读后续写飞机落地课件高三英语一轮复习

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iamadoctorandoftenattendimportantacademicconferencesaroundtheworld,butI'mscaredtoflyinanairplane.

Asisknowntoall,travelingonanairplanecanbeaverytiringtaskeveninthebestofcircumstances.

Especiallywhentheplanearrivesabovethedestinationandencounterssomespecialreasonsthatpreventitfromlandingsafely,thefeeling

cannotbedescribedinwords.

Inthissituation,ifyouseeapatientwithDownsyndrome(唐氏综合征)introuble,areyouwillingtohelphim?Lastweek,ItookanearlyflighttoParis,anditwasduringthisflightthatIexperiencedalifelongandtouchingexperience.Finally,thecrewsoughtprofessionalassistancefromthepassengers.AlthoughIamadoctor,Iwashelplessinthatsituation.Subsequently,Murphy,42—whohadbeenateacherforabout20years—glancedattheboy,stoodupandquicklyheadedtothebackoftheplane.Shefoundtheboyinthepassagebetweenrowsofseats,lyingonhisbelly.Soshealsolaydownonherstomachtofacehim.Shebeganchattingcalmlywithhim,askinghisname,hisfavoritebooksandhisfavoritecharacters.Asshehelpedhimcleanup,

sherepeatedlytoldhimeverythingwouldbeokayandthatthey'dgetthroughittogether.当她帮他打扫卫生时，她反复告诉他一切都会好起来的，他们会一起度过难关的。Thankstohertimelyassistance,theboyslowlycalmeddown.Theplanewasfinallyabletolandsafelyontheground.多亏了她的及时帮助，男孩慢慢平静下来。飞机终于能够安全降落在地面上。Aftertheplanelandedsafely,

noonewasimpatienttostepoffit.

飞机安全降落后，没有人迫不及待地下车。Instead,calmedpassengers—obviouslyfollowingMurphy’samazingexample—allowedtheboyandhisfamilytodepartfirst,smilingatthemastheypassed.

相反，冷静下来的乘客——显然是效仿Murphy的良好榜样——允许男孩和他的家人先离开，在他们经过时对他们微笑。Hisparentssaidtheycouldn’tthankMurphyenoughforwhatshehaddone,andIletherknowIhadeventakennotesonherexpertwayofhavingthesituationhandled.他的父母说，他们非常感谢Murphy所做的一切，我也让她知道，我甚至记下了她处理这种情况的专业方法。Isaid,“Youmusthavedealtwithsuchkindofcasebefore,haven'tyou?Yourgooddeeds

havemadeanimpressiononus.Iwantto

expressmydeepgratitudetoyou.

”我说：“你以前一定处理过这样的案件，不是吗？你的善举给我们留下了深刻的印象。我想对你深表感谢。”阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe

river

nearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina

feed

thechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe

sheep

outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe

track

sothatyoudon’t

getlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof

sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________

Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

—————————————————————————前文提要:父亲带儿子去――“西部荒野”，喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活；见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子心生向往，于是亲身上马体验……Who---UnclePaul,Dad,IWhen---OnesummerdayWhere---OnthefarmWhat---MydadtreatedmeavacationonUnclePaul’sfarm.

续写线索:第一段所给首句:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手扩展开去，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写人的反应，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。第二段所给首句:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.这一句呼应前文UnclePaul的嘱托——不要误了晚饭，可从如何寻路返回入手去写续文。续写词汇已给提示词汇:

dad，UnclePaul，farmhouse，river，feed，，track，getlost，sight话题激活词汇:情感:panic，relief,

nervous，worried动作:

run，cry，thinktooneself环境:scenery，mountain，range，valley，river,

lake，forest，sunset,

wind句子翻译及润色1.

它毛茸茸的，有一身漂亮的棕色头发Itwasfurryandithadbrownhair.

(With结构替换)Itwasfurry

withacoatofgorgeousbrownhair.2.

它用它的一对红眼睛看着我，然后开始在前面疾驰Itlookedatmewithitsredeyes,andtherunquickly.

(句式词汇升级）Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbeganto

scurry

ahead.

3.

受到惊吓，马突然跑了起来，跑的如此之快，以至于我什么也看不见只能听见风在耳边呼啸。Frightenedbytherabbit,

thehorsebegantorace.Itransofastthat

hardlycouldI

seeanythingbutheardthewind.4.

乌云似乎在天空聚集。Anddarkcloudsseemedto

begathering

inthesky.

5.

我吓坏了，盯着爸爸，试图从他那里寻求解决问题的办法。Iamscared,andIstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.6.时间一点点过去，夜幕开始降临，天空开始出现一闪闪的星星，同情地看着我们。Astimewentby,thenightbegantofallandthestarsappearedinthesky,

twinklingtheireyeatuswithsympathy.范文赏析Possibleversion1Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.“Whatalovelyrabbit!”Ishouted

witheyesglitteringwithterrificexcitement.ItwasquitedifferentfromthoseIsawinourcity,

thusimmediatelystimulatingmyinterest.

Dad

wasalsostunnedbythisspecialrabbit,

gawkingatitmotionlessly.“Dad,let’scatchitasourpet!”Isuggested,

unexpectedlyreceivinghispromptagreement.

Entirelyforgettingwhat

UnclePaul

hadtoldus,wechasedafterthatprettyrabbit,

franticwithrapture.Unfortunately,

socleverandswiftwasitthat

itdisappearedintheforestbeforelong.

Notuntilthendidwerealizethat

thelastrayoftwilightwasquicklydisappearingamongthenumeroustrees

andwecouldn’tfindour

track

atall!Wedid

getlost.

Paragraph2

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

Thebone-chillingwindhowledfiercelylikeawolf,makingthedarknessevenmoresuffocating.

“Dad,whatcanwedo?”I

threwmyarmsaroundhimtightly,quiveringandseizedbystarkhorror.“Allisgoingwell!”Dadansweredinagentlevoice,

calmandmollified.Wewanderedinthescaryforestanddidn’tknowwhathorriblethingswouldhappentous,

hopingtofindthewayback.Suddenly,weheardthesoundofwaterrollingdownthe

river.Wewereoverthemoonanddecidedtofollowtheriver.Afterawhile,weheardthefamiliarsoundof

sheep

andthencaught

sight

ofthe

farmhouse.Thefamilywerewaitingforusinthedistance.Seeingthis,aradiantsmilelitupbothofourfaces.评点：光线的消退暗示了时间的流逝和黑夜的到来，推动了故事情节的发展，与下文的gettingdark衔接；bone-chilling,scary,horrible词的运用以及比喻修辞的运用，渲染了阴森恐怖的气氛，也烘托了主人公内心的害怕、恐惧；同时，河流和羊的声音也为故事的结局提供了线索和出路，给故事画上了圆满的句号。Possibleversion

2Paragraph1

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorsewassoafraidthatitbeganrunningferociously.

Icouldfeeltheairhittingmyfaceheavilyandhearmy

dad’s

hystericalcryfromadistance.

Myheartwaspumpingwildlyandmybloodwaspulsingthroughmyveins.

Ipulledbackthereins,distractedthehorseandtriedeverymeanstostopthehorsebutinvain.Afterwhatseemedaneternity,mydadcaughtupwithmebreathlesslyandmanagedtostopmyhorse.Butwefoundthatwewereindistress,

withno

trackbesideus.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

Theriverbesideuswasstillandsereneunderthelastrayofsunshine

butwedidn’thavethemoodtoenjoyit.Suddenly,

itoccurredtousthat

therewasalsoarivernearbythe

farmhouse.Realizingtherivermaybeaguideback,

ourspiritssoared

andwebegantotrotbrisklyalongtheriver.Justafewminuteslater,

catching

sight

ofthesilhouetteofthehouse,

Ifeltafeelingofreliefandrelaxationsurgedthroughme.Icouldpicture

UnclePaul’s

smilingfaceandourdelicioussupperandIthoughttomyselfthatourbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacationwhichIwouldrememberallmylife.评点：这篇文章的环境描写较少，但是出现的几句却在文章里起到了画龙点睛的作用。比如空气击打着脸充分表现了马跑之快和当时情况的紧急。河流的平静和作者内心的不平静形成对比，凸显了主人公迷路后的焦虑不安，后来农场房子的出现又让主人公顿时柳暗花明。因此，不难发现这些环境描写看似漫不经心，其实在推动故事情节的展开，并和主人公的言行和心理息息相关。Possibleversion

3

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Werodealongthedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。MynameisJohnandImustsharewithyouaneventwhichtookplaceonFlight1553outofDCA.MywifeandIweretravelingtoMiamitocelebrateanachievementforherandasyoucanimagine,wewerelookingforwardtofun,sunandlaughter.Weboardedtheaircraft,withoutacareintheworld.ItwascoldinWashingtonandwewerereadyforFlorida.Shortlyaftertakingmyseat,Ibegantofeelsick.Iknewsomethingwasn'trightbutjustcouldn'tfindoutwhatwashappening.Beingadoctorandastubbornman,Iresistedeffortsbymywifetocallforassistance.Astheaircraftbeganitsdepartureroll,Ilostconsciousnessforashortamountoftime.AsIcamearound,Iquicklyrealizedafewthings.Firstly,somethingverybadhadhappenedtome.Secondly,theaircraftwastooheavywiththefueltogobackhome.Thirdly,mylossofconsciousnesshadbeensodeepthatIfoundmyselfoutofcontrol.SonotonlydidIhaveamedicalissuetodealwith,butIalsohadtofigureouthowtodealwithanembarrassingexperience.MywifegatheredthecrewassoonasitwassafetomoveaboutandImademywaytothewashroomtoattemptto