公开课王姣姣读后续写如何写记叙文

英语科考试说明读后续写：提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。第一页第二页，共21页。Afterclass,youwillbeableto……Readforthemainidea/plotWritetheendaccordingtothegiveninformationPolishyourwriting第二页第三页，共21页。ReadingWhat'sthestyleofthepassage?A.Narration记叙文

B.Exposition说明文

C.Argumentation议论文

第三页第四页，共21页。ReadingWho?When?Where?What?Why?How?Style---Narration记叙文第四页第五页，共21页。Basicformsofthe6questionsWhoisthemaincharacter?Whendidthestoryhappen?Wheredidthestoryhappen?Whathappenedinthestory?Whywasthemattercaused?Howwasthemattersolved/ended?第五页第六页，共21页。Who?When?Where?What?Why?How?Arthur；ayoungmanoneday;whenhewasonthewaytoworkParkAvenue,neartheFirstNationalBankArthurhelpedayoungman….but….wasmistakenforthebankthief.

thesuitcaseinhishand……第六页第七页，共21页。MainIdeaOneday,atParkAvenue,Arthurhelpedayoungmancarrya_______whenhewasonthewaytowork.Suddenly,heheardthesoundofanalarmandfounda______happenedinthebank.Whenayoungwomanlookedathissuitcase,hethoughthemightbe_______forthebankthief.……suitcasemistakenrobbery第七页第八页，共21页。第二节：读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Howtochoosetheunderlinedkeywordsinyourwriting?Howtomakefulluseofthegivensentencesandtheplot?Howtomakethestorycoherentandlogical?若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。第八页第九页，共21页。Theunderlinedkeywords:ParkAvenue

Theyoungman

suitcase

inthebackseat

loudnoiseofanalarm

thebank

robbery

theshouts

people

thebankthiefTip1:Thekeywordsthatstandforthemostimportantinformation,themaincharacterandthemainobjectshouldbechoseninyourwriting.第九页第十页，共21页。Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”……Paragraph2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur…….Tip2:Focusonthegivensentenceofparagraph2firstandsomeinformationinitmustbementionedinparagraph1.Tip3.Usethekeynounsinthegivensentencestoinfermoreinformation.第十页第十一页，共21页。Paragraph2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur…….Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation.InParagraph1,Arthurmighthavesaidsomethingtothetaxidriver.Forexample,“Sir,pleasetakemetothepolicestationquickly.Ihavesomethingimportanttoreporttothepoliceman.”

Tip4.Writeproperconversationsbetweentherelatedcharactersineachparagraph.第十一页第十二页，共21页。KeyWords:ParkAvenue

Theyoungman

suitcase

inthebackseat

loudnoiseofanalarm

thebank

robbery

theshouts

people

thebankthiefParagraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”……Twocharacters：ArthurandtheyoungmanArthurmightrealizethattheyoungmanwasthebankthief.Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation.Tip5.Usethecharactersandtheiractionstoinfermoreinformation.第十二页第十三页，共21页。PolishyourwritingParagraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief.Hecontinuedrunning,stoppedataxiandgotintoit.Hesaidtothetaxidriver,“PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible.Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman.”Thenthetaxiwentaway.--therefore,however,inaddition/besides,what’smore/furthermore,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand…..feeling：unfortunately,suddenly(allofasudden),tohisjoy,

worriedabout....,addsomedetailsUsedifferentstructuresUsetransitionalwords(衔接词)coherent,correct,logical,reasonable,richinvocabularyandsentencepatternUnderlinethekeywords第十三页第十四页，共21页。Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Arthurrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief.Hecontinuedrunning,stoppedataxiandgotintoit.Hesaidtothetaxidriver,“PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible.Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman.”Thenthetaxiwentaway.addsomedetailsUsedifferentstructuresUsetransitionalwords“Givemysuitcasebacktome!”Hearingthis,Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief.Sohecontinuedrunninguntilhestoppedataxi.

Thenhequicklygotintoitandsatinthebackseat.Outofbreath/breathlessly,Arthursaidtothetaxidriver,“…….”Themomentthetaxidrivergottherequest,hedrovestraighttothepolicestationwithouthesitation.第十四页第十五页，共21页。Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”“Givemysuitcasebacktome!”Hearingthis,Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankthief.Sohecontinuedrunninguntilhestoppedataxi.Thenhequicklygotintoitandsatinthebackseat.

Outofbreath,Arthursaidtothetaxidriver,“PleasegotothePoliceStationassoonaspossible.Ihavearobberytoreporttothepoliceman.”Themomentthetaxidrivergottherequest,hedrovestraighttothepolicestationwithouthesitation.addsomedetailsUsedifferentstructuresPropertransition第十五页第十六页，共21页。Para2:

ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur……_______________________________________________WhatwillArthurdointhepolicestation?InParagraph2,theremaybeaconversationbetweenArthurandthepoliceman.Whatkindofendingwouldyoupreferforthisstory?AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.…...

Whoelsemaygotothepolicestation?(asurprisingend)Theyoungmanwantedtogethissuitcaseback.Theremaybesomemoneyorsomethingelseinthesuitcase.Theyoungmanmay(not)bethebankthief.surprisingandinterestingTip6.Sometimes,thegeneralkeywordcanguideustoimaginereasonably.第十六页第十七页，共21页。ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurdirectlywentinandtoldthepolicewhathehappenedtohim.Obviously,thepolicehadalreadylearnedabouttherobbery.AsArthurexpected,theyfoundalargesumofmoneyinsideafteropeningthesuitcase.ThentheyaskedArthurtodescribetheyoungman.Later,withthehelpofArthur,thepolicesuccessfullycaughttherobber.BoththebankandthepolicethankedArthuralot.

para2:第十七页第十八页，共21页。Para2

ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurthankedthedriveranddirectlywentin.JustasArthurwasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankontheParkAvenueandreportedtheyoungmantothepolice,heheardavoiceoutside,“Help!Help!”TothesurpriseofArthur,itwastheyoungman.Hehadfoll