaparttimejob认为学习是最重要的任务regardlearningasthemostimportanttask太小了不适应工作tooyoungtowork利用暑假来学习makeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy平安adj.safe平安n.safety做某事太危险itisdangerousforsb.todosth.单独一人工作太危险itisdangerousforyoutoworkalone.和某人贴心交谈haveaheart-to-hearttalkwithsb.为学习和工作制作一个详细的方案makeadetailedplanforyourstudyandwork足够大来处理好事情beoldenoughtomanagethingsproperly让你的朋友和你一起工作askyourfriendstoworktogetherwithyou让某人知晓〔你的情况〕keepsb.informed3.语篇评讲Trytofindadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthesesentencesbyyourselves!Trytoimprovethosesentences〔大家来找“茬”〕第一段：孙思源Thewordcomesthatyourparentsdisagreewithyoudopart-timejobduringsummervacation.优点：Thewordcomesthat据说缺乏：disagree用法错误提升方法：不同意某人做某事disagreethatsb.coulddosth.Thewordcomesthatyourparentsdisagreethatyoucoulddoapart-timejobduringsummervacation词组，句型提升第一段：肖诗颖Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtomakeuseofsummerpart-timegiveyourparentsagreement.优点：Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceon...缺乏：语法错误，句子太长！提升方法：用persuade和agree表达“说服你的父母同意你能在暑假做兼职”.词组句型提升：Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtopersuade〔吴晓龙，柳昂然〕yourparentsintoagreeingthatyoucoulddoapart-timejobinsummervacation.词组，句型提升Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtopersuadeyourparentsintoagreeingthatyoucoulddoapart-timejobinsummervacation.Whatiswrongwiththissentences？Itistoolong！刘灿Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingmyadviceonsummerpart-timejob.Youwanttodoapart-timejob.Butyourparentsdisagreed.Herearemyconstructive〔魏康〕suggestions.句号，连词分割，分句表达第二段刘辉：Theydon'tagreeit,Maybetheyjustworryyoursafeoryourage.优点：理由充分：考虑到平安和年龄。缺乏：1.agree表达不同意某人？maybe的词性？safe的词性？提高：他们不同意你，因为他们仅仅只是担忧你的平安；并且他们认为你太小了，而不适合做兼职。Theydon'tagreewithyou,becausetheyjustworryaboutyoursafety〔姜民扬〕.Besides，theymaythinkyouaretooyoungtowork.连词，过渡词连接，分句表达！吴玉兰：Ithinkyoushouldputyouselfinyourparents'sshoes.Maybeintheiropinions,theythinkyouaretooyoungtodoapart-timejob.优点：putonselfinonesshoes：与某人换位思考缺乏：parents’谚语，名言提升作文！Whichsentencedoyoulikebest？第二段〔张泽士〕Butyourparentsdisagree.Theysaidthatwillinfluenceyourstudy.〔陶琼〕Theythinkthestudyismoreimportantthanpart-timejob.〔范文〕Yourparentsmayregardlearningasthemostimportanttaskforyou.Perhapsthey'dlikeyoutomakeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy.第三段：陈雪梅Butyoualsoknowgetajobinthissummerholidayisbeneficialforyourability.Soclamyourselfdownandhaveacommunicationwithyourparentstheymustunderstandwithyoutoo!优点：逻辑连贯，说理充分缺乏：语法错误提升Butyoualsoknowgettingajobinthissummerholidayisbeneficialforyourability.Soclamyourselfdownandhaveaheart-to-hearttalkwithyourparents〔罗七一〕.Ibelievetheycanunderstandyoutoo!动名词做主语，句型，分割句子，单词用法！黄圆圆However,ifyoureallyhaveaninteresttodothepartjob,itisvitalthatyoushouldtakesaftetyintoaccount.优点：itisvitalthatshould+do原型takesth.intoaccount缺乏：搭配错误提升：However,ifyoureallyhaveaninterestindoingthepart-timejob,itisvitalthatyoushouldtakesafetyintoaccount.短语用法提升！黄子恒Butremember,don'tqurrelwithyourparents.Ifyoudothis,yourparentswillfeelsadandtheywillneveragreeyourplan.优点：建议中提到了本卷须知。缺乏：语法错误，agreeonyourplan提升：吴玉兰Ifyourparentsstilldisgreewithyou，youshouldfollowtheiradviceanddon'targuewiththem.程博Iftheystilldon'tagree,Iadviseyoutalkwithyourparentspatiently,(and)don'tbeangrywiththem.王婷：Inmyopinion,youcanfindajobinalibrarysothatyoucannotonlygetajob,butalsostudyingatthesametime.Itmaybeawin-winidea.优点：图书馆工作，学习工作两不误notonly...butalso...不仅...而且...awin-winidea双赢的方法；缺乏：studying改为study邱骞Theyareafraidyouindanger,too.SoIthinkyou