2024届高考英语冲刺复习读后续写灾难故事类+与朋友结伴滑雪突遇雪崩后死里逃生

高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——与朋友结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(风雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.4续写原文Almostimmediately,thesnowbeneaththeirfeetgaveway.Inamillisecond,Paulrealizedwhatwashappening.“Avalanche!(雪崩)”heyelledtoScott,whowasnotfarbehind.Scottresponded.Thesuddensnowslidecausedfearinhisvoice.“Thisishappening!”Instantly,bothwerehitbyamassofsnowthatwouldhitandcarrythemsome500feetdownthemountain.Scottfeltitsurroundingandenclosinghim,movingquicklyuphisbackandoverhisshoulders,thenheavyagainsthisneck.Snowfilledthespaceinfrontofhimandpileduparoundthewholeofhim.Paul,too,wassweptdownhill.Theyrememberedtheavalanchesurvivallessonstheyhadlearned.Keepyourheadup.Trytoswim.Stayontopofthesnow.Butthesnowwastoopowerfulandtheyfeltthemselvesrollinglikealoadofclothesinawashingmachine.WhenScottfinallycametorest,hewaslyingonhisleftsideandcompletelyburied,skisandpolesstillattached.5段首句Paragraph1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Paragraph2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了经验丰富的滑雪爱好者肯·斯科特和好友保罗结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.由第一段首句内容“保罗比较幸运，部分被埋葬，很可能还活着。”可知，第一段可描写保罗如何脱险，以及脱险后寻找好友和寻求救援。10续写思路分析Para2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.由第二段首句内容“回忆起那次可怕的经历，斯科特感谢了他的朋友和救援队伍。”可知，第二段可描写当被埋在封闭空间的积雪下时，斯科特的心理活动及获救后的感激之情。11续写思路分析续写线索结伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——寻求援助——获救——感激12续写素材可用词汇：行为类1.到达：arrivein/reach2.遇见：comeacross/meet3.集中:focuson/concentrateon情绪类1.高兴的：exhilarated/pleased2.惊恐：terror/panic13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.（as引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Sofortunatewashethatmostofthesnowhadgoneoverhisbodyandcontinueddownthehill.Insuchashallowburial,hebegantoshakeoffthesnow,scoopedsnowawaywithbarehands,andmanagedtopullhimselfout.Lookingaroundtheworldofsnow,hedesperatelyshoutedScott’snamebutreceivednotraceofresponses.Paulunzippedhisparkaandpulledoutthephonetomaketheemergencycall.Shortlyafterwards,therescueteamarrived.Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.16范文呈现Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.Whenburiedundersnowintheenclosedspace,Scottdriftedbetweenterrorandpanic,hopingthathisfriendPaulwasnotburiedsodeep.Heheldontothatfaintpossibilitylikearopewhichcouldpullhimtosafety.Hepainstakinglytookonlytinybreaths,fightingtostaypositivebyfocusingonthisbreathing.Timetickedawayslowly.Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.Inthatone-in-a-millionchance,theymadeit.Withthedullskyclearingup,bothPaulandScottbreathedinthefreshairwithabandon,feelingtherebirthoflife.17范文译文保罗更幸运，最终被部分埋葬，可能还活了下来。他是如此幸运，以至于大部分的雪都盖过了他的身体，继续下山。在这样一个浅埋的地方，他开始抖雪，徒手铲雪，然后设法把自己拉了出来。环顾雪地，他拼命喊着斯科特的名字，但没有得到任何回应。保罗拉开他的派克大衣的拉链，拔出电话打紧急电话。不久之后，救援队赶到了。在巨大的努力下，保罗和团队找到了斯科特，并在一个封闭的空间里发现了他还活着，这以令人难以置信的生还结束了这场不可思议的事故。18范文译文回忆起那段可怕的经历，斯科特感谢他的朋友和救援队。当斯科特被埋在封闭的空间里的雪下时，他在恐惧和恐慌之间徘徊，希望他的朋友保罗不要埋得那么深。他紧紧抓住那微