高考英语作文复习读后续写技能之情绪描写(2)课件

读后续写技能之情绪描写高兴、兴奋一、高级词汇

n.快乐;高兴;欢乐2.happiness n.幸福;愉快3.delight vt.&n.

使高兴;高兴4.pleasure n.高兴;愉快5.amusement n.娱乐;娱乐活动6.excitedly adv.激动地7.thrill vt.&n.使激动;兴奋8.cheerful adj.令人愉快的;快乐的;高兴的9.merry adj.愉快的;高兴的10.overjoyed

adj.欣喜若狂;非常高兴二、高级语块

雀跃/高兴地跳起来2.giveajumpintheair

高兴地蹦跶3.lightup 喜形于色4.brightensb.’sheart 使某人心情愉快5.bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness 欣喜若狂6.inagoodmood 心情好7.inhigh/cheerfulspirits 兴高采烈8.toone’sdelight/joy 让某人开心的是9.ontopoftheworld

高兴坏了10.beoverthemoon

欣喜若狂11.amixtureofexcitementandhappiness 既兴奋又开心12.grinfromeartoear

咧嘴大笑三、亮点句式1.Icould

hardly

contain

my

joy/happiness/delightanddancedintothehouse.我抑制不住内心的喜悦,蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。2.Delighted

and

thrilled,Igaveajumpintheairandthenskippedintothesupermarketalongwithmysmilingmother.又高兴又激动,我蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了超市。3.Herhandsweretremblingwith

excitementassheopenedthebox.当她打开盒子时,她的手激动得发抖。4.Tears

of

joy/happiness

welled

up

in

their

eyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.他们喜极而泣,紧紧拥抱在一起。5.Shecameuptohim,with

a

smile

shining

like

a

diamond.Innotimehiseyeswerefilledwithwarmexcitedtears.她带着钻石般闪耀的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。【情境应用】Ⅰ.完成句子1.Hecouldhardlywaittosharehistrip,____________________________________________________(双眸闪闪发亮,脸上洋溢着喜悦).

2.Shefeltontopoftheworld,andeveryfreckleonhercheeks___________________(雀跃起来).

3.Atthesightofsuchalovelyrabbit,Iwas____________________(欣喜若狂)andfolloweditstrack.

4.Momtriedto_____________________(抑制自己的激动),buttheglitteringtearsfailedher.

5.“Aha!Icatchyou!”_____________________canbenoticedinhisvoice.

“啊哈!我抓住你了!”他的声音里带着一丝喜悦。eyesshining/twinklingandfaceglowingwithjoy/delightwasdancingwithjoywildwithdelight/joy

containherexcitementaflashofpleasure/joy

Ⅱ.翻译句子1.我开心地点点头,脸上露出灿烂的笑容。

Inoddedcheerfully/happily/joyfully,withabig/broad/brightsmileappearingon/spreadingacross/crossingmyface.

2.他脸上露出笑容,双眸闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。Asmilelituphisfaceandhiseyeswereshining/twinkling/sparklingwithgreatjoy/excitement.

3.他高兴极了,跳起来,高兴地在院子里跑。Fullofhappiness/Pleasedbeyonddescription/Overjoyed,hejumpedupandranhappilyaroundtheyard.

4.这时,一个快乐的声音从远处传来,使我们沉浸在狂喜之中。大家都笑得合不拢嘴。Thencameahappyvoicefromadistance,bathingusinextremejoy.Everyonewasgrinningfromeartoear.

5.史蒂夫知道这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。AfterStevelearnedthissatisfactoryresult,asenseofjoyandhappinesssweptover/floodedoverhim.

Ⅲ.片段续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,写作时尽量使用表示“高兴、兴奋”的情绪词汇和句式。

Asanonlychild,NicoleRenaeoftenfeltlonelyinheryouth.Butthatallchangedwhensheturnedten.Forherbirthday,Renae’sgrandmothersurprisedherwithanadorablegraypuppynamedChloe.Fromtheverystart,thetwowereinseparable.“Shewasmybestfriend,”Renaesaid.ForeveryounceofloveRenaegave,thelittledogreturnedtenfold.“Shewassuchasweetdog,”Renaesaid.“She’dlickyourfaceforeverifyoudidn’tstopher.”注意:续写词数应为100左右。

WhenshemetChloe,Renaefoundthatthedogseemedsofamiliar._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】1.通读全文,把握原文要领(1)体裁:记叙文(2)故事主线和线索:①本文讲述了蕾妮小时候与小狗克洛伊是好朋友,但是14岁时,由于父亲需要在家里工作,克洛伊不得不被送出去了。蕾妮结婚生子之后,想要为自己的女儿收养一只小狗。蕾妮看到了网上的一条帖子说一只老狗需