中考英语写作

2015中考作文辅导

basicrules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautiful(美：谚语/例子)

如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel审(search)根据以下关键词及图表用

简单的句子列出文章的要点。

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇

甚至善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?

我希望你能帮助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

我认为学英语很有趣。

我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\AtlastHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（谚语）/saying加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.结尾：提出倡议或号召Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Don’thesitate(犹豫).Itwillbegreatfun!DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYourturntogoforit!（check）123Whoisthemostimportantinourlife?

（一）内容要点：1．Jack的想法(3分)2．个人的想法（至少三个想法）。(3分)（二）各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档（很好）：（15~13分）完全完成试题规定的任务。①信息全。②语言可读性强，试题结构基本正确，有少量错误。第四档（好）：（12~10分）完全完成试题规定的任务。①有主要信息。②语言基本正确，有一些错误。第三档（还好）：（9~7分）基本完成试题规定的任务。①有主要信息。②语言尚可读，有一些错误，但尚能达意。第二档（较差）：（6~4分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。①信息不全。②只有个别句子可读，语言错误较多，且不能达意。第一档（差）：（3~1分）未能完成试题规定的任务。能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词，语言错误很多，不能达意。问题1.时态2.people/person3.三单4.连词：but，because，for5.中文式的表达：givemelife,Ican’tleavemymother,Mymothercooksbreakfastanddinnereveryday.6.介词：aboutJacl7.cantakes8.It’shelpmealot9.facethedifficult10.正能量girlfriend?11.MyclassmateJack,hisideas:……12.代词；介词tookhetoparksonhefreetimes,himtakesJacktoparksandplaychesstogether13.That’smakeJackhappy.14.Sometimesindifficult.Hisgrandfatherteachshetomakehisown…15.词性。WhenIafterschool16.结尾画蛇添足：Wehaveownpeoplewhoisthemostimportantandwelovethemforever.That’sallThat’swhyhethinksthat.17.ButIthinkmyfatheristhemostimportantforme.Althoughmygrandfatheriskindforme.18.Finally,hecanplaymanythinkswithme.SoIverylovehe.

19.Itisnodoubtthatmomgivebirthtome.20.WhenIamsuccessandhappy21.that的用法：HisgrandfatherlovesJackverymuchthatoftentakesJacktoparks..Shealwayscheersmeupandencouragesthathelpedmelearnandgetoverdifficulties.22.Maybemostpeoplewillthinkoftheirparents,butourJack’sideaishisgrandfather23.Iknowheonlywantsmethebest.24.Ihopehecanaliveuntil100-year-old.Whoisthemostimportantinourlife?

Recentlywehaveadiscussionaboutwhoisthemostimportantinourlife.Jackthinkshisgrandfatheristhemostimportantinhislife.Hisgrandfathertakeshimtotheparkonweekends.Hethinksitisgoodforthekidtobeclosetothenature.PlayingchessisJack’sfavoritesport.Hisgrandfatheralwaysplayschesswithhim.WhenJackisnotsurewhattodonext,hisgrandfatherwouldtellhimtodowhathethinksisright.Hisgrandfatherteacheshimtomakedecisionsforhimself.IthelpsJackalotinhislife.Inmyopinion,myfatheristhemostimportantinmylife.Myfatherdoesn’ttellmewhatIshoulddoandwhatIshouldn’tdo.Hejustdoeswhathethinksheshoulddo.Fromhim,IknowIshouldbeontime.It’sbettertogetsomewhereearlierandnottoletotherswaitforyou.Secondly,bekindtoothers,thinkforothersanddon’tbotherothers.What’smore,I’dbetterdothingsseriouslyandcarefully.Whatmyfatherdoesinfluencesmealot.Ireallythankhim.Howtokeepschoolsafer?

内容要点：１．有关安全课堂、体育课安全常和教室内安全的描述：①老师用简单易懂的方式传授安全知识；学生要认真学习逃生知识；②体育课上要先热身，后饮水；③教室内不要做淘气的事，以免引起麻烦和危险；和同学相处融洽。（１０分）２．自己的建议和理由（５分）Howtokeepschoolsafer?

Howtokeepschoolsafer?Therearemanyactivitiesthatwecando.Insafetyclasses,teacherscanteachsafetyinaneasywayandstudentsshouldlearncarefullytostayawayformdanger,suchasfire,earthquakeetc.WhenwehavePEclasses,weshouldalwaysdowarming-upactivitiesbeforesportsanddrinksomewaterafterplayingsports.Andwearen’tsupposedtodoanythingnaughtytogetyourselfintotrouble.It’simportanttogetwellwitheachother.Ithinkschoolsshouldprovideuswithmoreemergencypractice.Maybesomedaywecanusetheskillsthatwelearntosaveourlives.内容要点：1、Tina去北京，参观长城和其他的风景，感觉怎样？

2、Jim在紧张的学习过后，感觉很累，想呆在家里，做些什么事情？3、自己在假期的安排，决定去干什么，原因是什么？4、注意自己的观点不能与提示的重复。Recentlyourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhattheywoulddointhecomingsummervacation.Hereistheresult:TinaisgoingtoBeijingwithherfriends.Shethinksit’sthecapitalofChina.ShewantstoseetheGreatWallandsheoftenit’sverywonderful.Shealsowantstovisitmanybeautifulsights,liketheSummerPalaceandthePalaceMuseum.ShethinkstheywillhavefuninBeijing.Jimplanstostayathome.Afteraperiodofnervousstudy,itisreallytiredforhim.Heplanstohaveagoodrestandhelphisparentswiththehousework..Hethinksitmakesthemhappy.Inmyopinions,Iplanstomakemyholidayhappyandmeaningful.Firstofall,Iamgoingtoreadalotofbooksandmakeagoodbalancebetweenstudyandrest.Secondly,itisnecessarytovisitmygrandparentsduringmyholiday.Besides,IamwillingtodosomevolunteerworkintheOldPeople’shouse.Ican’twaitnow.

英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均8~12个单词计算，用7~10个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为：十句作文法

第二段（正文）——主题句——扩展句（要视内容而决定扩展句的多少）——扩展句——扩展句——扩展句——扩展句——扩展句第三段（结尾）第一段（开头）——主题句——扩展句——结尾句

第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。时间星期日（７月１０日）地点人民公园交通工具坐公共汽车前往出发时间早上７：００到达公园时间早上８：３０活动安排上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐下午：英语角活动（Englishcorneractivities）；照相返回时间下午４：３０要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的开头已给出，但不算在词数内。２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称，否则答案作废。NoticeGoodmorning,everyone!I’lltellyouapieceofgoodnews.Weareplanninganouting.__________

Goodmorning,everyone!NowI’lltellyouapieceofgoodnews.(主题句)

Weareplanninganouting.(主题句)

WearegoingtothePeople’sParkbybusonJuly10th,Sunday.(扩展句)

We’llleaveat7:00a.m.attheschoolgateandarrivethereat8:30a.m.inthemorning.(扩展句)

Thenyoucangoboatingandswimming.(扩展句)

Let’shavelunchinarestaurantandjointheEnglishcornerintheafternoon.(扩展句)

Ifyouwouldliketotakephotos,you’dbettertakeacamera.(扩展句)

Thetimetoreturnis4:30p.m..(扩展句)

Pleasegetreadyfortheouting.(扩展句)

Wishallofushaveagoodtime.(结尾句)

你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），你的朋友John发给你的电子邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息，你对此事很感兴趣，请给John回一封邮件，询问有关英语学习班的详情。邮件的要点如下：1．对英语学习班很感兴趣。2．希望可以练习英语，结识朋友。3．问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。注意：1．邮件要通顺、连贯。2．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。3．不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息（例如具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。DearJohn,

ThanksverymuchfortheinformationabouttheEnglisheveningclass.(主题句)

Itsoundsveryinterestingtome.(扩展句)YouknowIwanttopractisemyEnglishandmakesomenewfriends.(扩展句)IthinkthisEnglisheveningclasswillbehelpfultome.(扩展句)Couldyoupleasetellmealittlemoreabouttheclass?(扩展句)Whendoesitbeginandhowmuchdoesitcost?(扩展句)Wherewilltheclassbeheld?(扩展