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possibleWhatisaSummaryAshortenedentinyourownwords1提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。2要求考生在正确理解文章的基础上,在不改变原文中心思想的前提下,用简明、精炼的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。概要写作的文章将主要考虑以下内容:1对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;2应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;3上下文的连贯性;4对各要点表达的独立性情况。HowtoGeteyPoints31:topicsentence2:topicsentenceeamplessupportingideasFindCombineSummarieReadforeyPointseetsomeoneforthefirsttimewemaeadecisionaboutwhatthatostimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point1ReadforeyPointsastheirstudentstowearauniformWhyAlotofteachersthinauniformmaesstudentsfeelthattheyareheltobeseriousabouttheirstudiesTeacherssaythatuniformscanhels,theycan'tjudgeeachotherbecauseoftheirclothesItalsoavoidsargumentsaboutwhoorwhatisfashionable

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point2ReadforeyPointsersedressedincertaintypesofclothes______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point3______________________________________________________________________________________ReadforeyPointsaybenot,buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemomentWhenore,ifweareclean,smartandpolite,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point4Discussion2:HowtoParaphrase5usesynonyms同义Onlyinthiswaycanweovercomethesedifficulties2summarieeamorningishelpfulwithusEnglishItalsodoesgoodtoourabilityofspeechaswellasunderstanding1combinesentences并句Smoingisnotallowedintopeople’shealth3changethevoice语态Wearingtherightclothescanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoing4changethesentencestructure句型UsingtheInternetportantnowadaysParaphraseeyPointsKeypoint1Butwhatdowelookat?Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes.Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.Paraphrase1Wearingtherightclothesisimportantbecausepeoplelooatourclothes2Wearingtherightclothesfortheoccasionisimpressions3WearingpressionsParaphraseeyPointsKeypoint2Schoolsasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies.Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo.Paraphrase1Schoolsasstudentstowearauniformbecauseithelinmanyways,suchasbeingseriousabouttheirstudy2Studentsarerequiredtowearauniformbecauseitbenefitsinvariousways,suchasbeingseriousabouttheirstudyParaphraseeyPointsKeypoint3However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.…visitadoctor…gointoabank…Policeofficers…alotofcompanies…Paraphrase1However,notonlyschoolsbutalsopanieswantpeopletodressinacertainway2Besidesstudents,othersbecauseofconvenienceParaphraseeyPointsKeypoint1…buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment..Furthermore,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus.Paraphrase1Ourclothescanshowourattitudeandmaepeoplehaveconfidenceinus

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Discussion3:HowtoConnectConnecteyPointsPoint1Wearingproperclothesisimportantforfirstimpressions.Point2Schoolsaskstudentstowearauniformbecauseithelpstheminmanyways,suchasbeingseriousabouttheirstudy.Point3Besidesschools,otherplaces,likehospitals,banks,policestationsandsomecompaniesalsowanttheirstafftowearuniformsbecauseofconvenience.Point4Ourclothesrepresentourattitudeandhelpuswintrustfromothers.Foreample,Inconclusion,WriteandEditWearingsbecauseofconvenience要点3Inconclusion,ourclothescanshowourattitudeandwintrustfromothers要点467词概要写作的总体注意事项完整、清晰表达原文的主要内容，不能遗漏主要内容；2尽可能遵循原文的逻辑顺序，不要随意打乱原文顺序；3尽量使用自己的语言，不要只是用原文中的词句堆砌；4各要点之间要有适当的衔接；5各要点的表达要相对独立。HowtoWriteaGoodSummaryconnecttheeypointswithproperwords;1read2paraphrase3connect4writereadtwoorth