2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典专题09读后续写15种情景高分句式仿写积累（讲义）（背诵版）

《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》专题09读后续写15种情景高分句式仿写素材积累（讲义）（背诵版）01表示“感到……情绪与情感”场景[句式1]aflushof＋表情绪的名词＝awave/feeling/senseof...一阵……[句式2]表情绪的名词＋floodedoversb/sweptoversb/seizedsb……涌上心头1．Aflushofpridesweptoverhimashewatchedhischildren.＝Hefeltaflushofprideashewatchedhischildren.当他看着自己孩子的时候，一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。2．(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Andmuchsoonerthancouldbeexpected，Bernardreturnedwithanemptybasket.Neverbeforehadheearnedsomuchmoneyinhislife.Awaveofhappinessfloodedoverhim.一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。伯纳德带着一个空篮子回来，比预期的要快得多。他一生中从未挣过这么多钱。他感到高兴极了。3.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)

Tomysurprise,Ilearnedthatmyessayhad

ranked

firstinthecontest.

Amixofexcitementanddoubtwashedoverme.令我吃惊的是，我得知我的作品在比赛中排名第一。兴奋和怀疑涌上心头。02表示“直到……才意识到……”场景[句式1]Notuntil＋时间状语＋didsbrealize/noticethat...[句式2]Itwasonly＋时间状语＋thatsbrealizedthat...1．Notuntilthendidherealizethatsomethingwaswrong.＝Itwasonlythenthatherealizedthatsomethingwaswrong.直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。2．(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.ItwasonlythenthatIrealizedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.我看着大卫和其他赛跑者一起向起跑线上移动。比赛开始了。就在那时，我才意识到跑道对小孩子来说太长了，更不用说一个患有心脏病的孩子了。3.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Eageranddelighted,Iheldupthechampionshiptrophy,and

ItwasnotuntilthenthatIrealized

thejourneyofwritingwasnotonlyfilledwithdisbeliefandselfdoubtbutalsosupportandselfapproval.我急切又高兴地举起奖杯。指导那时我才意识到写作的历程不仅充满着不相信和自我怀疑，而且还充满着支持和自我肯定。03表示“一……，就……”场景[句式1]upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相当于assoonas引导的时间状语从句。[句式2]immediately/directly/instantly＋从句[句式3]themoment/minute/instant＋从句[句式4]nosooner...than.../hardly...when...[句式5]atthesight/thoughtof…1．TheinstantIsawhim,Iknewhewasthepolicemanwhohadhelpedmecarrythebox.我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。2．(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)“IgnorewhattheplayersfromotherteamswouldsayandIbelieveyoucouldmakeit！”Uponhearingmywords，Davidbeamedabigsmile，stoodupandmovedtowardsthestartingline.(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)“不管其他队的队员怎么说，我相信你能做到！”听到我的话，大卫笑了笑，站起来朝起跑线走去。3.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Uponhearingthis,I

couldfeelmyheartpoundingwildly

andmymindgoingunconsciouslybacktothedays

Irackedmybrainforstories.一听到这些话，我感到心跳加快，大脑不由自主回到那些绞尽脑汁编故事的日子。4.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)NosoonerhadI

steppedintothisfamiliarroom

than

Isawmyteachersittingamongpilesofpapers.

我刚一走进这个熟悉的房间就看到历史坐在一堆试卷前。5.(2023·浙江1月卷读后续写)Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthisgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.一看到这个感恩的蜂鸟我感到一阵宽慰和敬畏，当我爬进车里开走时我知道我会珍惜这些一起分担的记忆。04表示“(因为紧张、害怕)心跳”场景[句式1]sbcouldfeelone'sheartpoundingwildlyinone'schest感到心在胸中怦怦直跳[句式2]one'sheartthumped/raced/beatwildly/loudly/hard某人心怦怦直跳1．(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingwildlyasIwentonstagetocollecttheprize.上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。2．Heunfoldedtheletter,hisheartracing.他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。3．(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Theirheartsbegantothumpwildlyastheywereafraidofbeingscoldedbytheirfather.天哪！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们害怕被父亲责骂，心开始怦怦直跳。05表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”场景[句式1]sbcouldhardlywaittodosth[句式2]withoutasecondthought...不假思索；毫不犹豫地[句式3]withouteventhinking...连考虑都不考虑[句式4]withoutdelay...立即；毫不迟延地[句式5]withouthesitation...毫不犹豫1．Thewaterwasfreezingcold,butwithoutasecondthoughttheyoungmanjumpedin.水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。2．Withoutdelay,heclimbedupthetreequicklytoreachfortheleaf.他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。3．OnChristmasmorning,Icouldnotwaittoopenthepackage.Tomyexcitement,itwasabrand­newpairoficeskateswhichIwaseagerfor.圣诞节早晨，我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是，这是一双我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。4.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Mydevotionandperseverancereallymattered,butwithouthisencouragement,IcouldneverbewhatIwastoday.我的付出和坚持固然重要，但是没有他的鼓励我就不会有今天的成就。06表示“流泪”场景[句式1]One'seyesgotmisty./One'seyesmistedwithtears.泪眼模糊[句式2]beclosetotears几乎要哭了[句式3]tearsrolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face泪水从眼睛/脸颊/面部落下1．MymotherwasclosetotearswhensheheardIwasadmittedtoakeyuniversity.当得知我被重点大学录取时，我母亲差点儿就哭了。2．Withtearsofgratituderolling/streamingdownhischeeks,PeterhuggedGreentightly,saying“You'vesavedmetoday.Icouldn'tthankyouenough.”感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下，彼得紧紧地拥抱着格林，说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”3．Thedayhelefthospital,hehuggedme,hiseyesmistingwithtears,saying，“Youareatrulygoodnurse,thankyou.”出院那天，他泪眼模糊地拥抱着我说，“你是个真正的好护士，谢谢你。”07表示“不知道做……”场景[句式1]sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext[句式2]sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext[句式3]sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext[句式4]sbwasatalosswhattodo1．(2023·浙江1月卷读后续写)Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.离开家，我禁不住想现在进展如何呢。2．(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)Davidsatstillwithadeepbreath,wonderingwhattodonext.Isaidgentlyandquietly，“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers'thoughts.”大卫静静地坐着，深呼吸，不知道下一步该做什么。我轻轻地说：“除了你自己，没有人能改变你的想法。如果你想挑战自己，那与别人的想法无关。”3．Facingthesituation，Ruthfeltherheartwaspounding，andchestpainsalmosttookherbreathaway.Shestartedtosob，totallyatalosswhattodo.面对这种情况，露丝感到心跳加速，胸痛几乎让她喘不过气来。她开始哭泣，完全不知该怎么办。08表示“某人想到/明白……；有了主意”场景[句式1]Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat...＝Ithit/strucksbthat...[句式2](idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb＝...came/flashedintoone'smind＝...crowdedintoone'smind[句式3]one'smindbegantorace头脑开始快速转动1．Suddenlyabrilliantideaflashedintohismind.突然他想到一个好主意。2．Hismindbegantorace,tryingtothinkofawayout.他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。3．Therewasnomealonthetable.“Let'sprepareforthepartytogetherthistime，”AuntBeatricesaidgladlydressedinthesameoutfit.ItsuddenlyoccurredtoMyathatthethemethisyearwassupposedtobe“SweetLabor,SweetSixteen”．桌上没有饭菜。“这次让我们一起准备聚会吧，”Beatrice阿姨穿着同样的衣服高兴地说。Mya突然想到，今年的主题应该是“甜蜜的劳动，甜蜜的十六岁”。09表示“因……颤抖”场景[句式]tremble/shakewithfear,panic,excitement,rage...1．Herlipstrembledwithrageandbigtearsrolleddownhercheeks.她气得嘴唇发抖，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。2．Helaythereforalongtime,shakingwithfear.他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。3．FarmerMike'shousehadbeenagreatplaceforthelittlemouseuntilthefarmermarriedawifewhohadacat.Zigfriedshookwithfearwhenhethoughtofit.农夫迈克的房子对小老鼠来说一直是一个好地方，直到农夫娶了一个养猫的妻子。Zigfried一想到这件事就吓得直哆嗦。4．Suddenly,thedonkeyutteredashrillcry.Thetigertrembledwithfear,thinkingthatthedonkeywasgoingtokillit.突然，驴子大叫一声，老虎以为驴子要把自己吃掉，吓得直打哆嗦。10表示“发出……(声音)”场景[句式1]Therewereloudshoutsandcheers(from...)when...从……传来喊叫与欢呼声[句式2]Therewasastormofapplause(from...)when...……响起了雷鸣般的掌声[句式3]letoutacry/scream(ofhorror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain...)发出了……叫声1．Thenightbeforelast,justbeforedinner,whilemyfatherwaslookingthroughtheeveningpaper,hesuddenlyletoutacryofsurprise.前天晚上，就在晚饭前，我父亲在看晚报时，突然惊讶地喊了一声。2．Whilemymindwaswandering,ourperformancetimecame.Itturnedoutagreatsuccess,loudshoutsandcheersfromtheaudiencefillingthetheatre.当我心不在焉的时候，我们的表演时间到了。这场演出取得了巨大成功，观众的欢呼声和喝彩声响彻了整个剧场。11表示“转折”场景[句式1]Butbadluckforsb...但是某人真不走运[句式2]Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat...让人惊讶(高兴)/奇怪的是，原来……[句式3]...,butinvain……，但徒劳[句式4]...,butwithoutsuccess……，但没有成功[句式5]Butonsecondthoughts，...但是转而一想，……1．ButbadluckforJack,hetrippedandfelltotheground.Jack真不走运，他绊了一脚，摔在地上。2．Herfriendtriedtopersuadehertogobackhomewithhim,butinvain.她朋友想劝她和他一起回家，可只是白费唇舌。3．WhenIgotupandlookedoutofthebedroomwindow,Ifound,tomygreatsurprise,itwassnowingheavily.当我站起来，从卧室的窗户往外看时，我惊奇地发现，天正在下大雪。12表示“心里想”场景[句式1]Aninnervoicetoldsbthat...内心的声音告诉某人……[句式2]sbthought/saidtooneself...心里想……1．Aninnervoicetoldhimthatwhathehaddonewaswrong.心里的声音告诉他，他所做的是错的。2．Thatnightaftertheguestsleft,Susansataloneinherroom.Onherbedwasthepurpledressgiventoherasabirthdaygift.Shethoughttoherself，“Itseemsthatthedressdoesn'tlookthatbad.Actually,IlikealltheclothesMomboughtforme.”那天晚上，客人离开后，苏珊独自坐在房间里。她的床上放着作为生日礼物送给她的紫色连衣裙。她心想：“这件衣服看起来没那么糟糕。事实上，我喜欢妈妈给我买的所有衣服。”13表示“感到欣慰，放下心来”场景[句式1]．..breathedasighofrelief/...sighedwithrelief松了一口气[句式2](Awaveof)relieffloodedoversb深感……[句式3]toone'srelief...使人欣慰的/放心的是……1．Ibreathedasighofreliefastheplanelandedsafely.＝Awaveofrelieffloodedovermeastheplanelandedsafely.＝Tomyrelief,theplanelandedsafely.飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。2．Afterstudyingthemap,wefiguredoutthatourcarwasparkedoverthreekilometersaway.Sheofferedusaridebacktoourcarandweacceptedgladly.Tomyrelief,Isawourrentalcaragain.Whatablessingtohavesuchanunforgettableexperience!在研究了地图之后，我们发现我们的车停在三公里以外。她让我们搭便车回去，我们欣然接受了。让我欣慰的是，我又看到了我们租来的车。有这样一次难忘的经历真是太好了！14表示“还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中”场景[句式1]sb'swordsrangoutinone'sears某人的话在耳边回响[句式2]One'sheadwasstillfullof.../...crowdedintoone'smind脑子里充满……1．Memoriescamecrowdingintohermind.往事一齐涌上她的心头。2．Myteacheroftenencourag