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写作专题专题十旅游观光Ⅰ．应用文写作给报刊投稿(2021·天津卷3月)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：1．该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);2．该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；3．你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：1．词数不少于100；2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinthesouthwesternpartofChina．Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaiValleyandDujiangyanIrrigationSystem．JiuzhaiValleyNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince．①Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolourfullakes．②What'smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandasandgoldenmonkeys．Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedthere．AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationSystem．Itdatesfromover2，000yearsago．③However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday．Sichuanisawonderfulplace．I'msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaiValleyaswellastheconstructionofDujiangyanIrrigationSystem．1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如belocatedin,world-famous,placesofinterest,anaturereserve,impressive,multi-levelwaterfalls,haveachancetodosth．,rareanimals,scenicspot,datefrom,playanimportantpartin,beamazedby等。2．句式美：①句Whatisthemostimpressive是What引导的主语从句。②句walkinginthenaturereserve是动词-ing形式短语作状语，toseerareanimals是不定式作后置定语。③句中的However表示转折关系。此外，文中多处巧妙运用适当的衔接词语，比如What'smore表示递进关系；suchas,like表示列举等。假定你是李华。上周你校组织了嘉兴南湖一日游学活动。请你给校报英文版投稿，介绍该活动。内容包括：1．活动时间、参加人员；2．游学活动安排(坐游船、参观纪念馆等)；3．活动反响。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：MemorialHall纪念馆____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Lastweek,ourschoolorganisedaone-daystudytourinNanhu,Jiaxing．Alltheteachersandstudentsofourschooltookpartintheactivity．OnWednesday,wegatheredattheschoolgateat7o'clockinthemorning,andthenwenttherebybus．InordertoreviewthehistoryofthefoundingofthePartyandappreciatethespiritoftheRedBoat,wetookacruiseshipandvisitedtheMemorialHall．Welistenedcarefullytotheteacher'sexplanationofthehistoryofthePartyBuilding．Onehundredyearsago,theoldergenerationmadecontinuouseffortstorevitaliseChina,whichmadeusverymoved．Wewillworkharderforthehappinessofmankindinthefuture．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood．Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful．OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsusalotabouther．[悬念1]Ⅱ．读后续写MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway．Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgoodbyetoallofourfriends．Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain!Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff．Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveller'schecksMumhadforgotten．[悬念2]DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMumwasdrivingwhileDadslept．“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andIwillstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo．”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind．“Honey,wherearethekids？”

“What？！Oh,Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet．”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances．Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy(空房间)．Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Mumsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskedifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous．[悬念3]Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea．Mumnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对)．Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Mumwouldhavebeendelighted．Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis．Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown．注意：续写词数应为150左右。The

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②妈妈是健忘的，途中会不会有什么麻烦？③假如爸爸不在场，孩子们会怎样？段首句2思考：①他们带的帐篷会发挥作用吗？

②野营时，妈妈会怎么做？③作者对这次旅行的感悟是什么？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph1：没有忘记带帐篷→妈妈健忘把爸爸丢了→妈妈决定路边露营等他→孩子们害怕→母爱Paragraph2：露营→母爱的力量→见到了爸爸→作者的感悟The

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way．Thetentbecameaclosefriendthen．Everytimewecamped,Mumwouldreadabookorsingasoftsong．Thewarmthofherarmsneverfadedawayinmymemory．Thoughshewasforgetful,laughteraccompaniedusalongtheway．WefinallymetpoorDadinourdestination．Thistripmademerealisethatlovemayhavemanyways,butitcanalwayswarmpeopleinthedark．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①forever暗示作者不喜欢露营。②thesame表明途中爸爸走散了，他们不得不黑夜路边露营。③blewwildlylikeamonster烘托了让作者害怕的自然环境。④poor一词照应MumlostDad，在孩子的眼里，妈妈因为健忘把爸爸弄丢了，爸爸好可怜。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①still,thingscometoitsturningpoint,approach,takecontrolof,embrace,fadeaway,accompany等堪称经典。②FearfulasMumwas是as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构。③whichreallyrelaxedus为which引导的非限制性定语从句。④stayingwithMum为动词-ing形式作状语。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Aboulder(巨石),asbigasahouse．That'showtheguidebookdescribedGiantRock．Dadsaiditarrivedheremillionsofyearsago．Iwasfinallygoingtoseeit,insnowshoes,withmytwooldercousins,mydad,andmyuncleDon．I'dbeensnowshoeingbefore,andIlikedtheadventureofhikingthroughdeepsnow．Attheparkingarea,afterputtingonoursnowshoes,westudiedthemap．Duetothegeographicallocation,electricaldevicesareinaccessiblehere．Themapisouronlyguide．“Westarthere，”Dadsaid．“Ontheredtrail(小路)．Thenweturnleftontothepurpleroad．That'swhereGiantRockis．”

“Remembertosticktogetheranddon'twanderoff,guys，”UncleDonsaid．Thetrailranuphillalongsideastonewall．Itwaseasytofollowbecauseredmarkerswerenailedtothetreesandthesnowhadbeenpackeddownbyotherhikers．Atthetopofthehill,weturnedontothepurpletrail．Wesettledintoapattern,withDadandeveryoneelseinfrontandmeintheback，crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地行进)throughthesnow．Isawlotsofanimaltracks—mostlydeer,squirrel,andrabbitprints．Asthetrailwounddown,mycousinAndrewsaidwhatI'dbeenthinking：“WillweeverreachGiantRock？”MycousinAidensmiledandturnedtome,“Luke,doyouthinkyourdadinventedthisideajusttogetusawayfromtheTVforawhile？”Ilaughed．“Youneverknow．”Finally,weclimbedahillandsawthemassivebouldersittingaloneintheforest．Itreallyisasbigasahouse!MycousinsandIhigh-fivedeachotherandjoggeduntilwestoodatthebase,breathless．Standingintheboulder'sbroadshadow,Inoticedthesunhadsunklower．“Let'sheadback，”Dadsaidafterafewminutes．“Therewillbeseveralcrossroadsonthewayback．Guys,keepupwiththeteam．”Soonwewerecrunch-crunch-crunchingourwayhome．Iwasalittlebehindthegroupwhenweapproachedacrossroads．AndInoticedasetofanimaltracksIdidn'trecognise,soIfollowedthemforacloserlook．注意：续写词数应为150左右。I

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