专题16记叙文2024年高考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍

2024年高考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍专题16记叙文近三年近三年考情分析年份卷区命题形式话题2023年全国甲卷提纲式“用英文讲中国故事”2023年全国乙卷提纲式用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。2022年浙江卷提纲式回忆参加的“中国爱尔兰文化节”活动写作方法指导写作方法指导（1）六要素一般记叙文都具有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等要素。（2）结构不论是记人还是记事，文章中应有一条（或几条）贯穿全文的线，要有开始、中间、结尾。（3）叙事角度写作时，通常用第一人称和第三人称两种角度来记叙。使用第一人称，即以当事人的口吻来叙述事件或人物，使人感到亲切、可信，缺点是有可能主观或武断。使用第三人称，使人感觉更加客观，有身临其境之感，这种叙述角度常用于对重大事件的客观报道，以及叙述他人的经历或事迹。（4）顺序一般来说，记叙文是按时间顺序来叙述的，最常用的叙述方法是顺序和倒叙。顺序就是按照客观事物发生、发展的先后次序进行叙述，容易把事件说清楚。倒叙，及先倒叙结果，然后按事件的发展顺序进行叙述。（5）时态记叙文所需要的时态要根据需要决定，一般使用动词的过去时态；记叙文如用对话时，必须注意使用正确的时态及标点符号，还要注意使用适当的连接词，如when,next,afterwards,meanwhile,finally等，用来表示事件之间的时间关系。写作模板写作模板 写人篇__________,（姓名）__________,（年龄）from__________,（籍贯）isa__________（职业）________________________________________（个人成就）Whycanshe/hemakesuchbrilliantachievementswiththedisadvantageof？__________（弱势）His/Herhardworkanddeterminationtosucceedhelpedhim/hertooveremanydisadvantages.__________.（语句一）__________.（语句二）__________.（语句三）Onhis/herwaytosuccess,he/sheprovedthat__________（关键词）wasnothingandhardworkwaseverything.叙事篇Inordertoencouragethestudentsto_____________,（目的）ourschoolorganized_____________（活动）Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At_____________,（时间）wegatheredat_____________（地点）andsetoutfor_____________.（目的地）_____________•(活动详细介绍）Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydidit_____________,（活动的意义一）italso_____________（活动的意义二）Whatawonderfultime!常用表达常用表达写人篇1...wasborninapoorfamily.·····出生在一个贫穷的家庭。2Heisalwaysreadytohelpthoseintrouble.他总是乐于助人。3Shehassetagoodexampleforus.她给我们树立了一个榜样。4Someweredoing...someweredoing...whileothersweredoing...有些人在做······,有些人在做······,而其他人在做·····5Theoldmanthankedheragainandagain.这个老人一次又一次地感谢她。6LiHua,whoisafamousyoungwriter,wasbornin...李华，一位著名的年轻作家，出生于···..7Heisnotverystrongbuthealthyandfullofenergy.他不是很强壮，但是健康，充满活力。8Mygrandfatherisinhisseventiesnow.Heisakindandwarmheartedoldman.我姥爷现在70多岁了，他是一位和蔼、热心的老人。叙事篇1Everyonehasanunforgettablememoryandcannotremoveit.每个人都有一个挥之不去的难忘记忆。2Whatimpressedmemostisthat...令我印象最深刻的是··..3Thiswillbeanunforgettableexperience.这将是一次难忘的经历。4Lastweek,whenIwasonmywayhomesomethingterriblehappened.上周，在我回家的路上发生了一件可怕的事情。5Onmywaytothepark,Isawagroupofyoungmen...在我去公园的路上，我看到一群年轻人··..6Howheregrettedwhathehaddone!他多么后悔他所做的事！7Theairisfilledwiththescentofroses.空气中弥漫着玫瑰的芬芳。8Icouldhardlybelievemyeyes.我简直不敢相信我的眼睛。9Totellthetruth,wewerefrightenedatthatmoment.老实说，我们当时吓坏了。10Iwasverytired,butIwashappythatIdidagooddeed.虽然我很累，但我很高兴，我做了一件好事。11Thisisreallyanunforgettableexperience.这真是一次难忘的经历。12ItwasthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced.这是我经历过的最激动人心的时刻。13Amongvariouskindsofexperiencesinmymind,...isthemostunforgettableone.在我脑海里的各种经历中，·····是最令人难忘的。高考真题精讲高考真题精讲（2023年浙江卷1月）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参与：participatein→attend开始：begin→start观察，调查：observe→survey震惊：strike→astonish/surprise句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.拓展句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union,whichbenefitedmealot.【高分句型1】Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ConfuciusisawellknownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandmunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheselfcultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfastpacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,passion,andsocialresponsibility.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累著名的：wellknown→famous人物：figure→person强调：emphasize→stress基础：foundation→basis2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.拓展句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,whichfosteredrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.【点睛】【高分句型1】Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)【高分句型2】Hestressedtheselfcultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfastpacedandinterconnectedworld.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)（2023·全国乙卷）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.ThatwasthefirsttimeIwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthenotesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiecepletely.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimplybecausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunity→chance使沮丧：demoralize→discourage满意的：satisfied→content空闲的：leisure→spare2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.拓展句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.点睛【高分句型1】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiecepletely.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)（2022·浙江卷1月）假定你是李华，在“中国爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.回忆活动经历；2.分享个人收获；3.希望保持联系。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,Howareyoudoingthesedays?IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChinaIrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesthere.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,Iampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyourhometown.Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。【详解】1.词汇积累返回：ebackto→returnto思念：miss→yearn分享：share→exchange玩得开心：enjoyoneself→haveagoodtime→havefun开心的：pleased→happy→delight→content过着快乐的生活：leadahappylife→liveahappylife2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.拓展句：IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIrelandandImissyousomuch.【点睛】【高分句型1】IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChinaIrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.（运用了定语从句）【高分句型2】Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.（运用了强调句型和定语从句）【高分句型3】What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.（运用了主语从句和表语从句）名校模拟题提升练名校模拟题提升练10篇1．（2023·新疆·校联考二模）假定你是校英语报的记者，上周末你校举办了“校园十佳歌手”大赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：1.活动主题及参加人员；2.活动详情；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

CampusTopTenSingerspetition,whosethemewastoenrichschoollifeandgivefullplaytoyouthaswellastheirpositiveoutlook,waslaunchedlastweekend.Westudentsandallteachingstaffgaveanactiveresponseaswellasabigapplausetothisevent.Thosewhoareenthusiasticaboutsingingparticipatedinthepetition,whichwasfullofclimaxandsplendor.Thecontestants’singingstylesarediverse,expressingtheirloveformusicandtheirdeclarationofyouth.Afterfiercepetition,thetoptensingerscameoutinpublic.Itnotonlyopensagrandeventforteachersandstudentsbutalsoattractsstudentstospeakoutfortheirdreams.Westudentswillcontinuetofollowthebeatofyouthandfeelthelifeofcultureandart.【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于学校举办的“校园十佳歌手”大赛的报道。【详解】1.词汇积累主题：theme→subject反应：response→reaction充满：befullof→befilledwith各种各样的：diverse→varied2.句式拓展简单句变强调句原句：Afterfiercepetition,thetoptensingerscameoutinpublic.拓展句：Itwasafterfiercepetitionthatthetoptensingerscameoutinpublic.【点睛】[高分句型1]CampusTopTenSingerspetition,whosethemewastoenrichschoollifeandgivefullplaytoyouthaswellastheirpositiveoutlook,waslaunchedlastweekend.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Thecontestants’singingstylesarediverse,expressingtheirloveformusicandtheirdeclarationofyouth.(运用了现在分词作状语)2．（2023·甘肃·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你校举办了为期两天的美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动准备；2.活动现场概述；3.活动反响。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。ATwodayFoodFestivalAnannualfoodfestivalwasheldlastweekendinourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：ATwodayFoodFestivalAnannualfoodfestivalwasheldlastweekendinourschool.Beforethefestival,everyoneofuslaunchedintosettinguptentsandpostingourmenus.There’snothingbetterthanthesensesweexperiencedatafoodfestival—therowsoffoodtrucksandtentsasfarastheeyecouldsee,therhythmicsoundweheardfromcooking,thesmellsofdozensofdeliciousfoodbeingpreparedaroundusandofcoursethetasteofeverythingwecouldstomach.However,whatimpressedmemostwasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedbythecooks.Also,wonderfulbackgroundmusicandcolorfulflagsaddedtothepleasureoftheoccasion.Itwaseveryone’sjointeffortsthatmadetheactivitysuchabigsuccessandit’stheculturesbehindthefoodthatmadethefestivalspecial.Everyoneofussanghighpraisefortheevent.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就上周末学校举办的为期两天的美食节，为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：活动准备，活动现场概述，以及活动反响。【详解】1.词汇积累开始着手、积极投入：launchinto→putinto极目望去：asfarastheeyecouldsee→insight美味的：delicious→tasty赞不绝口：singhighpraisefor→speakhighlyof2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：However,whatimpressedmemostwasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedbythecooks.拓展句：However,whatleftthebiggestimpressiononmewasthevividintroductionoftheculturesbehindthefoodbythecooks.【点睛】【高分句型1】However,whatimpressedmemostwasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedbythecooks.（运用了what引导的主语从句，过去分词短语作后置定语）【高分句型2】Itwaseveryone’sjointeffortsthatmadetheactivitysuchabigsuccessandit’stheculturesbehindthefoodthatmadethefestivalspecial.（运用了强调句型，“make+宾语+补语”结构）3．（2023·河北石家庄·正定一中校考模拟预测）上周你校组织了“捐赠旧书”的主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的目的；2.活动的主要内容；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedanactivitythemed“donatingoldbooks”,whichwasintendedtoencouragestudentstomakethebestuseofoldbooks.Thankstotheparticipationofamajorityofstudents,alargenumberofoldbookswerecollectedandthendonatedtoaschoolinasmallvillage,whichshoweddeepandsinceregratitudeforourgenerousact.Theactivityturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.Almostalltheparticipantsspokehighlyoftheactivitybecausetheythoughtitraisedtheirawarenessofcherishingbooksandspreadingkindness.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周学校组织的“捐赠旧书”的主题活动，内容包括活动的目的、主要内容和活动反响。【详解】1.词汇积累目的是：beintendedto→beaimedat鼓励：encourage→inspire充分利用：makethebestuseof→makefulluseof高度评价：speakhighlyof→thinkhighlyof2.句式拓展简单句变强调句原句：Theactivityturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.拓展句：Itistheactivitythatturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.【点睛】【高分句型1】Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedanactivitythemed“donatingoldbooks”,whichwasintendedtoencouragestudentstomakethebestuseofoldbooks.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Almostalltheparticipantsspokehighlyoftheactivitybecausetheythoughtitraisedtheirawarenessofcherishingbooksandspreadingkindness.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）4．（2023春·重庆·高三重庆巴蜀中学校考阶段练习）上周六你校举办了一年一度的运动会，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1、举办目的;2．比赛情况;3．活动反响。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右;2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TheAnnualSportsDay______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文TheAnnualSportsDayLastSaturdaywitnessedourschool’sannualsportsday,whichwasaimedatgettingusstudentsinvolvedinsportsandstrengtheningthebond.Bathedinthesunshine,studentsfromallgradesparticipatedinavarietyofevents,rangingfromrelayracestotugsofwar.Alltheathletespushedthemselvestotheutmost,sweatingonthesportsfield,withtheirclassmatescheeringandclappingforthem.Thesportsdaywashighlyspokenof.Itwasthroughthiseventthatwebecamemoreawareoftheimportanceofsportsandteamwork.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于上周六你校举办了一年一度的运动会，为校英文报写一篇报道。【详解】1.词汇积累旨在，目的是：aimedat→designedto加强，强化：strengthen→reinforce参加：participatedin→tookpartin重要性：importance→significance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Bathedinthesunshine,studentsfromallgradesparticipatedinavarietyofevents,rangingfromrelayracestotugsofwar.拓展句：Bathedinthesunshine,studentsfromallgradesparticipatedinavarietyofevents,whichrangefromrelayracestotugsofwar.【点睛】【高分句型1】LastSaturdaywitnessedourschool’sannualsportsday,whichwasaimedatgettingusstudentsinvolvedinsportsandstrengtheningthebond.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Itwasthroughthiseventthatwebecamemoreawareoftheimportanceofsportsandteamwork.（运用了Itwas…that…的强调句型。）5．（2023·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园文化节。你准备参加“用英语讲好中国故事之中华传统节日”版块活动，你选择给校刊投稿介绍端午节。内容包括：1.庆祝时间；2.庆祝活动；3.节日意义。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：粽子ricedumplings；zongzi______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：DragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.Forthousandsofyears,thefestivalhasbeenmarkedbyeatingricedumplingsandracingdragonboats.Thericedumplingismadeofrice,meatandsoon.Youcaneatdifferentkindsofricedumplings.Besides,thefestivalisbestknownforitsdragonboatraces,especiallyinthesouthernplaceswheretherearemanyriversandlakes.DragonBoatFestivalisinmemoryofthedeathofthefamousancientpoetQuYuan,whoisadevotedgovernmentofficialandpoet.Overall,theDragonBoatFestivalenjoysgreatpopularityamongpeopleinChina.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在即将举办校园文化节中，给校刊投稿介绍端午节，内容包括庆祝时间、庆祝活动以及节日的意义。【详解】1.词汇积累庆祝：celebrate→observe此外：besides→what’smore著名的：famous→wellknown忠诚的：devoted→mitted2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：DragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.拓展句：DragonBoatFestival,whichisalsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.【点睛】【高分句型1】DragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.（运用了过去分词短语作定语）【高分句型2】DragonBoatFestivalisinmemoryofthedeathofthefamousancientpoetQuYuan,whoisadevotedgovernmentofficialandpoet.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）6．（2023·天津河西·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”为题写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.介绍活动过程;2.分享个人感受。注意：短文不少于100词。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mLiJin,aseniorthreestudentfromChenguanghighschool.I’mmorethandelightedtomunicatewiththeclassmatesfromthesisterschoolinBritainonlineaboutcampuslife.Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.Andtheonethatimpressedmemostistheingofageceremony.ThemeaningfuleventwasheldonMay4thtohonorthestudentswhohadturned18.Wegatheredatthestadium,wearingtraditionaldresses.First,ourprincipalsincerelyextendedhiscongratulationsonusbeinggrownups.Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.ThenfollowedtheConfucianstyleingofageceremonies—JiLi(forgirls)andGuanLi(forboys).Finally,wemadeasolemnvowtoshouldertheresponsibilitiesofanadult.Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.We,18yearolds,shouldcherishouryouth.That’sall.Thankyou.【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”为题写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇积累：高兴的：delighted→pleased/cheerful回顾：review→lookback/retrospect激励：motivate→inspire/stimulate2.句式拓展：原句：Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.拓展句：Personally,notonlydidthisactivityexposeustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsoitmotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.【点睛】【高分句型1】Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.(运用了现在分词作状语。)【高分句型2】Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。)7．（2023·山东潍坊·统考模拟预测）你校最近举办了为期一个月的读书节活动，请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动过程；2.收获与感想。注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ReadingFestival________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:OurschoolheldaReadingFestivalthatlastedamonth,whichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.Wereadalot,frompoemsinbothChineseandEnglishtoclassicsallovertheworld.Thereadingopenedthedoorstodifferentstylesofthewritersaswellasdifferentcultures.Wealsoorganizedabookexchangetoshareourbooksandthoughtswitheachother.Finally,awonderfulshowwasheldintheschoolhall,whereweshowedourachievementsinvariousformsincludingrecitationsandplayperformances.TheReadingFestivalwastrulyafruitfulactivity.Notonlydidwegainmoreknowledge,butalsoitenrichedourschoollifeandinspiredustokeeponreading.【导语】这是一篇新闻报道。要求考生为学校最近举办的为期一个月的读书节活动写一篇英文报道。【详解】1.词汇积累重大的：great→significant不相同的：different→contrasting展览：show→exhibition活动：activity→pursuit2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Thereadingopenedthedoorstodifferentstylesofthewritersaswellasdifferentcultures.拓展句：Thereadingexposedustodifferentstylesofthewritersaswellasdifferentcultures.【点睛】【高分句型1】OurschoolheldaReadingFestivalthatlastedamonth,whichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.（非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Notonlydidwegainmoreknowledge,butalsoitenrichedourschoollifeandinspiredustokeeponreading.（notonly…butalso结构）8．（2023·安徽·校联考模拟预测）学会面对失败和挫折是中学生成长路上必不可少的一课。你校英文校刊正在以“LearnFromFailure”为话题组织征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.你的一次失败经历;2.你从失败中所学到的东西。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。LearnFromFailure________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Failureisinevitableineveryone’slife.Theproblemthatmanyofusface,however,isthatweautomaticallyequateexperiencingfailurewithbeingafailure.Wefeelfrustratedordespairedinfaceoffailure,butitmaybeaneducationallessonincertainways.Iusedtobeaninterestdrivenlearner,onlywillingtoexploreinthefieldsthatIwaspassionateaboutasdeepasIcould.Whilelearninginthiswaydidmakemefeelfortable,itledtoaharmfulimbalancebetweenmygradesofdifferentsubjects,someofwhichIfailedafterwards.

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