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Writeaboutyourcity

完成作文Wherewouldyouliketogoonweekends?BeforewritingCentralStreetHeilongjiangProvinceLibraryQiulinCompanySunIslandthemostfamousbusinessstreetthebestlibrarythemostpopularshoppingmallthemostbeautifulpark3aReadthearticleaboutGreenwoodPark.Answerthefollowingquestions.读短文，回答问题Whatcanthewriterdointhepark?BeforewritingReadandthink

GreenwoodParkisthebestplacetogotoonweekends.IalwaysfinishmybreakfastthefastestonSaturdaysbecauseIwanttogettoGreenwoodParkbefore10:00a.m.tomeetmyfriends.Theparkisthemostcrowdedplaceonweekendsbecausealmosteveryonegoestheretoseethestreetperformers.Somepeoplethinktheyareboring,butIthinktheyarethemostcreativepeople.However,theplacewhereyoucanenjoyyourtimethemostquietlyisatoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.Youcanreadorrelaxthere.ThereissomethingforeveryoneatGreenwoodPark.3aReadthearticleaboutGreenwoodPark.Answerthefollowingquestions.读短文，回答问题Whatcanthewriterdointhepark?BeforewritingMeetfriends.Seethestreetperformers.Readorrelaxinoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.3aReadthefirstandthelastsentencesofthearticle,thinkoverwhat'sthefunctionofthem?读一读文章的首句和结尾句，想一想首尾句的作用是什么？BeforewritingGreenwoodParkis_______placetogotoonweekends.Ialwaysfinishmybreakfast___________onSaturdaysbecauseIwanttogettoGreenwoodParkbefore10:00a.m.tomeetmyfriends.Theparkis_____________placeonweekendsbecausealmosteveryonegoestheretoseethestreetperformers.Somepeoplethinktheyareboring,butIthinktheyarethemostcreativepeople.However,theplacewhereyoucanenjoyyourtimethemostquietlyisatoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.Youcanreadorrelaxthere.ThereissomethingforeveryoneatGreenwoodPark.thebest(the)fastestthemostcrowded总起句:点明描述对象Beforewriting:分析结构正文：描述所见所做的活动总结句：概括描述对象的特点3bMindmap:ThinkaboutsomeofthebestplacesinHarbin.（小组讨论，选择一项，完成思维导图）BestplacesinmyHarbinWhy?BestbusinessstreetCentralstreetBecauseBestshopNew100ShoppingMallBestParkSunIslandBestschoolNo.3SeniorHighSchoolthemostfamousbusinessstreetthemostcreativebuildingsthebiggestbookstoreCentralbookstorethemostcomfortablecinemathemostdeliciousModernIcelollyModerncolddrinks

themostpopularwesternfoodrestaurantCentralShoppingMallthebestshoppingmallCentralStreetEuropeanbuildingsthebiggestbookstorethemostcomfortablecinemaThemostfamouscolddrinksthemostpopularwesternfoodrestaurantthebestshoppingmallEnjoyandlearnknowledgeofwesternculture

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松鼠岛CreativeWritingTime请你根据已完成的思维导图,选择其中一项，写一篇短文介绍一个最好的地方。BestplacesinmyHarbinWhy?bestmiddleschoolNo.3SeniorHighSchoolBecauseBestshopNew100ShoppingMallBestParkSunIslandBestbusinessstreetCentralstreet读一读下面这些开头句和结尾句，希望对你的作文有帮助和启迪。1.Ifyouwanttoenjoyyourselfatweekends,GreenwoodParkisyourbestchoice.

2.GreenwoodParkisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinourcity.3.GreenwoodParkisafantasticplaceforyoutospendweekends.4.WelcometoGreenwoodPark---awonderfulplacetorelaxyourself.5.GreenwoodParkisreallyworth(值得)visiting.6.GreenwoodParkissobeautifulthatitattracts(吸引)alargenumberofvisitorstocometoenjoyitsbeauty.7.EveryonewillhaveagoodtimeatGreenwoodPark.读一读下面这些开头句和结尾句，希望对你的作文有帮助和启迪。wonderfultidycomfortableinterestingcleanenjoyablefantasticbeautifulprettypopularfamouscreativefreshbestcrowdedoneofthe…WordsyoucanusetodescribeCreativeWritingTime请你根据已完成的思维导图,选择其中一项，写一篇短文介绍一个最好的地方。BestplacesinmyHarbinWhy?bestmiddleschoolNo.3SeniorHighSchoolBecauseBestshopNew100ShoppingMallBestParkSunIslandBestbusinessstreetCentralstreetShowtime

写作提升Howtoimproveyourcomposition?Readthetwopassages,andcomparewhichisbetter.AcompositionfromTomNo.3SeniorHighSchoolisthebestschoolinHarbin.Thecoursesareinteresting.Therearemanyforeignteachers.Therearemanycolorfulactivitiesinthisschool.Thisisthebestplacetostudy.问题：机械的翻译，无关联词无过渡句。句式单一，对信息没有适度添加细节。AcompositionfromSam

No.3SeniorHighschoolisawonderfulplacetostartyourdream.Theenvironmentofthisschooliscleanandtidy,andallthestudentsstudyinghereareactiveandenergy.

Lotsofinterestingandhelpfulcoursescanbelearnedhere.Also,thereareagreatnumberof

foreignteacherswhowillbringoutthebestinyou.What’smore,everyoneofyouhasachancetotakepartinthecolorfulandmeaningfulactivities.Youcannotonlygainalot,buthavefunbyattendingtheactivities.Whata

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