广东高考基础写作之人物介绍

基础写作：人物简介专题

人物简介1).属于记叙文体裁2).基本类型：记人，叙事，写景3).常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友，老师，父母，名人等等4).记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙5).注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人，不拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态。6).常见段落结构：主题句－发展句－结论句

一、人物简介的写作步骤：1． Birthdayandbirthplace2． Familybackground3． Educationbackground4． Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5． Evaluation

二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：1.Birthdayandbirthplace:……was/werebornin…on…eg.ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.

2.Familybackground……was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthat…his/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin…liveahappy/hardlifeeg.AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.Bornofapoorclerk’sfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.

3.Educationbackground

beadmittedto…collegegraduatefrom…departmentof…universitywhenatcollege,hemajoredin…receiveadoctor’sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudies

4.Bigeventsinone’slife

beinterestedin…/befondof…workhardat…serveas…devotehislifetime/himselfto…concentratehimselfto…doresearchabout/into…makeupone’smindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverancebestrictinsth.havea…wayofdoingsthtryone’sbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizein…competitionreceive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizefor…begoodat…dowellin…becrazyabout…enjoy…

makerapidprogressin…setanewworldrecordof…equaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberof…studyhardtrainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etconeofthebest/mostimportant…setagoodexamplefor…amodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyof…behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofChina.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity5.Evaluation5.Evaluationmakegreatcontributionsto…Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…ChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleadermakegreatcontributionsto…Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…ChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader5.Evaluation

6.描写人物外貌和性格特征good-lookingfunny-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortprettynaughtysmartwisebrightdiligentlazyhealthyhumorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidenceindependentpatienceSamplewritings【基础写作实例剖析：】

你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。

姓名李华出生年月1977年2月出生地辽宁大连学历1984——1990光明小学1990——1996大连市第六中学所学主要课程语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑特长英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）业余爱好游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐【实例剖析：】

【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点：文体：记叙文人称:根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称要点：李华的出生年月及地点；学历；所学主要课程；特长；获奖情况；业余爱好。【实例剖析：】

短语及句型：bebornin,afterthat,begoodat/dowellin,graduate,themainsubjects,winfirstprize,

enjoydoing

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MynameisLiHua.②

IwasborninDalian,LiaoningProvinceinFebruary1977.③Istartedschoolin1984whenIwasseven

andIstudiedinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom1984to1990,afterthatIwenttoNo.6MiddleSchoolofDalianandgraduatedthissummer.④ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer,inwhichEnglishandcomputeraremyfavourite,furthermore,lastyearIwonfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.⑤

WhenIamfree,Ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps,andmyfavoritesportsareswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.

范例：请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。出生1923年5月，香港。个人经历1、7岁丧父，家境贫困;2、1955年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等，成为国内外知名人士;3、改革开放(thereformandopenpolicy)以来，先后捐资支持教育、文化、体育、和福利事业款项达100多亿港元。影响成为“感动中国”的人物。［写作要求］只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。要点分析：

名人介绍，采用第三人称

将提供的信息整合以一般过去时态为主。

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①InMay1923,DrHuo

YingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong.②

Attheageoften,hisfatherdied.③

After1955,hewasengagedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.④

Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareinMainland.

⑤Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,whichmakeshimaMovingChinahero.【人物介绍】：