2025届高考英语复习读后续写误会故事类一场比赛解开了母子之间的误会

高考英语读后续写语篇练习误会故事——一场比赛解开了母子之间的误会1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“GoingtoNationals!”Wewereallscreamingandjumping.Kate,Jenny,WendyandIembracedeachother,bouncing.“Goodjob,Tara.”SaidKateassheputanarmaroundme.Iamtheyoungestontherelayraceteam,butI'mfast.WhenIrun,Ileavetheskinofmyshynessbehind,andIfeellikeahorsemanontheMongoliangrassland,free,withoutboundaries.Everybodyrantotheirparentsinthebleachers(露天看台).MyMomdidn’tmakeit.Again.Igrabbedmyphoneandcalledher.Ittookawhileforhertoanswer.“Yes,hidear.”“Mom,wewonstates,andwearegoingtonationals.”Iburstoutinonebreath.“Great!Let’stalklater;I’llpickyouupfromschool.”Iwantedtosay:“Isthatit?Whyaren’tyouproudofme?Allotherparentsarehere,whyaren’tyou?”butallIdidwas“OK,seeyousoon.”Doessheseeme?DoImatter?4续写原文Itwaslateafter9PM.Alltheparentspickeduptheirchildren,butmyMomwasn’thereyet.CoachJohnsonwaitedwithme.Wejuststood.Aspeedingcarturnedthecorner;itwasmyMom’sToyota.Coachpattedmeonthebackandleft.“IamsosorryIamlate.Timejustflew.”SaidMom.IwantedtocryindisappointmentandtellherthatIhatetobealwayslasttobepickedupandneverhavehercometomysportingcontests,schoolplays,oranythingelse;askherwhyshewon’tmaketimeforme.ButwhenIlookedatherandsawhertiredeyesandclenchedjaw(咬紧下巴),Ijustsaid:“That'sOK,Mom,Iunderstand.”HerjawhadstayedclenchedsincewecametothiscountryasMomwouldsay:“withtwopiecesofluggage,athree-year-old(me),and$700.”5段首句Paragraph1：NationalsfinallycameandmyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.Paragraph2：IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和同学赢得了洲际比赛，将要冲向全国的比赛，但是别的同学的父母都到场和自己的孩子一起欢呼时，作者只能打电话给母亲，电话那头母亲没有表示祝贺，作者因此感到很失望，作者希望母亲能来现场看比赛，也希望母亲能够早点来接自己，但是想到母亲一直咬紧牙关养育自己，作者的内心的想法也说不出口。9续写思路分析Para1：NationalsfinallycameandmyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.由第一段首句内容“全国赛终于来了，我妈第一次来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者母亲来看作者比赛的场景。10续写思路分析Para2：IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself.由第二段首句内容“我让大家失望了，我跑出去躲起来。”可知，第二段可描写作者比赛失误后的羞愧，母亲的鼓励。11续写思路分析续写线索母亲看作者比赛——比赛失误——作者感到羞愧——母亲的安慰和鼓励——作者和母亲误会解开12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①降低：fall/lower②使失望：disappoint/upset③离开：quit/departfrom情绪类①温柔的：soft/gentle②激动的：excited/agitated13续写素材可用句型：

[高分句型1].IwasbeginningtopickupspeedagainwhenIwassuddenlythrownoffbalance.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2].IloveyousomuchthatIwantedtobuildastrongerboatforus.(由so…that引导结果状语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现NationalsfinallycameandMyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.SeeingmyMominthebleachers,Iwasespeciallyexcited.Iwaslikeracehorsesatthegate:nervouslywaitingandheadsheldhigh.Iwasthelastrunnerinourteam.“Ihavetosealthewin.”Itoldmyself.AfterWendypassedthebatoninmyhand,Iexplodedforward.Thecrowdwerescreaming.Mythoughtsrockedwiththepulseoftheblood.IwasbeginningtopickupspeedagainwhenIwassuddenlythrownoffbalance.JustasIwasregainingcontrol,Ihittheflooranddroppedthebaton.Myworldhadjustended.16范文呈现IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself.Mylegswereallbloody,butthat'snotwhathurt.Idisappointedeverybody.Afterawhile,mymom,withredeyes,foundme.“Iwillquittheteam.”Iwhispered.“No,love!Youhadthebesttimeintherace.Itwasanaccident.”Shecontinuedtomakemefeelgood,butIheardonlyhersoftvoicecomingasawarmembraceatme,andthenIcriedoutmysorrow,“You're…neveratmymeets…alwayslate…youdon'thavetime…you'renotproudofme.”Hervoicedropped,“IloveyousomuchthatIwantedtobuildastrongerboatforus.Iamproudofyoueverysecond.”Thirstyforthosewords,Iranintoherarms.Thenextday,Iwentbacktothetrack.WhenIlookedatmyMominthebleachers,wesmiled.17范文译文国民队终于来了，我妈妈第一次来了。看到我妈妈在露天看台上，我特别兴奋。我像赛马一样在门口紧张地等着，昂首挺胸。我是我们队最后一个跑者。“我必须锁定胜局。”我告诉自己。温蒂把接力棒递给我后，我猛地向前冲去。人群在尖叫。我的思绪随着血液的脉搏而颤动。我刚开始加速，突然失去了平衡。就在我恢复控制的时候，我撞到了地板上，把接力棒掉了下来。我的世界刚刚结束。18范文译文我让所有人都失望了，我跑出去藏起来。我的腿都是血，但那不是痛的地方。我让所有人都失望了。过了一会儿，红着眼睛的妈妈找到了我。“我要退出球队。”我轻声说。“不，亲爱的！你在比赛中度过了最美好的时光。这是一场意外。”她继续让我感觉很好，但我只听到她温柔的声音像温暖的拥抱一样向我走来，然后我哭出了我的悲伤，“你……从来没有参加过我的比