高考英语作文真题训练50题含参考范文

高考英语写作真题训练50题含参考范文

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一、概要写作

1.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Hugging'sEvolutionaryOrigins

Afterlongstretchesofsocialisolation,manyofusarelongingforthewarmthofahug.

Degges-White,aprofessorfocusedonsocialrelationships,saysthatourneedforahuggoes

allthewaybacktothesurvivalofourspecies.Whenwe'rebom,wecan'tcareforourselves

andweneedtobecomfortablewithbeingheldinordertosurvive.We'rerewardedwitha

rushoffeel-goodhormonesthatcomefromaniceembrace.

Whenwehug,ourbrainsreleasetheoxytocinhormone,makingusfeelconnected.This

connectionandsenseofcommunityhasanimportantevolutionaryrolebecauseforhumans,

thesecurityofoursmallgroupsandlatercommunitieswascrucialtosurvival.Closecontact

helpedbuildcivilization.Wemaynotknowwhatwearegettingfromgreetingourfriendsand

familywithahug;wejustenjoyit.Itisn'tuntilthoseexperiencesaretakenawaythatwefeel

painandsadness.Anelbowbumporairgreetingarenotenough.Researchpublishedinthe

journalPsychologicalSciencehasshownthathugginghasa“stresscushioning,,effectthat

mayevenprotectusfromchronicillnessandinfections.

Whenchildrendon'texperiencehealthytouch,itcanimpacttheirdevelopment.Kids

whodidn'tgrowupbeingheld,missoutonthatsenseofsafetyandprotection.Theymayact

outorisolatethemselvesfromthosearoundthem.Insomecases,theoppositemayalsobe

true.Somechildrenmayshowtoomuchaffection,eagerforanyformofpositiveattention

thattheydidn'tgetathome.

Still,tohugornottohug?That'sthequestionrightnow.AccordingtoDegges-White,if

you'rebothvaccinated,goforit;researchhasshownthattheriskoftransmissionis

extremelylow.Andifyou'revaccinatedbutyoudon'tknowforsurewhethertheperson

you'rehugginghasalsobeenvaccinated,it'sstillmostlikelysafe.

【答案】Hugginghasanevolutionaryorigin.First,new-bornsneedhuggingtosurvive,forit

makesthemfeelcomfortable.Besides,huggingmeansclosecontact,whichhelpedtobuild

civilization.Whenpeoplehug,theyfeelmorebonded.Additionally,hugginghelpspeople

feellessstressedanditsabsencecanaffectkids'developmentnegatively.Therefore,hugging

isrecommendedforpeoplewhoarevaccinated.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，拥抱有进化的起源。首先，新生儿需要拥抱才能生存，

因为这会让他们感到舒适。此外，拥抱意味着亲密接触，这有助于建立文明。当人们拥

抱时，他们会感觉更亲密。止匕外，拥抱有助于减轻人们的压力，它的缺失会对孩子的发

展产生负面影响。因此，建议接种疫苗的人拥抱。

【详解】

1要点摘录

@Degges-White,aprofessorfocusedonsocialrelationships,saysthatourneedforahug

goesallthewaybacktothesurvivalofourspecies.Whenwe'rebom,wecan'tcarefor

ourselvesandweneedtobecomfortablewithbeingheldinordertosurvive.

②Whenwehug,ourbrainsreleasetheoxytocinhormone,makingusfeelconnected.Close

contacthelpedbuildcivilization.

©ResearchpublishedinthejournalPsychologicalSciencehasshownthathugginghasa

“stresscushioning^^effectthatmayevenprotectusfromchronicillnessandinfections.

©Still,tohugornottohug?That'sthequestionrightnow.AccordingtoDegges-White,if

you'rebothvaccinated,goforit;researchhasshownthattheriskoftransmissionis

extremelylow.

2.缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

Hugginghasanevolutionaryorigin.First,new-bornsneedhuggingtosurvive,foritmakes

themfeelcomfortable.

Besides,huggingmeansclosecontact,whichhelpedtobuildcivilization.Whenpeoplehug,

theyfeelmorebonded.

Additionally,hugginghelpspeoplefeellessstressedanditsabsencecanaffectkids'

developmentnegatively.

Therefore,huggingisrecommendedforpeoplewhoarevaccinated.

【点睛】

［高分句型1JBesides,huggingmeansclosecontact,whichhelpedtobuildcivilization.运用

非限制性定语从句对原文第二段进行了概括。

［高分句型2］Therefore,huggingisrecommendedforpeoplewhoarevaccinated.用who引导

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定语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级。

2.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

WorkingOutWorriesbyWriting

Afterhisfatherwasdriventothehospitalforemergenttreatment,43-year-oldYanatha

Desouvrebegantopanic.So,hedidonethingthatheknewwouldcalmhimself:Hewrote.

Overthenextfewweeks,Desouvrefilledseveralnotebooks,writingabouthisworryaswell

ashishappymemorieswithhisdad."Writingallowedmetofacemyfearandprocessmy

pain,^^hesays.Psychologistsrefertothatkindofwritingas"expressivewriting".Peopledoit

byrecordingtheirdeepestthoughtsandfeelings.However,differentfromwritinginajournal,

expressivewritingistoreflecthonestlyandthoughtfullyonaparticularfrustrationor

challenge.

Awell-knownpsychologyprofessorsaysthathundredsofstudieshavelookedatthe

potentialbenefitsofexpressivewritingandfounditcanhelpreducepainandimprovemood,

sleepandmemory.Itmayevenhelpreducesymptomsofvariousillnesses,andpreventcolds

andflu.

Expressivewritingtakeseffectbecausetranslatingapainfulexperienceintolanguage

allowspeopletomakemeaningoutofit,someexpertssay.Theprocessforcesthemto

organizetheirthoughtsandoffersasenseofcontrol,thuscompletingthepursuitofvalue

fromsuchanexperience.Anotherresearchsuggestedthatduringexpressivewriting,theact

oflabelingafeelingcanlessentheactivityrelatingtonervesinthethreatareaofthebrain.

Withthesenervesrelaxed,peoplecanlowerthesymptomsoftheirdiseases,enhancetheir

appreciationforlife,andincreasetheacceptanceofvariousexperiencesintheirlives.

Whatcan'tbeignoredisthatitshouldn'tbeusedasareplacementforothermedical

treatments.Andpeoplecopingwithaseveredepressionmaynotfinditusefultodoontheir

own,withouttherapy.Yet,itcanbeapowerfulcopingtoolformany,inlargepartbecauseit

helpsbattleagainsttheirreluctancetofacenegativeemotions.

【答案】Writingcanhelppeopledealwithnegativefeelings.Desouvreonceadopted

expressivewriting,areflectionofanunpleasantexperiencebyrecordinginnerfeelings.It

benefitspatientsmentallyandphysicallybecauseithelpsthemfindvalueofpainful

experiencesorrelaxingtheirnerves.Thoughnotasubstituteformedicaltreatment,

expressivewritingworksformany.(54words)

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。写作可以帮助人们处理负面情绪。Desouvre曾经采用表达性写作,

通过记录内心感受来反映一种不愉快的经历。它对病人的精神和身体都有好处，因为它

帮助他们发现痛苦经历的价值或放松他们的神经。虽然不能替代医疗，但富有表现力的

写作对许多人来说是有效的。

【详解】

1要点摘录

①“Writingallowedmetofacemyfearandprocessmypain,"hesays.

©Psychologistsrefertothatkindofwritingas"expressivewriting”.

③Awell-knownpsychologyprofessorsaysthathundredsofstudieshavelookedatthe

potentialbenefitsofexpressivewritingandfounditcanhelpreducepainandimprovemood,

sleepandmemory.Itmayevenhelpreducesymptomsofvariousillnesses,andpreventcolds

andflu.

©Expressivewritingtakeseffectbecausetranslatingapainfulexperienceintolanguage

allowspeopletomakemeaningoutofit,someexpertssay.

⑤Withthesenervesrelaxed,peoplecanlowerthesymptomsoftheirdiseases,enhancetheir

appreciationforlife,andincreasetheacceptanceofvariousexperiencesintheirlives.

⑥Whatcan'tbeignoredisthatitshouldn'tbeusedasareplacementforothermedical

treatments.

©Yet,itcanbeapowerfulcopingtoolformany,inlargepartbecauseithelpsbattleagainst

theirreluctancetofacenegativeemotions.

2.缜密构思将第3/4/5三个要点进行重组，将第1/2、6/7要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Writingcontributestocopingwithnegativefeelings.

Desouvreoncerecordedinnerfeelingsbyexpressivewriting,whichwasareflectionofan

unpleasantexperience.

Notonlydoesitbenefitpatients5mentalhealthbutitmakesforphysicalwell-being,forit

revealsthevalueofpainfulexperiencesorrelaxingtheirnerves.

Thoughexpressivewritingcan'tbereplacedformedicaltreatment,itstillfunctionsformany.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Itbenefitspatientsmentallyandphysicallybecauseithelpsthemfindvalueof

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painfulexperiencesorrelaxingtheirnerves.（运用了because引导的状语从句对二、三段内

容进行概括）

[高分句型2]Desouvreonceadoptedexpressivewriting,areflectionofanunpleasant

experiencebyrecordinginnerfeelings.（运用了同位语结构对第一段进行概括）

3.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

TeamworkDoublestheStrength

Teamworkisreallyimportantfbranyclassorteamtoachieveitsgoalsandobjectives.

Letmegiveyouthreereasonswhyteamworkisadvantageous.

Asindividuals,wepossessdiversetalents,strengths,weaknessesandexperiences.A

teamislikeablanketthatweaveswhateachofuspossesses,resultinginanendproductthat

isdiverseyetsimilar.Asteammembersexchangethoughtsandexperiences,therecanbe

moreefficiencyandeffectivenessatproblem-solving.Thispoolingoftalentscanalsoleadto

greaterinnovationandsuccess.

TakeLeicesterCity,fbrexample.ItwonthePremierLeaguein2016,tothedisbeliefof

manysoccerfans.LeicesterCity,previouslyregardedastheunderdogintheLeague,

displayedsurprisinglyimpressiveteamworkthatledtoitsunbelievablevictoryinsoccer

history.

Next,teamworkhelpstoincreaseefficiencyandproductivityasmemberssharethe

workload.Itreducesthestressoneachofusandensuresthecompletionoftaskswithinthe

regulatedtimeframe.Whenworkisdistributedandeachofusinateamspecializesin

specifictasks,wecanexpectgreaterjobsatisfaction.

Andfinally,workinginateammultiplieslearningopportunities.Teammemberslearn

frommoreexperiencedmemberswhomayofferdeeperinsightsandperspectives.Newer

membersmayalsocontributenewandbraveideas.Besidesencouragingthesharingof

knowledgeandexperiences,teamworkalsodevelopssoftskillslikecommunicationand

interpersonalskills.Welearntorespectdifferencesinworkingstylesandopinions,and

developtrustwhenworkingwithothers.

Somemaythinkthatworkinginisolationismoreefficientsincemoretimeistaken

whencooperatingwithothers.Formoretalentedindividuals,workingalonemeansbeingthe

starofaproject—there'snoneedtosharethesuccessorglorywithothers.But,thelossof

cooperativitythatonlyteameffortcangeneratemayalsopreventtheteamfromreachingits

fullestpotential.

【答案】Teamworkisimportantforanygrouptoreachitsgoalsforthreereasons.Firstly,

poolingtalentshelpstosolveproblemsandmotivateinnovationandsuccess.Secondly,

teamworkenhancesefficiencyandproductivityduetosharedworkload,reducedstressand

specifictasks.Finally,teamworkmultiplieslearningopportunitiesforbothexperienced

membersandnewerones,encouragingsharingandmaximizingteam'spotential.(58words)

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，团队合作对任何团队达成目标都很重要，原因有三。

第一，凝聚人才，解决问题，激发创新和成功。其次，团队合作可以提高效率和生产力，

因为他们分担了工作量，减轻了压力，完成了特定的任务。最后，团队合作增加了经验

丰富的成员和新人的学习机会，鼓励分享和最大化团队的潜力。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

①Teamworkisreallyimportantforanyclassorteamtoachieveitsgoalsandobjectives.Let

megiveyouthreereasonswhyteamworkisadvantageous.

②Asteammembersexchangethoughtsandexperiences,therecanbemoreefficiencyand

effectivenessatproblem-solving.Thispoolingoftalentscanalsoleadtogreaterinnovation

andsuccess.

(3)Next,teamworkhelpstoincreaseefficiencyandproductivityasmemberssharethe

workload.Itreducesthestressoneachofusandensuresthecompletionoftaskswithinthe

regulatedtimeframe.

@Andfinally,workinginateammultiplieslearningopportunities.But,thelossof

cooperativitythatonlyteameffortcangeneratemayalsopreventtheteamfromreachingits

fullestpotential.

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2.缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

Teamworkisimportantfbranygrouptoreachitsgoalsforthreereasons.

Firstly,poolingtalentshelpstosolveproblemsandmotivateinnovationandsuccess.

Secondly,teamworkenhancesefficiencyandproductivityduetosharedworkload,reduced

stressandspecifictasks.

Finally,teamworkmultiplieslearningopportunitiesforbothexperiencedmembersandnewer

ones,encouragingsharingandmaximizingteam'spotential.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Firstly,poolingtalentshelpstosolveproblemsandmotivateinnovationand

success.运用动名词作主语对原文第二段进行了概括。

[高分句型2]Finally,teamworkmultiplieslearningopportunitiesfbrbothexperienced

membersandnewerones,encouragingsharingandmaximizingteam'spotential.用现在分词

作状语对最后两段进行了概括，表达非常高级。

4.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizeinnomorethan60wordsthemain

ideaofthepassageandhowitisillustrated.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Secretsoftheginkgotree

Newresearchintoanincrediblylong-livedtreehasrevealedsomeofthetricksthathelp

itsurviveforthousandsofyears.Theginkgoisahuge,slow-growingtreewithfan-shaped

leaves,nativetoChina,butplantedinparksandgardensacrosstheworld.Someofthelargest

ginkgoesaresaidtobemorethan3,000yearsold.

Inordertodiscoverhowtheseandothertreescanliveforsolong,scientistsfromtheUS

andChinatooksamplesfrom34healthyginkgoesofvariousages.Theteamstudiedgrowth

ringsineachtree'strunk,aswellasindividualcellsfromthebark（树皮），leavesandseeds.

Theyfoundthat600-year-oldtreeswerejustashealthyas20-year-olds.

Tolearnmore,theteamthenlookedindetailattheDNAofninetreesagedbetween

threeand667yearsold.Atthebeginningofatree'slife,DNAinstructsthecellsinaseedling

（幼苗）todividefrequentlysothetreegrowsrapidly.Thecellsalsomakespecialchemicalsto

helptheyoungplantsurvivestressfulsituations,suchasdiseaseandlackofwater.Asmost

treesgrowolderandtougher,theirDNAtellsthecellstodividemoreslowlyandtomake

fewerchemicaldefences.

Ginkgoes,however,dothingsdifferently.Theteamfoundthatalthoughtheirgrowth

eventuallyslows,bothyoungandoldtreesmakeprotectivechemicals.Thesecretis

maintainingareallyhealthydefencesystem.Asginkgoesage,theyshownoevidenceof

weakeningtheirabilitytodefendthemselvesfromstresses.Othertreesthatliveforalong

timemayhavethesameability.

Foralltheirdefences,though,ginkgoescannotliveforever-theyeventuallymeetwith

fatalaccidentssuchasfire,diseaseandstorms.Whiletheylast,however,theseleafygiants

aresomeofthemostbeautifultreesintheworld.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Researchhasdisclosedsomemysteryofginkoes5longevitybystudyingthesamplesof

different-agedginkoesandothertrees.NotlikethelatterwhoseDNAdirectstheircellsto

defendlessefficientlywhenaging,ginkoes'defencesystemconstantlymaintainshealthy,

thusensuringtheseChina-originatedslow-growingleafygiantsalonglifeifnodeadly

accidentsoccur.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，研究人员通过研究不同树龄的银杏和其他树木的样本,

揭示了银杏长寿的一些奥秘。与银杏不同，银杏的DNA会在衰老时降低细胞的防御效

率，银杏的防御系统会一直保持健康，从而确保这些源自中国、生长缓慢的叶类巨物在

没有致命事故发生的情况下长寿。

【详解】

1要点摘录

①Newresearchintoanincrediblylong-livedtreehasrevealedsomeofthetricksthathelpit

surviveforthousandsofyears.

②Inordertodiscoverhowtheseandothertreescanliveforsolong,scientistsfromtheUS

andChinatooksamplesfrom34healthyginkgoesofvariousages.

③Atthebeginningofatree'slife,DNAinstructsthecellsinaseedling（幼苗）todivide

frequentlysothetreegrowsrapidly.Thecellsalsomakespecialchemicalstohelptheyoung

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plantsurvivestressfulsituations,suchasdiseaseandlackofwater.Asmosttreesgrowolder

andtougher,theirDNAtellsthecellstodividemoreslowlyandtomakefewerchemical

defences.

@heteamfoundthatalthoughtheirgrowtheventuallyslows,bothyoungandoldtreesmake

protectivechemicals.Thesecretismaintainingareallyhealthydefencesystem.Asginkgoes

age,theyshownoevidenceofweakeningtheirabilitytodefendthemselvesfromstresses.

Othertreesthatliveforalongtimemayhavethesameability.

@Foralltheirdefences,though,ginkgoescannotliveforever-theyeventuallymeetwith

fatalaccidentssuchasfire,diseaseandstorms.Whiletheylast,however,theseleafygiants

aresomeofthemostbeautifultreesintheworld.

2.缜密构思

将第4、5、6三个要点进行重组，将第1、2两个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Researchhasdisclosedsomemysteryofginkoes9longevitybystudyingthesamplesof

different-agedginkoesandothertrees.

NotlikethelatterwhoseDNAdirectstheircellstodefendlessefficientlywhenaging,

ginkoes'defencesystemconstantlymaintainshealthy,thusensuringtheseChina-originated

slow-growingleafygiantsalonglifeifnodeadlyaccidentsoccur.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Researchhasdisclosedsomemysteryofginkoes9longevitybystudyingthe

samplesofdifferent-agedginkoesandothertrees.（运用介词by后接动名词作宾语）

[高分句型2]NotHkethelatterwhoseDNAdirectstheircellstodefendlessefficientlywhen

aging,ginkoes'defencesystemconstantlymaintainshealthy,thusensuringthese

China-originatedslow-growingleafygiantsalonglifeifnodeadlyaccidentsoccur..（运用

whose引导的定语从句和现在分词作结果状语）

5.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Wedon'tchooseoursiblingsthewaywechooseourpartnersandfriends.Ofcourse,we

don'tchooseourparentseither,buttheyusuallymakethatuptousbyaccompanyinguson

thewaytoadulthood.Brothersandsistersarejustsortofthere.Andyet,whenitcomestoour

development,theycanbemoreinfluentialthanparents.

Whethertheserelationshipsmakeourlifebetterorworseisamorecomplicatedquestion.

Ontheupside,positiveinteractionswithsiblingsduringadolescencefosterempathy,

prosocialbehavior,andacademicachievement.However,whenasiblingrelationshipisbad,

itcanbereallybad.Tensesiblingrelationshipsmakepeoplemorelikelytobedepressedand

anxiousinadolescence.Moreover,siblingbullyingmakesakidinvolvedinself-harmasa

teenanddevelopmentalproblemsinadulthood.

Whetherapersonmodelshimselfafterhissiblingsortriestodistinguishhimselfhas

particularlyimportantconsequences.Onestudyfoundthatsiblingswhofeltpositiveabout

eachothertendedtoachievesimilareducationlevelswhilethosewhospentunequaltime

withtheirdadandgotunequalparentaltreatmenthaddifferenteducationalfortunes.That

differenceischangeable.Ontheotherhand,followingyoursiblingcanbeamistake:

teenagersaremorelikelytobeinvolvedinriskybehaviorifanoldersiblingdidsofirst.

Onewayoranother,siblinginfluenceislasting.Astudyofmorethanonemillion

Swedesfoundthatone'sriskofdyingofaheartattackmultipliesafterasiblingdiesofone,

duenotonlytosharedDNAbutalsotothestressoflosingsuchakeyfigure.Thefindings

makesense:Mostofusaredifferentpeoplethanwe'dhavebeenifourbrothersorsisters

wereneverborn.

【答案】Siblinginfluenceisstrongandlasting,inapositiveornegativeway.Ahealthy

relationshipwithsiblingshelpsustobeabetterpersonanddobetteratschool,whileabad

onemightbringgreatharmtoourphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.Moreover,whether

siblingssetgoodexamplesmattersalot,becausepeoplemightfollowtheirsiblings,steps.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，兄弟姐妹的影响是强大和持久的，无论是积极的还是

消极的。与兄弟姐妹之间健康的关系有助于我们成为一个更好的人，在学校表现得更好,

而不好的关系可能会给我们的身心健康带来很大的伤害。此外，兄弟姐妹是否树立了良

好的榜样也很重要，因为人们可能会效仿他们的兄弟姐妹。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

①Andyet,whenitcomestoourdevelopment,theycanbemoreinfluentialthanparents.

②Ontheupside,positiveinteractionswithsiblingsduringadolescencefosterempathy,

prosocialbehavior,andacademicachievemenl.However,whenasiblingrelationshipisbad,

itcanbereallybad.Tensesiblingrelationshipsmakepeoplemorelikelytobedepressedand

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anxiousinadolescence.Moreover,siblingbullyingmakesakidinvolvedinself-harmasa

teenanddevelopmentalproblemsinadulthood.

©Whetherapersonmodelshimselfafterhissiblingsortriestodistinguishhimselfhas

particularlyimportantconsequences.

2.缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

Siblinginfluenceisstrongandlasting,inapositiveornegativeway.

Ahealthyrelationshipwithsiblingshelpsustobeabetterpersonanddobetteratschool,

whileabadonemightbringgreatharmtoourphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.

Moreover,whethersiblingssetgoodexamplesmattersalot,becausepeoplemightfollow

theirsiblings7steps.

【点睛】

［高分句型1JAhealthyrelationshipwithsiblingshelpsustobeabetterpersonanddobetter

atschool,whileabadonemightbringgreatharmtoourphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.运

用while连接并列句对原文第二段进行了概括。

［高分句型2］Moreover,whethersiblingssetgoodexamplesmattersalot,becausepeople

mightfollowtheirsiblings5steps.fflbecause引导原因状语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表

达非常高级。

6.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

DoesZoomexhaustyou?

DuringtheCOVID-19pandemic,associaldistancinghaskeptpeopleapartphysically,

morepeopleareloggingontopopularvideochatplatformstoconnectwithcolleagues,

familyandfriends.Andasaresult,virtualmeetings,or“zooming"，haveskyrocketed.

However,communicationprofessorJeremyBailenson,foundingdirectoroftheStanford

VirtualHumanInteractionLab(VHIL)examinedthepsychologicalconsequencesof

spendinghoursperdayontheseplatforms,warningthatthosevideocallsarelikelytiringyou

out.

Inanormalmeeting,peoplewillvariouslybelookingatthespeaker,takingnotes,or

lookingelsewhere.ButonZoomcalls,everyoneislookingateveryone,allthetime.A

listeneristreatednonverballylikeaspeaker,soevenifyoudon'tspeakonceinameeting,

youarestilllookingatfacesstaringatyou.Theamountofeyecontactisdramatically

increased.<4Socialanxietyofpublicspeakingisoneofthebiggestfearsthatexistinour

population,Bailensonsaid."Whenyou'restandingupthereandeverybody5sstaringatyou,

that'sastressfulexperience.^^

Mostvideoplatformsshowasquareofwhatyoulooklikeoncameraduringachat,

whichisunnatural.Bailensonsaid,“Intherealworld,ifsomebodywasfollowingyouaround

withamirrorconstantlysothatyouwereseeingyourselfinamirrorwhileyouweretalking

topeople,makingdecisions,givingfeedback,etc.,thatwouldjustbecrazy.^^Hecitedstudies

showingthatwhenyouseeareflectionofyourself,youaremorecriticalofyourselfandthere

willbenegativeemotionalconsequences.

Moreover,videochatsdramaticallyreduceourusualmobility.In-personandaudio

phoneconversationsallowhumanstowalkaroundandmove.Butwithvideoconferencing,

mostcamerashaveasetfieldofview,meaningapersonhastogenerallystayinthesamespot.

Movementislimitedinwaysthatarenotnatural."There'sagrowingresearchnowthatsays

whenpeoplearemoving,they,reperformingbettercognitively,Bailensonsaid.

【答案】AccordingtoJeremyBailenson,althoughvirtualmeetingsarepopular,theycanbe

exhausting.Firstly,excessiveamountsofeyecontactmaycausepeoplefeelstressed.

Secondly,seeingyourselfreflectedduringvideochatsconstantlycontributestonegative

emotions.Thirdly,videochatsgreatlypreventusfrommovinginanaturalway,which

reducescognitiveperformance.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，JeremyBailenson表示，虽然虚拟会议很受欢迎，但

它可能会让人筋疲力尽。首先，过多的眼神交流可能会让人感到压力。其次，在视频聊

天中不断看到自己会导致负面情绪。第三，视频聊天极大地阻碍了我们以自然的方式移

动，降低了认知能力。

【详解】

1要点摘录

©However,communicationprofessorJeremyBailenson,foundingdirectoroftheStanford

VirtualHumanInteractionLab(VHIL)examinedthepsychologicalconsequencesof

spendinghoursperdayontheseplatforms,warningthatthosevideocallsarelikelytiringyou

out.

②"Socialanxietyofpublicspeakingisoneofthebiggestfearsthatexistinourpopulation,n

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Bailensonsaid."Whenyou'restandingupthereandeverybody'sstaringatyou,that'sa

stressfulexperience.^^

③Hecitedstudiesshowingthatwhenyouseeareflectionofyourself,youaremorecritical

ofyourselfandtherewillbenegativeemotionalconsequences.

©Moreover,videochatsdramaticallyreduceourusualmobility.In-personandaudiophone

conversationsallowhumanstowalkaroundandmove.Butwithvideoconferencing,most

camerashaveasetfieldofview,meaningapersonhastogenerallystayinthesamespot.

2.缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

AccordingtoJeremyBailenson,althoughvirtualmeetingsarepopular,theycanbe

exhausting.

Firstly,excessiveamountsofeyecontactmaycausepeoplefeelstressed.

Secondly,seeingyourselfreflectedduringvideochatsconstantlycontributestonegative

emotions.

Thirdly,videochatsgreatlypreventusfrommovinginanaturalway,whichreduces

cognitiveperformance.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]AccordingtoJeremyBailenson,althoughvirtualmeetingsarepopular,theycan

beexhausting.运用让步状语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。

[高分句型2]Thirdly,videochatsgreatlypreventusfrommovinginanaturalway,which

reducescognitiveperformance.用which引导非限制性定语从句对最后一段进行了概括，

表达非常高级。

7.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Everwalkedtotheshopsonlytofind,oncethere,you'vecompletelyforgottenwhatyou

wentfor?Orstruggledtorememberthenameofanoldfriend?Foryearswe'veacceptedthat

aforgetfulbrainisasmuchapartofagingaswrinklesandgrayhair.Butnowanewbook

suggests