2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题4个人生活方式课件新人教版

写作专题专题四个人生活方式Ⅰ．应用文写作道歉信假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：1．未及时回信的原因；

2．你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaDearTom，Howiseverythinggoingonwithyou?I'mwritingthislettertoexpressmyapologytoyoufornotwritingyoubackintime．Inthefirstplace,I'llbesohappyifyoucouldacceptmyapology．①It'sofgreatimportanceformetomakefullpreparationsforthefinalexamlastweek．Therefore,Icouldn'tspareenoughtimetowriteyoubackintime．What'smore,IamwillingtotellyouthatIamtodosomepart-timejobsinthesummerholiday．②Noonecandenythefactthatwecanhaveourvisionbroadenedintheprocess．③Lastbutnotleast,itmustbepointedoutthatIwouldlovetogotravellingduringthisholiday．Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou．④AndI'llappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply．Yours，LiHua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如begoingonwith,expressone'sapologyto,intime,inthefirstplace,beofgreatimportance,makefullpreparationsfor,what'smore，betodo,deny,broaden,lastbutnotleast,pointout等。2．句式美：①句It作形式主语，真正的主语为后面的不定式短语tomakefullpreparationsforthefinalexamlastweek。②句thefact后接that引导的同位语从句，that在从句中不作成分，但不可省略。③句it是形式主语，真正的主语是that引导的主语从句，that在从句中不作成分。④句if引导条件状语从句，it为指示代词，指代if从句的内容。假定你是李华，你与外教David约定于本周六一起游南湖公园，但因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示歉意；2．解释原因；3．另约时间。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearDavid，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【参考范文】DearDavid，I'msorrytosaythatIcan'tgotoNanhuParkwithyouthisSaturday．MyunclephonedandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportonSaturdaymorning．Ihavetriedtofindanalternativepersontodoit,butnootherpersonisavailable．ShallwewalkintheparkonSundaymorning?PleaseletmeknowifthetimeissuitableforyouandIamopentosuggestionsaswell．Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain．Yours，LiHua阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson．Suddenlyacrowperched(栖息)ontheirwindow．Ⅱ．读后续写Thefatheraskedhisson,“Whatisthis？”Thesonreplied,“Itisacrow．”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime,“Whatisthis？”Thesonsaid,“Father,Ihavejustnowtoldyouthatit'sacrow！”

Afteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime,“Whatisthis？”Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritation(恼怒)wasfeltintheson'stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwitharebuff(生硬回绝),“It'sacrow,acrow．”Alittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonthefourthtime,“Whatisthis？”[悬念1]Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,“Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes‘ITISACROW’？Areyounotabletounderstandthis？”Alittlewhilelaterthefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(发皱的)diary,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn．Onopeningapage,heaskedhissontoreadthatpage．Whenthesonreadit,thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary：[悬念2]Todaymylittlesonagedthreewassittingwithmeonthesofawhenacrowwassittingonthewindow．Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow．Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion．IdidnotfeelirritatedatallbutIratherfeltaffectionformyinnocentson．注意：续写词数应为150左右。After

reading

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diary,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Feeling

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father．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意关键：Who:thesonandhisfatherWhere:inthehouseWhat:thediaryHow:thesonwasashamed大意：父亲问了儿子4次“这是什么”，儿子回答4次“乌鸦”后开始大发雷霆。父亲拿出以前记录不厌其烦回答儿子23遍同样问题的日记让儿子看。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：文章为什么用了4次“Whatisthis？”？悬念2思考：儿子读完日记后有什么感受？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①读完日记后儿子会哭吗？

②儿子会想起自己的童年旧事吗？③儿子想自己要是老的时候，自己的儿子会怎么看自己？段首句2思考：①儿子为什么羞愧地跪下？他会对父亲说些什么？②儿子会联想到儿时父亲为自己所做的一切而向父亲承诺些什么吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph1：感动流泪→回想起日记中记录的内容→反思：自己老的时候儿子会怎样对待自己Paragraph2：感到惭愧，跪下道歉→求得宽恕→许诺After

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diary,thesonwasfilledwithtearsandbegantoreflectonthedayswhenhesattogetherwithhisfather．Hisfatherpatientlyansweredthesamequestionall23timeswithoutfeelinganyirritationwhilehisfatheraskedhimthesamequestionjustfourtimes!Thesonthoughttohimself:IfIattainoldage,howwillmysonlookatme?Willhethinkofmeasaburden?Willheshoutatmebecauseofmypoorsight,poorhearingorpoorunderstanding?Feeling

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father．Hemadeanapologytohisfather,begginghisfathertoforgivehimforhisbadbehaviour．Hesaidthisaloud,“Ipromisetoseeyouhappyforever,Dad．ItisyouwhohavecaredformesinceIwasalittlechild,showeringyourselflessaffectiononme．YouworkedhardtomakemoneysothatIcouldaffordtogotouniversity．Iwillserveyouinthebestwaynomatterhowyoubehave．”1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①patiently一词与上文作者对父亲的不耐烦形成了鲜明对比。②withoutfeelingirritation巧妙地呼应了上文的Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritationwasfelt。③selfless一词用得精妙，概括了父亲的伟大，折射了作者惭愧的原因。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①all23times与上文照应，与父亲问了4次同样的问题作者就不耐烦形成强烈反差，此处是全文的点睛之笔。②Itisyouwho...此处强调句用得恰如其分，尽显儿子的惭愧之情，也显露儿子回报父爱的决心。③IfIattainoldage(条件状语从句)，showeringyourselflessaffection...(非谓语动词短语)，sothatIcouldafford...(目的状语从句)等高级句式和结构的应用为文章的增分点。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OneSaturdaymorning,Jeremywokeuptoaquiethouse．UsuallyMumwasawakemakingbreakfastandcleaningthekitchen,butnottoday．Atthesoundofhismumcoughing,Jeremyknockedonherbedroomdoorandaskedwithgreatconcern,“Mum,areyouOK？”

“Honey，”Mumsaidweakly．“Ihaveaterriblecold．Youcanhavecereal(燕麦)forbreakfastandwatchcartoons．I'mgoingtostayinbed．”Jeremypouredsomecerealintoabowlandatethepiecesdry．Mummustfeelverybadifshewasstayinginbedallday．HowcouldJeremyhelp?First,hewipedupthecrumbsofcerealheleftonthekitchencounter．Healsoputawaythecerealboxneatly,sothekitchenlookedjustasitdidwhenhewokeup．Butwhatelsecouldhedo?Jeremythought．Saturdaywasthedaywhenmumdidlaundry．Jeremylovedtowatchtheclothesspinninginthemachine．Thatshouldbefun!Herantohisroomtogetthelaundrybasket,insidewhichtherewashismother'sfavouritewhitedress,amongotherclothesandapairofredsocks．Jeremyopenedthedoortothewasherandputtheclothesinside．HehadwatchedMumdolaundrylotsoftimes,soheknewwheretofindthewashingpowderandhowtopouritintothemachine．Finally,heclosedthedoorandpressedthebigbuttonthatsaid“START”．Jeremylookedthroughtheroundglasswindow．Waterwaspouringin,andthemachinewasstartingtospin,makinghisclothingtumblearound．Thatwaseasy!Jeremywatchedcartoonsuntilheheardthewashingmachinebeep．Thatmeantthewashingwasdone．Jeremyopenedthedoortotakeoutthedampclothes．Hetookoutafewatatimeandmovedthemintothedryer．Everythingseemedclean,andJeremyfeltproud．Thenhepulledoutapinkdress．注意：

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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】But

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basket．“Wherediditcomefrom？”Jeremywondered,reachingintothewashertotakeoutmoreclothes．Thenmuchtohisastonishment,hepulledouttwoT-shirts,bothinlightpink．Realisingtherewassomethingwrong,Jeremystoodfrozen,hisheartsinking．Whilerackinghisbrainforreasons,hecaughtsightoftheredsocks,anditsuddenlyoccurredtohimthattheymustbetoblameforit．Withnomeans