专题07书面表达-2022-2023学年六年级英语上册寒假专项提升（译林版三起）

期末专项复习六年级上册英语--------书面表达【知识梳理1】书面表达的三种类型一般来说，小学作文题型分为三大类，话题写作，看图写作以及根据提示写作。【知识梳理2】小学作文写作步骤1.先审题，弄清写作要求是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础；2.找到与该内容相关的基本句式与基本词汇；3.写作时尽量使用熟悉的句式与词汇；4.仔细修改检查，避免语法错误。【知识梳理3】小学作文中常犯的错误1.时态：主要考虑四种时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时。要根据题意判断正确的时态。一篇作文中可以不止一种时态。2.人称：主要有第一人称和第三人称。审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。1）如使用第三人称，需注意三单在一般现在时的用法，即动词后需加s或es。如：Shelikesplayingping-pong.2）写作过程中注意代词的格式。如：He(主格)feelstired.Ilikehim.(宾格)Thisishis(形代)bike.That’snotyourbook,It’smine.(名代)复数形式：TheirEnglishteacherisveryfunny.Theyoftenplayfootballtogether.3.易错句型be动词和行为动词：同一个句子只能出现一种（现在进行时除外）错误：IwaswenttotheparklastSunday.(把was去掉)固定搭配使用错误：like+动词ing形式Eg:Ilikegoingshopping.(注意like后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)wouldliketodosth.Eg:Iwouldliketohaveahamburger.asksb.todosth.Eg:Myfatherasksmetobuysomeapplesforher.批注：此类的固定搭配较多，教师应提醒孩子注意平时的积累。Therebe句型的就近原则Thereisabirdandtwocatsinthetree.(用thereis而不是thereare)【巩固练习】找出下面时态和人称的错误并且进行改正。LindagoestothePeople’sParkwithherfriendslastweekend.()_______________ABCD2.Whatareyougoingtodolastweek?()_______________ABCD3.MyfriendTomisagoodboy.Hegotoschoolonfooteveryday.HeisgoodatEnglish.HeoftenhelpIwithmineEnglish.Welikeheverymuch.答案：1.Awent2.Dnextweek3.MyfriendSimonisagoodboy.Hegoestoschoolonfooteveryday.HeisgoodatEnglish.HeoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Ilikehimverymuch.真题演练主题一：节日假期A同学们，春节是我国最重要的传统节日，有许多有意思的传统习俗。去年春节，你和你的家人做了些什么？今年春节，你们又打算做些什么呢？请你来写一写吧！(提示：注意时态的正确运用，不少于50字。)ChineseNewYearLastChineseNewYear,myfamilyandI______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThisChineseNewYear,we__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：ChineseNewYearLastChineseNewYear,myfamilyandIwenttoHainan.WecelebratedChineseNewYearwithourgrandparents.Weswaminthesea.Weatelotsofseafood.Mygrandparentsboughtnewclothesforme.Theyalsogavemeredpackets.ThisChineseNewYear,wewillstayathome.Wewillbuylotsofdeliciousfood.Wewillbuynewclothes.Wewillhaveabigdinner.Wewilleatjiaozi.Wewillhaveagoodtime.B同学们，对于今年春节，你们有什么计划呢？请以MyplansforChineseNewYear为题，写一篇短文。要求：语句通顺，书写规范，语法和标点正确，不少于5句话。MyplansforChineseNewYear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyplansforChineseNewYearIt'sgoingtobeChineseNewYearnextweek.I'mveryexcited!Tomorrow,myfamilyandIaregoingtobuysomenewclothesandfood.Then,intheevening,we'regoingtomakesomecakesandtangyuan.OnChineseNewYear'sEve,we'regoingtohavedinnerwithmygrandparents,myauntanduncleandmycousin.Then,we'regoingtobuysomeflowers.WhatareyougoingtodoatChineseNewYear?主题二：环境保护A我们的城市徐州是全国文明城市之一，我们要从身边的小事做起，从保持我们的学校干净开始做起，为文明城市贡献自己的一份力量！要求：1.请结合思维导图的提示，以“Howtokeepourschoolclean?”为主题谈谈自己的思考。(不少于5句话，不包括已给的开头)。2.语法准确、语句通顺、书写工整、注意标点。3.可适当发挥。KeepourschoolcleanTokeepourschoolcleanandbeautiful,we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文:KeepourschoolcleanTokeepourschoolcleanandbeautiful,weshouldstartfromourselves.First,weshouldcleanourclassroomeveryday.Thenweshouldthrowthelitterintothedustbin.Weshouldn’tlittereverywhere.Thirdly,weshouldplantmoretreesandflowersinourschool.Weshouldn’tdestroythetreesandflowers.Ibelieveourschoolwillbemorebeautifulandcleaner.B同学们，地球已经不再是整洁的了，所以，保护地球也是我们的责任。请写一篇小短文，号召人们来保护地球。提示：写一写，为了保护地球，身为一名学生可以做什么，不可以做什么。要求：1.不少于5句话；2.拼写正确，语句通顺，时态合理；3.书写规范，卷面整洁。注意：1.不要出现学校、姓名等真实信息。2.不要写成对话形式；3.不要写成同一句式。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：ProtecttheEarthTheearthisn'tclean.Weshouldprotectit.Wecanplanttreesandtakegoodcareofthem.Wecansavethewaterandaskourparentstodoso.Wecan'tthrowanylitterontothegroundandweshouldcollectthemforrecycling.Ifwetakegoodcareofourearthtoday,itwillbemorebeautifultomorrow.主题三：过去现在A同学们，令人期待的寒假即将来临！去年的寒假是不是还记忆犹新？你都做了些什么？今年的寒假也即将拉开帷幕，你又将如何度过呢？请以Mywinterholiday为题，根据下面表格中的要点提示写一篇短文。要求：1.语句通顺，标点正确，时态准确。2.不少于5句话。同时注意书写规范，字迹工整哦！MywinterholidayWhenWhatHowLastyearSports:playtabletennis...Learning:haveswimminglessons...Entertainment:watchfilms...Itwas...ThisyearItisgoingtobe...MywinterholidayLastwinterholiday,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thisyear,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatwillbewonderful!【答案】范文：MywinterholidayLastwinterholiday,IwenttoHarbinwithmyparents.Westayedthereforaweek.Imadeasnowmanwithmyfather.Itwasinteresting!Thisyear,I’mgoingtovisitmygrandpainSanya.Wewillgotothebeach.I’mgoingtoswiminthesea.Iwillbuysomegiftsformyfriends.Thatwillbewonderful!B同学们，你们还记得自己刚上一年级时的样子吗？转眼间你们已经在小学里度过了近六年的时间，请将现在的你与几年前的你对比，肯定增长了许多知识，提高了无限的能力，发生了不少的变化。小学的生活丰富多彩，请大胆地写出自己的变化吧！要求：1.参考以下提示，但不局限思维。2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整规范，50词左右。参考句型：

Iwas/wasn’t...

Icould/couldn’t...

Iliked/didn’tlike...

Iam/amnot...

Ican/can’t...

Ilike/don’tlike...MychangesHowtimeflies!_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________