雅思批改(十一篇)

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happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.whyisitdifficulttodefine?whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?

happinessisverydifficulttodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople.whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships.yetothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldorrelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruehappiness.

becausepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferentways,itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatistrueforeveryone.however,iftherearedifferentkindsofhappinessfordifferentindividualsthenthefirststepinachievingitwouldbetohaveadegreeofself-knowledge.apersonneedstoknowwhoheorsheisbeforebeingabletoknowwhatitisthatmakeshimorherhappy.

ofcourse,factorssuchaslovingrelationship,goodhealth,theskillstoearnalivingandapeacefulenvironmentallcontributetoourhappinesstoo.butthisdoesnotmeanthatpeoplewithouttheseconditionscannotbehappy.

overall,ithinkanabilitytokeepclearperspectivesinlifeisamoreessentialfactorinachievinghappiness.bythatimeananabilitytohaveaclearsenseofwhatisimportantinourlives(thewelfareofourfamilies,thequalityofourrelationships,makingotherpeoplehappy,etc.)andwhatisnot(aproblematwork,gettingannoyedabouttrivialthings,etc.).

likeself-awareness,thisisalsoverydifficulttoachieve,butithinkthesearethetwofactorsthatmaybethemostimportantforachievinghappiness.

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雅思作文批改篇十

大作文考官范文8个话题分类如下：

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雅思作文批改篇十一

explainsomeofthewaysinwhichhumansaredamagingtheenvironment.whatcangovernmentsdotoaddresstheseproblems?whatcanindividualpeopledo?

解释一些环境污染的途径，政府和人们能够做什么?

humansareresponsibleforavarietyofenvironmentalproblems,butwecanalsotakestepstoreducethedamagethatwearecausingtotheplanet.thisessaywilldiscussenvironmentalproblemsandthemeasuresthatgovernmentsandindividualscantaketoaddresstheseproblems.

twoofthebiggestthreatstotheenvironmentareairpollutionandwaste.gasemissionsfromfactoriesandexhaustfumesfromvehiclesleadtoglobalwarming,whichmayhaveadevastatingeffectontheplanetinthefuture.asthehumanpopulationincreases,wearealsoproducingevergreaterquantitiesofwaste,whichcontaminatestheearthandpollutesriversandoceans.

governmentscouldcertainlymakemoreefforttoreduceairpollution.theycouldintroducelawstolimitemissionsfromfactoriesortoforcecompaniestouserenewableenergyfromsolar,windorwaterpower.theycouldalsoimposegreentaxesondriversandairlinecompanies.inthisway,peoplewouldbeencouragedtousepublictransportandtotakefewerflightsabroad,thereforereducingemissions.

individualsshouldalsotakeresponsibilityfortheimpacttheyhaveontheenvironment.theycantakepublictransportratherthandriving,chooseproductswithlesspackaging,andrecycleasmuchaspossible.mostsupermarketsnowprovidereusablebagsforshoppersaswellasbanksforrecyclingglass,plasticandpaperintheir