2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题15环境保护课件新人教版

写作专题专题十五环境保护Ⅰ．应用文写作倡议信(书)近期“公筷行动”公益广告每天在央视频道黄金时间播出。为了号召大家用餐使用公筷，请你以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议书刊登在校英文报上。内容要点如下：1．“公筷行动”简介；2．你的建议或想法。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearteachersandstudents，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudentUnionDearteachersandstudents，①Aswesee,apublicserviceadvertisementisbeingairedonCCTVeverydayrecently,whichisaboutadvocatingtheuseofpublicchopstickstoavoidusingone'sownchopstickstopickfoodfromthesamedishes．②Itisintendedthatthebacteriaandviruseswillbepreventedfromspreading．③Forthesakeofourhealthandsafety,Ithinkitisgoodandnecessarytouse“publicchopsticks”whendiningtogetherwithothers．Solet'sstarttakingactionrightaway!TheStudentUnion1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如beairedon,advocate,avoiddoing,bepreventedfromdoing,forthesakeof,dinetogetherwith,takeaction,rightaway等。2．句式美：①句中使用了两个非限制性定语从句，分别由as和which引导。②句用了“Itis＋过去分词＋that引导的主语从句”，It作形式主语。③句中think后接宾语从句，从句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语touse“publicchopsticks”。假定你是李华，请你给校英语报写一封倡议信，号召全校同学积极响应学校正在开展的垃圾分类活动，内容包括：1．垃圾分类的意义；

2．你的建议。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：垃圾分类wasteclassificationDearfellowstudents,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【参考范文】Dearfellowstudents，Asyoumayhavenoticed,theprogrammeofwasteclassificationinourschoolhaskickedoff．Iamwritingtocallonyou,membersoftheschool,totakeimmediateaction．Everyday,weproducepilesofwaste,rangingfromplasticbottlestopaper,whichnotonlyleadstoenvironmentalpollution,butisalsoawasteofresources．Therefore,itisurgentforustotakeanactivepartinthewasteclassificationprogramme．First,wecancollectwhatcanberecycledtosaveresources．Second,harmfulmaterialsshouldbesortedandtreatedproperlytoavoidpollution．Mostimportantly,weneedtodevelopthehabitofclassifyingwaste．Let'sdoit!Yours,LiHua阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Ijustwantanormalbirthdayparty，”ApriltoldBaileyastheywalkedhomefromschool．BaileyknewwhatAprilmeant．April'sparentslovedtheenvironment．AndbecauseAprilhappenedtobebornonEarthDay,allherpartieshadanEarthDaytheme．Ⅱ．读后续写“Rememberwhenyouturnedseven？”saidBailey．“HowcouldIforgettheThrow-OutBlowout？”saidApril．“Wehelpedoutatyourgaragesalesanddonatedthemoneytocharity．Andwhenyouturnedeight...”“ItwasaTreeSpree，”finishedApril．“Weplantedmaples．”“Lastyear,weallcollectednewspaperstorecycle，”saidBailey．“ThePrintSprint，”Aprilgroaned(抱怨)．Baileygiggled,“Ithoughtitwasfun．”Laterthatnight,asAprilloadedthedishwasher,shesaid,“I'dliketoplanmyownpartythisyear．”[悬念1]“Sure，”saidMum．“WecouldhaveaCompostCarnival．”“Greatidea！”saidDad．Aprilclearedherthroat．“I'dliketogotoMazeCraze(疯狂迷宫)instead．”

“Really？”saidDad,surprised．“Iguesswecoulddothat．DadandIcansendyoukidsthere，”saidMum．Aprilcouldn'twaitforherbirthday!Sheandherfriendswouldhavesomuchfun．Andtheywouldn'thavetothinkonebitabouttheEarth．Atschoolthenextday,Apriltoldherfriends,“I'mhavingmybirthdaypartyatMazeCraze！”[悬念2]“Youare？”saidJosie．“Butwealwaysdosomethingearthyonyourbirthday．”“Rememberthatsalamander(火蜥蜴)wefoundtwoyearsago？”saidTyler．“Yeah，”saidApril．“Thisyear,we'renotevengoingoutside．”“Oh！”saidTyler．Thefollowingweekend,everyonegatheredintheparkinglotoutsideofMazeCraze．“Thanksforcoming，”saidApril．“I'vebeensoexcitedaboutmyparty．Noshovels(铲子)．Nocollectingrecyclables．Nothingearthyaboutit．”Sheshiftedherfeet．“ThenIgotherethismorningandsawthisparkinglot．”April'sfriendsglancedaround．Plasticbottlesbounced(弹起)acrosstheground．Newspapersandfast-foodsacksblockedthestormdrain(排水道)．Shoppingbagsrustled(沙沙作响)inthetrees．[悬念3]注意：续写词数应为150左右。“What

a

mess！”

April

frowned．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________April

looked

at

the

collected

rubbish

and

smiled．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意关键：Who:AprilWhere:intheparkinglotoutsideofMazeCrazeWhen:onherbirthdayWhat:anormalbirthdaypartyHow:Apriltriedtocelebrateherbirthdayinanewway．大意：本文讲述了April今年想在疯狂迷宫过生日。生日当天，她和朋友到达疯狂迷宫外面的停车场时，看到了很多垃圾。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：April会怎样计划自己的生日呢？悬念2思考：疯狂迷宫与环保有关联吗？与地球日主题有关吗？悬念3思考：面对眼前的这种情景，April和她的朋友会做些什么呢？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①停车场既然这么脏乱，April会对朋友和家人说些什么呢？

②April的爸爸妈妈会怎么做？③大家会怎样捡垃圾？段首句2思考：①朋友们的衣服会不会因为捡垃圾而弄脏？

②朋友们会祝贺April生日快乐吗？③April对明年的生日聚会有何打算？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph1:April皱眉→April建议捡垃圾→大家设法捡垃圾Paragraph2：感到高兴→大家祝April生日快乐→明年的打算“What

a

mess！”

April

frowned．Thoughshehadbeenlongingforanon-EarthDaybirthday,itwasdifficulttoturnablindeyetosuchamess．Sheturnedaroundtoherfriends,“Howaboutpickingupthetrashfirst？”Herproposalwasquicklyapprovedbyothersandsoontheywereinbusiness．April'smumgrabbedsomeglovesfromthetrunkwhileherdadmanagedtoremovethoseshoppingbagsinthetrees．Withthebags,AprilandBaileycollectedscatteredbottles．Bythedrain,JosieandTylermadegreateffortstocleartheblockage．Manyhandsmakelightwork．Inashortwhile,threebagswerefilledwithcansandnewspaperstorecycle．April

looked

at

the

collected

rubbish

and

smiled．Thenshelookedupatherfriends．Theirneatclothesforthebirthdaypartyweresoakedwithsweat,buttheirfacesglowedwithsatisfaction．ItfeltsogoodtodosomethingfortheEarth．“HappyEarthDay,everyone，”saidApril．“NowwearereadyforMazeCraze．”“HappyBirthday,April！”shoutedherfriends．“I'msoluckytohavebeenbornonEarthDay！”Aprilthoughttoherself．“ACompostCarnivalmaybeagoodideafornextyear．”1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①quickly一词暗示其他人和April也有同感，因此立刻赞同她的提议。②两处用了so作修饰词，表示程度，比very语气强。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①turnablindeyeto,makegreateffortsto,besoakedwithsweat,glowwithsatisfaction等都是精彩的高级表达。②运用了Though引导的让步状语从句。③Howaboutdoingsth．?表示建议。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onemorningonmywaytoschool,Inoticedanelderlywomandressedinayellowvest(马甲)carryingagarbagebagandoneofthoserubbishclaws(爪形器具)．“What'sthatladydoing？”IaskedMum．“VestLady．Shejustpicksuprubbisharoundhereforfun，”Mumsaid．“Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishlookinglikeaconstructionworkerisfun？”Ipuzzled．ForseveralyearsI'dwitnessthismysteriousVestLady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool．Ihadthoughtshewascrazyforpickinguprubbish．EventuallyIsmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher．Later,Imovedtohighschool．ThetimeIsawrubbishhereandthereIfeltreallyannoyed．ThenI'dthink,“Whyisn'tanyonepickingupthisrubbish?Peoplearesoinconsiderate！”However,shortlyafter,Irealisedpickinguptherubbishwasnotsomeoneelse'sproblem．NowIcouldn'twalkpastlitterwithoutfeelingguilty．Ivolunteeredtocleanuprubbisharoundourschool．Strangeasitmightsound,pickinguplitterwaskindofathrillforme!Infact,Iwassodeterminedthatformy17thbirthdayIboughtmyselfarubbishclaw,reusableglovesandareflectivesafetyyellowvestwithmyownnameonit．Duringmyfirstattemptinmystylishequipment,metwithunfriendlylooksfromothersasifIwereacriminaldoingcommunityservice．Oneday,Ihadanepiphany(顿悟),“I'mactingjustlikeVestLady！”Buttherewastoomuchrubbisharound,cigaretteendslitteredabout,cansrollingonthestreet,piecesofpaperhiddeninthegrassandplastic．HowwouldIgetmorevolunteersinvolvedinrubbishremoval?Asmartideaflashedintomymind．注意：续写词数应为150左右。Soon

I

created

my

website

gopickingup．com．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________More

and

more

people

put

on

vests

with

their

own

names．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________