读后续写公开课课件

Continuationwriting

读后续写公开课读后续写的具体要求

提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。读后续写公开课1如何构思续写的内容

Step1

Readforelements(要素）

Step2

Readforplots（情节）

Step3

Gatherideas

Step4Makepredictions（预测）读后续写公开课读后续写公开课

Step1

Readforelements读后续写公开课when:where:who:what:why:mymom,I,receptionist,betweenspringandsummerontheroadthroughthecountryside…gaveflowerstonursinghome，Leavingflowersforsomeonemakesmomfeelgood.Tip1:Wecangetthemainideawiththehelpof_________________.

…brokedown5Wquestions读后续写公开课

Step2

Readforplots读后续写公开课Nogarage,nopassers-byReadforplotsandfeelingswriter’sbehaviorswriter’sfeelingswaystoexpressfeelings

weredriving,unhappyimpatient,annoyed“Doyouknowsomeonethere?”

curious,confused“Didyouleaveyourname?”heardthecarburstworriedhopelesssomewherebetweenspringandsummer,Suddenly，inthemiddleofnowhereBeforeshestartedthecar,Notlongafterwecontinueddriving,Suddenly，adj.actions

dialoguessurroundingstimescried,skimmed,lookedback“What?”“Whatdidyoudowiththeflowers?”nogarage,nopassers-byrebellious(叛逆的）...drovetoask:读后续写公开课Tip2:Whilewriting,wecanexpressourinnerfeelingsbyadjActionsDialoguesSurroundingSimile(比喻)读后续写公开课BeginningClimaxEndingalwaysunhappycurious,confusedmisunderstandingworried,hopelessimpatient,annoyedFeelinganalysisdevelopment?Thewriterhas_______________withhismom读后续写公开课

Step3Gatherideas读后续写公开课gathertheideas信息整理：genre(体裁)：narration(记叙文)tense(时态)：thepasttense(一般过去时)mainidea原文核心信息解读：Betweenspringandsummer,ontheroadthroughthecountrysidemymomgaveflowerstoanursinghome,becauseleavingflowersforothersmadeherfeelgood.Unluckily,ourcarbrokedown.读后续写公开课Step4

Makepredictions读后续写公开课GrouptalkingfortheplotdevelopmentsPara.1：We

wereworriedaboutwhatcouldbedone.1.Howwouldthewritershowtheir

worries?2.Didanyonecometohelpthem?Who?

feeling3.Howdidthewriterfeelaboutbeinghelped?Tip3TheendingofPara1shouldbeconnectedwithPara2Thecarshouldhavebeenrepaired读后续写公开课Variouswaystoexpressworriesadj.:actions:dialogues:surroundings:Afterwhatseemedtobeages,Iscratchedmyhead,stampedmyfootand

walkedbackandforthhopelessly.“Whatifnooneiswillingtohelpus?Wouldwediefromthirsty?”Imurmuredinalowvoice.Theairwasthickandthehotsunwasburningus,Istoodthereclumsilywithnothingtodo.Deadlysilenceswallowedtheroadthoroughly,leavingnothingbuthopelessness.

Worriedanddepressed,

Iwaswanderingalongtheroadaimlessly.simile:比喻Iwaswalkingbackandforthlikeanantonahotpan.读后续写公开课GrouptalkingfortheplotdevelopmentsPara.1：We

wereworriedaboutwhatcouldbedone.1.Howwouldthewritershowtheir

worries?2.Didanyonecometohelpthem?Who?

feelingthereceptionist?anoldgarageman?astranger?relievedthankfulhopeful3.Howdidthewriterfeelaboutbeinghelped?读后续写公开课1.Seeingaflowershop,whatwouldthewriterdo?2.Howwouldthewriterfeel?3.Howcouldpara.2beendedreasonably?Para.2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.

buysomeflowerstomom?begivensomeflowers?...excited?proud?understanding?Grouptalkingfortheplotdevelopmentsactiveornegative?读后续写公开课Tip4:passagecanbeendedvariouslyusingfeelingending

surrouningending

meaningfulending

naturalending读后续写公开课feelingending:Justatthatmoment,arippleof(一阵)excitementbegantocrossmyface.surroundingending:Apleasantbreezewasblowing,makingtheleavesoftreesswinginglightlyasiftobecheeringforus.meaningfulending:Whatmomdidremindedmeofafamoussaying:Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.naturalending:Wecontinuedourtravelwithasweetsmile.especiallyfortheending读后续写公开课Para.1：Wewereworriedaboutwhatcouldbedone.

Afterwhatseemedtobeages,underthehotburningson,Iscratchedmyhead,stampedmyfootandwalkedbackandforthhopelessly.Allofasudden,onemanwithhishandswavingatmomcameintoourview.“Heisthereceptionistfromthenursinghome.”Momexplainedtome.“Whyareyouhere?”Momaskedexcitedly.“Ijustintendedtothankyouforyourflowersformally.”Howluckywewere!Whatamazedmemostwasthathewasaretiredgarageman.Asaconsequence,hehadourcarrepairedinashortwhile.Onepossibleversion读后续写公开课Paragraph2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.Ipacedquicklyintotheflowershop,whereabunchof

flowers

glowing(绚丽夺目)redinfullbloomcaughtmyeye.Havingwitnessedtheeffectofmymother'skindness,Idecidedtosendmomthesweetflowers.Soon,theheavenlyscentfilledthecaragain.Momtriedtoconceal(隐藏)herexcitement,buttheglittering(晶莹的)tearsfilledhereyes.Throughthistrip,Idiscoveredthat,despitemyoccasionalangertowardsher,Iactuallyfeltproudofher.Justatthatmoment,a