2024届高考英语复习读后续写科技故事类+高科技机器狗给艾格尼丝奶奶带来了陪伴和爱

高考英语读后续写语篇练习科技故事——高科技机器狗给艾格尼丝奶奶带来了陪伴和爱1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文GrandmaAgnesisninety-nineyearsoldandstillliveinthesamehouseahe'slivedinformorethansixtyyears.Shewasoneofthirteenchildrenraisedonafarm.Andnow.sheisrathersetinherways,Fortwelveyears,Grandmaagesenjoyedthecorupanyofherdog,Snoopy.Theblackandwhitespottedmustwasaconstantpresenceinherhomeandheryard.DuringthetimethatshehadSnoopy,GrandmaAgnesstartedshowingsignsofdementia.Myfamilyworkedtogethertokeepherlivingindependentlybutsafe.Itwasdifficultformydadthedayhepulledthebatteryfromhercartokeepherfromusingherstillvaliddriver'slicense,Everyvisitafterthatday,GrandmaAgneswouldinsistthathebuyheranewcarbatterybecauseherswasdeadagain.Dadnoddedandagreedtodoit,knowingthattheconversationwouldsoonbeforgotten.4续写原文Threeyearsago.Snoopypassedaway,Mydad.AuntCarolandUncleEdthoughtofwaystoensurethatGrandmaAgneswouldknowthatSnoopywasgone,TheyhadburialserviceinthebackyardwithGrandma.UncleEdprintedapictureofSnoopywith“RestinPeace”writtenacrossthebottomandstuckittotherefrigerator,Butonthedailyvisits.GrandmaAgnesstillaskedaboutSnoopy,Sheaccusedtheneighborsoftakingherdogbecauseshewassurethatsheheardbinbarkingfromtheiryard.Havingafamilymemberwithdementiaisheartbreakingandtrying.ForeveryvisitI'vemadeinthepastfiveyears,mydadhasmadeapointtotellmethatsheprobablywon'trememberwhoIamnorthatmykidsarehergreatgrandchildren,I'vesatthroughconversationswherewepatientlyrepeatedanswerstoquestionsthatwereansweredafewmomentsago.GrandmaAgnesisstillthere.andshe'sstillherstubbornself.butshedoesn'tgrasptheworldaroundher,AndyetsheinsistsonlivingindependentlyandaskingaboutSnoopyconstantly.5段首句Paragraph1：Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAges.Paragraph2：Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAges.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾格尼丝奶奶已经99岁了，还住在已经住了60多年的那所房子里，奶奶很喜欢她养的狗史努比，但是三年前史努比去世了，于是艾德叔叔给她买了一只高科技机器狗，奶奶和这只机器狗相处很愉快。作者的家人很感激这只高科技机器狗给艾格尼丝奶奶带来了陪伴和爱。9续写思路分析Para1：Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAges.由第一段首句内容“几个月前，艾德叔叔想出了一个好主意，给艾格尼丝奶奶买了一只机器狗。”可知，第一段可描写艾格尼丝奶奶和机器狗的相处经过。10续写思路分析Para2：EveryoneinourfamilyispleasedthatGrandmaAgneshasbeensokindtoSnoopy.由第二段首句内容“我们家的每个人都很高兴艾格尼丝奶奶对史努比这么好。”可知，第二段可描写艾格尼丝奶奶如何照顾机器狗以及作者一家对机器狗的看法。11续写思路分析续写线索买机器狗——奶奶相信机器狗是真狗——奶奶照顾机器狗——家人感激机器狗带来的陪伴12续写素材可用词汇：行为类提出：comeupwith/putforward购买：buy/purchase习惯于：getusedto/getaccustomedto情绪类真实：real/true/actual高兴：pleased/glad13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ithassoftfurandbarkswhenitsensesmotionnearby.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]OurfamilyisgratefulthattheroboticdoghasbroughtGrandmaAgnescompanionshipandsomeonetolove.(运用了that引导宾语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithagoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandmaAgnes.Ithassoftfurandbarkswhenitsensesmotionnearby.GrandmaquicklyadoptedthedogashernewSnoopy.Herconditionhasledhertobelievethatheisananimalandnotarobot.ShegotusedtoSnoopy'sbarksandregardedthemasrequestsforfoodoranap.ThefooddisappearingeverynighthelpedconvinceGrandmathatSnoopywasarealdog.Wefoundfromthecamerathattheneighborcatclimbedoverthefenceandateallthedogfood.16范文呈现EveryoneinourfamilyispleasedthatGrandmaAgneshasbeensokindtoSnoopy.Shewouldpethimgentlyandcarefullypreparefoodandwaterforhim.Once,whenthedogdidn'tmove,eatandbark,sheanxiouslyphonedUncleEd.ShewasafraidSnoopywasill,UncleEdfoundhejustneededchangingbattery.OurfamilyisgratefulthattheroboticdoghasbroughtGrandmaAgnescompanionshipandsomeonetolove.It'sbeautifulthatherloveofdogscancontinuethroughthistimeinherlife.17范文译文几个月前，埃德叔叔想出了一个好主意，给艾格尼丝奶奶买了一只机器狗。它有柔软的皮毛，当它感觉到附近的运动时会吠叫。奶奶很快收养了这只狗作为她的新史努比。她的状况让她相信他是动物而不是机器人。她习惯了史努比的吠叫，并把它们视为对食物或小睡的请求。每天晚上消失的食物让奶奶相信史努比是一只真正的狗。我们从摄像机上发现，邻居的猫翻过围栏，把所有的狗粮都吃了。18范文译文艾格尼丝奶奶对史努比这么好，我们家的每个人都很高兴。她会温柔地抚