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写作专题专题四个人生活方式Ⅰ.应用文写作道歉信假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:1.未及时回信的原因;

2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearTom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearTom,Howiseverythinggoingonwithyou?I'mwritingthislettertoexpressmyapologytoyoufornotwritingyoubackintime.Inthefirstplace,I'llbesohappyifyoucouldacceptmyapology.①It'sofgreatimportanceformetomakefullpreparationsforthefinalexamlastweek.Therefore,Icouldn'tspareenoughtimetowriteyoubackintime.What'smore,IamwillingtotellyouthatIamtodosomepart-timejobsinthesummerholiday.②Noonecandenythefactthatwecanhaveourvisionbroadenedintheprocess.③Lastbutnotleast,itmustbepointedoutthatIwouldlovetogotravellingduringthisholiday.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.④AndI'llappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.Yours,LiHua1.词汇美:文章运用了很多高级词汇,如begoingonwith,expressone'sapologyto,intime,inthefirstplace,beofgreatimportance,makefullpreparationsfor,what'smore,betodo,deny,broaden,lastbutnotleast,pointout等。2.句式美:①句It作形式主语,真正的主语为后面的不定式短语tomakefullpreparationsforthefinalexamlastweek。②句thefact后接that引导的同位语从句,that在从句中不作成分,但不可省略。③句it是形式主语,真正的主语是that引导的主语从句,that在从句中不作成分。④句if引导条件状语从句,it为指示代词,指代if从句的内容。假定你是李华,你与外教David约定于本周六一起游南湖公园,但因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.解释原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearDavid,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearDavid,I'msorrytosaythatIcan'tgotoNanhuParkwithyouthisSaturday.MyunclephonedandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportonSaturdaymorning.Ihavetriedtofindanalternativepersontodoit,butnootherpersonisavailable.ShallwewalkintheparkonSundaymorning?PleaseletmeknowifthetimeissuitableforyouandIamopentosuggestionsaswell.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Yours,LiHua阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson.Suddenlyacrowperched(栖息)ontheirwindow.Ⅱ.读后续写Thefatheraskedhisson,“Whatisthis?”Thesonreplied,“Itisacrow.”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime,“Whatisthis?”Thesonsaid,“Father,Ihavejustnowtoldyouthatit'sacrow!”

Afteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime,“Whatisthis?”Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritation(恼怒)wasfeltintheson'stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwitharebuff(生硬回绝),“It'sacrow,acrow.”Alittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonthefourthtime,“Whatisthis?”[悬念1]Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,“Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes‘ITISACROW’?Areyounotabletounderstandthis?”Alittlewhilelaterthefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(发皱的)diary,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn.Onopeningapage,heaskedhissontoreadthatpage.Whenthesonreadit,thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary:[悬念2]Todaymylittlesonagedthreewassittingwithmeonthesofawhenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotfeelirritatedatallbutIratherfeltaffectionformyinnocentson.注意:续写词数应为150左右。After

reading

the

diary,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Feeling

ashamed,the

son

got

down

on

his

knees

before

his

father._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意关键:Who:thesonandhisfatherWhere:inthehouseWhat:thediaryHow:thesonwasashamed大意:父亲问了儿子4次“这是什么”,儿子回答4次“乌鸦”后开始大发雷霆。父亲拿出以前记录不厌其烦回答儿子23遍同样问题的日记让儿子看。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考:文章为什么用了4次“Whatisthis?”?悬念2思考:儿子读完日记后有什么感受?三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考:①读完日记后儿子会哭吗?

②儿子会想起自己的童年旧事吗?③儿子想自己要是老的时候,自己的儿子会怎么看自己?段首句2思考:①儿子为什么羞愧地跪下?他会对父亲说些什么?②儿子会联想到儿时父亲为自己所做的一切而向父亲承诺些什么吗?通过以上思路,预设续写情节如下:Paragraph1:感动流泪→回想起日记中记录的内容→反思:自己老的时候儿子会怎样对待自己Paragraph2:感到惭愧,跪下道歉→求得宽恕→许诺After

reading

the

diary,thesonwasfilledwithtearsandbegantoreflectonthedayswhenhesattogetherwithhisfather.Hisfatherpatientlyansweredthesamequestionall23timeswithoutfeelinganyirritationwhilehisfatheraskedhimthesamequestionjustfourtimes!Thesonthoughttohimself:IfIattainoldage,howwillmysonlookatme?Willhethinkofmeasaburden?Willheshoutatmebecauseofmypoorsight,poorhearingorpoorunderstanding?Feeling

ashamed,the

son

got

down

on

his

knees

before

his

father.Hemadeanapologytohisfather,begginghisfathertoforgivehimforhisbadbehaviour.Hesaidthisaloud,“Ipromisetoseeyouhappyforever,Dad.ItisyouwhohavecaredformesinceIwasalittlechild,showeringyourselflessaffectiononme.YouworkedhardtomakemoneysothatIcouldaffordtogotouniversity.Iwillserveyouinthebestwaynomatterhowyoubehave.”1.使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①patiently一词与上文作者对父亲的不耐烦形成了鲜明对比。②withoutfeelingirritation巧妙地呼应了上文的Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritationwasfelt。③selfless一词用得精妙,概括了父亲的伟大,折射了作者惭愧的原因。2.词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①all23times与上文照应,与父亲问了4次同样的问题作者就不耐烦形成强烈反差,此处是全文的点睛之笔。②Itisyouwho...此处强调句用得恰如其分,尽显儿子的惭愧之情,也显露儿子回报父爱的决心。③IfIattainoldage(条件状语从句),showeringyourselflessaffection...(非谓语动词短语),sothatIcouldafford...(目的状语从句)等高级句式和结构的应用为文章的增分点。阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OneSaturdaymorning,Jeremywokeuptoaquiethouse.UsuallyMumwasawakemakingbreakfastandcleaningthekitchen,butnottoday.Atthesoundofhismumcoughing,Jeremyknockedonherbedroomdoorandaskedwithgreatconcern,“Mum,areyouOK?”

“Honey,”Mumsaidweakly.“Ihaveaterriblecold.Youcanhavecereal(燕麦)forbreakfastandwatchcartoons.I'mgoingtostayinbed.”Jeremypouredsomecerealintoabowlandatethepiecesdry.Mummustfeelverybadifshewasstayinginbedallday.HowcouldJeremyhelp?First,hewipedupthecrumbsofcerealheleftonthekitchencounter.Healsoputawaythecerealboxneatly,sothekitchenlookedjustasitdidwhenhewokeup.Butwhatelsecouldhedo?Jeremythought.Saturdaywasthedaywhenmumdidlaundry.Jeremylovedtowatchtheclothesspinninginthemachine.Thatshouldbefun!Herantohisroomtogetthelaundrybasket,insidewhichtherewashismother'sfavouritewhitedress,amongotherclothesandapairofredsocks.Jeremyopenedthedoortothewasherandputtheclothesinside.HehadwatchedMumdolaundrylotsoftimes,soheknewwheretofindthewashingpowderandhowtopouritintothemachine.Finally,heclosedthedoorandpressedthebigbuttonthatsaid“START”.Jeremylookedthroughtheroundglasswindow.Waterwaspouringin,andthemachinewasstartingtospin,makinghisclothingtumblearound.Thatwaseasy!Jeremywatchedcartoonsuntilheheardthewashingmachinebeep.Thatmeantthewashingwasdone.Jeremyopenedthedoortotakeoutthedampclothes.Hetookoutafewatatimeandmovedthemintothedryer.Everythingseemedclean,andJeremyfeltproud.Thenhepulledoutapinkdress.注意:

续写词数应为150左右。But

he

remembered

there

was

no

pink

dress

in

the

laundry

basket._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Holding

the

pink

dress,Jeremy

nervously

knocked

at

his

mum's

bedroom

door

again.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】But

he

remembered

there

was

no

pink

dress

in

the

laundry

basket.“Wherediditcomefrom?”Jeremywondered,reachingintothewashertotakeoutmoreclothes.Thenmuchtohisastonishment,hepulledouttwoT-shirts,bothinlightpink.Realisingtherewassomethingwrong,Jeremystoodfrozen,hisheartsinking.Whilerackinghisbrainforreasons,hecaughtsightoftheredsocks,anditsuddenlyoccurredtohimthattheymustbetoblameforit.Withnomeans

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