中考英语写作专题指导-记叙文课件

中考英语作文专题中考作文考查范围话题类型文章类型写作技巧评分标准范文赏析有话可说教育类实践生活类记叙文议论文说明文五档五大写作小技巧不同类型文章一、考查范围

根据《新课标》和《中考说明》，作文考查的范围基本上与学生日常生活、学习生活息息相关。做到有话可说。例如：

Livealifewithoutmuchpressure.

HowtoimproveEnglish?

美丽校园，健康生活（2020年陕西英语中考）

二、话题类型1、教育类话题如：HowtoimproveEnglish?Howtodealwiththebooksandnotebooks?(2019年陕西中考英语)2、实践生活类如:暑假计划、周末旅行、走亲访友的经历等（2018年陕西中考英语）3、热点话题

如：新型冠状病毒、环保（2020年陕西中考英语)三、文章类型1.记叙文:2018年陕西中考作文

2.说明文：

3.议论文：

2019、2017年陕西中考作文四、评分标准第一档（14-15分）符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言流畅。第二档（10-13分）符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。第三档（7-9分）基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清楚。第四档（4-6分）基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。第五档（0-3分）能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。五、写作小技巧写作小技巧学生例句更改例句1.用两个词而不用一个词。MyfamilyandIhadagoodtrip.MyfamilyandIhadagoodandrelaxingtrip.2.适当添加副词或者介词短语。Studentslikechattingonthephone.Moststudentslikechattingonthephoneafterschool/inthefreetime.3.同义替换，避免重复。Ilikereadingbooks.Ilovereading.Ienjoyreading.4.使用关联词表示文章的逻辑。Ishouldtalkwithmygoodfriend,andIshouldlistentomusic.Ifailinthemath.Iamupset.First,Icantalkwithmygoodfriend.Second,Icanlistentomusictorelaxmyself.IfailinmathsoIamupset.5.学会使用简单的句子，避免过度重复。WeshouldimprovepronunciationaswellbylisteningtotheconversationinEnglishmovies.WeshouldimprovepronunciationbylisteningtotheconversationfromEnglishmovies.学生：老师，我还是不会写作文怎么办啊？1记叙文2议论文教育类记叙文写前“4W+1H”:what,who,where,when,how人称、时态subject,tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:组织、提取信息写中组织信息添加内容选取信息自我检查写后检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查真题赏析假如你是李华，上周你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容，写一篇短文。(2018年陕西中考作文)活动上午讲故事，唱歌,

……中午煮面(cooknoodles),

休息(haveaseat),……下午玩游戏，看动画片(watchcartoons),……感受……

要求：1.参考表格内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，疑似连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）4.词数：不少于70个词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________whowhenwhatwhere记叙文whatlookedaftermysisterNanawho

mysisterNanaandIwhenlastweekwhereathomeStep1写前审题记叙文whatlookedaftermysisterNanawho

mysisterNanaandIwhenlastweekwhereathomeStep2写前第一人称一般过去时审题记叙文whatlookedaftermysisterNanawho

mysisterNanaandIwhenlastweekwhereathomeStep3写前第一人称一般过去时readbookshappy,tiredcleantheroomasenseofresponsibility审题写前上午/中午/下午inthemorning/afternoon/evening讲故事、唱歌toldstories,sangsongs煮面、休息玩游戏、看动画片cookednoodles,hadarest

playedgames,watchedcartoonsbrainstormingreadbooks,cleanedtheroomfeelinghappy,tired,asenseofresponsibility…………Step4搜集、提取信息

LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome.Inthemorning,Itoldstoriestomysister.Wesangsongs.Intheafternoon,Icookednoodlesformysister.Ihadarest.Intheevening,Weplayedgamesandwatchedcartoons.Iwasverytiredbutveryhappy.写中组织信息Step1draftPOINT9技巧1和技巧2添加信息和技巧2

LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome.Inthemorning,Itold______________________storiestomysister._______Wesangsongs_______.Intheafternoon,Icookednoodlesforher.________________________________________________Wehadarest____________.Intheevening,Weplayedgames,________,andwatchedcartoons___________________Iwasverytiredbutreallyhappy,写中manyinterestingandfunnyAfterthattogetherShesaidthenoodleswereverydelicious,soIfeltveryhappy.Afterawhile,foraboutanhouruntilmyparentscamebackhome.

readbooks添加信息（写作技巧）Step2BecauseIcouldlookaftermylittlesisterbymyselfandIhadasenseofresposibility.brainstorming和添加信息技巧3，添加信息

LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome.Inthemorning,Itold

manyinterestingandfunnystoriestomysister.Afterthatwesang

songs,together.Intheafternoon,Icookednoodles.Shesaidthenoodleswereverydelicious,soIfeltveryhappy.Afterawhile,wehadarestforaboutanhour.Intheafternoon,weplayed

games,readbooksandwatchedcartoonsuntilmyparentscame

back.Iwas

verytiredbutreallyhappy,becauseIcouldlookaftermylittlesisterandIhadasenseofresponsibilty.写后检查主要内容检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构Step3Self-check最终呈现

LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome.Inthemorning,Itold

manyinterestingandfunnystoriestomysister.Afterthatwesang

songs,together.Intheafternoon,Icookednoodles.Shesaidthenoodleswereverydelicious,soIfeltveryhappy.Afterawhile,we