读后续写冒险类-暴风雨中椰子树带来的幸存讲义 高三英语写作复习专项

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ten-year-oldSamilovedtovisithisgrandfather'shouse.Thehousewasnearthebeautifulbluesea.

Attheseasidestoodthickandtallpalmtreeswithgreen

coconutshangingfromthem.

Whenthecoconutsfelldown,Samiwouldbreakthemopenanddrinkthecoconutwater.ItwasalwaysgreatfuntospendtheholidaysatGrandpa'splace.Thiswintervacation,Samiwassurprisedwhenhecametohisgrandfather'svillage.Therewerehardlyanytreesleft.Hesawhousesbuiltnearthesea.Peoplehadcutdownmanypalmtreesandtherewashardlyanygreeneryleft.Grandpa'shousewasdifferent.Heneverallowedhistreestobecut.Hehuggedeachpalmtreeinhiscourtyard.Healsonamedthetwobigtreesnearthefrontdoor-onewasPetu,andtheotherBetu.Theyweretallandgreenandgavethesweetest,juiciestcoconuts.Onenight,Sami

wasawakenedbyastrangesound.

Hecouldnotsleep.He

tossedandturned(辗转反侧)inbed.Suddenly,

thegroundshookasiftheearthwassplitting.

HesatupstraightandthenrantoGrandpa.Heclungto(抓紧)hisgrandpatightly,Grandpacriedout，”It'sanearthquake!”

Theyranoutsidethehouse.Suddenly,therewasaloudsound;theearthwasnotsplittingbuttheseawas

roaring.Peoplewereshouting,screamingandcrying,”Theseaisrising!”

Thevillagersstartedrunningawayfromthebeach.Samiwatched

withfear.Thewaveswererisinghigherandhigher.

Samithought,”Howbigthewavesare!”

Hewentintothehouseagainandsawwatercominginfromallsides.Hewasscared.Samirememberedhismothertellinghimlongago,”Youmustalwaysgetoutofthehouseifthefloodscometoonear."HeranoutsidethehousewithGrandpa.Butthewatercame

surging(汹涌)in.Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,

drowning

everything.Waterwasallaroundandeverywhere.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。GrandpaheldSami'shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.NowtheywereupinPetu.Tips:1.文章难点在于对暴风雨中“我”和爷爷的挣扎进行描述，同时还需与下文在椰子树上构成合理的逻辑联系。

2.此处需要用到的情绪积累词主要是紧张害怕，另外就是喜极而泣关于哭泣的表达。好词好句1>strive努力driftaway顺流漂走2>

He

clung

totreetightlyand

desperately

searchedaroundforSami.他紧紧抓住大树并绝望地寻找着Sami。3>

hoarse

沙哑的【注】：语言描写时这个词很常用，建议大家在这里直接把它记住，Alfred就不再在两周一词里讲它了。4>RoaringwavescarriedlittleSamiroundandround.

汹涌的浪把小Sami冲得晕头转向。【注】：这里用到了我们之前两日一词里提到的"roar"的形容词形式，是不是很生动？5>

terrifying可怕的throwonto（形象说法）丢上树6>

breathedasighofrelief长出一口气asmilepregnantwithmeaning意味深长的笑【注】：这里算是两个高级短语，大家可以积累一下【参考范文】GrandpaheldSami'shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.GrandpafoughtthewavesandtriedtocatchSami,butfailed.Sami

wasdriftedaway!Samistruggledtokeephisheadabovethewater.Thewaterpushedhimahead.Fortunately,

hecaughtPetuinGrandpa'scourtyard.HeclimbedupitandsawhisGrandpastrugglingnearBetuintheviolentwater.He

screamedout

toGrandpatoencouragehimtoapproachBetu,butthewaterwassowildthatitwasdifficultfortheoldmantoreachBetu.

Anideaoccurredto

Sami.HequicklybrokeoffabranchofPetuandstuckittoGrandpa.Withthehelpofthebranch,hepulledGrandpaupthetree.NowtheywereupinPetu.Anotherwavecame

withterrifyingspeedandforce,buttheyweresafethankstothetree.Theyhuggedeachother,

tearswellingupintheireyes.

Theystayedtherecomfortingeachother,waitingthedisastertogoaway.Afterwhatseemedalongtime,itwascalm.BothGrandpaandSamicamedownthetreeandtheyhuggedthetree

withtearsofgratitude.

ButforPetu,therewouldnotbealivenow.TheyknewPetuandBetuwerepartoftheirlife.【范文译文】爷爷紧紧握住萨米的手，但巨大的波浪将他们分开。爷爷奋力搏击海浪，试图抓住萨米，但失败了。萨米被冲散了！萨米努力将头保持在水面上。水推着他向前走。幸运的是，他在爷爷的院子里抓住了佩图。他爬了上去，看到爷爷在贝图附近的汹涌的水中挣扎。他向爷爷尖叫，鼓励他接近贝图，但水势如此汹涌，老人很难接近贝图。萨米想到了一个主意。他赶紧折下一根佩图树枝，贴在爷爷身上。他借助树枝，把爷爷拉上了树。现在他们已经到了佩图。又一波浪潮以可怕的速度和力量袭来，但多亏了这棵树，他们才安全了。他们互相拥抱，泪水在眼眶里打转。他们待在那里互相安慰，等待灾难过去。似乎过了很久之后，一切都平静了。爷爷和萨米都从树上下来，他们怀着感激的泪水拥抱着树。要不是佩图，现在就不会有人活着了。他们知道佩图和贝图是他们生活的一部分。

下水文：GrandpaheldSami'shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Hisdhotiwastornbytheforceofthecurrents.GrandpacaughtholdofPetu,oneofthepalmtreesinhiscourtyard.Hepanicked,andscreamedouttoSamibutcouldnotseehim.Heclimbedthecoconuttree,heldontothecoconutpalmtightlywhiletheseawasallaround.Heclungtothetree.“Sami,Sami!"Grandpacriedandwailed.“Don'tbescared,littleone,cometome,quickly."“OhGrandpa,Icannotreachyou!"Samicouldnotswim,thehighwaveshadcomewithterrifyingspeedandforce.Awavecarriedhimroundandround.Hewascaughtinatsunamiwhichwasbumpingandbanginghim.Hewasthrownontopofabigcoconutpalm.Thewavewentback.Soontherewascalm.NowtheywereupinPetu.Atadistance,hecouldseemanypeoplecoming.SamiwavedouttothemandheldontoGrandpa.Helookedatthecoconuttreewhichhadsavedhim.Itstoodlikearock,strongandsteadfast.“Thoughitdoesnotknowit,anddoesnotspeak,ithashelpedme."SamiandGrandpaweretakenhomebythepeople.Grandpaisstillvery,veryproudtohavethetree,thoughhishousehasbeenwashedaway.Everyday,peoplegoingtotheseashoreturnbehindandlookatit–thegreat,g