高二成都调考读后续写诚信类+祖母的宠物鸭+讲义 高三英语一轮复习

2024年1月高二成都调考读后续写-祖母的宠物鸭题目如下：Duringthathotsummer,littleSammyandhissisterMariespenttheirvacationattheirgrandparents’farm.Thefarmwasfilledwithfunandadventure,butoneday,anunfortunateaccidentoccurred.Whileplaying,Sammyaccidentallyshothisgrandmother'sbelovedpetduckwithaslingshot.Panicked,hequicklyhidtheduckbehindapileofoldwoodintheyard.Hewasafraidtotellhisgrandmotherthetruth,worriedaboutbeingpunished.在那个炎热的夏天，小萨米和他的妹妹玛丽在他们祖父母的农场度假。农场充满了乐趣和冒险，但有一天，一场不幸的事故发生了。在玩耍时，萨米不小心用弹弓射中了他祖母心爱的宠物鸭子。他惊慌失措，赶紧把鸭子藏在院子里的一堆旧木头后面。他害怕告诉奶奶真相，担心受到惩罚。However,whathedidn’tknowwasthathissisterMariehadseentheentireevent.Thenextday,whenGrandmaaskedMarietowashthedishes，MarieseizedtheopportunitytoshifttheresponsibilityontoSammy.Shesaid,“Sammytoldmehewantedtohelpinthekitchentoday，Grandma.”Sammywasshockedandconfusedbecausehehadnotsaidsuchathing.Marieapproachedhimandwhisperedthreateningly,

“Remembertheduck?”

ItwasthenthatSammyrealizedMariehadseenhissecretandwasnowusingittomakehimdothehouseworkshedidn'twanttodo.然而，他不知道的是，他的妹妹玛丽看到了整个事件。第二天，当奶奶叫玛丽洗碗时，玛丽抓住机会把责任推给萨米。她说：“萨米告诉我他今天想在厨房帮忙，奶奶。”萨米很震惊，也很困惑，因为他没有说这样的话。玛丽走近他，威胁性地低声说：“还记得那只鸭子吗？”就在这时，萨米意识到玛丽看到了他的秘密，现在正利用它让他做她不想做的家务。Thissituationcontinuedforseveraldays.Whenevertherewerehouseholdchorestobedone,MariewouldthreatenSammywith"Remembertheduck?”.Sammyfeltanincreasingburdenofguiltandresponsibility.这种情况持续了好几天。每当有家务要做时，玛丽就会威胁萨米“还记得那只鸭子吗？”萨米感到越来越内疚和责任感。续写字数要求为80左右。首句为：Finally,hecouldn'tbearthesecretandpressureanylongeranddecidedtotelleverythingtograndma.文本分析：故事大意--夏天，小萨米和他的妹妹玛丽在他们祖父母的农场度假。在玩耍时，萨米不小心用弹弓射中了他祖母心爱的宠物鸭子。他惊慌失措，赶紧把鸭子藏在院子里的一堆旧木头后面。他害怕告诉奶奶真相，担心受到惩罚。她的妹妹玛丽看到整件事情的经过，每当有家务要做时，玛丽就会威胁萨米“还记得那只鸭子吗？”。这是萨米就默默承受了家务。萨米感到越来越内疚和责任感。1.续写一段的主要情节为：坦诚错误和道歉+祖母教育和原谅+感悟收获2.故事的主旨是诚实honesty。3.范文如下：Oneevening,Sammygatheredhiscourageandapproachedhisgrandmother.Withaheavyheart,heconfessedthetruthaboutaccidentallyhurtingthepetduck.

ToSammy'ssurprise,hisgrandmotherlistenedpatientlyand,insteadofscoldinghim,smiledwarmly.Sheappreciatedhishonestyandsawitasanopportunityforhimtolearnfromhismistake.

Sammy'ssenseofreliefwasimmense,realizingthattheburdenhehadcarriedfordayshadfinallylifted.Thenextday,GrandmagatheredbothSammyandMarie,teachingthemtheimportanceofhonestyandresponsibility.

SammyandMarielearnedtheinvaluablelesson,realizingthathonestynotonlyfreesthesoulbutalsoestablishesabondoftrustandunderstandingthatlastsalifetime.易出现的主要错误：1.原文有少许对话，续写部分在道歉，坦诚错误，原谅部分也可以出现少许对话，实现语言的协同性。但是不能大篇幅以对话推进情节。2.情节推进缓慢，分配比例失调。3.次要人物Marie利用Sammy的隐瞒，威胁他帮做家务活。在结尾段也应该受到教育和认识到错误。只是本次全市阅卷要求，不做扣分处理。默写版：Oneevening,Sammygatheredhiscourageandapproachedhisgrandmother.__________________________________________他怀着沉重的心情，坦白了不小心弄伤宠物鸭的真相.

ToSammy'ssurprise,hisgrandmotherlistenedpatientlyand,insteadofscoldinghim,smiledwarmly.Sheappreciatedhishonestyandsawitasanopportunityforhimtolearnfromhismistake.

___________________________________________________萨米感到如释重负，意识到自己几天来背负的重担终于卸下了.Thenextday,GrandmagatheredbothSammyandMarie,teachingthemtheimportanceofhonestyandresponsibility.

___________________________________________________________________________________萨米和玛丽吸取了宝贵的教训，意识到诚实不仅解放了灵魂，而且建立了一种持续一生的信任和理解纽带.语言积累：（关于诚实类的读后续写描写）Karie

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