英语必修一Unit1-Teenage-Life-Reading-for-Writing写作课件

Unit1

TeenageLife

ReadingforWritingAletterofadviceUnit1TeenageLife

Readingfo1Bytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto…1.writealetterofadviceproperlyusingsomewritingskillsinthisperiod.2.mastersomewords,phrasesandsentencesrelatedtowritingaproperletterofadvice.learningobjectivesBytheendoftheclass,youw2文本重点分析文本重点分析1.Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.你写信说你很担心你的朋友陈雷。that引导的是宾语从句，且在句中不作成分，无任何意义。beworriedabout...为...而担心ChenLei是yourfriend的同位语1.Youwrotethatyouarevery2.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.我完全理解你的焦虑和糟糕的感觉。

that引导宾语从句从句主语：you,并列谓语：areandfeelterribleadj.可怕的，糟糕的，令人讨厌的2.Iunderstandquitewellthat3.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.你认为你的朋友玩电脑游戏过于频繁而且上网太长的时间。that引导的宾语从句从句中plays和spends为并列谓语toomuch修饰不可数名词sb.spendsometimedoingsth.Hespendstwohoursdoingthehomework.3.Youthinkthatyourfriendp4.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.我建议你跟你的朋友聊聊他的行为。

that引导宾语从句recommendvt.建议--宾语从句使用虚拟语气recommendthatsb.(should)dosth.Herecommendthathe(should)paymoreattentiontohishomework.4.Irecommendthatyoutalkto5.Itisnotunusual

forteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.对于你们这一代的青少年来说，被电脑游戏和网络时间吸引没有什么不正常的。Itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.，it为形式主语，todosth.为真正的主语Itiscommonforustoplaygames.beattractedto...喜欢5.Itisnotunusualforteenag6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusontheotherthingsinlife.但是花费太多时间上网有损健康，也会让人难集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。Spending...online,动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数。Smokingisbadforourhealth.and作并列谓语6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeo6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusontheotherthingsinlife.make+形式宾语(it)+宾语补足语(adj.)+todo/that...，todo/that是真正的主语。Weshouldmakeitpossible________(finish)theworkinaweek.IrememberImade____cleartoyouthatIwasnotcoming.tofinishit6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeo7.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.有些学生甚至会沉迷于因特网，无法把精力集中在学校和家庭生活上。

主语：somestudents谓语：become...andcannotconcentrateaddictedadj.有瘾的，上瘾的，入迷的beaddictedto(doing)sth.对作某事很入迷7.Somestudentsevenbecomead7.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.beaddictedto(doing)sth.对作某事很入迷Heisaddictedto______(watch)TV.concentratevt.集中，浓缩concentrateon集中精力watching7.Somestudentsevenbecomead8.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.

我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。

you...hobbies为宾语从句，省略引导词thatencouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人作某事Theteachersencouragetheirstudents_________(study)hard.encouragementn.鼓励tostudy8.Ithinkyoushouldencourage9.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?为什么不和他一起讨论这个问题呢？whynot+dosth?用来提建议的句型Whynot_______(go)campingnow?go9.Whynotdiscusstheproblem10.Iamnotsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.我确信他会听你的话，因为你是他的好朋友。

since引导的原因状语从句hewilllistentoyou作宾语从句，省略引导词thatlistento听10.IamnotsurehewilllisteReadaletterofferingsomeadviceonpage18andthensolvethequestionsbelow.1)WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?

Heisworriedabouthisfriend.WhatisSusan’sadvice?①Talktohisfriendabouthisbehaviour.②Encouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies.③Discusstheproblemtogetherwithhisfriend.2.WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Writethemdown.Irecommendthat...Ithinkyoushould...Whynot...

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Readaletterofferingsomead16Words: 1.焦急的，担忧的adj._____________2.在网上prep._____________3.推荐,建议v.______________4.行为n.___________→v._____________表现5.青少年n.______________6.一代人n._____________7.吸引v.___________n.___________adj.____________有吸引力的Phrases:1.对……担心_____________________2.喜爱_____________________3.集中注意力于__________________________________4.沉溺于，对……上瘾____________________5.鼓励某人做某事________________________6.祝一切顺利______________________________anxiousonlinerecommendbehaviourbehaveteenagerattractattractionattractivegenerationbeworriedaboutbeattractedtofocusonconcentrateonbeaddictedto

encouragesb.todosth.bestwishesWords: anxiousonlinerecommendb17Sentences：1.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehavior.__________________________________________________2.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.__________________________________________________3.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?__________________________________________________我建议你和你的朋友聊聊他的行为。我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。为什么不和他一起讨论一下这个问题呢？Sentences：我建议你和你的朋友聊聊他的行为。我认为你18英语必修一Unit1-Teenage-Life-Reading-for-Writing写作课件19

在写建议信时，应具体点明写信的目的、建议的内容、提出建议的理由和根据，理由要合情合理，语气一定要礼貌。建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”：首段(Topicsentence—yourpointofview)：一般指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。

中段(Body—youradvice)：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学委婉地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况，选择得体用语。切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。

尾段(Conclusion—yourwishes)：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助，同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考。 在写建议信时，应具体点明写信的目的、建议的内容、建议信的正201.I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenowhavingtrouble(in)doingsth….知道你现在在……方面有些麻烦,我很抱歉。2.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。3.Myadvice/suggestionsareasfollows./Thefollowingismyadvice./Herearesometipstohelpyou.我的建议如下/这里有帮助你的一些建议。第一部分：交代背景+写信目的1.I'msorrytoknowthatyou21First/Firstofall，whynot...？Ifyoudothis，youcan….Secondly/What'smore,youshould/hadbetterdo...Then/Thatway,...Itisalsohelpful/usefultodo...,whichwill…Thirdly/Inaddition/Besides,itwouldbeagoodideaifBydoingthis,AsfarasI'mconcerned/Lastbutnotleast,doing...isabetterchoice.Whenitcomestothisproblem,Isuggestthatyoushould第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议First/Firstofall，whynot...22Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。2.Ibelieve/amsurethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’ll….我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会……。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermyadvice.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadiceintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。3.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.盼望你的早日回复。第三部分：提出希望采纳建议+感谢+盼望回复Ihopeyouwillfindtheseide23While-writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。While-writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友24【审题要素】写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。4.内容要点：①问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④建议三；⑤我的愿望。5.注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。【审题要素】25【思路引导】

本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：首先，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因。其次，针对该问题，提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。最后，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。【思路引导】26Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：the____________oftheletterParagraph2：the____________thatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshopeStep1Listtheoutlineofthe27Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①

_____________________________n.建议②_____________________________n.情况③_____________________________交朋友④____________________________________做……有困难⑤_____________________________接受某人的建议⑥______________________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_____________________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartintoStep2Listthewords，phrases282.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(havetrouble/difficultyin...)Iamsorrytoknow_____________________________________________②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituation___________________________________________________③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(whynot)___________________________，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④我认为一个朋友应该友好、诚实、负责任的。(Ithink)Ithinkafriendshould____________________________________⑤你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titbeagoodidea____________________________________________________thatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.iseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirstifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?befriendly,honestandresponsible.2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(29⑥正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,____________________________________⑦我建议你全心全意地交朋友。(recommendthat…)Irecommendthat___________________________________________⑧众所周知，友谊需要时间和投入。(Itiswellknownthat/Asweallknow)Itiswellknownthat__________________________________.afriendinneedisafriendindeed.you(should)putyourheartintomakingfriends.friendshipcallsfortimeandeffort⑥正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asa30Step3

Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleastStep3Draftthearticlebyus31DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Ithinkafriendshouldbefriendly,honestandresponsible.Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagood