全国十城市质检试题分类荟萃之短文改错

全国十城市质检试题分类荟萃之短文改错第一套[长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（一）]第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。DearMs.J.K.Rowling,Itisgreatpleasuretowritetoyou.IlikereadingallofyourHarryPotterbook.Afewdaysbefore,Ilistenedtoaradioprogrammeaboutyou.NowIknowthatyouteachEnglishathomeandinotherscountriesbeforeyoustartedwritingbooks.Ialsoknowthatyoucouldonlywritethefirstbookwhileyourbabydaughterwasasleep,soyouworkedonthemforfiveyears.Thatwasaverymuchdifficultjob.YoursonDavidandyourdaughterJessicamustbeproudforyou.IhopeIcanbecomeassuccessfullyasyouwhenIgrowup.Thankyouforspendingtimereadmyletter.Yourssincerely,Michele第二套[长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（二）]Lastweek,therewasaprogramcalling“LearningtoRespectOurParents”inourschool.Thatisknowntousthatrespectforone’sparentsisoneofChinesetraditionalmoralvalue.Andmoststudentsnowadaysare“theonlychild”.Weoftenthinkofthemselvesasthecentreoftheirfamily.Asfortheprogram,eight“dos”haveworkedoutforthestudentstofollow.Foranexample,weareadvisedtorememberourparents’birthdays.Besidethis,itisnecessarythatweshouldalsotellourparentswhatwearegoingtodowhenwegoout.Theprogramhasbeensuchsuccessfulthatithasbeenhighpraisedbymanypeople.第三套[2016年三省四市高三模拟考试英语能力测试]Oneofmyhappiestchildhoodmemorieswerehavingdinnerwithmyparentsandtwosisters.Asaresult,foundthatweseldomhadachancetogettogether,thenwedecidedthatwewouldsetasidethreeeveningstheweekforasit-downdinner.Firstwetriedsettingthreefixeddaysforourexperiment—Mondays,WednesdaysorFridays.Afteracoupleofweekoftryingthisplan,almosteveryonewasunhappy.Forawhile,thekidsbegantoresisttheidea.Theysaidtheywouldrathertospendthetimewiththeirfriendsortakepartinsomeactivities.Gradual,though,theybegantoseetheseeveningstogetherforaverydifferentway.Welaughedalotandwediscussedabouteachother’sproblems.Sinceafewmonths,weallfeltthatwehadbeenabletobuildmuchstrongrelationshipswiththefamilythanwehadbefore.第四套[2016年沈阳市高中三年级教学质量监测（一）]Therewasarichmanwhocarriedmanytreasurestothedistancetolookintohappiness.Butafteralongmarch,hefailstofindhappiness.Annoyed,hesatbyapathofthemountainwhileafarmercarryingalargebunchoffirewoodcamedownfromthemountain.Therichmansaid,“I’mawealthman.CanyoutellmethatwhyI’munhappy?”Thefarmerputdowntheheavyfirewood,wipedthesweatpleasantandsaid,“Happinessisverysimple:putdownandyou’llbehappy!”Therichmaninspiredsuddenly.Anxiousandtiringallday,hecarriedthatheavyjewelry,afraidofbeingrobbedormurdered.Howcouldyoubehappy?Sotherichmanhelpedthepoorwithjewelryandmoney,doinggooddeed.Heenjoyedthetasteofhappiness.第五套[2016届石家庄市高中毕业班质量检测（二）试题]I’velearntfromthenoticethatyou’relookingforanEnglisheditorforusschoolpaper.I’mwrittenthislettertoapplyfortheposition.I’mLiHua,SeniorThreestudentinourschool.Inmyview,Imetyourrequirements:foronething,I’mwillingtodevotesomeofmysparetimetoserveothers;foranother,I’mgoodatbothEnglishorFineArts.I’meitherskilledinusingcomputers.Iwouldbegladifyoucouldoffertomeanopportunityforaninterview.I’mlookingforwardtoyourkindlyreplyatyourearliestconvenient.第六套[NCS(南昌市)20160607项目第一次模拟测试卷]Awomanwastakentothehospital.Whilehavinganoperation,shehadanearlydeathexperience.SeeingGod,sheaskedhowthiswasit.Godsaid,”No,youhadanother40years.”Onrecoverythewomendecidedtohaveaplasticsurgery.Shehadsomeonechangeherhaircolor,thinkingsinceshehadsomanytimetolive,she'dbettermakefullusefromit.Finallyshegotoutofthehospital.Whilecrossingthestreet,shekilledbyanambulancespeededby.ArrivinginthefrontofGod,shedemanded，“TheysaidIhadanother40years!”Godreplied,“ButIdidn'trecognizeyou.”第七套[南京市、盐城市2016届高三年级第二次模拟考试]第八套[厦门市2016届高中毕业班第一次质量检查]Oneday,somechildrenwereplayinghide-and-seekwhiletheyheardaboynamesTateshouting.“Help!Thegoldenlioniscomingafterme!”TheygorunningtohelpTate,onlyfindhimlaughingontheground.Onechildsaid,“Youshouldn’tdothat.Ifyouarerealintrouble,nobodywillcometohelpyou.”

Inarainyday,Tateshoutedagain,“TheriverisfloodingandIcan’tswim.Help!”Thechildrendidn’tbelieveherthistime.Butagirlsaweverythingandcalledtheotherstosavehim.Tatewasnotsorryforplayingtricksonhisfriend.Sofromthatdayon,Tateneverdidthatagain.第九套[武汉市2016届高中毕业生二月调研测试]Igrewupinasmalltowntheretheelementaryschoolwasaten-minutewalkfrommyhouseandinanagewhenchildrencouldgohomeforlunchandfoundtheirmotherswaiting.Itookforgrantedthatmotherswerethesandwich-makersorthehomeworkmonitors.Ineverquestionedifthisintelligentwoman,whohadhadajobbeforeIwasborn,wouldeventuallyreturnagaintowork.Ionlyknewthatwhenthenoonbellrings,Iwouldracebreathlesshome.Mymotherwouldbestandingatthetopofthestair,smilingatmeinalookthatsuggestedIwastheonlyimportantthingshehadonhermind.Forthis,Iamforevergrateful.第十套[2016年大连市高三双基测试卷]RecentlyIhavedoneasurveyonthehobbiesofthe1,500studentsinourschool.Theresultshowedthatover40%ofthemarefondofplayingmusicalinstrumentsintheirsparetimebecauseitcanimprovetheirlifequality.About35%enjoysurftheInternet,whichhelpsthemknowaboutworldaffair.Whatsurprisesmemostisthenumberofthestudentspaidmuchattentiontoreadinganddoingsportsissmaller.Eachonlymakesupfor12%,althoughoneisabestwaytogainknowledgeandtheothertokeepfit.Therefore,manystudentsarestronglyadvisedtotakeonreadingasknowledgeispower.Plus,theyshouldtakeanactivepartinsportsanddevelopotherhobbiesproperbesidesentertainment.第十一套[广州试题]第十二套[重庆试题]第十三套[成都试题]第十四套[天津试题]全国十城市质检试题分类荟萃之短文改错参考答案第一套[长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（一）]【参考答案】DearMs.J.K.Rowling,Itis^greatpleasuretowritetoyou.IlikereadingallofyourHarryPotterbook.Afewabooksdaysbefore,Ilistenedtoaradioprogrammeaboutyou.NowIknowthatyouteachEnglishatagotaughthomeandinotherscountriesbeforeyoustartedwritingbooks.Ialsoknowthatyoucouldonlyotherwritethefirstbookwhileyourbabydaughterwasasleepsoyouworkedonthemforfiveyears.itThatwasaverymuchdifficultjob.YoursonDavidandyourdaughterJessicamustbeproudforyou.IhopeIcanbecomeassuccessfullyasyouwhenIgrowup.Thankyouforspendingofsuccessfultimereadmyletter.readingYourssincerely,Michele【语篇解读】本文是应用文，作者写信给.罗琳，表达自己对她的崇拜，以及期望自己成功的愿望。1.【命题立意】考查冠词。【试题解析】“great”的前面需用冠词a。2.【命题立意】考查名词。【试题解析】根据“all”可知，“book”需用复数。3.【命题立意】考查副词。【试题解析】几天前应该用ago。4.【命题立意】考查动词。【试题解析】此处应该用过去时，表示以前曾经教过英语，teach的过去时为taught。5.【命题立意】考查形容词。【试题解析】“countries”需用“other”修饰。6.【命题立意】考查代词。【试题解析】此处代词替代的是上文提到的第一本书，故用单数代词替代。7.【命题立意】考查副词。【试题解析】“very”修饰形容词，“verymuch”修饰动词。8.【命题立意】考查固定短语。【试题解析】此处考查固定短语beproudof。9.【命题立意】考查形容词。【试题解析】become在此句中为系动词，后面应该用形容词而不是副词。10.【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。【试题解析】此处考查固定短语spendtime(in)doingsomething。第二套[长春市普通高中2016届高三质量监测（二）]Lastweek,therewasaprogramcalling“LearningtoRespectOurParents”calledinourschool.Thatisknowntousthatrespectforone’sparentsisoneofChineseIttraditionalmoralvalue.Andmoststudentsnowadaysare“theonlychild”.WevaluesButTheyoftenthinkofthemselvesasthecentreoftheirfamily..Asfortheprogram,eight“dos”have∧workedoutforthestudentstofollow.beenForanexample,weareadvisedtorememberourparents’birthdays.Besidethis,Besidesitisnecessarythatweshouldalsotellourparentswhatwearegoingtodowhenwegoout.Theprogramhasbeensuchsuccessfulthatithasbeenhighpraisedbymanysohighlypeople.【参考答案及解析】【语篇解读】本文讲述了在学校开展尊敬父母的活动并取得很大成功。【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。【试题解析】calling与其所修饰的词program之间是被动关系，故改为过去分词【命题立意】考查主语从句中的形式主语。【试题解析】此句为主语从句，形式主语用it，后接由that引导的真正主语【命题立意】考查名词单复数。【试题解析】oneof表示其中之一时后面要用名词复数，故用values【命题立意】考查连词。【试题解析】上下文是转折而不是并列。【命题立意】考查代词。【试题解析】根据下文的themselves和their来判断。【命题立意】考查被动语态。【试题解析】此处意为八条准则被制定出来，应该用被动语态而不是主动语态。【命题立意】考查冠词。【试题解析】举例说明的固定短语是forexample,冠词an多余，所以去掉。【命题立意】考查介词。【试题解析】根据上下文语境可知此处表示此外，而beside表示在旁边。【命题立意】考查固定搭配。【试题解析】此处successful是形容词，故用so修饰。【命题立意】考查学生对形容词与副词。【试题解析】此处修饰动词praised，故用highly。第三套[2016年三省四市高三模拟考试英语能力测试]短文改错（1×10=10分）Oneofmyhappiestchildhoodmemorieswere—was/ishavingdinnerwithmyparentsandtwosisters.Asaresult,加havingfoundthatweseldomhadachancetogettogether,thenwedecidedthatwewouldsetasidethreeeveningsthe--aweekforasit-downdinner.Firstwetriedsettingthreefixeddaysforourexperiment—Mondays,Wednesdaysor--andFridays.Afteracoupleofweek--weeksoftryingthisplan,almosteveryonewasunhappy.Forawhile,thekidsbegantoresisttheidea.Theysaidtheywouldrather删tospendthetimewiththeirfriendsortakepartinsomeactivities.Gradual-Gradually,though,theybegantoseetheseeveningstogetherfor--inaverydifferentway.Welaughedalotandwediscussedabouteachother’sproblems.Since--Afterafewmonths,weallfeltthatwehadbeenabletobuildmuchstrong--strongerrelationshipswiththefamilythanwehadbefore.第四套[2016年沈阳市高中三年级教学质量监测（一）]Therewasarichmanwhocarriedmanytreasurestothedistancetolookintohappiness.forButafteralongmarch,hefailstofindhappiness.Annoyed,hesatbyapathofthemountainfailedwhileafarmercarryingalargebunchoffirewoodcamedownfromthemountain.Therichmanwhensaid,“I’mawealthman.CanyoutellmethatwhyI’munhappy?”Thefarmerputdownthewealthyheavyfirewood,wipedthesweatpleasantandsaid,“Happinessisverysimple:putdownandpleasantlyyou’llbehappy!”Therichmaninspiredsuddenly.Anxiousandtiringallday,hecarriedthatwastiredheavyjewelry,afraidofbeingrobbedormurdered.Howcouldyoubehappy?Sotherichmanhehelpedthepoorwithjewelryandmoney,doinggooddeed.Heenjoyedthetasteofhappiness.deeds第五套[2016届石家庄市高中毕业班质量检测（二）试题]I’velearntfromthenoticethatyou’relookingforanEnglisheditorforusschoolpaper.ourI’mwrittenthislettertoapplyfortheposition.writingI’mLiHua,∧SeniorThreestudentinourschool.Inmyview,Imetyourrequirements:ameetforonething,I’mwillingtodevotesomeofmysparetimetoserveothers;foranother,servingI’mgoodatbothEnglishorFineArts.I’meitherskilledinusingcomputers.Iwouldbegladandalsoifyoucouldoffertomeanopportunityforaninterview.I’mlookingforwardtoyourkindlyreplyatyourearliestconvenient.kindconvenience第六套[NCS(南昌市)20160607项目第一次模拟测试卷]Awomanwastakentothehospital.Whilehavinganoperation,shehadanearlyneardeathexperience.SeeingGod,sheaskedhowthiswasit.Godsaid,“No,youhadif/whetherhaveanother40years.”Onrecoverythewomendecidedtohaveaplasticsurgery.Shehadwomansomeonechangeherhaircolor,thinkingsinceshehadsomanytimetolive,she’dmuchbettermakefullusefromit.Finallyshegotoutofthehospital.Whilecrossingtheofstreet,she∧killedbyanambulancespeededby.ArrivinginthefrontofGod,wasspeedingshedemanded,“TheysaidIhadanother40years!”Godreplied,“ButIdidn’tYourecognizeyou.”第七套[南京市、盐城市2016届高三年级第二次模拟考试]TomakeiteasierforherparentstogettoAmerica,ayoungwomanhasdrawnthreepictures.ThesepicturescontainalmostallthenecessaryinformationtheoldcouplemayneedontheirwaytoAmerica.Withvividdrawingsandclearinstructions,theyareimpressiveandeasytounderstand.(31words)Seeingthepictures,I’mdeeplymovedlikemanyothers.Theyoungwomanisverysweetandconsiderate.Shelovesherparentssomuch.Also,shemusthavetakenalotofpainstocomeupwithsuchawonderfulidea,whichwillbeofgreathelptoherparents.Asforme,myparentsarefacedwithmuchpressurefromworkandlife.Ishouldtrymybesttohelpthem.Forexample,…Inaddition,…第八套[厦门市2016届高中毕业班第一次质量检查]Oneday,somechildrenwereplayinghide-and-seekwhiletheyheardaboynamesTatewhennamedshouting.“Help!Thegoldenlioniscomingafterme!”TheygorunningtohelpTate,only∧findAwenttohimlaughingontheground.Onechildsaid,“Youshouldn’tdothat.Ifyouarerealintrouble,