读后续写人与动物类WaitingforGoldie讲义-高三英语一轮专题

题目：Danny’sgrandfatherlovedtokeeppigeons,andGoldiewasoneofthem.Goldiehadgoldeneyes,whichwasveryrareinpigeons.Grandfathersaidhehadneverhadapigeonlikeher.Goldiewasachampionracingpigeonandhadwonloadsofcups.Butonce,aroundthetimeGoldiewasreleasedtwohundredmilesawayforarace,Danny’sgrandfatherwashospitalizedwithaheartattack.TheresponsibilityofwaitingforGoldieandtakingcareoftheotherpigeonsthenfellonDanny.However,Goldiedidnotflybackontimeasusual.Inordernottoupsethisgrandfather,whilevisitinghimthatnightwithhisparents,DannyliedthatGoldiehadalreadyreturnedandwonthefirstplace.“Iknewit”,saidDanny’sgrandfather,settlingbackonhispillows,“Ialwaysknewshewasawinner.She’soneinamillion.”Grandfatherbelievedthelie.Sometimesgrandfather’sracingpigeonsgotlostduetobadweatherorgotattackedbyfalcons(猎鹰)andnevercamebackhome,butthosehadneverhappenedtoGoldie.Shealwayscamehome,rightontime.“Goldiemusthavebeeneatenbythosefalconsnestinginthequarry(采石场)onherwaybackhome”,Dannythoughttohimselfbitterlyandhischestwasburning.Dannysworetohimselftotakerevenge.“Theyareathreat,thosefalcons!Imustgetridofthemandpulldowntheirnest.”ItonlytookDannyfiveminutestoreachthequarry.Dannylookedaroundthequarrywallsandfoundtheirnestonasteepestside,whichwasalongwayup.Heclimbedfast—therewereoldtreerootstograbholdof.Hishandswerebleeding.Buthedidn’tfeelthepain.Hewashangingontherockwallwithhisfingertipslikeastarfish.Hisarmsweresoweakandtrembling,buthewasfinallythere.注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’nest,hesuddenlysawthebabyfalconsinit.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wingbrokenbutstillalive.【故事大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Danny的爷爷养了很多鸽子，其中Goldie是最好的一只，一天爷爷生病住院了，照顾鸽子的责任落在了Danny身上，但是Danny发现Goldie没有回来，以为它被猎鹰杀死了，所以Danny决定摧毁猎鹰的巢穴帮Goldie报仇，但是当他看到巢中的小猎鹰时，他放弃了复仇，确发现了受伤的Goldie，最后救下了Goldie。【续写情节发展】1.

段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“就在她伸出手去摧毁猎鹰的巢时，他突然看到了里面的小猎鹰。”可知，第一段可描写Danny看到小猎鹰从而放弃复仇。②由第二段首句内容“走到一半，他看到戈尔迪在岩石的一个洞里，翅膀断了，但还活着。”可知，第二段可描写Danny救下Goldie，并庆幸自己没有冲动复仇。2.

续写线索：去复仇——看到小猎鹰——放弃复仇——发现Goldie——救下Goldie——庆幸没有复仇3.

词汇激活行为类①消失：vanish/disappear②意识到：realize/beeawareof③摧毁：destroy/smash情绪类①生气：anger/annoyed②庆幸：fortunate/thankfully【点睛】[高分句型1]Dannyrealizesthatifhedestroysthefalcons’nest,theyoungfalconswillfalltotheground.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]ButDanny,whowasnotabadboybynature,didnotdoso.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)参考答案：Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’nest,hesuddenlysawthebabyfalconsinit.HesuddenlyrememberedGoldiewhenshewaslittle,fluffyandhelpless.Thefeelingofangervanishedlikewaterrunningdownadrain,andthefeelingofrevengewasthrownoutofthewindow.Dannyrealizesthatifhedestroysthefalcons’nest,theyoungfalconswillfalltotheground.Onlydeathawaitsthem.ButDanny,whowasnotabadboybynature,didnotdoso.Withoutharmingtheyoung,helplessfalcon,hecontinuedtoclimboverthetopofthehill.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wingbrokenbutstillalive.Withouthesitation,DannycarefullyliftedGoldieoutandrushedhimtothehospital.Luckily,withDanny’scare,Goldie’sinjurywascuredandGrandpaalsorecoveredandreturnedhome.Dannywasfortunatenottobecarriedawaybyangeranddidsomethingheregretted.Guesswhat?WhenGrandpamethischampionpigeon,Goldiehadalreadyjoinedherfellowracingpigeons.So,Grandpawasstillinthedarkabouttheepisodeofhergettinghurt.Goldiewouldalwaysbeourchampionpigeon.默写版：Justashereachedouthishandtodestroythefalcons’nest,hesuddenlysawthebabyfalconsinit.HesuddenlyrememberedGoldiewhenshewaslittle,________________毛茸茸且无助的.Thefeelingofanger______________________________________就像水从下水道里流下来一样消失了，复仇的感觉被扔出了窗外.Dannyrealizesthatifhedestroysthefalcons’nest,theyoungfalcons___________________会掉在地上.Onlydeathawaitsthem.ButDanny,whowasnotabadboybynature,didnotdoso._________________________________________他没有伤害那只年轻无助的猎鹰，继续爬上山顶.Halfwaydown,hesawGoldieinaholeontherock,wingbrokenbutstillalive._____________________________________________丹尼毫不犹豫地小心翼翼地把戈尔迪抱了出来，并将它紧急送往医院.Luckily,withDanny’scare,Goldie’sinjurywascuredandGrandpaalsorecoveredandreturnedhome.________________________________