2024年-2024全国卷改错及答案

年〔全国卷I〕Oneofmyunforgettable\o"memory是什么意思"memoryofmy\o"school是什么意思"schoolin

Xinjiangisthatofluncheswebroughtfromourhomes.

Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingto

school.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.Sincethelunch

bellfinallyrang,myfriendsandmemetunderatalltree

andhadourlunches.MybestfriendAiguliewasused

toshareherNangwithme.Nangisaspeciallykindof

cakeinXinjiang.Ilikethemverymuch.Now

Aigulieand

Istudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachother

duringthesummervacation.IthinkoverheralotandImiss

thefoodandthegoodtimewehadtogether.2024年〔全国卷II〕DearGeorge,It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenowbackhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaroundyourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.Afterwesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,thatwestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfondofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayinganothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.Itwasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou'dliketomaketriptoourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.Yours,Mike2024年〔全国卷I〕Everyoneofuscanmakeagreateffortstocutofftheuseofenergyinourcountry.Tobeginwith,allofuscanstartreducingtotheuseofoilbydrivingonlywhenwehavearealneed.Thatwon'teasy,Iknow，butwehavetostartanywhere.What'smore,wecangotoworkbybikeonceandtwiceaweek,andwecanalsobuysmallercarsthatburnlessoil.Otherwayistowatchoureverydayuseofwaterandelectricathome.Forexample,howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere?2024年〔全国卷II〕I’mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannotlivewithoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycangowithoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,nodrinkingwatershouldleftrunning.Third,weshouldfindwaystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybathwaterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater. Sincerely,LiHua2024年新课标1Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.2024年(全国一卷〕MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.2024年(全国一卷〕Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes〔圣女果〕inourbackgarden,sincethenforalltheseyearwehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatoncost!2024年(全国二卷〕Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessoninthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroom,buildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.〔2024全国一卷〕WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.〔2024全国二卷〕2024全国卷一 MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.2024全国卷二Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.2024年〔全国卷I〕76.把memory改为memories。77.在lunches前面加the。78.把hold改为held。79.把Since改为When/After。80.me改为I81.把was去掉。82.把specially改为special。83.把them改为it。84.把or改为and。85.把over改为of。2024年〔全国卷II〕76.aftersince77.themus78.forwith79.That改为Where80.去掉much81.stayingstay82.daydays83.flyflew84.trip前a85.bettermore2024年〔全国卷I〕1.efforts改为effort2.off改为down3.把to删掉4.won'tbe5.anywheresomewhere6.and—or7.OtherAnother8.electric—electricity9.and改为but10television后加on2024年〔全国卷II〕left改为beleft2024年新课标11.hold改为hold2.passes改为passed3.much改为well/clearly4.shoulder改为shoulders5.toward改为to/into6.himself改为him7.hewas改为andhewas8.去a9.during改为when10.never改为ever2024年新课标21.去of2.Have改为Having3.that改为which4.becomes改为became5.ofday改为oftheday6.Interesting改为Interestingly7.by改为with/to8.drank改为drunk9.goodcup改为goodcups10.grow改为growth2024年(全国一卷〕1.visit改为visited2.but改为and/so3.comfortably改为comfortable4.were改为was5.for改为with6.for→with7．taking→takentake8．dish→dishes9．such后加asuch10．me→mine2024年(全国二卷〕1.before改成ago;2.for去掉；3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately4.week改为weeks；5.so改为but；6.will改为would；7.myself改为me8.farther改为far;9.interested改为interesting;10.truth前面加the2024年(全国一卷〕2024年(全国二卷〕Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.TheyarethreelessonThereinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.don’tmuchTherefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.hoursMydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowerslooksandtreesaroundtheclassroom,buildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythesitlakelistening∧music.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourtohelpfulteachersbutalsoourfriends.〔2024全国一卷〕WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivingthoughtinacity,butImissmyhomein∧countryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.theandUnfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotswithofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairsseriousairwebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.WemustfoundwaystoManyfindprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.our/the〔2024全国二卷〕.parent改为parents 72.on改为in 73.very去掉74.looks改为looking 75.where改为that 76.begun改为began77.telling改为told 78.a改为the 79.saw后加his80.terrible改为terribly2024全国卷一1that→where2去掉but3had→have4honest→honesty5or→and6using→used7dreams后加of8the→a9our→his10steady→steadily2024全国卷二答案】1.how改为what2.chose改为choose3.take改为taking4.but改为and5.about后加the6.your改为our7.kn