高中英语写作讲评课件

高中英语写作讲评高中英语写作讲评1Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Howdoyougradeit（定档）?Andwhy?homeworkshowThecomputerismoreandmore2ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearti3ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearti4contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?Let’simproveit:contentAreallthedetailssta5

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:Doesthewriteruseanylinki6Summary:paragraphstopicsentencedetailstothepointadvancedvocabularysentencepatternslinkingwordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfewmistakesSummary:paragraphstopicsenten7目前，不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言。某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。有的同学认为：幽默；时尚；好玩有的同学认为：有错别字，不利于语文学习；有时难以理解你的看法：……Nowadays,manyteenagersliketousetheweblanguageintheirwriting.Somestudentsthinkitishumorousandcool.Theyusetheweblanguage.Theyfeelit’sfun.Somethinkitisdifficult.Theycannotunderstand.Whentheyarechattingonline,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavesomewrongly-writtencharacters.ItisbadforChineselearning.Ithinkwecanusetheweblanguageandwecanexpressourselvesmorefreely.Improvethecomposition.Focusontopicsentences,advancedvocabulary

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Let’sdivideitintoparts:Part.1Part.2Part.3Thecomputer…rememberthecharacters.Thegovernment…helpstudentslearnChinesewell.It’shightimethatwe…byimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Let’sdivideitintoparts:Pa11Part2:Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarryoutanewpolicy.Part3:AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightime thatwetookaction.Part1:Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.Comeupwiththetopicsentences:Atopicsentencetellsthereaderwhatacertainpartisabout.Part2:Part3:Part1:Comeup12TopicsentenceforPart2TopicsentenceforPart3…TopicsentenceforPart1computerhomeworkraisetheawarenessofhaveapositiveeffectonTopicsentenceforPart2Topic13Whichendingdoyoulikebest?Why?Inmyopinion,thepolicyisbeneficialtous.Itmakessenseinprotectingourculture.b)AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Onlybyhardworkingcanweachieveourgoal.Whichendingdoyoulikebest?14…theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.writingaremuch…theydon’tcareabouttheir15…________.________,whenyoungpeoplechatonline,theyattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting.__________,withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters.Thenewpolicyisintendedtodealwiththesituation.Raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.__________,it’shightimethatwetookaction.__________,weshouldrefertoadictionaryforunknowncharacters.Second,collectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Inaword,onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal.Thereareseveralreasonsbehind.B.AsfarasIamconcerned

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D.Moreover. E.FirstofallACDBE…________.________,whenyoun16Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters.Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Canyouimprovethem?Whentheyarechatting,theyd17 Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.

Whenchatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.(Ellipsis省略句) Whentheyarechatting,they18 Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters. Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters.

(so…that;failtodo)withWithsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters. Everyday,theyhavemuchhom19Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.raisetheawarenessofItwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.Itwillmakepeoplepayattent20ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.haveapositiveeffectonItwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.ItwillhelpstudentslearnCh21Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning._______theawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.(non-verbal非谓语）(notonly…butalso)Itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue,butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.RaisingItwillraisetheawarenessof