高中英语写作公开课详案-课堂实录(含上课内容及板书)

WritingGoodMorning,class.TodayisveryspecialforI’mgoingtohavealessoninfrontofsomanyteachers.Feelingnervous,Iskippedbreakfastthismorning.Haveyoueatenbreakfastyet?Yes.Goodboy.Yourmumwillbegladtohearthat.Thoughmostofyouhaveformedthehabitofhavingtopmealoftheday,Iamdefinitelysurethatsomeofyoumaynothavebreakfastorskipbreakfastforthisorthatreasonjustlikeme.Comparedwithbreakfasteaters,thepersonswhodon’thavebreakfastregularlyarecalledbreakfastskippers.Yesterdayyouwroteashortcompositionbasedonthistopic.Nowlet’slookatitagain.最近的一项调查表明，浙江大约30%的中学生没有吃早餐的习惯。请你说明此现象发生的原因，并就此发表个人看法，提出相关建议。词数：120左右Accordingtothedescription,howmanypartsshouldthispassagebemadeupof?Three.Thefirstpartisphenomenondescription.Inthesecondpartweshouldlistsomepossiblereasonsleadingtothisphenomenon.Andthelastpartshouldcontainourpersonalopinionsandsuggestions.(板书：phenomenon;reasons;comments)Nowlet’sfocusonthefirstpart.Ithinkonesentenceisenoughtodescribethephenomenon.Nowtakeoutyourwrittenwork.FirstI’dlikeyoutoshareyourwritingwithyourgroupmatesandchoosethebestsentenceofyourgroupandthenshowittothewholeclass.(展示几位学生的第一段现象描写的句子)Whichsentencedoyouthinkisthebest?Theirsentencesareconciseandtothepoint,whichreflecttheprinciplesofwriting.Concisemeanswritewithnounnecessarywords.(板书：Beconcise;Tothepoint)Whilewritingweshouldkeeptheminmind.NowIshowyousomesentencestructuresandyoucanrefertothemasareference.(展示教师准备好的句子)1.最近的一项调查表明.Arecentstudyshows…Accordingtotherecentsurvey…Recently,asurveyhascarriedout,showingthat……haven’tformed/developedthehabitofhavingbreakfast.2.Nowlet’scometothesecondpart:thepossiblereasonswhymiddleschoolstudentsdon’thavebreakfast.(请学生说说他们写的作文中的原因，教师板书：lackoftime,beinahurry,studylateandgetuplate;havenoappetitefor(…spoilone’sappetite);beonadiet(keepslim;loseweight)Yes,youhavethoughtofmorereasonsthanIhadexpected.Butcanweputallthereasonsintoourshortpassage?Sure,weshouldchoosesomeandleavesomeout.Buthowtoconnectthemcoherentlyandsmoothlyisabigproblem.(板书：Becoherentandsmooth).Ifapieceofwritingiscoherent,itspartsareconnectedinaclearandreasonableway.Nowpleasediscussingroupsandeachgroupchoosesthebestwrittenone,whichshouldbeconciseandcoherent.(学生讨论，之后展示几个好的样本)Nowletmeshowyousomeexpressionsasareference.(教师幻灯片展示：表示原因：)Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Anumberoffactorsaccountfor/leadto/contributeto/resultinthisphenomenon.Thereasonsforthisphenomenoncanbelistedasfollows.板书设计：Part1:PhenomenonlackoftimebreakfastskippersbeinahurryConnections:Part2:ReasonsstudylateandgetuplatesmoothPrinciplesofwritinghavenoappetitefor…logical1.Beconcisebeonadiet(keepslim,loseweight)2.TothepointPart3:CommentsViewpoint