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读后续写人与社会类(家乡的味道辣番茄酱hotsalsa)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。SunlightfloodedthroughthewindowwhenTomáswassittingatthekitchentable,strugglingwithaliteraryclassic!Streamersofcloudsdriftedbyhighaboveinthesky.Notfaraway,thehugenewtowerblockslinedtheroad.Thefaintsoundofcarswasdimlyheard.Hismotherwaschoppingtomatoesfortheirdinnerasusual.Suddenlyshesaid,“Youknow,thethingImissmostiscookingareallyhotsalsa(辣番茄酱)withfreshpeppersstraightfromthegarden.”Shesighed,“That’swhatImissmostaboutMérida.”Tomáslookedupfromhisbookinsurprise.Hismotherhadnevertalkedlikethisabouttheiroldlifebefore.Hestudiedhernow.Shelookedalittlesad,butthenshesmiledathimandsweptthepileofchoppedtomatoesintothecookingpot.“ButI'vealreadylearnedalotaboutthisnewcountry,Tomás,"shesaid.“ForastartI’velearnedthatthere’smorethanonewaytomakeasalsa!”Shewavedapacketofchilispicepowderathimandtheybothlaughed.Watchinghismotherbusyinthekitchenpreparingdinner,Tomásthoughtabouttheinsighthismotherhadgivenhimintoherfeelings,andherealizedthathefeltthesamewayaboutleaving.Sure,ithadbeengreatforhisfathertogetthisgoodjob,butithadalsobeenhard.Tomásmissedhisoldhome----especiallythesunandthebeach.AndhismothermissedMérida,too.Shehadlovedworkinginhermarketgarden,sellingthefreshvegetablesthatshehadgrownherselfandthencominghometocookuphugetastymealsforherfamily.Tomás'sstomachrumbled(发出隆隆声)atthememories.Hethoughtabouthowdifferentthingswereforthemnow,livinginthislarge,grayapartmentblockwheretherewasnogardenandnofriendsdroppingbytosharetheirdeliciousmeals.Hesighed.AtleasttheywerestillabletospeakregularlyeverynightafterdinnerwithhisgrandmotherbackinMexicooverthecomputer---GrandmotherAbucla!Paragraph1:SuddenlyTomáshadanidea.Paragraph2:Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.一文本解读:Tomás的父亲工作发生变动,一家人离开了故乡墨西哥的Mérida。母亲非常想念用自己在家乡菜园里种植的辣椒做的辣番茄酱。Tomas每天晚上会和远在墨西哥的祖母隔着电脑屏幕交流……。二续写主题:人与社会----故乡的味道(思念故乡)三续写情节构建Tomás如何解决母亲的思乡之情?根据两段的首句提示,很可能是请祖母Abucla寄来家乡菜园里种的辣椒,使母亲能制作家乡风味的辣番茄酱和菜肴。续写思路:Para1:1)WhatwasTomas’idea?2)Whatdidhedo?3)Tomas’waitPara2:1)Whatwasinthebox?2)mother’sresponse3)theending四官方范文SuddenlyTomáshadanidea.WhynotturntoAbuelaforhelp?Seizedbytheincreasingeagernesstocontacthisgrandmother,hewolfeddownhissupperonceitwasready.Rightafterdinner,Tomásracedtothecomputerbeforehehadhisfavouritedessert,leavinghismotherincuriosity.Themomenthegotthroughtohisgrandmotherviathevideochat,heloweredhisvoice,“Abuela,Ineedyourhelp!”AfterTomáspouredouthisidea,Abuelaclappedherhands,promising,“Excellent!You’llreceivewhatyouwant!”Besidehimselfwithjoy(非常开心),TomáswavedgoodbyetoAbuela,expectantlywaitingforthepackage.Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.Bubblingoverwithexcitement,Tomásinvitedhismothertoopentheboxtogether.Unfoldingbeforetheireyeswereasealedpackageofpeppersandacolorfulpacketofseeds.“That’swhatImissmost!AtastefromHOME!”blurtedout(脱口而出)hismother,herlipscurvingintoabroadbeamandeyesglitteringinamazement.NeverhadTomásseenhismothersocheerfulinweeks.Momentslaterhismotherwaspreparingasalsausingthepeppers,choppingtomatoesandhummingamerrytune.Outsidethekitchenwindow,abigpotcontainingtheseedsgleamedinthesunlight.五下水作文:SuddenlyTomáshadanidea.“That’sit!Icanaskgrandmatodeliversomepepperseedstous!”Tomassnappedhisfingers,bouncingupfromthechair.Secretly,heslippedintohisroom,loggedonandcontactedAbuela.Nosoonerhadheheardgrandma’sfamiliarvoicethanhepouredouthisplan.“That’ssothoughtfulofyou!OfcourseIwillhelpyou!”Abuelapromised,anapparenthintofsmileinhervoice.Asdayswentby,excitementandanticipationflowedoverTomas----evenaslightthoughtofhisplanwouldraisethecornerofhismouth.Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.Lookingatthewordsreading“FromMerida”,mothercuriouslyopenedthebox.Whatgreetedherwastherichfragrantsmellofpeppers.“Aha!Theflavorofourhometown!”Leaningforward,momsniffedhard,satisfactionwrittenalloverherface.WhenshelearneditwasallTomas’effort,hereyeswateredimmediately.“Thankyou,myboy!”Thentheycarefullysowedpepperseedsinflowerpotsonthebalcony.“Itwon’tbelongbeforewecookareallyhotsalsawithfreshpeppers.”MomandTomasexchangedaknowingglance.六精彩片段描写:Para1:Afterdinner,withthesoftlightdancingcheerfullyinfrontofthecomputer,TomaschattedwithGrandmaAbuclaonline,carefullyinstructingherwhattodo.Attheotherendoftheline,afterknowingwhathadhappened,grandmawasdelightedtoofferhelp.Whileexpectantlywaitingforthepackage,Tomaskeptitasecretanddecidedtogivemomasurprise.Para2:1.Pretendingtoknownothingaboutit,Tomasletmomopenitbyherself.2.Insidetheparcelwerepeppersofdelightfulcolours,juicyandfresh,growninthegardenofMérida.3.Themomentsomefreshpepperscameintosight,mother’seyeswatered,hermemorytravellingbacktothedaysinMerida.4.Later,theysprangintoaction,mothermakinghotsal
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