初中英语书面表达分类范文赏析

PAGEPAGE3感恩话题:

一、假如你是李雷。在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师Mr.Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英文书信作纪念。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）提示：1、你对Mr.Smith的整体印象；2、简述一次经历（帮助、鼓励或批评等）；3、你的感受或建议。

DearMr.Smith,

Howareyou?It’sapitythatI’mleavingthisschoolsoon.Atthismoment,Iwanttosay“Thankyou”.Youhavedonealotforussinceyoucametoourschool.Youarealwaysworkinghardandtryingtohelpuswhenweareintrouble.

IstillrememberwhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifounditverydifficult.NomatterhowhardIworked,Istillcouldn’tdowellinit.AndIalmostgaveitup.Assoonasyoufoundmyproblem,youhadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglish.Sincethenyouhavekepthelpingme.Gradually,IbecameinterestedinEnglishandI’mnowgoodatit.

IthinkI’mluckytobeoneofyourstudents.IhopethatyoucanstaylongerinChinaandhavemoreChinesestudents.

Bestwishestoyou!

Yours

LiLei

二、学校校报编辑部正在组织以“感恩”为主题的英语征文活动。写一篇感恩的短文。

要求：不要出现真实的人名和校名，词数60-70。

ThepersonthatIwanttothankmost

Inmylifethere’relotsofpeopleIwanttothank,butthepersonIwanttothankmostismymother.

Irememberonedaywhenclassfinished,itwasraining.Isawmumwaitingformeoutsidewithanumbrella.Andonourwayhome,sheheldtheumbrellaforme,butgotwetherself.Iwasmoveddeeply.

Ithinkweshouldlearnaboutthankgiving,soIwillstudyharderandlearntocareformymother.Ihopeshe’llbehappyandhealthyforever!

三、在你的成长过程中，父母和老师对你的帮很大。写一篇短文介绍他们对你的帮助以及你的感受。

范文1、

MyMother

Mymotherisverykindandeasygoing.Shehelpsmealot.Shetakesgoodcareofmydailylife.Forexample,everymorning,shewakesmeupandcooksbreakfastforme.WhenI’mintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandcheersmeup.IstillrememberthatonceIarguedwithmybestfriendandwasupset.Mymothertalkedwithmethewholenightandfinallyhelpedmesolvetheproblem.Withherhelp,Ibecameatopstudentinmyclass.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Ibelieveshewillbeproudofmeinthenearfuture.

范文2、

MyTeacher

MyEnglishteacherMr.Leeisverykindandeasygoing.Shehelpsmealot.Shetakesgoodcareofus.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenI’mintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwastoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameincreasinglyinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.I’lltrymybesttoliveuptoherexpectations.假设你们班来自美国交换生John最近有点闷闷不乐。通过与他聊天，你发现他身在异乡，没有父母陪伴，感到有些孤独，而临近汉语考试又让他有些紧张、焦虑，目前他感到既无聊又无助。请你分析他目前的状况并给出一些建议，帮助他适应现在的生活。要求：语言通顺流畅，层次分明，表意明确。提示词：helpless无助的；lonely孤独的参考范文Hi,John,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarenothappy.Youfeellonelyandhelplessbecauseyoudon’tlivewithyourparents.AndthecomingChinesetestmakesyoualittlenervous.That'strue.Everyonefeelhelpless.Butitdoesn’tmatter.Youjustneedfriends.

Wearefriends.I’llintroduceyoutomoreChinesefriendsandwecanplaygamestogether.Then,youwon’tfeellonelyanymore.Afterclass,wecanstudytogetherandIcanhelpyouwithyourChinese.Ithinkyouwillbehappysoon.1.根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

*成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽的朋友，你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。范文

Hi!Alice,

I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yes,Isometimeshavethesameproblem.

Ithinkifshereallyneedsthemoney,you’dbetterlendittoher.Youdon’tneedtoworrytoomuch.She’llprobablypayyoubackwhenshehasmoney.Ifyoudon’tlendherthemoney,I’mafraidyoumaylosethefriend.

Ithinkeveryonemayhavetroubleinlifeandweshouldhelpeachother.Sowhenmyfriendsneedmoney,Iwilltrymybesttohelpthem.MaybeI’llgetitback,ormaybeIwon’t.

IhopewhatIsaidcanhelpyou.

Yours,

LiuMing2.初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力挺大。就此问题，你在英语课上做了一个以”LessPressureMakeLifeBetter”为题的值日报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学们分享经验，内容包括：

１普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试２我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习３我成功缓解压力的办法及效果。范文

Hello,myclassmates!

Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Moststudentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.

I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantedmetobethetopstudentinclass.Theyhadmestudyallday.evensendmetoallkindsofclassesonweekends.

IhadatalkwithmyparentsandtoldthemIhaddonemybest.Finallytheyunderstandme.Inthisway,IfeellessstressedoutsothatIcanconcentratemoreonmystudies..

Lesspressuremakesbetterlife.Thankyou!许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以"LessPressure,BetterLife"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；●我的压力是什么；●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。参考范文：LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams。I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsoftrainingclassesatweekends。LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem。That’sall.Thankyou!3.最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(“Don’tkeepyourworries”)的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。要求：内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、对老师和父母的建议。范文

Ourschoolhasmadeasurvey—"Don'tkeepyourworries"．Herearetheresults．

Aboutfiftypercentofthestudentsinourschoolareworriedabouttheirhomework．Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeveryday．Andtheyfeelstressedtoomuch．Aboutthirtypercentofthestudentsthinktheirparentsaretoostrictwiththem（intheirstudies）．It'sdifficultforthemtogetalong/onwellwiththeirparents．Theothertwentypercentofthemsaytheyareweakinhealth．Theycomplainthattheyalmosthavenotimefortheirhobbiesorafter-schoolactivities．

Dearteachers,wouldyoupleasegiveuslesshomeworkandmoretimetorelaxourselves?Dearmomanddad,wewanttotakemoreexercisetokeepfit/healthy,/stayhealthy．Wewilltry/doourbestandwealsowanttoplayonourown．4.假如你的名字叫Lisa。你的笔友Tara上周来信想你倾诉了她在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你寻求帮助。请根据提示给她写回信，给她以帮助。

1）简述Tara的烦恼；2）针对她的烦恼提出几点建议；3）表达你对她的鼓励与祝愿范文1：

DearTara,

Igotyourletterlastweeｋ.Ihearthatyoudoverywellinallthesubjects.Congratulations！Butyouhavefewfriends.Youfeellonely.Youdon’tknowwhatyoushoulddo.Igivesomeadvice:

First,youshouldhelpthestudentswhoareintrouble,bothinstudyandinlife.Theythinkyoucangetonwellwiththem.

Then,jointhem.Youcanplay,singwiththem.Doingthatcanmakeyouamemberofthem.

Last,afterclass,youcantalkwiththem.Sharethesadnessandhappinesswiththem.

Ihopeyoucanmakemorefriendsandbecomehappy.

Yours,

Lisa范文

DearDave,

I’mgladtogetyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereismyadvice.First,Asaforeign,youneedtogoandjoinaChineselearningactivitygroup,themostimportantthingistorememberasmanyChinesewordsaspossible.

Second,ifyouwanttoimproveyourlisteningability,you’dbetterreadChinesebooks,listentothetapesandradioprogramsinChinese.YoucanwatchtheChineseTVprogramsorDVDs.

Third,youmakesomeChinesefriends.YourfriendscanteachyoualotofChinesesongsandintroducesomeChinesefestivalstoyou,too.

Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtime.writetomesoon.Yours

ZhangHua人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。1.广交朋友1.浪费时间赞成的理由2.可自由表达思想反对的理由2.影响学习3.有利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗你的看法是？【参考范文】Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.Internethelpspeoplemakemanyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanexpressmorefreelytheirfeelingsandopinions,andevengethelpfortheirforeignlanguagestudies。Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline。Itismyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus。(陕西省卷)假如你是HanMei,下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listento,mother"slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smile范文：DearAlice,Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideas/advicesforyou.Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit’snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother’slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher.Ifyouropinionsare