2023-2024学年高一上学期读后续写入门课件（三）

野营虚惊一场读后续写（三）情节内容试题导练试题展示BellawasonlyfiveanditwasherfirstcampingtripwithMumandDad.Shewasexcitedbutwasalittlenervoustoo.Whatifthetentfallsoverandsquashes(压扁)us?Whatifthewindblowsitaway?hatifawolfcomesintothetentandeatsus?”shekeptaskingMum.ThismadeMumlaugh.Bellahadreadtoomanyfairystorieswithbigbadwolvesinthem.MumcomfortedBellasayingthatthereweren'tanywolvesinthecityoreveninthewholecountry,exceptinzoos.“Well,whatifoneescapedfromaZ00?”askedBella.Mumlaughed,“Zooswerecarefulenoughnottolettheiranimalsescape.”ThenBellasoonforgotaboutwolvesastheystartedplanningforthecampingtrip.试题展示

BellahelpedDadloadupthecar.Theyputinthetent,abigoneforthewholefamily.Thenthesleepingbags,blanketsandmore.“It'scoldatnightwhenyou'resleepinginatent,”addedDad.Wheneverythingwaspacked,thecarwasfulltoburstingDadstartedthecar,andsoontheywereleavingthecitybehindthem.“Lookatthehills!”shoutedMumexcitedly.“Lookatthecowsonthegrass!”Theydroveupawindingroaduntiltheyreachedthecampsite,whichbelongedtoafarmandwasinabigfield.Oncethetentwasup,Bellawenttoexplore.Thereweretreestoclimbandastreamforpaddling(隆水).Bellasattherewatchingthecowseatingthegrass.Thedayflewbyanditwasgettingdark

Astheywerereadyforsleep,strangerustling(沙沙声)camefromthefencenexttotheirtentinthedarkness.“What'sthatnoise?Isitawolfapproaching?”BellaworriedandmovedclosertoMum.“Maybeit'sjustthewind,’MumgentlypattedBella.Belladidn'tsayanythingmore.Theywerealltiredafteradayoutdoors,andcrawledinto(爬进)theirsleepingbags.SoonMumandDadwereasleep试题展示注意:续写词数应为80左右Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________试题展示①人物：Bella（5岁）；Mum；Dad②情节线：

文本分析Thefamilyenjoyedthebeautifulscenery.Athome

OntheroadAtthecampsiteBellaworriedaboutthecomingtrip;Mumcomfortedher.BellahelpedDadloadupthecar.Theysetupthetent.Bellaexplored.Beforesleeping,Bellaheardrustlingnoisesandwasnervous.③主题：对世界保持好奇心，积极探索。④情感线：

本文最主要的人物是5岁的Bella，她在文中的情感变化为：excitedbutwasalittlenervous→forgotaboutwolves→happy→worriedandmovedclosertoMum→?

这是Bella第一次野营，她兴奋之余也略感担忧。母亲的安慰和临行前的准备工作让她暂时忘却自己的担忧。一家人开车向营地驶去，沿途的山和食草的牛给他们的旅途增添了快乐。到营地安顿好以后，Bella开心地开始了自己的探索——爬树、蹚水、看牛吃草。夜幕降临，Bella听到沙沙声后开始担心害怕，妈妈安慰了她。

思考：根据阅读部分的情感线，并结合给出句，在接下来的续写部分，Bella的情感可能会有哪些变化？再次听到沙沙声后，Bella又变得紧张起来→沙沙声越来越近以后，Bella变得害怕起来→搞清楚真相后，Bella终于放下心来。文本分析①第一、二段：

Whatifawolfcomesintothetentandeatsus?(para.1)Well,whatifoneescapedfromazoo?(para.2)

思考：开篇两段描述了Bella的各种担心，尤其着墨于“狼来了怎么办”。那么，再次听到沙沙声时，Bella会不会以为狼来了？

②第四段：

“Lookatthecowsonthegrass!”Bellasattherewatchingthecowseatingthegrass.本段两次提到牛吃草，一次是在旅途中，一次是在野营地。

思考：文章结尾提到的沙沙声到底是什么声音？本段牛吃草的情节是不是可以给续写部分一种暗示？细读语言③尾段：

“Maybeit'sjustthewind,”MumgentlypattedBella.

思考：在尾段，母亲认为沙沙声可能是风声。Bella最后发现的真相有没有可能正如母亲所言？BellaworriedandmovedclosertoMum.

思考：Bella只有5岁，她第一次听到沙沙声后的身体反应是靠向母亲。深沉的夜里，她再次听到沙沙声，会不会向母亲（或父母）求助？

SoonMumandDadwereasleep.

思考：等Bella搞清楚真相后，惊魂已定的她是不是也可以像父母一样安然入睡？细读语言④高频词：

camp,tent,whatif在阅读部分反复出现。其中，camp,tent是与主题“野营”相关的重点词汇；whatif则反映出Bella第一次野营时的各种担心，也符合一个5岁孩子的心理。

思考：这些高频词在续写部分有没有可能再出现？如果出现，应出现在何种情境中？细读语言关键词：nervous,noise；首句译文：当Bella再次听到那个沙沙声时，她紧张得无法入睡。续写部分预测：1）随着沙沙声越来越近，Bella变得害怕起来；2）Bella想向母亲（或父母）求助；3）Bella发现沙沙声原来是一头牛吃草的声音；

或

Bella发现沙沙声就是风声。4）Bella如释重负，爬进睡袋，安然入睡。研读首句微写作练习环境描写扩充句子：

Acowwaseatingsomegrass.①Acowwaseatingsomegrass________(平静地).②________________________(衬着皎洁的月光),acowwaseatingsomegrass.peacefullyAgainstthemoonlight微写作练习动作描写根据汉语写出下列短语：

听起来像________________

闯入________________

改变主意________________把头伸出帐篷________________

爬回________________soundlikebreakintochangeone’smindstickone’sheadoutofthetentcrawlback微写作练习动作描写2.转换表达：①Bella吓得睡不着觉，浑身发抖。Bellalayawakeandshivered.Bellalayawake,________(动词-ing形式).②Bella如释重负。

Bellafeltrelieved.Bellabreathed________________________________(名词短语).Bellasighed________________(介词短语).shiveringasignofreliefinrelief微写作练习动作描写3.扩充句子：①Bella再也无法忍受了。Bellacouldn'tbearit.Bellacouldn'tbearit________________(再).②Bella观察了很久，没发现任何迹象。Therewasnosignofwolvesoranythingelse.After________________________________(恍如隔世),therewasnosignofwolvesoranythingelse.anylonger/anymorewhatseemslikehours/ages微写作练习动作描写③Bella回去睡觉。Bellawentbacktosleep.Bellawentbacktosleep,________(酣然地).soundly微写作练习衔接连贯合并句子：Therustlingseemedtobemovinginherdirection.ItmadeBella'sbodytrembleandhermouthdry.

Therustlingseemedtobemovinginherdirection,________________________________________________________________________(定语从句).2.Shewonderedwhatwashappening.Suddenly,sheheardmorerustling.

Shewonderedwhatwashappening________(连词)suddenly,sheheardmorerustling.whichmadeBella'sbodytrembleandhermouthdrywhen/and微写作练习衔接连贯合并句子：3.Bellasatupandunzippedthetent.Shelookedinthedirectionofthenoise.

________________________________________________(动词-ing形式),Bellalookedinthedirectionofthenoise.Sittingupandunzippingthetent范文展示（一）

Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shewonderedwhatwashappeningwhensuddenly,sheheardmorerustling.Itsoundedlikesomethingwalkingaroundoutside.“Thiscampsiteisjustthekindofplaceawolfmightlike.Whatifawolfdidescapefromazoo?”Bellalayawake,shivering,astherustlingcontinued.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,Bellacouldn'tbearitanylonger.Shecreptoutofthesleepingbagandstuckherheadoutofthetent.There,againstthemoonlight,acowwaseat